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Title: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on August 27, 2015, 09:37:18 AM
In a small town in the middle of nowhere, townspeople started disapearing out of the blue. In order to stop this, someone ordered an investigation in which the town would vote on people each day to hang. In this town, no one is safe.

Sign up a NAME, not an FC or anything:
1-Charlotte Alaskan(investigator and protagonist)
2- GigzaPunk(sheriff)
3-MatiN(doctor)
4- Sherlock(jailor)
5-Barnie Sandlers(medium)
6-The Puppet (godfather)
7-Claire(framer)
8-Actinium(executioner)
9- Froot Loops (escort)
10-  Celeste (mafioso)
11- G Pizza(lookout)
12- Professor Hershel Layton (serial killer)
13- Ravine Roth(random town/invest)
15- Sushi Mia (jester)
16- Hecatia Lapisluzli (vigi)


*btw i put in Charlotte Alaskan because it would have been awkward if I had to impersonate someone


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Abu on August 27, 2015, 09:38:18 AM
Sign up, for Jester.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Zorro Metal on August 27, 2015, 10:10:34 AM
Myself for executioner.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: TotesAngel on August 27, 2015, 10:38:31 AM
I love mafia roles, sign up for godfather


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Penguin022 on August 27, 2015, 11:07:47 AM
Sign up for Jailor.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Carmaban on August 27, 2015, 11:50:44 AM
Sign Up For Doctor :)


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Kowhai on August 27, 2015, 03:15:29 PM
Sign up for Serial Killer.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: noname on August 27, 2015, 03:44:10 PM
I sign up as Medium.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: tinycake2 on August 27, 2015, 03:48:56 PM
I'll sign up for vigi.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Bang on August 27, 2015, 04:02:52 PM
I sign up as sheriff.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: cypher on August 27, 2015, 04:33:34 PM
Sign up as Lookout.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Kowhai on August 27, 2015, 06:07:24 PM
Uh, you forgot to put down Everilyfel as Medium.

Also, it's Hershel, not Hershal.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Lu on August 28, 2015, 05:59:09 AM
Uh, you forgot to put down Everilyfel as Medium.

Also, it's Hershel, not Hershal.
thanks


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Mai on August 28, 2015, 08:44:53 PM
Sign up for random town


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Chandagrigus on August 28, 2015, 08:46:26 PM
Sign up for Mafioso.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Kowhai on August 28, 2015, 08:55:29 PM
3 sign-ups remaining. Framer, Escort and Random Town/Investigator are left.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Lu on August 29, 2015, 10:48:39 AM
come on, sign up!


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Saburo on August 29, 2015, 11:09:06 AM
godfather


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: VanillaCookieCrumbs on August 29, 2015, 11:09:55 AM
Framer


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Bang on August 29, 2015, 11:12:43 AM
godfather

Godfather is already picked.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Saburo on August 29, 2015, 11:13:20 AM
ESCORT IT IS THEN


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Lu on August 29, 2015, 12:08:41 PM
ok one more!


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: yoshilover99 on August 29, 2015, 12:17:30 PM
Sign up.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: cypher on August 29, 2015, 01:34:04 PM
Zuki-Chan already signed up for Random Town.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Lu on August 29, 2015, 02:14:07 PM
alright first chapter coming either late tonight or early tomorrow


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Lu on August 30, 2015, 09:03:26 AM
Chapter 1:

   *disclaimer: I may have changed your gender and personality. I hope you don’t mind.

        We’re down to 16 people now. Each day, we find someone dead dragged out to the town square. And each   day, there is a knife in their stomach and a bloody note. And as always, the note is signed, The Mafia.
Occasionally, there is a Serial Killer strike. But not today.  
   Today, there was another note. But this time, it was signed by The Sheriff. He said that it was time to take matters into our own hands. To start killing one another off and hope that we might strike gold.
         I don;t get it.
         I mean, if he really wanted to help, he would reveal himself.
         But, I guess thats the problem with living in such a troubled town. No one tells anyone anything, in fear of being hunted down by the Mafia.
   Me? I’m an investigator. My dad has been teaching me ever since I was born. It was always just the two of us, until, well, the Mafia struck. Dad died a few weeks ago, when there was still hope left in the town. Now? We’re all out of luck.
    I woke up around 9 am and headed to the square. It was an unspoken agreement that all remaining townspeople would meet in the town square to bury the newest dead person in the town graveyard. Then we would mull around rather awkwardly. Stiffly polite, we’d go around doing our business.
     We gathered around the town square.
     “What is this!” Zuki-Chan was the first to pounce on the note. She was a middle-aged woman and a well respected lady in our town. Or, at least she used to be. Before . . you know.
      “A note, duh. From our stupid, know-it-all sheriff whose, like, way too, like, scared to show his stupid face,” Froot Loops mocked. She flipped her long, blonde hair back and glared at the crowd and dared them to respond.
            Beside me, GigzaPunk stiffened.When I glanced again, he was relaxed, so it had probably been my imagination.
        I suppressed a grin. Froot Loops used to be the rich girl in town- at least the Mafia attacks hadn’t taken away her sass. It kept the town from going paranoid.
Sure enough, little grins appeared on some of the townspeople’s faces.
         Froot Loops finally realised that no one was going to respond. “Ugh, can we just get on with the burial and stuff? Sushi and I have, like, an appointment with Celeste. She’s giving us makeovers.”
GigzaPunk and Penguin022 stepped forward into the square and began to give a speech as Froot stepped back into the crowd next to Sushi Mia and me.
       “Froot, I already said no! This town may be doomed but that doesn’t mean that my back tuck should be as sloppy as it is now. I need the practice time! I’m not going,” Sushi Mia whispered. She was Froot Loop’s second in command way back when. They stayed friends after the attacks began, but I don’t think Sushi ever really trusted Froot the way she used to.
          Pahkitew Island glared at us. She put her finger to her lips, the universal sign for SHUT UP.  
         “Fine,” Froot Loops was barely audible now. “Char, you in?”
          I had been Froot’s 3rd in command. Not quite up there, but not quite below her either. When Sushi dropped out, I was the fallback.
          I nodded.
          “So, in conclusion, we shall begin these ‘Lynchings’ tomorrow,” Penguin022 finished. He and GigzaPunk hefted the dead body on to their shoulders and began the funeral proccesion to the graveyard.


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Bang on August 30, 2015, 09:06:08 AM
Great chapter!

Looks like I got shushed down by FL


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Saburo on August 30, 2015, 09:27:38 AM
Great chapter!

Looks like I got shushed down by FL
call me Froot Loops

But yeah XD

I am the sassy girl!


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Penguin022 on August 30, 2015, 09:45:17 AM
I feel like a leader of the town. ^-^


Title: Re: Town of Salem (SIGN-UP now!)
Post by: Saburo on August 30, 2015, 09:45:59 AM
I love my character


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on August 30, 2015, 08:49:18 PM
So Froot and Sushi have an appointment with me for makeovers. I wonder why.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on August 31, 2015, 02:34:41 PM
Chapter 2
  *disclaimer: I may have changed your gender and personality. I hope you don’t mind. You chose your role.

     “OMG, Char, I feel like I never see you anymore! We, like, tots need to get together more often,” Froot Loops flashed me her famous smile- pearly whites and all - as we headed over to Celeste’s Salon.
     Why not? I figured. Might as well do this right.
     “Omg, like, yass, I’m so excited,” I cringed at the slang.
     “Girl, Celeste is going to transform you! You’re gonna be looking fabu when she’s through. Get rid of those bags under your eyes, wash up your dry hair. Hopefully trim up those awful eyebrows. They’re killing me, boo.”
     Ouch.
     That stung.
     The thing with Froot Loops, is that while she could whip you into shape and turn you into the perfect barbie doll you’ve always wanted to be, she was never kind about it. You had to learn about your flaws and your mistakes before she would pay for your reform.
     Froot Loops had probably seen my face so she covered her tracks. “Oh, boo, its ok. Not everyone is as perfect  as me.”
     talk about conceited.
     We opened the door to Celeste’s Salon where Celeste greeted us at the door. “Froot Loops, Charlotte, hello!” Celeste smiled meekly. “Froot, I assume you want your usual?”
     “My face has been begging for a facial, like, all week.”
     Celeste pressed her lips together and nodded. “And, Charlotte is getting . . . ?”
      “Just wash her flaws away. Sushi Mia was suppose to come, but you know how she gets when her twirls and stuff get like, you know.” Froot Loops was already walking toward the salon chairs.
     “M . .  mom? Froot Loops and Charlotte are here,” Celeste raised her voice slightly over Froot Loops’s ranting. Zuki-Chan appeared at a moments notice.
      “And I mean, she’s like, so obssessed with gymnastics. I mean, her back tucks are already spotless, but she wants them perfect! Like, one mistake and she’s “a goner” for sure. What-ever. And like, she refuses to take her hair out of that dumb ponytail. Like, its way too pretty for her own good -”
      Celeste caught my eye and rolled her eyes and she washed my hair. She was a bit older then me, at 20. Her dad and siblings had been killed by the Mafia in the beginning. Her mom, Zuki-Chan, was all she had left.
      At least she had someone.
     “I mean like, all the cute boys are dead now. There aren’t any guys like, cute enough to date. Well, like, there’s the Professor, and he’s like, you know. Besides, Sushi Mia knows I’ve had dibs on him, since, like, forever. She’s got to learn to deal with it. And he’s also way too old for her.
     “Froot Loops, you and Sushi Mia are nearly the exact same age. In fact, she’s older than you by a week,” Zuki scoffed as she dried Froot Loops’s hair.
      “Yeah, but like, the Professor is so mine anyways. Anyways, does anyone know when we’re gonna get signal again? My phone has no use if I can’t at least get wifi!”
Sushi Mia stuck her head through the door. “Froot! Come on, let’s go shopping or something. I’m done with my back tuck- its back to spotless. Not that this town is gonna survive long enough to see it.” She added darkly.
     Was Sushi Mia hiding something?
     “Ohmigod thank you boo!” Froot Loops bounced up off of the salon chair, her hair still slightly damp. She slapped $100 into Celeste’s hand and ran off to the door. “It was getting so boring in there! Like, Charlotte is a real snoozer. Why did I become friends with her.  ..” Her voice faided away.
   I sighed and sunk back into the chair, tears stinging my eyes.
        Celeste ran off to run some errands so I was left with Zuki-Chan. She noticed my tears and pressed her lips together tightly. “Honey, why are you friends with Froot Loops? She’s probably one of the most concieted and self-centered girls I know. Why would you ever want to be her friend.”
       Why was I friends with Froot Loops? Cause she was popular, that’s why. She was everything I wanted to be, had everything I wanted to have.
     “Here. Take this and wipe your face- ” Zuki-Chan looked up as VanillaCookieCrumbs pushed open the door. “- can u put this in the back room when you’re done? I need to go see what she wants.” She handed me a towel and walked off to the back room. The towel was hot and moist and cleaned the remaining facial gunk off of my face.
      Seeing that Zuki-Chan wasn’t going anywhere anytime soon - “can I wait here for Celeste? its important”- I headed off to the back room.
      It was a bunch of body products and a few desk with a bunch of papers and such. There was a bucket to put the wash cloths next to Celeste’s desk so I threw the towel in with the others.
      And that’s when my weird detective skills kicked in.
     Something about Celeste’s desk wasn’t right. It was made of a polished wood, wood that had very thin grain lines. There was a section where the grain lines didn’t quite align with the rest. I tapped the area once- then again- it was hollow.
     I pushed lightly and a square of wood slowly slid back to reveal a holowed out container. And that container?
was filled with guns.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on August 31, 2015, 09:08:52 PM
I'm betting Everilyfel dies first, just because he's the Medium.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: noname on September 01, 2015, 04:48:03 AM
I chose Medium to troll Medium's Curse.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Zorro Metal on September 03, 2015, 03:50:46 AM
When I will appear?


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on September 03, 2015, 03:58:29 AM
Probably the next day, when you accuse whoever your target is.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on September 03, 2015, 07:02:50 AM
Chapter 3:

         I gasped.
         Guns? Why would there be guns in the drawer. It didn’t make any sense!
         I heard Celeste enter the store and quickly shoved the wooden panel back into place. I hurried out of the room, knocking over brooms as I went by and ran out of the store.
          I sat down on a park bench - a good distance away from the store- to catch my breath.
         Celeste couldn’t be apart of the Mafia, could she? Was she? It didn’t make much sense. The only other people in the town who owned guns . . . were the veterans and the vigilantes. That was it. She was a vigilante. Of course. What, with Zuki-Chan being her mother and half of her family gone, I was almost positive that Celeste was doing her part in saving the town. She was a vigilante!
   Footsteps crunched on the gravel and I flinched. It was old man Everilyfel. Everyone knew that he had gone insane long ago, years before the mafia attacks began. He still thought that the Mafia was a support group for men his age.
   “Hello, Nebraska, dear- how are you today?” Everilyfel stopped at the park bench I was sitting on.
   “um- Hi, Sir- I’m Charlot-”
   “Oh, wonderful! Just fabulous! I always knew you would make it!” Everilyfel’s eyes were misty.
   “i-”
   “How is it down there? I’m sure you’re having a fabulous time. Say hi to Cara for me!”
   “i-”
   “Its about time!”
   “SIR!” I screamed. He was starting to freak me out.
   Everilyfel blinked- at once the fog cleared away and I was looking at his pale, blue eyes. “HELLO CHARLOTTE.”
   “Everilyfel, are you ok?”
   “WHO IS GOING TO PLAY?”
   Everilyfel was also a bit hard of hearing.
   “I just wanted to know if you were ok!”
   “NO, NO, I DO NOT WANT TO PLAY.”
   I was beginning to regret waking him up. “Goodbye, Everilyfel. I’ll see you later, then.”
   “NO NEED TO FEED ME TATERS, DEAR.”
   I grimanced and walked away. The townspeople were right- Everilyfel was quite senile.


*sorry for the holdup on chapters- I'll post another one later today


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on September 03, 2015, 04:30:20 PM
Chapter 3:

         I gasped.
         Guns? Why would there be guns in the drawer. It didn’t make any sense!
         I heard Celeste enter the store and quickly shoved the wooden panel back into place. I hurried out of the room, knocking over brooms as I went by and ran out of the store.
          I sat down on a park bench - a good distance away from the store- to catch my breath.
         Celeste couldn’t be apart of the Mafia, could she? Was she? It didn’t make much sense. The only other people in the town who owned guns . . . were the veterans and the vigilantes. That was it. She was a vigilante. Of course. What, with Zuki-Chan being her mother and half of her family gone, I was almost positive that Celeste was doing her part in saving the town. She was a vigilante!
   Footsteps crunched on the gravel and I flinched. It was old man Everilyfel. Everyone knew that he had gone insane long ago, years before the mafia attacks began. He still thought that the Mafia was a support group for men his age.
   “Hello, Nebraska, dear- how are you today?” Everilyfel stopped at the park bench I was sitting on.
   “um- Hi, Sir- I’m Charlot-”
   “Oh, wonderful! Just fabulous! I always knew you would make it!” Everilyfel’s eyes were misty.
   “i-”
   “How is it down there? I’m sure you’re having a fabulous time. Say hi to Cara for me!”
   “i-”
   “Its about time!”
   “SIR!” I screamed. He was starting to freak me out.
   Everilyfel blinked- at once the fog cleared away and I was looking at his pale, blue eyes. “HELLO CHARLOTTE.”
   “Everilyfel, are you ok?”
   “WHO IS GOING TO PLAY?”
   Everilyfel was also a bit hard of hearing.
   “I just wanted to know if you were ok!”
   “NO, NO, I DO NOT WANT TO PLAY.”
   I was beginning to regret waking him up. “Goodbye, Everilyfel. I’ll see you later, then.”
   “NO NEED TO FEED ME TATERS, DEAR.”
   I grimanced and walked away. The townspeople were right- Everilyfel was quite senile.


*sorry for the holdup on chapters- I'll post another one later today

So I'm safe. ^-^


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on September 05, 2015, 04:13:18 PM
What did you say about posting a chapter later today?


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on September 12, 2015, 11:37:05 AM
I think Titanium may be inactive.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on September 14, 2015, 04:09:48 PM
I think Titanium may be inactive.
Yeah, he said he'd be back in October.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Abu on September 14, 2015, 04:34:36 PM
:(


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Zorro Metal on September 19, 2015, 10:52:25 AM
Yeah, she said she'd be back in October.

Fixed.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on September 22, 2015, 09:29:00 PM
Titanium's back, we should get a new chapter soon.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Neprune Efron on September 25, 2015, 02:08:47 PM
Can't wait!


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on September 26, 2015, 12:08:04 AM
If this continues, I think I know how I'm going to die. Since I'm with Froot Loops, she (he's a girl in this) will, er, 'distract' me, and since I'm SK I will kill her. Her will will expose me, and I will be lynched.

Now Elle probably won't do this just to prove me wrong.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on September 27, 2015, 12:51:46 PM
If this continues, I think I know how I'm going to die. Since I'm with Froot Loops, she (he's a girl in this) will, er, 'distract' me, and since I'm SK I will kill her. Her will will expose me, and I will be lynched.

Now Elle probably won't do this just to prove me wrong.
were you like in the game that I based this off or something . . .

you're close with your guess
sorry totally forgot about this celeste just reminded me i'll post soon


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on September 27, 2015, 01:16:59 PM
were you like in the game that I based this off or something . . .

you're close with your guess
sorry totally forgot about this celeste just reminded me i'll post soon
Didn't I tell you? I'm psychic.

Kidding, I just have really, really good intuition.

#References


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on September 27, 2015, 02:27:36 PM
ok- Tanaka, I kept the Proffesor name cause the whole "Proffesor" thing has a part in the plot, but other than that the names have been changed.

Chapter 4:


      The next morning we all headed down to the town square. 2 bodies lay under the hanging post- a recent installment, thanks to our no-good sheriff. 
     Sushi Mia.
     and . . . . 
      Zuki-Chan.
     I bit back a gasp. No one in the right mind would ever even think about killing Zuki-Chan, but I guess . . . the mafia weren’t in their right mind.
       “There, there, its ok.”
     “Your mother will have a proper burial- just like she wanted.”
       A crowd was gathering around Celeste, comforting her in every way.
    “no- you- you just don’t understand! I . . . I had to . .. I was the one that -” Celeste sobbed, but she couldn’t quite get the words out.
     She was the one that did what . . .
     “Ahem- could I have your attention, please?” Professor Hershel Layton stepped up on to the hanging post.
      On the other side of the square, Froot Loops quickly brushed through her hair. I elbowed Celeste and pointed it out to her. She managed a slight grin through wet eyes.
   “I found this attached to the hanging post. Its from the sheriff . . . if you may, I’d like to read it .  .thank you.” He cleared his throat. “Last night, 2 people were killed. Sushi Mia and Zuki-Chan. Turns out that Sushi Mia was mentally ill. She was obsessive and insane. She was craving death, and she got it. She was a jester. Sushi Mia went by way of the Serial Killer. Froot Loops?” the Professor turned to her. Froot looked up dreamily.
   “Yes, Proffesor?”
   “You and Sushi Mia were close. I’m very sorry if you were hurt in her death.”
   Froot Loops could tell where this was going. She sniffed fragily. “I’ll miss her everyday . . . she was the last of my family . . .” a tear rolled down her cheek.
   Proffesor Hershel Layton nodded. “Sorry to hear that. I’m free to talk later if you’d like. Moving on . . .”
   Damn, Froot! Are you kidding me! You’re taking advantage of your best friend’s death to get close to some guy?! I glared at her from across the square, and in return I got a smug smile. Whatever.
   “Zuki-Chan was brave and noble till the very end. She went by way of the mafia. This note says that she was an investigator. Her last will contained nothing of the use to us. I’m very sorry. Celeste . . . we are all here to support you if you need help getting through this rough time.”
   Celeste burst into a fresh batch of tears and I wrapped my arm around her.
   “All of us? More like everyone but the mafia.”
   “Yeah right, the mafia.”
   “Better the Mafia than our good for nothing sheriff. Why not come and show yourself, coward?!”
   There it was again! Across the square, GigzaPunk tensed. It was instantaneous- was GigzaPunk the sheriff? Maybe he knew who the sheriff was . . . I made a mental note to check up on that later.
   “Calm down, calm down . . . lets just move on. Does anyone have any accusations to make? It’s time to move on to the lynching part of our day.”
   The crowd shifted uneasily. Sure, ever since the mafia moved to town, we had been distant, but never had we been asked to vote on each other to kill.
   Actinium broke the silence. “Lynch MatiN.”
   MatiN looked up from the ground, fear filling his face. He was the youngest person here by far, only 6 years old. Before the mafia came, he was a child prodigy- smarter than most people in town. His parents owned an herbal shop in the center of town. When his parents died, GigzaPunk stepped up to take care of him.
   “MatiN? You must be joking!” GigzaPunk growled. He gently pulled MatiN closer to him and whispered something in his ear.
   “MatiN is the best possible option,” Actinium stated nervously, twirling his fingers. “He’s the youngest, and he doesn’t have anything to offer. Lynch MatiN.”
   “Fine then. If you want to play like this, then Lynch Actinium,” GigzaPunk spat. MatiN peeked out from behind GIgzaPunk’s arm.
   The silence that followed was defeaning- a silent screaming match between Actinium and Punk. Finally-
   “All in favor of lynching MatiN, then?” Slytherin asked. She surveyed the crowd. No hands went up.
   “Actinium?”
   A few hands went up- Penguin022’s, G Pizza’s- “Alright, then. That’s a majority. Actinium, follow me.”
   “I . .  I . . please don’t do this! I didn’t do anything wrong- I, I swear I’m not the mafia. I promise!”
   Slytherin grabbed him with an incredible force and shoved him onto the platform. She fashioned the necklace around his neck and released his hands. “Any last words?”
   Fear shone in Actinium’s eyes. “I . . I, no. Good luck with the mafia.”
   I turned away just in time.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on September 27, 2015, 02:53:56 PM
Nice job, I always liked this! (I think Vanilla killed Zuki-Chan)


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on September 27, 2015, 03:41:24 PM
It was actually Celeste. If you play the game Town of Salem and you check the first post, you know it's her.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on September 27, 2015, 04:15:32 PM
*reads* Oh yeah. *facepalm* Vanilla sounds like a better killer IMO, she's a framer, and she seemed so mad.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: VanillaCookieCrumbs on September 27, 2015, 07:38:10 PM
@Summer Thanks... :blank:


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on September 27, 2015, 07:52:33 PM
So..., I killed my own mother?
I wonder why the med's curse didn't happen.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on October 02, 2015, 01:08:49 PM
Chapter ??:

sorry I stopped counting a while ago

Actinium was an executioner. He was trying to kill MatiN.
   Just the thought of anyone whose life was devoted to killing an innocent little kid was sad. Actually, the fact that we were killing off our own people was sad. More than sad- it just wasn’t right!
   I seriously needed to find this deranged sheriff.
   I decided to start with GigzaPunk. It was twice that I had seen him tense, so maybe he was the sheriff? If not, he had to at least know who the sheriff was.    
   I needed a plan.
   After the lynching, I went off to Punk’s house. Before the mafia, he worked a carpentry shop. If you were hungry and got lucky, he would make you one of his famous margherita sandwiches. Tomatoe, mozzarella- heaven.
   Punk lived in a small house on the side of town square. It was an average house with a thatched roof- nearly identical to the ones next door.
   He answered on the first knock.
   “Hello . . .”
   “Hi . . .” Shrimp. What was I supposed to do now? “Um I know this is kind of random but I was wondering if I could get a margherita sandwich? I just haven’t had one in months and . . .”
   Punk glanced at me in surprise. I watched his face carefully- he went from surprise to suspicion very quickly. He began to close the door.
   “Um I just-” I tried again.
   “Charlotte!” MatiN came running from inside the house. He stopped at the threshhold and glanced up at his caregiver. “Is she um, safe?”
   GigzaPunk glanced between us. He looked me up and down and sighed. “I was just about to make her a sandwich, MatiN. Of course.”
   MatiN gave me a smile so big that it stretched from ear to ear. “Yay! Come on!” He gave me a big hug. “I missed you.”
   Before the mafia, I would babysit MatiN when his parents were busy. He was bullied and outcasted by the kids at his school, so I was like his only friend.
   “I missed you too.”
   GigzaPunk looked me in the eye and gave me a clear message. Don’t you even think about it.
   I wasn’t.
   Besides, I was here for GigzaPunk. Not MatiN.
   MatiN pulled me into the kitchen and sat me at the table. “UP will make you and sandwich.”
   “UP?”
   “Uncle Punk.”
   “Duh,” I smacked myself on the forehead. “I should have thought!”
   GigzaPunk pulled out the bread and cheese and tomato and busied himself with the sandwich. MatiN climbed up and grabbed a plate. “Look, I can reach now!”
   “Nice! Um . . do you have a bathroom I could use?”
   Punk didn’t look up. “Upstairs on the left.”
   I casually backed out of the room and up the stairs. I stood for a little while, scanning the top floor. There were a few doors leading into bedrooms and the bathroom. I didn’t have that much time so I would have to go quick. I quickly checked MatiN’s room. Nothing. Punk’s I had more hope for, but it was empty. The bathroom was empty too.
   Disapointed, I was about to head back downstairs, when-
   the bookcase.
   In the hallway there was a bookcase overflowing with books. Most of them were history, some guides, and some fiction, but one stood out from the rest. A bible. I knew for a fact that neither GigzaPunk nor MatiN was religious.
   I hurried over and pulled the bible out. It was way too light. I opened the cover.
   It was a bit like a secret safe, a lockless safe. A hollowed out book. And inside? A sheriff’s badge.
   Of course. Of course. It made so much sense. Punk was a sheriff.
   “Looking for something?”
   I jumped and the book flew out of my hand and into GigzaPunk’s hand. Yikes.
   “Its ok, Charlotte. I know what you do.”
   silence.
   “How . . exactly . .  did you find this?” GigzaPunk wasn’t a man of words.
   “You aren’t religious. Neither of you.”
   “Well, then. I can trust you with MatiN, I guess.”
   awkard.
   “Yeah . . alliance?”
   


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Zorro Metal on October 02, 2015, 01:39:01 PM
Good, so I had to lynch MatiN...


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on October 02, 2015, 04:38:43 PM
At least I'm safe. Charlotte thinks I'm a Vigilante, and it would make no sense for me to kill my own family so I'm safe...
For now!!!


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on October 02, 2015, 04:55:50 PM
Though of course, the town will win and we'll both die. Who knows? I might even kill you...


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: VanillaCookieCrumbs on October 02, 2015, 05:21:03 PM
I have appeared once...


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on October 03, 2015, 07:17:13 AM
Though of course, the town will win and we'll both die. Who knows? I might even kill you...
Or I might be the reason of your death. I might attempt to kill you, but since you are immunne, I use my Vigilante Disguise to say you are immune and lynch you.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on October 03, 2015, 01:56:13 PM
Well, from what Elle said, it was something about Froot distracting me, but she might've changed that since I guessed.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on October 03, 2015, 02:18:08 PM
Chapter ??:


The next morning was crisp and clear, with dew drops on the green grass and the bluest sky possible. I was on Cloud 9 before I remembered the lynchings.
   As I made myself over to the square, it was all whispers.
   “her own mother . . .”
   “how could she . . .”
   I gently slipped through the hushed crowd to where a single body lay.
   Celeste.
   She was hanging limply from the noose, with a note crushed in her hand. She had hung herself. Celeste had committed suicide.
   Had it been over the death of her mother? No. If she was a vigilante . . .
   “Celeste was the mafioso.” Hecatia Lapislazuli curled the note open.
   How could I have been so stupid! Why had I assumed she was a vigilante? If she was a mafioso . . .
   Oh, Celeste.
   You killed your mum.
   No wonder.
“Celeste committed suicide last night, presumably over the death of her mother. She was, as I just said, the mafioso.” Hecatia scanned the note some more. “Nothing, no hints or clues about the other mafia. On the bright side, however, there were no other kills. Shall we proceed, then, to lynching?”
It was silent.
“um, like, i was going to say Celeste, but she’s like, dead,” Froot Loops broke the silence.
“VANILLA!”
It was old man Ever.
We were used to his babbling, but never would he speak up.
“VANILLA IS PART OF THE MAFIA. THEY TOLD ME THEMSELVES.”
“Um, who, exactly told you, sir?” Froot Loops asked him gently. Strangely enough, she was the only one patient enough to work with him.
“NO I DO NOT HAVE A COLD.”
“I’m glad. Who is they?” Froot raised her voice.
“NO, I DO NOT HAVE ANY HAY.”
Froot Loops shook her head. “Sorry, guys. Nothing.” She paused for a moment. “But, um, lynching Vanilla?”
“Maybe if we had more townspeople, then yes. But don’t you understand? We don’t have enough people to go off a hunch from a crazy old man,” Slytherin spoke up. “I don’t think we’ll be lynching anyone today.”
And with that, the town slowly went along with their business.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on October 03, 2015, 02:19:45 PM
BTW, that was Chapter 6, so the next one is Chapter 7.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on October 03, 2015, 02:20:58 PM
THANKS YOUR A LIFE SAVER


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: VanillaCookieCrumbs on October 03, 2015, 05:13:55 PM
yay i appeared again


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on October 03, 2015, 10:05:11 PM
I thought mafioso doesn't commit suicide. XD


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on October 04, 2015, 01:00:48 PM
I thought mafioso doesn't commit suicide. XD
People in game can commit suicide by leaving though.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on October 09, 2015, 03:11:44 PM
BUMP


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: VanillaCookieCrumbs on October 09, 2015, 04:58:56 PM
Excited for next chapter


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on October 24, 2015, 07:33:52 AM
Excited for next chapter


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Mai on October 24, 2015, 07:38:15 AM
Excited for next chapter


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on March 27, 2016, 04:47:46 PM
I'm allowed to bump this! :hooray: :D


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on March 27, 2016, 05:31:59 PM
tell me if you want your name updated (only in future chapters, sorry)


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on March 29, 2016, 03:07:15 PM
         How did Froot Loops know about Celeste? Unless she was bluffing . ..
         Oh well. I don’t have anything to do anyways.
         Where to start, where to start . . . I really didn’t know. I looked around town all day, searching at the now empty salon, the schoolhouse where the Professor usually was, and even the cafe that G Pizza worked (it was closed for the day).
   Nothing.
   After dinner I decided to search one last time. It was getting dark and I didn’t want to get caught by the mafia, so I went quickly.
   I was just about to give up when I heard a voice.
   “Come on! I just want to show you this place by the river- it’s absolutely beautiful at this time.”
   Froot Loops! Score! I followed her voice as she scurried through the streets of Salem with someone in tow. Finally, she stopped at the bank of the river. I crept up behind a tree to get a better view.
   “Isn’t this place just beautiful?” She sighed, leaning into a rather scruffy, wiry young man.
   G Pizza.
   “Look, Froot Loops, it’s been a wonderful day, but I really need to get back to work . . .” G Pizza tried to gently slide her off.
   “Work? I thought you said you could take the day off,” Froot looked at him. “Besides, we haven’t even started yet . . .” she slowly trailed off, lightly tracing his shoulders, down his arm.
   “I really should-”
   And they were wrapped around into a kiss, Pizza finally relaxing and sinking into the ground.   
   I turned to leave- it was obvious- Froot Loops was distracting him from his usual night duties.  Escort.
   On the way out, my footing slipped onto a dead branch. Crack!
   Froot jerked her head up and looked at me, eyes wide.
   “Meet me later,” she mouthed.
   
   I decided to head over to Punk’s house, running quickly and quietly, worried that the mafia would strike.
   The door was locked. Of course. It was after 8, and the rest of the town had bolted their doors shut. I sat in the dirt, drawing circles on the ground. It had gotten so dark, that it would be more dangerous to be running around town then to be hidden in the shadows.
   I heard a scrape behind me. The mafia?
   My pulse quickened. I didn’t dare turn around.
   A hand grabbed my collar and yanked me backwards, into a warm, dimly lit room. Punk.
   He grumbled and stomped into the living room. “Should’ve knocked.”
   I stood up and walked over to where MatiN and Punk sat in the living room, examining a few books. Upon closer inspection, the books were lined with thin, spidery scrawl and drawings of various plants.
   “UP, please. Everilyfel knows what he’s talking about. I think.”
   Punk grumbled. “Its at the other side of the town. I don’t want you there at night.”
   “Please?”
   I sat down next to MatiN and smiled at him. Looking over at the books, I saw that the plants were medicinal herbs. MatiN was a doctor.
   Punk saw me looking. “His parents were doctors. When they died, they’d left these books for MatiN. He wants to help the town, but as more and more people are dying each night . . .”
   I saw the worry in Punk’s face. He didn’t want to loose the only thing he cared about.
   I took a deep breath. “I’ll go with him.”
   Punk looked at me. Then he looked at MatiN. “Fine. You can go in the morning.”
   MatiN grinned at me. “Thanks, UP!”
   I was given blankets on the couch and, after the candles were blown out, quickly fell into a deep sleep.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on March 29, 2016, 04:04:53 PM
I find it adorable that MatiN calls PepsiMan UP


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on March 30, 2016, 06:03:54 PM
“WHERE IS HE?!”
   Hands pulled me up by my shoulders.
   I opened my eyes, and Punk zoomed into focus.
   “WHERE IS HE?? WHERE”S MATIN??” He yelled.”
   I looked at him in astonishment. “You don’t mean . . .”
   “He’s not in his bed.”
   Oh, crap. I pulled out of Punk’s grip and ran down to the town center. The sun was just peeking up from the houses, illuminating the hanging post and the bodies that lay beneath it.
   MatiN was among them.
   A tear rolled down my cheek. MatiN always seemed untouchable. He was so sweet, so energetic, so bright. Now, he lay limp at the foot of the platform.
   Punk caught up with me and noticed the tears. His face was emotionless. He leaned down and whispered into my ear, “I know it hurts. But you can’t let them see you cry.”
   I nodded and wiped the tears from my face, trying to cement my face into the concrete mold Punk wore everyday.
   Slowly, the townspeople trickled into the town square, some shocked, some emotionless, like Punk was.
   Froot Loops picked up the notes left by their bodies.
   “MatiN, the doctor, by mafia. Sherlock, the jailor, by serial killer. Claire, the mafioso, by vigilante.”
   She looked up at us. “Shall we begin, then?”
   “Hecatia,” The Puppet said after a while. “I have reason to suspect she’s, um, dangerous.”
   “PROOF?” Mr Sandlers asked loudly. “REASON?”
   “Mr Sandlers, sir,” G Pizza said.
   “OH HUSH UP. I DON”T TRUST THIS PUPPET MAN. THEY TOLD ME THEMSELVES. I THINK WE SHOULD LYNCH HIM.”
   I stood silently, trying to get over the shock of losing MatiN.
   The town debated for a while. When the sun was directly overhead, Punk stepped up. “Fools. We either need to lynch someone, or not lynch someone. I have things to do, places to be.”
   The counts were taken. Five- the Puppet, Proffesor Layton, Punk, Froot Loops, and G Pizza- voted for Hecatia. Three- Mr Sandlers, Hecatia, and I- for the Puppet. The decision had been made. The noose was fashioned, tightened, and --
   Hecatia was gone.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on March 30, 2016, 06:06:30 PM
Claire picked up a note by her dead body, lol

Also, SILLY MUGGLE! YOU VOTED FOR A GOOD GUY!

And, MatiN is dead, now no one can be healed

And I still find it hilarious that Horchata fell in love with a serial killer.

And I think I know what's going to happen to Horchata


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on March 31, 2016, 05:04:38 AM
oh crud sorry I didn't realize that XD


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 01, 2016, 12:45:34 PM
lol it's ok


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on April 01, 2016, 04:08:01 PM
The town debated for a while. When the sun was directly overhead, Punk stepped up. “floos. We either need to lynch someone, or not lynch someone. I have things to do, places to be.”
I see.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 01, 2016, 04:18:52 PM
yep y'all are such floos


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 02, 2016, 08:20:37 AM
what a wonderful filter.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Saburo on April 03, 2016, 06:54:18 AM
loving this


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Ducky Momo on April 03, 2016, 09:51:51 AM
Gee goly tarnation snap crackle pop!


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 04, 2016, 01:29:51 PM
NEW CHAPTER COMING LIKE TONITE I PROMISE I HAVE NOT FORGOTTEN THIS


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 05, 2016, 06:52:45 PM
     

        “Char, wait up!” Froot called after me. I had already began back to my house when she waved to me. She jogged over to where I stood, gravel crunching beneath her feet. “We need to talk.”
   We sat down in the park together at the base of a huge oak tree.
   “You- you saw me last night, but you didn’t kill me. What . . .” she slowly trailed off.
   I stared out into the distance, looking at nothing in particular. So much had happened in the last 12 hours, I didn’t know where to begin.
   “I didn’t kill you because I’m not someone who kills. I’m an investigator. And you’re an escort.”
Froot looked embarrassed. “Probably should’ve been able to figure that one out myself. And about the escort stuff . . . “ She glanced at me sheepishly. “I wanted to help the town, and that was the only, well, thing I was, well, you know.”
We sat in silence for a bit.
“Hey, what happened to the preppy popular cheerleader thing?”
Froot laughed. “Oh yeah, that thing. I figured no one would think about touching an oblivious, foolish girl. Anyways, any ideas about what you’re doing tonight? I was thinking the professor.”
I gave her a look.
“No, not just because that!”
“Okay, okay.” A figure passed a couple hundred feet in front of us. “I wonder who that is . . .”   
“If you don’t have any leads, go for it.”
I left Froot Loops beneath the tree and sprinted over to the figure, who, as I got closer and closer, looked more and more like The Puppet.
   
I almost lost sight of her a few times. The Puppet quickly moved from street to street. Finally, she stopped in front of an emptied out store, windows boarded up and paint peeling. She looked around for passerbyers, and, when seeing none, pried open one of the boards and crawled inside. I didn’t dare follow her. Instead, I sneaked around to the side and looked in through a crack in the wall.
Wow. The room was fancy. The exterior smartly hid the truths of the interior, the hardwood floors, the chandeliers. The Puppet sat behind a beautiful mahogany desk in a leather chair, slowly turning back and forth.
“My fellow accomplices. You, you have abandoned me. How are you to honor the mafia family name when you are DEAD.” The Puppet’s voice started out soft, but she spat the last few words.
   My heart pounded. I was standing only a few feet away from a member of the mafia!
I slowly backed up.
The Puppet’s head jerked up. “Who’s there?” Her eyes narrowed. “Don’t think you can run away from me so easily! Come out, whoever you are . . .”
Without looking back, I dashed back to Punk’s house, bolted the door shut, and sat with my back against the wall, breathing hard.
   Punk grunted a hello from the kitchen, but I was too afraid to speak.
   I had just barely escaped death.
   


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on April 05, 2016, 09:06:10 PM
And this is the framework for me getting lynched. Oh well, it was nice while it lasted.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 06, 2016, 05:05:18 AM
You'll see :mischievous:


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 06, 2016, 02:29:10 PM
ooh exciting!


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 09, 2016, 05:45:18 PM
The next morning, I headed to the town center, ready to accuse The Puppet. They had to believe me. They just had to.
   I stopped short when I saw the bodies on the ground.
   GigzaPizza.
   Froot Loops.
   Crudcrudcrudcrudcrud. Froot Loops, dead? A fist seemed to clench in my stomach. A tear leaked out, but I remembered GigzaPunk’s words. You can’t let them see you cry.
   I felt awful. That could’ve been me, one mistake, and I could’ve been laying there instead of Froot or GigzaPizza.
   Death seemed a lot closer than before.
   The rest of the town gathered in the square. It was just five of us now- me, Punk, The Puppet, Mr Sanders, and the Proffessor. Two of them were killers.
After the formalities- Froot, of course, was an escort, and GigzaPizza was a lookout- stepped up to face the crowd.
“The Puppet. I . . . I don’t trust her.” I had to be careful about what I said. If this went wrong, I didn’t want The Puppet to be chasing after me that night.
The Puppet glared. But when she spoke, her voice was calm and cool. “Are we really trusting a mere child? I can’t believe this. You’re a petty fool. I say we lynch Charlotte.”
The town glanced around awkwardly. “Well . . .”
   The town didn’t want to make a decision.
   We left the square without lynching anyone.
   
   The knot in my stomach grew larger as the day went on. I walked in the park, kicking a rock as I walked along the path. Kick!! For no one believing me KICK for MatiN KICK for Froot KICK for my father and everyone I had lost and-
   Tears slid down my face. I was going to die. I was going to die.
   One last kick brought me to the base of the tree where Froot and I had sat.
   And I let it all out. I cried for my dead father, for MatiN and his parents and Punk for losing the last thing he ever loved and Sushi who just wanted to be a gymnast and for Celeste who was forced to kill her mum and Froot for dying right after I found out who she really was beneath this tree and what she was doing and -
   Oh my lord.
   What was it she said?
   I was thinking the professor.
   What happened to Froot last night?
I had to see what was going on. For her. One last mission.
I got up and sprinted to the schoolhouse where the Professor was usually studying. 
Well, let’s just say I didn’t think it through.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 09, 2016, 07:21:52 PM
*cue eleven year old Sansa Stark voice* oh please oh please oh please


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Saburo on April 09, 2016, 07:45:15 PM
Lol I love my character

The story is so good though like get me popcorn!


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 09, 2016, 07:48:20 PM
I know, Leia you are an amazing writer-I want sequels but that'd be weird with a bunch of dead people.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 10, 2016, 06:40:38 AM
Awe thanks
Any sequels I do will be of different towns, different custom games or witches vs vigilante if I can. It would be fun to make a retri scene and ww and vampire and stuff like that.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 10, 2016, 07:49:24 AM
Yes! Retri and Arso and Witches!

Edit: and is it possible for Consig? I love games with consigs


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 14, 2016, 03:21:42 PM
I found the Professor in the second of two classrooms at the school. 
   “Charlotte?” the Professor looked up from his textbook. “What are you doing here?”
   I bit my lip. I hadn’t really thought about the confrontation part, I’d just assumed that it would all fall into place. I guess not. “Um, well . . . what are, um, what are you?”
   Professor Layton smiled and chuckled softly. He had a slight british accent and wow was he hot, things I would’ve appreciated a lot more if I wasn’t scared to death. “Well I would ask why I should trust you, but you managed to find me here. I’m merely a doctor. I study my ways during the day, and do my best to save people at night. It’s all I can give to the town. Here, I’ll show you.”
   I stepped towards the desk and he popped the latches on his breifcase, revealing a set of knives. “Surgical tools,” he explained. “And this over here is a book on natural medicines.”
   My knees were weak, and I just wanted to sink to the floor. I wanted so badly to believe him, but it didn’t add up. “No,” I mumbled. “You’re not.”
   I watched his face. Slowly, his lip curled into a smile.
   “My dear . . .” He slowly removed a knife from his briefcase and slightly poked the tip of his finger. A red dot appeared. “Unfortunately for you, you are right.” He slowly walked toward me, the knife twirling between his fingertips.
   Oh god. Death.
   A tear slipped down my cheek. This was it. This was how I was going to die.
   The Professor pushed the knife into my chest, smirking maniacally as intense pain spread across my body. Ahhhhh.
   Crack. A bullet shot across the room and into my neck.
   I crumpled to the floor just as the Professor pulled the knife away, surprised.
   Hazy at first, but slowly, slowly, my vision turned milky white, and I slipped away into nothingness.


*note: THIS IS NOT THE LAST CHAPTER


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 14, 2016, 03:54:37 PM
 :o ohmygod


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on April 19, 2016, 10:28:25 PM
Well, if we're going by the mechanics of the game, and assuming neither me nor Puppet are afk, then the town has lost. So this means that either something is going to happen which breaks the rules, or the town actually loses.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 20, 2016, 02:25:09 PM
Yep. so glad I'm not in this town

Let's keep this alive until Leia comes back so it doesn't die...right at the climax.

If all the townies die, then you'll automatically win because SK wins at stalemate with GF.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on April 20, 2016, 03:30:49 PM
Yeah, maybe. When day comes, There will be 4 people left, Barnie, Punk, Puppet and me. Barnie will probably continue lynching the puppet, though that night he'll probably have heard from Horchata that I'm the Serial Killer, so he might switch votes. Puppet and I will undoubtedly vote for each other, and... I dunno what Punk would vote. He didn't sheriff me, or we'd have known about it in the last chapter, so he might've sheriffed Puppet and got NS or sheriffed Barnie and also got NS. I dunno. It's about a 50:50 either way. I don't see how Leia could make the town win this one, though. If there was a retributionist, then yeah, but...


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Saburo on April 20, 2016, 04:25:48 PM
So good


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on April 20, 2016, 04:31:40 PM
Did the godfather attempt to kill the sk?


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 20, 2016, 04:49:44 PM
I doubt it, it seemed more likely she'd kill Charlotte.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on April 20, 2016, 04:59:22 PM
Did the godfather attempt to kill the sk?
I think she attacked Charlotte, judging by the end of the last chapter with the bullet.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on April 24, 2016, 09:15:46 AM
        When I next opened my eyes, the pain was gone. A crowd of people stared down at me, their bodies slightly translucent. Faces were familiar- MatiN, Hecatia, Froot, Sushi-
   I bolted up immediately. They were dead, what were they doing-
   Oh right. I was dead too.
   Is this what being dead feels like?
   “Charlotte, you’re awake!” MatiN grabbs me in a bear hug, a huge grin on his face. “Look, didja see! I’m dead! I died and its not that bad! The mafia killed me but I was brave. Mommy and Daddy said so.” He stepped back and held hands with people I hadn’t seen in so long. His parents.
   “Thank you,” they said.
   “Well, like, its about time you woke up. You were like, out, for like, who knows how long. Anyways, you’re like, awake, so, whatever.” Froot Loops glanced at me nervously, almost as if she didn’t know how I would take her now that she was dead.
   I smiled at her, and she smiled back, relieved. She leaned down and said quietly, “Anyways, um, your dad is waiting for you.”
   I slowly sat up, trying to take it all in. If this was death, well, it wasn’t that bad. It sucked, but it wasn’t that bad. Also, -
   A tall man stood in the doorway of the room, watching the entire scene with curiousity. Dad.
   I stood up and ran towards him, englufing him in a giant hug. A tear slowly slipped down my face. “Dad,” I breathed, hardly believing it was true. If I kept saying it, maybe he would stay. “Dad. Dad, Dad, Dad.”
   He hugged me back. “Charlotte, you did amazing. I missed you so much.”
   “God, Dad, I missed you too.”
   Hecatia cleared her throat. “Hate to break up this touching reunion, but the lynching is supposed to start soon.”
   Grasping my dad’s hand, I followed the town out to the square. I was worried that if I let go of him, he would disappear.
        At the town square, there was a single body. My body, limp and covered in blood.
        I let out a scream before I was able to clamp my hand in front of my face. Oh . . .
        The other towns people were already there. The Professor, who I now knew was evil. The Puppet, who was obviously evil. Punk, poor Punk, who kept swallowing whenever he looked at me, but still looked as gruff as always. He missed me. And Mr Sandlers, who seemed as crazy as always, yet surprising silent.
         I felt a bit childish for doing this, but I waved my hand in front of Punk’s face. No response. I tried Mr Sandlers. He turned his head and stared at me. I jumped back.
         “Charlotte dear, PLEASE don’t do that. Its rather irritating, and the townspeople already believe I’m going crazy as it is.”
         Well that was surprising. Mr Sandlers, the medium. I probably could’ve seen it coming, though.
   The Puppet announced, “Charlotte died from Serial Killer and Mafia. There were no other kills.”
   Punk glared, stepping up to face The Professor. “You, I know it’s you, I just know it. You killed her. You’re destroying everyone. My vote is against you.”
   Mr Sandlers agreed.
   The Professor wanted to lynch Mr Sandlers.
   Everyone watched The Puppet. Her face was barely readable. It was cool, callculating. I hated her and her flawless, buisness-like facade. Finally, she moved her lips to say, “Lynch the Proffesor.
   But it was too late. The day had already ended.
   As the dead turned to leave the square, I saw Mr Sandlers mutter something I wholeheartedly agreed with.
   “We’re screwed.”


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 24, 2016, 09:43:51 AM
Well, we're screwed.

And the reunion was so bittersweet. :(


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Saburo on April 25, 2016, 06:40:35 AM
That reunion tho!
This fic is an absolute master pice each part iof the story is crafted elegantly and with your own flair of style. Beautiful!


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: yoshilover99 on April 25, 2016, 01:55:19 PM
Nice chapter.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on April 28, 2016, 04:02:38 PM
town is really screwed now... unless something unnatural happens.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on May 07, 2016, 08:02:47 AM
please update...


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on May 17, 2016, 10:28:02 PM
Bump


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on May 20, 2016, 06:29:10 PM
I GOT AN IDEA!
A SECRET 17TH TOWN MEMBER! A RETRIBUTIONIST! THE RETRIBUTIONIST REVIVES CHARLOTTE! BARNIE IS KILLED BY MAFIA AND SERIAL KILLER AND THE SECRET RETRIBUTIONIST JOINS THE GAME! THE RETRI REVIVES CHARLOTTE! THEN THEY LYNCH THE PROFESSOR AND AN 18TH PERSON JOINS THE GAME! SOME OTHER ROLE! THE 17 AND 18 MYSTERIOUSLY DISSAPEARED BUT HAVE NOW COME BACK! THE RETRIBUTIONIST THEN DIES AND CHARLOTTE AND THE 18TH TOWN MEMBER KILL PUPPET AND THIS ENDS!
THIS IS HOW THIS WILL END, I think...


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on May 20, 2016, 08:04:26 PM
ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL OMG YES DO THAT PLEASE LEIA AND PLEASE UPDATE


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on May 20, 2016, 09:35:26 PM
I GOT AN IDEA!
A SECRET 17TH TOWN MEMBER! A RETRIBUTIONIST! THE RETRIBUTIONIST REVIVES CHARLOTTE! BARNIE IS KILLED BY MAFIA AND SERIAL KILLER AND THE SECRET RETRIBUTIONIST JOINS THE GAME! THE RETRI REVIVES CHARLOTTE! THEN THEY LYNCH THE PROFESSOR AND AN 18TH PERSON JOINS THE GAME! SOME OTHER ROLE! THE 17 AND 18 MYSTERIOUSLY DISSAPEARED BUT HAVE NOW COME BACK! THE RETRIBUTIONIST THEN DIES AND CHARLOTTE AND THE 18TH TOWN MEMBER KILL PUPPET AND THIS ENDS!
THIS IS HOW THIS WILL END, I think...
ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL OMG YES DO THAT PLEASE LEIA AND PLEASE UPDATE
ur just mad bcz u lost


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on May 21, 2016, 06:37:20 AM
ur just mad bcz u lost

lol i wasn't even in dis i'm in da next one if she wants to make one of course


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Saburo on May 21, 2016, 07:39:07 AM
i need more popcorn


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on May 21, 2016, 01:48:59 PM
No spoilers. Chapter later this weekend.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on May 21, 2016, 06:39:19 PM
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH :D


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on May 22, 2016, 06:00:03 PM
WARNING: THIS CHAPTER GETS SLIGHTLY DISTURBING FOR A FEW PARAGRAPHS.

I spent the night catching up with the town I’d lost. The people I’d missed so much, the people who had been standing beside me the entire time. And, of course, my dad.
   Froot and I found Mr Sandlers first, in the park. His body rose and took on the not-quite solid form that the rest of us had. Predictably, Punk was found dead in his backyard a few hours later. More greetings, and hugs.
Which left the two people I hated most to enter the square the next morning.
   “Hello, Puppet,” Professor Layton smiled politely. Like usual, the Professor was dressed in a pressed tweed jacket and suit pants. The picture of innocence. “How are you?”
   The Puppet, on the other hand, did not look like she slept a wink last night. Her clothes were wrinkled, and her hair was slightly disheveled. She glared at him, her eyebrows arched, and crudely kicked Punk’s limp body before stepping over him and Mr Sandlers. I tensed, and felt MatiN do the same beside me. “Shut up, Layton.”
   Professor Layton looked mildly amused. “Why, my dear, I’m only trying to be polite.”
   “Yeah, whatever. It’s just you and me now.”
   It was almost strange seeing the two most powerful people I’ve ever met standoff right in front of me. I stared at them.
   “So, it’s been you all this time, hasn’t it. I should’ve known,” She spat.
   The Professor smiled. “Yes, it’s been me all along. I killed Sushi Mia, I was bored. Penguin, the meddling jailor deserved his end. A few others just got in my way.”
   The Puppet mimicked him for a few moments with sharp, rude gestures. Her face fell, however, when she realized that he was still smiling. “Why are you smiling.”
   “Because my dear, there’s a flaw in your plan.” The Professor pulled out a knife and slowly unsheathed it. “You should’ve lynched me when you had the chance.” He smirked and plunged the knife into her chest.
   I watched The Puppet’s face turn from superiority to pure fear. She looked so powerless. The Professor held the knife up as her body sagged, like a marionette being pulled by a single string attached at the chest. Blood slowly began to soak her clothes.
   The Puppet pleaded weakly, “Please. Please, Hershal. Let me go.” Tears from the sheer pain slipped down her cheek.
   The Professor smirked, pretending to consider. “Hmm . . . well . . . .”
         “Please, god, please. I’m sorry, just,” The Puppet whimpered, her eyes terrified.
        He yanked the knife out.
        She collapsed to the ground.
        Professor glanced at the empty square around him.
       “All in a day’s work,” He smiled, satisfied. “Well, a month.”
       Professor Hershal Layton kicked The Puppet one last time before strolled out of the town.   

THE END


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on May 22, 2016, 06:02:30 PM
So, Town didn't win.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on May 22, 2016, 06:07:20 PM
Sorry for the double post but this needed to go on a different page:

I put up a poll asking you guys about sequels and stuff, but here's the deal.
a) I feel like there were a lot of plot holes in this story because I wrote it during such an extended period of time. So I'm sorry about that. If I write another one, I'm not going to start it for maybe two weeks (one if school goes well).
b) I felt weird using people's names, so if I make another one, I want to know how people feel about me either using their names, FCs (you would have to write me a quick bit about how they act and stuff, and even then I wouldn't know if I would accurately represent them), flipline customers, or just random names.
c) I wrote this story based off of an actual game of ToS I logged. Once again, poll options. Check them out.

Anything else?
Also, yes. SK won. Thats how it went in the game.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on May 22, 2016, 06:13:18 PM
OMG I SHIP RED SPY AND THE PUPPET IN THE GAME NOW I MUST BE LIKE INSANE



Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Saburo on May 22, 2016, 06:35:38 PM
SOOO GOOD


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Saburo on May 23, 2016, 06:55:06 AM
(http://i.imgur.com/HnaHgb3.gif)
Next one should be Rainbow, where the town win.
EDIT: Idea. Make it loosely connected to the previous one in that the Professor is still in town. Also, I have an example if you want to base it on an actual game. (http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=11599.msg1416841#msg1416841)
not a bad idea i like it


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on May 23, 2016, 07:53:38 AM
(http://i.imgur.com/HnaHgb3.gif)
Next one should be Rainbow, where the town win.
EDIT: Idea. Make it loosely connected to the previous one in that the Professor is still in town. Also, I have an example if you want to base it on an actual game. (http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=11599.msg1416841#msg1416841)

this is a good idea


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: TotesAngel on May 24, 2016, 01:00:16 PM
OMG I SHIP RED SPY AND THE PUPPET IN THE GAME NOW I MUST BE LIKE INSANE


Oh hell no!


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on May 26, 2016, 12:57:54 AM
Also, was that quote from the Spy intentional?


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on May 26, 2016, 05:35:21 AM
Probably not because I have no idea what you're talking about


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: yoshilover99 on May 27, 2016, 04:21:24 PM
idk much about tos but I voted rainbow because it sounds cool :D


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on June 04, 2016, 05:10:49 PM
Maybe an alteration to my previous idea, where the Professor is still in town, but in hiding with a fake identity after realising that all the killers he's let into town would likely betray him and kill him.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on June 04, 2016, 05:11:51 PM
Maybe an alteration to my previous idea, where the Professor is still in town, but in hiding with a fake identity after realising that all the killers he's let into town would likely betray him and kill him.

ooh interesting


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on June 04, 2016, 05:21:58 PM
Also maybe-

Okay, I'll stop writing the story for you now.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Kowhai on June 10, 2016, 05:16:14 PM
BUMP

So, um
Are you going to write a second thing or not?
If not, can I write it instead?


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Chandagrigus on June 10, 2016, 06:06:44 PM
BUMP

So, um
Are you going to write a second thing or not?
If not, can I write it instead?
Dear RED Spy, I will do a second one. I just need to get sign ups.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Lu on June 12, 2016, 04:00:17 PM
so I just realized this was getting replies

uh yeah I've got the plot line, I just need signups. still working things out, just a minute.


Title: Re: Town of Salem
Post by: Summer4ever on June 12, 2016, 04:06:43 PM
YEAH