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Title: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on April 28, 2018, 04:12:42 AM

WELCOME!!

Welcome to the revised version of Papa's Gamerias Shorts. Have fun reading.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on April 28, 2018, 04:14:48 AM

Mystery In Georgito’s Mansion

In Georgito’s Mansion

Duke Gotcha: *Knockes the door*
Butler: *Opens the door* Oh hello Mr. Gotcha and Ms. Shannon. Come right in.
Duke Gotcha: *Went inside* I can't believe we're invited to Georgito’s birthday party.
Shannon: Well we did found out who stole his expensive golden monocle.
Duke Gotcha: Though, I hope he loves the gift we got for him. It's really hard to give a businessman a gift since he got like...everything.
Shannon: Well I hope he love ours.
Duke Gotcha: Ours?
Shannon: I'm the one who picked out the gift, and you're the one who bought it.
Duke Gotcha: Okay then.

In the Dining Room

Duke Gotcha: Huh? Mayor Mallow? Jojo? Papa Louie? It's good to see you here.
Mayor Mallow: Yeah...we're invited to this party. I don't really going to this party but I can denied a invite.
Jojo: But the party will be amazing.
Papa Louie: Stop talking!! I'm thinking right now!!
Duke Gotcha: Um...is it me or are they different?
Shannon: Yeah. Mayor Mallow acting sarcastic, Jojo being so happy, and Papa Louie being grumpy.
Duke Gotcha: Not only that, the guest are only 5 including me and you.
Shannon: You're right. I wonder why.
Georgito: Hello my friends, welcome to my birthday party.
Papa Louie: It’s not really a birthday party, since you freaking have only 5 guest!!
Georgito: Um...you don't have to yell!! And is it me or you look fat?
Papa Louie: Are you judging someone’s looks now?!
Georgiito: Sorry Papa Louie!! Anyways, it was supposed to be more than 15 people but the others denied their invite since their busy.
Jojo: That's okay, you got us to celebrate your party.
Georgito: Um...thanks. Anyways, let's have dinner.

Few minutes later

Duke Gotcha: Those food, so delicious.
Shannon: It’s been so long since I ate rich people’s food.
Jojo: Hey Mayor Mallow, why aren't you eating?
Mayor Mallow: I'm not in a mood for eating.
Papa Louie: Well that’s because you getting fatter.
Mayor Mallow: What did you just said?!
Papa Louie: Be quiet you fool!!
Mayor Mallow: Fool!! You're the fool!!
Papa Louie: You're making noise here!!
Shannon: Is Jojo...staring at me weird?
Duke Gotcha: What?! She's mi- I mean, she's too young for you!!
Jojo: Um…
Georgito: Okay!! You three stop trying to ar-
Jojo, Mayor Mallow, and Papa Louie: Shut up!!
Butler: Gentlemen!! I don't think it's a best time to-
Georgito: Wait a minute!? Those items are priceless!! Stop already!! Don't break the things!! Papa Louie!! Don't try use the vase!!

*LIGHTS OFF*

Shannon: What the-?! *Picture in the dark with the flash*
Duke Gotcha: Why are the lights turn off!?
???: Ahhhhhhh!!
Shannon: Don't scream at me Duke Gotcha!!
Duke Gotcha: That wasn't me!!

*LIGHTS ON*

Duke Gotcha: Are you okay Shannon?
Shannon: I'm fine Duke- Ahhhhhh!!
Duke Gotcha: What is it? Why are you- oh no? Is he...is-?
Shannon: Georgito dead? I think so.
Mayor Mallow: If you didn't think so, maybe he is alive this all time.
Duke Gotcha: Hey respect the death!!
Jojo: I feel bad for him. Oh well!! There are plenty of people who are alive
Shannon: What is wrong with you?!
Papa Louie: I'm out of here!! *Tries to open the door* Wait? It's lock!! I can't open it!!
Duke Gotcha: What?! Shannon, try open the other door *Tries to open the door*
Shannon: It's locked here too!!
Duke Gotcha: Since those two doors are the only exit. That means...one of us is the murderer. Meaning all of us are suspects.
Papa Louie: Are saying everyone including you guys are suspects?
Duke Gotcha: Yeah, and I mean- including us!!
Shannon: I understand Duke Gotcha. Let's see, blood is around Georgito’s body and appears to not suffered other external injuries but only internal.
Mayor Mallow: So what?
Shannon: Though I maybe not be a coroner...I think the cause of death is blunt force trauma using...the broken vase.
Duke Gotcha: So it might be someone who grabbed the vase. As in...Papa Louie.
Papa Louie: Wait!? I didn't do it!!
Shannon: Are you sure? Because I scanning the fingerprints using the powder I have, and it appears there is no fingerprints.
Papa Louie: But there's no proof it isn't me-
Duke Gotcha: You're wearing gloves? That's funny, isn't it.
Papa Louie: So-so? The reason I wore gloves is because-
Shannon: Say? What's this in the broken vase? A coupon...to Mortadello’s Meat Pies?
Duke Gotcha: Why would a coupon be here anyways? Unless...Shannon, help me unmasked Papa Louie.
Papa Louie: Wait? What are you guys?! Hey let go!, just leave me alo-
Duke Gotcha and Shannon: Huh?! Guy Mortadello!! You're here!!
Guy Mortadello: Yeah yeah!! It's me!! I disguise myself as Papa Louie to be I this party!!
Shannon: What?! Why?!
Guy Mortadello: Georgito rejected on sharing a business with me. When I saw Papa Louie’s invitation, I stole it, disguise myself, and give Georgito a present.
Mayor Mallow and Jojo: Which is?
Guy Mortadello: My famous meat pies!! Since he never try it, maybe he can try my pies and change his mind. And since his death, you guys have to try it.
Duke Gotcha: Ewwww!! No!! Anyways, if he did to it. Then what about the lights, Georgito died during the blackout meaning...someone is near the lights.
Jojo: But the light switch isn't here. And I do remember not seeing the light switch near the doors outside. Plus, it will take few minutes to get to the light switch.
Shannon: Yeah, you're right. The blackout took few seconds to be done.
Duke Gotcha: Say the picture frame fell. What's this? It's a electrical system.
Shannon: Say, I did took a pictures from my camera.
Guy Mortadello: And you just said it now!!
Shannon: Here!!
Duke Gotcha: Hm...huh? That's weird, Jojo took off the picture frame.
Jojo: What me?!
Shannon: Well it can't be the others!! So it has to be you!!
Duke Gotcha: And why did you do it!?
Jojo: Um, well. Um, huh? I-No way i...oh well. I guess I have no choice but to revealed myself.
Duke Gotcha: What?! The Dynamoe!! Here!!
The Dynamoe: Yes I'm here gotcha man!! The Dynamoe, the most famous criminal ever!!
Shannon: Well that explains why he flirted me.
Duke Gotcha: How dare you flirted her?! And why are you here!?
The Dynamoe: Oh, I'm planning on stealing the golden monocle...again.
Guy Mortadello: What's so special about the monocle?
The Dynamoe: I'm also planning on stealing the greatest diamond he had.
Mayor Mallow: How did you got here anyways?
The Dynamoe: Same way as my best friend Guy. Except it's Jojo.
Guy Mortadello: I was never your best friend.
The Dynamoe: Anyways, I mess with the electrical system and created a blackout, it was supposed to be long using the night vision mask-
Shannon: Night vision mask?
The Dynamoe: Wanna know dear?
Duke Gotcha: Hey!! Start talking!!
The Dynamoe: But that's when the door was locked, so I decided to turn on the electrical system to make sure why and you already know what happened next.
Duke Gotcha: I see…explaining the blackout.
Shannon: Say, what's this? A leaf?
Duke Gotcha: But there aren't plants in it.
The Dynamoe: Wooo...what does it mean?
Guy Mortadello: Why is there a stupid leaf in this stupid flo-
Mayor Mallow: I can't take it anymore!! *Takes off his disguise*
Duke Gotcha: What the-!?
Shannon: R-Radley Madish!?
Radley Madish: Yes!! It’s me...Radley Madish!! As you may know, i’m the one who kidnapped the customers and being victor-
All except Radley Madish: We get it!!
Duke Gotcha: Anyways, what are you doing?
Shannon: Yeah, what is your business with Georgito?
Radley Madish: I don’t have business with Georgito, i have business with Papa Louie since i heard he was invited in this party. So like those idiots.
The Dynamoe and Guy Mortadello: Idiots?!
Radley Madish: I stole that Mallow Man’s invitation, dressed up as him, and with the warp coin...i would have kidnapped Papa Louie. But there...Papa Louie isn’t here!!
Guy Mortadello: Whatever.
Duke Gotcha: It might be possible that it’s a accidental death. And those three’s motive aren’t-
Georgito: Ugh...what happened?
Shannon: G-georgito!? You’re alive!?
Georgito: Of course i’m alive, you think i’m death?
Duke Gotcha: Oh yeah, i forgot to checked the pulse.
Guy Mortadello: Wasted of time!!
Georgito: Wait? What are those three doing here?
Guy Mortadello: Um…
Radley Madish: Well…
The Dynamoe: You see...smoke bombs!! *Throws the bomb to the wall and left with Guy Mordatello and Radley Madish*
Duke Gotcha: Will...explain this to you later.
Outside the Mansion

Wayne: *Holds the jewel* I, Wayne, stole Georgito’s golden monocle. Like most mansion mystery, the butler did it.
Note:

Wayne is my next-gen who time travelled. I always wanted a good mystery.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on May 02, 2018, 08:34:55 AM
Oh so you have a new topic, interesting (I'll read it all when I have more time.)


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 15, 2018, 04:42:51 AM

Punch Till' You Ge Whip

In Tastyville

LePete: And that’s how i won the tournament.
Sarge Fan: None of it is true!!
LePete: How do you know!? You’re sleeping during the tournament!! >:(
Sarge Fan: Oh shut- >:(
Radlynn: Boys!! Boys!! No need to fight!! Let’s chill and have some pizzas.
LePete: Well since today is friday, i’ll order the pizza!! Pizzas!! *Went inside Papa’s Pizzeria* :hooray:
Sarge Fan: Don’t order too much pineapples!! >:(
Radlynn: Wait, isn’t today tuesday? Hey Le-
Sarge Fan: Shoo!! Shoo!! Let’s just see… >:D

In Papa’s Pizzeria

LePete: Hey there loyd!! 8)
Roy: LePete!! I told you my name is Roy!! :(
LePete: Whatever!! I’ll have...Traditional Crust, BBQ Sauce with Grated Parmesan Cheese, 4 Sausages (bottom), 6 First Holiday Topping (top), 4 Second Holiday Topping (top), 3 Cajun Shrimps (bottom right), Regular Bake, and 4 Slices. 8)
Roy: LePete, today is tuesday and it’s not even your day.
LePete: So?
Roy: So, you’re a closer and closer always order in one restaurant every week. And since today isn’t your day, than you’re not gonna order.
LePete: Oh really!! Then who’s day is today?!
Whiff: Sorry i’m late Roy, i have to meet with my girlfriend.
Roy: I understand, what do you want?
Whiff: I’ll have…Holiday Crust, Creamy Garlic Sauce with Provolone Cheese, 8 Pepperoni (right), 8 Second Holiday Topping (bottom), 3 Smoked Salmon (top left), Regular Bake, and 8 Slices.
Roy: Coming right up. *Went to the kitchen*
Whiff: *Looks at LePete who’s staring at Whiff* Oh...you look so cute!! *Rubs his helmet* :3
LePete: Nobody calls me cute!! >:(
Whiff: Sorry kiddo, you must be LePete...Luau LePunch fan.
LePete: That’s right!! Luau LePunch is the best boss ever!! He’s strong and he doesn’t need a army!!
Whiff: Good for you kid, say Roy...one more pizza for the kid.
Roy: Fine…
LePete: Hey!! Why are being generous!? Are trying to make me your fan?! Never!! Luau LePunch will always be my hero!! >:(
Whiff: What!? No!! I’m just being generous because you look tough!!
LePete: Oh...well thank you for thinking i’m tough. I’m stronger than you!! 8)
Whiff: Well if you’re stronger than me, then you need muscles like this. *Shows muscles* 8)
LePete: Woah!! I wanted muscles!! :o
Whiff: Maybe we should worked out together. Tomorrow morning in Whiskview park, you’re in it.
LePete: Heck yeah!! So i will be stronger than you!! 8)
Whiff: You’re cute!! :3
LePete: Stop calling me that!! >:(
In Whiskview Park

Whiff: Hey kiddo, good to see you again!!
LePete: Good to see you too Whiff the Whip Cream.
Whiff: I haven’t even told you my name, how did you know?
LePete: Jojo told me...so anyways, what should we do? Punch someone in the face!! >:D
Whiff: No...jogging.
LePete: Jogging!? That’s boring!! :(
Whiff: Come on...jugging can refresh your mind and maybe some little adventure.
LePete: Whip Cream, Whip Cream, it’s still boring.
Whiff: Don’t call me Whip Cream.
LePete: But your girlfriend called you Whip Cream.
Whiff: Because she’s my girlfriend, and how did you know i have a girlfriend?
LePete: Jojo told me.
Whiff: Look!! Let’s just start jogging!!
LePete: Boring!!

Few minutes later

LePete: Amazing!! Seeing the outdoors is amazing!!
Whiff: I told you!! Want a bottle of water?
LePete: Yep.  *Grabs the bottle of water and drinks it*
Mindy: Hi Whip Cream!!
Whiff: Hi there Mintley Mindy!! Hello Mary!! Hello...you.
Sue: >:(
Mindy: What are you doing?
Whiff: I’m just training the kid to be beefy.
Mary: You mean that Munchmore fan.
Whiff: Exactly.
Mindy: Well… *Kiss Whiff* Goodbye!!
Whiff: Goodbye friends...and Sue.
Sue: >:( *Leaves with Mindy and Sue*
Whiff: Okay LePete!! Let’s go do some push-ups!!
LePete: Okay Whipping!!
Whiff: Huh!?
LePete: You don’t want Whip Cream so Whipping is great.
Whiff:
LePete: Let’s just do some push-ups.

Few minutes later

Whiff: 88...189...190-
LePete: *Falls down*
Whiff: Yikes!! I’ll grab another bottle of water!! *Left*
LePete: *Inhale and exhale*
Radlynn: LePete!!
LePete: R-Radlynn!! Um… *Takes off his shirt* What’s up Rad? I’m just doing some exercise…
Radlynn: Sweet!! I do like a guy who works out.
LePete: Oh...yeah. :cheery:
Whiff: Here’s a bottle of water…
LePete: *Grabs a bottle of water* Thanks…
Whiff: Oh hey Radlynn!!
Radlynn: Hey Whiff, are you guys working out together?
Whiff: Of course, i’m just training your boyfriend to get beefy.
Radlynn: Hah hah hah, he’s not my boyfriend. He’s my friend.
LePete: Yeah!! Friend. :cheery:
Radlynn: Bye!! *Left*
LePete: Bye!! :cheery:
Whiff: Let’s do some exericse!!
LePete: Okay!!
Note:

I headcanon this two being good friend. I hope i do more good shorts.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on May 15, 2018, 08:12:47 AM
ROFL, the Whiff and LePete. also "Jojo told me", is your version of Jojo really that talkative? ;p also lol because Whiff doesn't like Sue. also LePete is like 10 in my headcanon so kinda too young for a 14-16 year old Radlynn XD


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 15, 2018, 08:20:09 AM
ROFL, the Whiff and LePete. also "Jojo told me", is your version of Jojo really that talkative? ;p also lol because Whiff doesn't like Sue. also LePete is like 10 in my headcanon so kinda too young for a 14-16 year old Radlynn XD
Yeah, I think those two would be nice to be good friends since LePete wants to be strong like Luau LePunch and Whiff is buffy.

The "Jojo told me" well, I think LePete asked Jojo about him...making Jojo being annoyed about his question.

I headcanon that Sue and Whiff don't like eachother, my headcanon of Sue is a lady who's been annoyed by crazy random people even if it is Whiff. And I also headcanon that Mindy are best friends with Sue and Mary, making Sue overprotective from Whiff.

As for the age, well I also think he's a kid but he does have crush on Radlynn. The same goes to Sarge Fan (Except the kid thing) which they fought eachother for Radlynn.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: WhiteShirt on May 15, 2018, 10:23:20 AM
The Mansion Mystery thing reminded me of something... I just forgot what....

Also LePete just got friendzoned XD


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on May 17, 2018, 08:06:08 AM
Yeah, I think those two would be nice to be good friends since LePete wants to be strong like Luau LePunch and Whiff is buffy.

The "Jojo told me" well, I think LePete asked Jojo about him...making Jojo being annoyed about his question.

I headcanon that Sue and Whiff don't like eachother, my headcanon of Sue is a lady who's been annoyed by crazy random people even if it is Whiff. And I also headcanon that Mindy are best friends with Sue and Mary, making Sue overprotective from Whiff.

As for the age, well I also think he's a kid but he does have crush on Radlynn. The same goes to Sarge Fan (Except the kid thing) which they fought eachother for Radlynn.
lol. but yeah Mindy would be friends with Sue, Mindy's the hairdresser and in her flipdeck she's cutting Sue's hair ;p so I also agree with that. even the silly crush thing makes sense, and it's funny


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 19, 2018, 01:08:05 AM
The Mansion Mystery thing reminded me of something... I just forgot what....

Also LePete just got friendzoned XD
Well i got the idea from on of the episodes from Ducktales. And yes, it's funny that he got friendzoned.
lol. but yeah Mindy would be friends with Sue, Mindy's the hairdresser and in her flipdeck she's cutting Sue's hair ;p so I also agree with that. even the silly crush thing makes sense, and it's funny
Yeah and funny.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 19, 2018, 01:10:22 AM

Flipline Fairy Tales I: Xolo and Xandra

In Greg’s Apartment

Nick: *Keeps changing the channel*
Greg: Nothing to watch TV.
Yippy: We could go outside but it’s raining.
Nick: *Sees a TV show* Hey!! There’s a TV show called ”The Perv-
Cooper: Don’t watch that show!! *Turns off the TV* Maybe you guys should play some board games.
Nick, Greg, and Yippy: Nah!!
Cooper: Card games?
Nick, Greg, and Yippy: Nah!!
Cooper: Reading fairytale books.
Greg: Cooper, we’re too old for this kind of books.
Cooper: You never too old to read fairytale books. Like my favorite, Rapunzel.
Greg: The reason is because you imagine that Rapunzel is Prudence and the prince is you.
Cooper: Oh shut up!! *Leave*
Yippy: Hey guys!! Maybe we should rewrite the fairytale stories with some of Papa Louie’s customers as fairytale characters. It might be interesting to let go our imagination.
Greg: Hm...great idea. What do you say?
Nick: Well then...let’s start.

1 hour later

Yippy: Are you boys done?
Greg and Nick: Yep!!
Yippy: Who would go first?
Nick: I’ll go first…
Greg: So what fairytale are doing?
Nick: My version of Hansel and Gretel...Xolo and Xandra.
Once Upon a time, there were two twins named Xolo and Xandra. They were taken care by their mother, Edna. One day, they were playing in the forest and keep playing and playing till’ they got lost. Nowhere to find home, they just walked around the forest.

Xandra: I blame you for this.
Xolo: What!? Why me!?
Xandra: Because you’re the older twin.
Xolo: You’re the older twin, i’m the younger twin. And it was your idea to play in the forest.

They been arguing for so long that they encountered a house made out of gingerbread. A gingerbread house.

Xandra: Wow!!
Xolo: Am i dreaming or-?
Xandra: Stop talking!! Let’s eat it!!
Xolo: Yeah!!

Xandra tear out a candy cane and lick it, while Xolo taste the whip cream. They never realized that a radish in a sorceress outfit came out from the house.

Radley Madish: Oh my, what happened to you kids?
Xandra: Um...ma’am. We’re young adults.
Radley Madish: I’m so...Ma’am? I am a “sir”.
Xolo: Well you do like a woman due to the dress.
Radley Madish: It’s a cloak, nevermind that. Come in, you must be hungry. Help yourself in my home.

In the Gingerbread house

Xandra: This is your home?
Radley Madish: Yes...Why?
Xandra: Well, it’s strange for a turnip guy to owned a gingerbread house.
Radley Madish: I’m a radish.
Xolo: What’s the difference?
Radley Madish: Nevermind, now you two...what are your names?
Xandra: My name is Xandra and this is my twin brother Xolo.
Xolo: Hey!!
Radley Madish: My name is Radley Madish, and i’ll be your caretaker for a while till’ your family is here. Sounds good?
Xandra and Xolo: Good!!
Radley Madish: Now you kids, have some desserts. *Shows them the table with many pastries, ice cream, and many more*
Xandra and Xolo: Wow!!
Xandra: I call the ice cream!!
Xolo: I call the cookies!!

The twins didn’t know that the wicked witch was using them for his diabolical plan...but what it is?

Radley Madish:  I’m a sorcerer, not a witch you little bi-

Hey!! Keep this PG, this is a children’s fairytale book.

Radley Madish: In the original fairy tales, they aren’t children’s books but instead-

Okay!! That’s enough!! So anyways, the wicked sorceress took the twins to the guest room for them to have a good night sleep.

In the guest room

Radley Madish: Xandy…
Xandra: Xandra…
Radley Madish: Whatever...you’ll be sleeping here.
Xandra: Awesome!!
Xolo: What about me?
Radley Madish: Follow me, i’ll lead to your room.
Xolo: Sure… *Leave with Radley Madish*
Xandra: *Went to her bed* Now, time for some zzzzzs!!

Few hours later

Xandra: *Wakes up* Huh? It’s night time, hm...maybe i should go and see my brother.

Xandra left the guest room and look around the house to find her brother. She keep looking and looking, and nowhere to be found till’ she heard something.

??: Xandra!!
Xandra: Xolo?
Xolo: Help!!

She followed the sound of her brother which it came from the basement. She look and saw her brother in the cage and evil sorceress mixing on a big cauldron. Xandra hide behind the boxes and see what happened.

Xolo: Xandra!!
Radley Madish: Oh be quiet you!! No one will stop about my evil plan!!
Xolo: What are you gonna do with me!? Eat me!!
Radley Madish: Eat you? No way!! I don’t eat humans!! Why did you think i’m gonna eat you!?
Xolo: Maybe because there’s a cauldron...and might get revenge to humans who eat your kind...and because i’m fat?
Radley Madish: Nevermind, the point is...i’m using you for my experiment to turned a human into a munchmore creature.
Xolo: That's stupid.
Radley Madish: Stupid!? Atleast I have the brains, unlike you!!
Xolo: *Sees Xandra*
Xandra: Shhhhhh!!
Xolo: Um...Radley, what's with the oven over there?
Radley Madish: Oh this, I'm using this for some experiment. *Opens the oven*
Xolo: So you don't bake or something.
Radley Madish: I'm a vegetable, I don't cook. *Puts on fire*
Xolo: Then what about those treats you gave us?
Radley Madish: I stole it from that bakery so you kids could have it.
Xolo: For what reason?
Radley Madish: I don't know, maybe-
Xandra: *Push Radley to the oven* Take that!! *Closed the oven*
Radley Madish: Hey!! Get me out of here!!
Xandra: *Grabs the key and unlocks the cage*
Xolo: Thanks!! Let's get out of here!!

The twins left the sorcerer’s house and ran so fast away from that place. They keep running and running till they saw a old woman, they realized it's their mother.

Xandra and Xolo: Mom!!
Edna: Xandra and Xolo!! *Hugs them* Good thing I found you two!!
Xandra: Of course, we wouldn't get lost again.
Xolo: We miss you.
Edna: Now let’s go home.

The twins went home with their mother and everyone live happily ever after. Well except for the sorcerer since he was burned to death.

Radley Madish: *Opens the oven* Burned to death?! I'm alive you idiot!! But since the story is over, I'm done here.
Note:

This is gonna be a three parter story, so expect for two more. Greg’s story is next by the way, so I hope you enjoy and comment about the story.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: WhiteShirt on May 19, 2018, 06:36:43 AM
Well i got the idea from on of the episodes from Ducktales.
Knew it! No wonder why it was so familiar..

I like how Radley Madish is talking to the narrator XD
And the fact that this was supposed to have swear words lol XD

I cant wait for Yippy and Greg's stories


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on May 19, 2018, 10:08:52 AM
LOL "you imagine that Rapunzel is Prudence"
also i love the idea of Xolo and Xandra as Hansel and Gretel XD have you read my flipline fairy tales, by the way? (if you did I don't remember when ;p)
also ROFL, the end is hilarious


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 19, 2018, 10:14:59 AM
Knew it! No wonder why it was so familiar..

I like how Radley Madish is talking to the narrator XD
And the fact that this was supposed to have swear words lol XD

I cant wait for Yippy and Greg's stories
Yeah, I wanted some fourth walls. As for the swear words, well...I wanted this fanfic to be PG for all viewers.
LOL "you imagine that Rapunzel is Prudence"
also i love the idea of Xolo and Xandra as Hansel and Gretel XD have you read my flipline fairy tales, by the way? (if you did I don't remember when ;p)
also ROFL, the end is hilarious
Well Hansel and Gretel are siblings so i decided to used the twins. And I love the ending, I don't really like how the witch died so I decided for him to be alive...just burned.

Is your fanfic has Gremmie as Rapunzel?


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 20, 2018, 09:07:33 AM

Flipline Tales II: Julep White and the 14 Chefs

Back to Greg’s apartment

Greg: Hahahahahahahahaha!!
Yippy: I like the fourth wall Nick and you thinking of food.
Nick: Well I'm always hungry, and the Hansel and Gretel is the best thing I can think of.
Greg: I guess you guys should listen my version.
Yippy: What kind of version?
Greg: Well I was thinking of my brother and his fellow friends from the restaurants. I think of...the version of Snow White and the 7 Dwarfs.
Nick: Oh, what's the name?
Greg: Julep White and the 14 Chefs.
Once Upon a Time, they lived a beautiful princess named Julep White. She has the fairest forest and she hopes one day she wins at her first Most Fairest Forest competition. But there is a another forest where there is a castle that was lived by the Wicked King named King Cameo. King Camoe was famous for winning the Most Fairest Forest competition for the 5th year on a row. But this year, it’s different.

In the castle

Cameo: Mirror mirror, on the wall. Who has the most fairest forest of them all?
Olivia: Oh oh!! I know!! And my answer is...not you!!
Cameo: Not me!? Why not!?
Olivia: Well...i don’t know.
Cameo: What do you mean you don’t know!? You’re the magic mirror!!
Olivia: Kidding!! Kidding!! Well there is reason why and it’s because of this...
In the competition

Julep: Is this where i can applied for the competition?
Deano: Of course, sign here. *Gives her the paper*
Julep: Thank you. *Signs up*
Deano: I hope you beat the winning champion.
Julep: You mean King Cameo?
Deano: Yep, and you’re one of the fairest princess.
Julep: Oh...thank you.
Cameo: That princess who owns that stupid forest at the side of this fairest forest. Puh-lease, i have the best forest ever. I won 5 times in a row anyways.
Olivia: The reason you won is because you cheated using your dark magic to make the wicked forest into a enchanted forest.
Cameo: No one cares about your opinion.
Olivia: I’m the magic mirror.
Cameo: The only way to get rid of this girl is by destroying her forest using my dark magic.
Olivia: I hope you do some cackling!!
Cameo: I’m a sorcerer, not a witch. If you excuse me, i’m just gonna work on some potions. *Leave*
Olivia: Hey narrator, why did you used Cameo as the evil que-ahahahahahaha!! Sorry, i mean...why did you used Cameo as the evil king? Isn’t the villain of this story a girl?

Well it’s hard to think of a villainess of this story, thinking Cameo as the antagonist is because of his love of caramel apples and you know about the apples in this story.

Olivia: Okay then, just make him so funny.

Sure, after the evil king finished the potion. The evil king went to Julep White’s forest, pour the potion to the tree, and left. After he left, the tree became a death tree and it’s been spreading all across the forest. Julep came and saw the forest being death.

Julep: T-the forest!? What happened!? I-i…

Since she can’t complete her words, she has no choice but to leave and cried all day. The next day, the forest still same as yesterday. She has no hope on winning the contest. She decided to forfeit the competition but before she do, she decided to go to Papa’s Food Palace where it is located in her forest. When she got inside, it appears to be empty. No one besides the 14 chefs are here.

Julep: Excuse me, is the restaurant closed?
Roy: No...it’s just we don't have customers.
Julep: How come?
Tony: You're Julep White, you owned the forest...right?
Julep: Yeah.
Matt: Well, thanks to the death plants over the forest...no one wants to come here near the forest.
Julep: Yeah.
Roy: Anyways, my name is Pizzeria.
Julep: Pizzeria?
Roy: Yeah, and this is Burgeria.
Marty: Sup’
Roy: Taco Mia.
Mitch: *Sleeping in the counter*
Roy: Freezeria.
Alberto: Hello there.
Roy: Pancakeria, Wingeria, Hotdoggeria, Cup- wait? Where's Cupcakeria?
Cooper: He's fixing the toilet.
James: *In the bathroom* Only because Wingeria put his stupid sunglasses at the toilet.
Chuck: It’s not stupid, it’s great!!
Taylor: *Playing videogames*
Roy: Pastaria, Donuteria, Cheeseria, Bakeria.
Timm: Let’s dance!! *Dancing*
Tony: *Calls his wife* Okay!! Goodbye!! *Turns off the phone*
Doan: *Sketching*
Rudy: *Plays the bass*
Roy: Sushiria, and Scooperia.
Matt: Hi there!!
Carlo: Good morning princess.
Julep: Good morning to you chefs, and i’m sorry that there aren’t any customers.
Rudy: That’s okay, atleast we have freetime.
Julep: Say? What happened to the female chefs?
Tony: My wife and those girls are on a vacay this week.
Chuck: After their week, it’s our turn to have our vacay. And those girls are doing the work that week.
Matt: Wingeria, be nice.
Julep: I wished there’s a way to keep the forest...enchanted.
James: We can help, we have nothing to do here anyways.
Rudy: And this could get our customers back.
Cooper: Yeah!!
Julep: Wow!! Thanks, you shouldn't have.
Chuck: Oh really, then goodbye.
Chefs except Chuck and Mitch:Wingeria!!
Chuck: Alright alright!!
Julep: Let's hope to make the forest great!!
Few hours later in Cameo’s creepy castle.

Olivia: Pfft, creepy.
Cameo: Who are you talking to?
Olivia: The narrator.
Cameo: Um...Mirror mirror, on the wall. Who has the most fairest forest of them all?
Olivia: Oh!! It's you!! Just kidding, it's still Julep’s.
Cameo: What?! I destroyed her forest!!
Olivia: Well yeah, but thanks to her and the male chefs. They restored their forest’s glory. *Shows the vision to Cameo*
Cameo: How is that possible!?
Olivia: Fairytale logic. *Smirks*
Cameo: I guess I have no other choice.
Olivia: Give up and cry like a baby!!
Cameo: What!? No!! I'm just gonna give her a poison caramel apple. *Holds a caramel apple*
Olivia: How is that solve your problem?
Cameo: You'll see…

Back in Julep’s forest where everything is back to normal, Julep White and the chefs are celebrating their accomplished in the forest.

Julep: Thanks for saving the forest.
Carlo: No problem, anything for you.
Marty: Let's go back to work.
Julep: Okay then, goodbye.
Cameo: *Disguise as a vendor* Hello miss, lovely forest you have.
Julep: Thanks.
Cameo: Maybe some treat, on the house. *Gives caramel apple*
Julep: Thanks. *Eats the caramel apple* Huh? I feel dizzy. *Fells down*
Cameo: *Takes off his disguise* Ahahahahahahahahaha!!
Chefs: Huh?!
Roy: What did you do to her?!
Cameo: I poisoned her and fell to a deep sleep, so I can have the fairest forest of all.
Mitch: How is that solve your problem?
Cameo: Geez, if you want her back...I could tell you the way, if you destroy the forest. I guess you have no choice but to destroy the-
Matt: All we need to do is by one true love’s kiss.
Chefs except Matt: Huh?!
Cameo: What the-!? How did you-
Matt: You're not the only one with the magic mirror. *Shows them a magic mirror*
Crystal: The only way to break the eternal slumber is by one true love’s kiss.
Cooper: So who's his one true love? And it clearly isn't me, I'm saving it for Prudence.
Tony: I have a wife.
Rudy and Alberto: Girlfriends!!
Cameo: I guess I have no choice but to destroyed the forest.
Deano: I'm sorry Cameo, but you’re out of the competition!!
Cameo: What the-!? Deano!?
Deano: After buying the magic mirror, the truth came from you. Not only you're out of the competition, but I'm revoking your awards.
Cameo: Fine!! Be that way, I'm starting to hate the competition anyways. *Left*
Deano: Oh my Gosh, my dear princess. Here… *Kiss Julep in the lips*
Julep: Huh? What happened?
Deano: I'll explain everything, right now...you should go to my place and received your award.
Julep: Oh...okay.

After that, Julep White had received her award and the chefs have congratulate her at her success and they lived happily ever after.

Olivia: Happily Ever After!! Happily Ever After!! Happily-
Cameo: *In his pajamas* It's 4:00 AM in the morning, just be quiet!!
Olivia: Okay!!
Note:

Hope you enjoyed this one, it was originally gonna be Wizard of Oz but it might take longer so I did this, and it's hard to think of a evil queen so here's that.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: WhiteShirt on May 20, 2018, 09:31:23 AM
Fairytale logic XD

damn the 4th wall keeps on breaking in this fanfic


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 20, 2018, 09:34:28 AM
Fairytale logic XD

damn the 4th wall keeps on breaking in this fanfic
Yeah!! Fairytale logic!!

Well the Greg and Nick might have do some fourth walls anyways since their narrators, and don't worry...Yippy's story will have some fourth wall too and it will be way funnier than those two.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Fathan on May 22, 2018, 07:35:01 AM
Finally... I can read your Fan-fic again :D
I Can't wait for more...


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 22, 2018, 07:37:31 AM
Finally... I can read your Fan-fic again :D
I Can't wait for more...
Thanks, right now...I haven't finished the next short due to my laziness.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 23, 2018, 04:16:59 AM

Flipline Fairy Tales III: Grempunzel

Back at Greg’s Apartment

Greg: What do you think?
Yippy: So sweet.
Nick: And funny!! Ahahahahahahahahaha!!
Yippy: I like the Magic Mirror’s personality, especially the fourth wall.
Nick: The part of Cooper not kissing her for a reason is hilarious!!
Greg: Okay!! We finished Nick’s story and my story, so it's now you.
Yippy: Sure and this one will be the funniest among your stories. My version of Rapunzel...Grempunzel!!
Nick and Greg: Grempunzel!? Ahahahahahahahahaha!!
Yippy: Listen boys...
Once Upon A Time, in a magical land...deep in the forest. There is a tall tower with no doors and stairs...only a window. A young beautiful damsel in distre-

Gremmie: Beautiful!? Damsel In Distress!? I have you know that i am a man in a stupid dress.

Then why are you wearing a dress?

Gremmie: *Sigh* Why am i in a dress again you ugly witch?
Utah: I’m not ugly, i’m beautiful. Also, you did lost the bet so you have to wear a dress and you can’t escaped the tower till’ someone save you.
Gremmie: And i hope it isn’t some stupid prince or any of those men. They mistaken me as a girl...again!!

Flashback I

Wylan B: I will save you...with the power music. *Starts singing*
Gremmie: *Pours a bucket of water to Wylan B*
Wylan B: Ugh man, i told my friend that it wouldn’t get wet.

Flashback II

Allan: I’ll show Robby that i’m a better prince than him by saving the damsel in distress. *Used the rope and lasso it to the rope* I’m coming for you. *Starts climbing*
Gremmie: *Cuts the rope*
Allan: *Sees the rope being cut and fell* Oh no!! Ahhhhhh!! *Landed on the ground*Owwww!!

Flashback II

Steven: *Stops running* Hey miss!! Help me!! There some girls trying to get me!!
Gremmie: (Liar.) *Closed the window*
Steven: Oh no.
Hope, Yui, Elle, and Amy: PRINCE STEVEN!!
Steven: Ahhhhhh!! *Starts running*

Back to the Present

Utah: Hahahahaha!! The last one never wanted to save you, he wanted to be save.
Gremmie: Stop laughing!! And it’s been a month and yet all i get some stupid men!! And why do i have very long hair again?
Utah: I cursed your hair because i wanted you to look like a girl. *Grabs the witch broom and starts flying* Anyways, i’m off to see my big sis and if you did got rescued. Call me. *Flies off*
Gremmie: I’ll called you...to make you bad!!
Princes: Oh our dear damsell!!
Gremmie: Great, now time to used scorpions this time. Don’t asked where i got it.

45 minutes later, somewhere in the forest. A castle where the king and queen lives with their 4 children. 4 princes and 1 princess. The 4 princes went out a hour ago, leaving the princess behind after doing her princess duties and about to go to her room with her lady-in-waiting.

Clover: And you’re all done, now you have free time.
Scooter: Finally, i’m tired of doing those royal duties.
Clover: So what are we gonna do now? We both have free times.
Scooter: Let’s say we can go outside the castle...and caused some mischief there.
Clover: You know what i’m saying.
Scooter: Yeah!! *High fives together*
Clover: Hey, is that your brothers over there?
Scooter: Yeah, you’re right.
Clover: Hm...why are do they have scorpions in their body?
Scooter: I bet they failed from the damsel in the tower. You know what? I have an idea, let’s save the damsel in distress.
Clover: But no men can save the damsel from the tower.
Scooter: Well i’m not a man so are you.
Clover: Alright then.
Scooter: Let’s armored on.

After they put on their armors, they went out using their horses and off to rescued the damsel in distress. Princess Scooter, who looks a man in a armor...and Lady Clover went to the bar for some refreshment.

In the Bar

Scooter: *Sits down*
Penny: Welcome to bar, mister and miss.
Clover: Mister?
Scooter: Any refreshment?
Penny: Well we have water, juice, soda, milksha-
Clover: Can i have cookies and cream milkshake?
Penny: Coming right up, and you?
Scooter: Dr. Cherry Soda.
Penny: Alright Sir, your refreshment will arrive in just a minute. *Left*
Clover: Sir? People keepy mistaken your gender.
Scooter: That’s okay, it’s better than being a princess.

Meanwhile, back in the tower.

Gremmie: *Reads a book* What? You really think there is something excited here.

Okay then? Back to the bar.

Outside the bar

Scooter: *Sees the bar being burned down* Okay? What just happened? After we drank our refreshment and then suddenly it burns down.
Clover: I don’t know how it happened.

I can tell you what happened.

Utah: I’m singing!! I’m singing!! Hm...i need some water. *Grab something in her bag and accidentally let her potion fell to bar which cause a fire* Um…maybe i need to go fast.

Well you already know. So the princess and the lady in waiting arrived at the tower.

Outside the tower

Scooter: That’s a tall tower.
Clover: I agree. How are we gonna let her go down there?
Scooter: Hm…*Sees a paper* What’s this? *Reads the paper and sees the name “Grempunzel”* That’s the name of the damsel.
Clover: Pfft!! Now what?
Scooter: Hm...let me think. *Sees the word long hair* (Did she has a very long hair? Let me see.) Grempunzel, Grempunzel...let down your hair.
Clover: What?
Gremmie: Is that Utah? Did she broke her broom again? *Let down his hair to below*
Clover: Woah, a very long hair.
Scooter: Stay here, i’m gonna rescue her. *Climbs the hair*

In the tower

Gremmie: Next time Utah, don’t sing and closed your eyes so you wouldn’-!! Huh!?
Scooter: Hello damsel in distress, i’m here to save you.
Gremmmie: What!? No!! I don’t want to be save by some stupid prince!!
Scooter: Prince? Ahahahahahaha!!
Gremmie: What’s so funny?
Scooter: You think i’m a prince!? Ahahahahahaha!! Hilarious!!
Gremmie: Well prince or not, there’s no i want a men to rescued me.
Scooter: Men? Hahahahahaha!!
Gremmie: What now!?
Scooter: You think i’m a dude, no way. I’m a girl. Princess Scooter and you might have dropped those scorpions to my brothers...right?
Gremmie: That’s your brothers? Wait a minute!? You’re a girl!?
Scooter: That’s right!! I’m a tomboy princess!! Get it!! Hahahahahahaha!!
Gremmie: That’s not funny!! Get me out of here!!
Scooter: Ai yah Grempunzel.
Gremmie: That’s not my real name.
Scooter: Huh?
Gremmie: My real name is Gremmie.
Scooter: Then why Grempunzel?
Gremmie: I faked my name so people wouldn’t know who am i after i escaping this tower.
Scooter: Wait a minute? Are you man...in a dress!?
Gremmie:
Scooter: That’s hilarious!! No wonder why you don’t want a men to rescue you!! Bwahahahahahahaha!!

1 hour later

Scooter: Hahahahahahahahahaha!!
Gremmie: That’s enough!! Let’s get out of here!!
Scooter: Fine...damsel.

Outside the tower

Clover: It’s been a hour and you rescued a...ugly damsel?
Gremmie: I’m not ugly and i’m not a damsel!!
Scooter: Who is in distress.
Gremmie: Shut up!!
Utah: I’m back and i guess someone rescued you.
Scooter: Who are you?
Utah: I’m Utah the witch and curse Gremmie on wearing a dress, having a long hair, and cannot escape the tower unless someone rescue him.
Clover: Why?
Utah: Well he lost a bet once and i curse him.
Scooter: Nice.
Gremmie: Yada yada yada. Changed me back before anyone sees me.
Utah: Alright. *Turns him back to normal*
Gremmie: *In his normal self* Finally!! Thank you and goodbye!! *Left*
Clover: And i thought there will be a marriage or some love.
Scooter: I’m not here for love, i’m here for justice. And some mischief, let’s go.

And they all live happily ever after.

Gremmie: *Eating a sandwich* What? You think there’s more. Get out.
In Greg’s Apartment

Greg: Hahahahahahaha!!
Nick: Gremmie in a dress!!! Hilarious!!
Yippy: Yeah, i gonna thank Cooper for this idea of Rapunzel.
Greg: Hey guys look outside!! It’s sunny!!
Nick: Really!?
Greg: Yeah really!!
Yippy: Then what are we waiting for? Let’s go and play!!
Greg and Nick: Yeah!! *All went outside*
Note:

The end of Flipline Tales or maybe someday it will returned. I hope you leave a comment and enjoyed this short. The next short will have something to do with a challenge.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Fathan on May 23, 2018, 06:49:33 AM
I really love this part... Grempunzel...
hahahahahaha... I can't stop laughing...

Btw... nice work OcFanatic... I expect more from your Fan-Fic


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on May 23, 2018, 11:35:01 AM
yeah I called it Grepunzel since that sounded a bit closer to Rapunzel ROFL, when I used the long haired guy to make a genderbend fairy tale knockoff and Sasha was the prince but I also like Scooter as the tomboy princess rescuer a lot and it's funnier. XD anyway it's hilarious, especially the first line "I'm a man in a stupid dress" :P

and poor Steven, the only male customerpalooza entry, you should do a separate skit about him! in fact that's my next request muwahaha


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 25, 2018, 07:18:49 AM
I really love this part... Grempunzel...
hahahahahaha... I can't stop laughing...

Btw... nice work OcFanatic... I expect more from your Fan-Fic
Yeah, that's why I love this part.
yeah I called it Grepunzel since that sounded a bit closer to Rapunzel ROFL, when I used the long haired guy to make a genderbend fairy tale knockoff and Sasha was the prince but I also like Scooter as the tomboy princess rescuer a lot and it's funnier. XD anyway it's hilarious, especially the first line "I'm a man in a stupid dress" :P

and poor Steven, the only male customerpalooza entry, you should do a separate skit about him! in fact that's my next request muwahaha
Well I wouldn't be doing this kind of short if it wasn't for you, and Gremmie with a Long blonde hair is funny!!

And I hope you request it!!

A short will be here later


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 25, 2018, 07:20:04 AM

No Idiosyncrasy Challenge Part 1

At Papa’s Pizzeria

Roy: Uncle Louie? Why are we here?
Papa Louie: Well i wanted to give you guys a good news.
Utah: You’re gonna retired early!!
Papa Louie: What? No!! Why would you think that?
Utah: Because you’re getting old.
Doan: Utah!! Respect your elders.
Utah: Sorry.
Matt: So what is it?
Papa Louie: Since you chefs been working so hard, maybe it's time for the restaurants to be closed for now.
Rudy: What? Why?
Papa Louie: Because we're going on 3-day vacation.
Penny: Really?
Alberto: That's great.
Papa Louie: Of course, you all deserved it.
Chuck: So where are we going? Sunny beaches in Calypso Island, the waterpark...
Peggy: Or maybe the desert?
Cecilia: I prefer relaxing vacation.
Papa Louie: Nope, I rented a huge cabin in Maple Mountain. They have a large lake we can swim in, a great view, and many more. Good enough for 50 people.
Maggie: You mean 29 people.
Papa Louie: Well if you guys want to invite some guests.
Mandi: Well me and Tony have to take of our three daughters and a son. So we have to bring them there.
Cooper: And I think of bringing my brother Greg.
Carlo: What are we waiting for? Let's start packing.
Maggie: Okay everyone...I prepare a list of things to bring. Number one, too-
Mitch: *Snoring*
Maggie: MITCH!!
In the cabin

Papa Louie: We only have 20 rooms so two people should share a room.
Mandi: I hope you girls are okay sharing a room.
Sidney, Jordan, and Bruna Solary: Okay!!
Cosmo: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!
Tony: You need a bottle Cosmo.
Koilee: Good thing i don’t have kids.
Carlo: Koilee? Why did you bought your koi fishes?
Koilee: I can’t let them stay alone at my house, besides...you bought your mandolin.
Carlo: I need some music.
Peggy: Well i hope we do some chores and work hard.
Chuck: It supposed to relaxing, not working.
Peggy: Atleast i didn’t spend time on the internet to see your followers.
Chuck: They love me.
Penny: Hey Taylor, can you get that bag?
Taylor: *Playing video games* Busy.
Alberto: You can paused it for a bit.
Taylor: *Playing video games* No way.
Penny: You know Taylor, playing video games keeps you distracted from what is important.
Taylor: *Playing video games* Like the person who keeps googly eyes on their love interest.
Penny and Alberto: HEY!!
Utah: Hey!! Everyone!! I bought a gallon of pink lemonade!!
Maggie: A gallon of pink lemonade? I told you to bring a gallon of water.
Utah: But pink lemonade is better. *Drinks pink lemonade*
Maggie: You need to stopped over your obsession of pink lemonade!!
Utah: And you need to stopped demanding everyone!!
Maggie: I am not demanding.
Utah: Oh really, you have a list, managing, and many boring stuffs.
Maggie: I am not demanding!! *Sees Mitch sleeping* MITCH!! WAKE UP!!
Mitch: *Snoring*
Marty: *Sees DVDs* Rita? Is this yours?
Rita: Yeah, why?
Marty: You have 15 DVDs, and you’re gonna spend on watching some DVDs. You could just watched it at home.
Rita: And you could just played your instrument at home.
Marty:

*Many chefs started to argue eachother*

Greg: I’m going to my room. *Leave*
Timm: Um Papa Louie.
Papa Louie: Yeah, i know.
Roy: Many people complained about their annoyance.
Timm: Atleast we don’t annoyance.
Joy: Oh really, like you don’t have your out-of-control dancing.
Timm: What? At least i didn’t sneak away from work.
Joy: Sneak aw-? I don’t...can you just shut up!?
Roy: Everyone, this is suppose to be our vacation.
Papa Louie: Chefs? Chefs? CHEFS!!

*The lightning strikes and rainy day came*

Chuck: What the-!? It suppose to be sunny day.
Mitch: I bet Maggie’s voice made the rain came!!
Maggie: I did not!!
Jester X Game: She’s right!! I did!!
Roy: J-Jester X Game?
Papa Louie: Oh no, you wanted a challenge...forget it, it’s our vacation.
Jester X Game: Well you wouldn’t get your vacation due to the weather and you guys have no choice but to spend your vacation here in the cabin.
James: What is this challenge this time?
Jester X Game: Since you guys been arguing about your annoyance. I’ll give you challenge...if all of you even if only one person keep their annoyance till’ midnight. You guys win, and the sunny day will come. But if all of you failed, then you don't have a sunny day. Sounds good?
James: So you're saying that one person who used their annoyance will be disqualified and the others still continue not doing it?
Jester X Game: That's right, don't even think doing it secret. *Puts every chefs except Papa Louie and Roy a bracelet* Cause if you do your annoyance, then the bracelet will be turned from green to red and you're disqualified. Oh yeah…*Shows the countdown* This is countdown...27 chefs and it will decrease whenever someone failed to do their jobs. Any questions?
Papa Louie: I have one, how me and Roy don't have bracelets?
Jester X Game: Because you both don't have a annoyance.
Roy: Hm…
Jester X Game: Let the challenge begin!! And remember, no annoyance till midnight strikes. So here are your annoyance that you shouldn't do today...Joy sneaking out, Marty playing the guitar, Rita watching movies, Mitch sleeping, Maggie being a boss, Alberto and Penny doing romantic stuff, Prudence eating pickles, Cooper being romantic to his crush-
Cooper: I don't have a crush!! Who's said anything about a crush!?
Jester X Game: Mandi being a Mother, Chuck looking at the Internet, Peggy doing some chores, Taylor playing video games, Willow doing spooky stuff, James doing handyman stuff, Doan doing artistic stuff, Utah drinking pink lemonade, Tony being a Father, Scooter playing the skateboard, Rudy playing the bass, Scarlett singing, Timm and Cecilia dancing, Matt drinking Dr. Cherry, and Clover playing the drums. Now go!!
4:45 PM, In Chuck and Taylor’s room (27)

Taylor: *Playing Monopoly with Chuck* *Sigh*
Chuck: Hey, at least it it refresh your brain. Am i right shoe? *Picks up the player shoe* *Intimidating the voice* Yeah Chuck, you’re the best and i want to be your girlfriend. *Normal voice* Thank you Ms.-
Taylor: That’s it!! I don’t care about the day, i want to play videogames.
Chuck: *Holds Taylor* Taylor!! Control yourself!! I need a sunny day so the girls will feel my lovely ab-
Taylor: Did you just got 500 more followers!?
Chuck: Really!? I wanna to see and- who are we kidding!? We only have 7 hours to go.
Taylor: Technically, it’s 7 hours and 25 minutes.
Chuck: It doesn’t matter, you have self-control issue.
Taylor: I have self-control issue!? You have self-control issue since you wanted to know something in the internet.
Chuck: Then let’s have a bet, if either one of us fail to the challenge. Then the loser will give their next salary to the winner. What do you say?
Taylor: Deal!!

5:00 PM, In the Solary Kids’ room (27)

Matt: It’s a good thing Mandi and Tony let us take care of their children.
Doan: That way...Mandi and Tony wouldn’t fail the challenge and we can spend time taking care of this kids.
Sidney: Hello Matt and Tony, where’s mom and dad?
Doan: They will be taking a break for awhile, so you guys should spend time with us.
Jordan: Really!?
Matt: Really, i need a drink that isn’t Dr. Cherry. *Leave*

5:05 PM, In the Hallways (27)

Utah: *Sitting in the floor near the gallon of pink lemonade*
Matt: Hey Utah, can i have some pink lemonade?
Utah: *Pours the pink lemonade and gives it to Matt*
Matt: Thanks. *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Clover: *Holding Scooter’s skateboard* Can i have some lemonade?
Utah: *Pours the pink lemonade and gives it to Matt*
Clover: Thanks. *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Matt: Um Clover, why do you have her skateboard?
Clover: Since we’re in the challenge, we figured i should exchanged my drum to Scooter for the skateboard for a whole day.
Matt: That’s real smart. *Sees a Mitch* Hey Mitch, want some pink lemonade?
Mitch: NO WAY MATT!! I’M GONNA DRINK SOME HOT COFFEE TO MAKE ME AWAKE TILL’ MIDNIGHT!! BYE!! *Leave*
Clover: Screaming…
Timm: Hey guys, can i have some-
Utah: *Stands up* I CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMORE!! *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 26!!
Utah: I don’t care, at least i enjoy some fresh lemonade. *Accidentally drops the pink lemonade on the floor* Oops!!
Scooter: *Enters the room* Hey dudes and dudettes, what’s sha- *Slip through the pink lemonade* KING!! *Fell to Clover and accidentally rode the skateboard with Clover on it and landed on their room*
Jester X Game: 25!!
Clover: Oh, drums!! *Plays the drums*
Jester X Game: 24!!
5:30 PM, In Chuck and Taylor’s room (24)

Chuck: *Laying in his bed*
Taylor: *Throwing ball to the roof numerous times*
Chuck: (I need to win this bet so i could get his salary. Good thing i bought this.) Hey Taylor, remembered that latest video game you wanted to play but was sold out?
Taylor: Yeah, why?
Chuck: Well...here. *Holds the video game*
Taylor: Oh my gosh!! I waited for this for so long!!
Chuck: And you can played it right now!!
Taylor: Sure!! I’ll turned on my PC and- wait a minute!? You're trying to make me play video games.!!
Chuck: No, of course not!!
Taylor: Oh, so you want to play...huh? Then I'll make sure you will. *Leave*

6:00 PM, In the Solary Kids’ room (24)

Solary Girls: *Causing trouble* YEAH!!
Matt: So sleepy.
Doan: Yeah, but we need to take care of this kids.
Sidney: Matt, here's a refreshment!! *Gives drink to Matt*
Matt: Oh thank you. *Drinks it*
Jester X Game: 23!!
Matt: ...is that Dr. Cherry?
Sidney: Yep!!
Matt: *Slaps himself*
Bruna Solary: Doan!! Can you draw me a elephant?
Doan: Sorry, but no. Maybe Matt can and-
Bruna Solary: But I want you!! I WANT YOU!! I WANT YOUUUUUUUUU-
Doan: Alright!! Fine… *Draws a elephant*
Jester X Game: 22!!
Jordan: Let's play captured the bad guy!! The adults are the bad guys!!
Sidney and Bruna Solary: Yeah!!
Matt and Doan: AHHHHHHHH!!

6:15 PM, In the kitchen (22)

Mitch: *Drinks another coffee*
Roy: Are you sure drinking that much coffee will let you stay awake?
Mitch: Of course, so that I wouldn't be asleep. *Accidentally pour the milk to the coffee and drinks it* See… *Falls asleep*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 21!!

6:30 PM, In Maggie and Penny’s room (21)

Maggie: *Tries to sleep*
Penny: What are you doing?
Maggie: Trying to sleep so I wouldn't be demanding.
Penny: Here some milk to make you sleepy…*Gives milk to Maggie*
Maggie: Thanks… *Drinks milk*
Penny: (Now's my chance) *About to escape*
Maggie: Where are you going?
Penny: To...the...kitchen.
Maggie: Is it about Alberto?
Penny: Um…
Maggie: Look!! We're in a challenge and if all of us lose, then we kissed our sunny day goodbye and I demand you not to see Alberto this night...now!! Oh no…
Jester X Game: *Appears* 20!!
Maggie: Dang it...
Taylor: Hey you girls, do you have phones without games in it?
Maggie: Oh sure, why?
Taylor: Can I borrowed it?
Maggie: What? No!! Wh-
Taylor: *Takes Maggie’s phone* Thanks!! *Left*
Maggie: Um...
Note:

It will be a two-parter short, so there are 20 people left. Also, there's a poll about who's win the bet? Either Chuck or Taylor? And no, it will not affect the story and I already chose a winner. I just want you guys to guess.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: WhiteShirt on May 25, 2018, 09:51:11 AM
Cool story! I always wanted to read a fanfic with all the chefs involved


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on May 25, 2018, 10:49:43 AM

No Annoyance Challenge Part 1

At Papa’s Pizzeria

Roy: Uncle Louie? Why are we here?
Papa Louie: Well i wanted to give you guys a good news.
Utah: You’re gonna retired early!!
Papa Louie: What? No!! Why would you think that?
Utah: Because you’re getting old.
Doan: Utah!! Respect your elders.
Utah: Sorry.
Matt: So what is it?
Papa Louie: Since you chefs been working so hard, maybe it's time for the restaurants to be closed for now.
Rudy: What? Why?
Papa Louie: Because we're going on 3-day vacation.
Penny: Really?
Alberto: That's great.
Papa Louie: Of course, you all deserved it.
Chuck: So where are we going? Sunny beaches in Calypso Island, the waterpark...
Peggy: Or maybe the desert?
Cecilia: I prefer relaxing vacation.
Papa Louie: Nope, I rented a huge cabin in Maple Mountain. They have a large lake we can swim in, a great view, and many more. Good enough for 50 people.
Maggie: You mean 29 people.
Papa Louie: Well if you guys want to invite some guests.
Mandi: Well me and Tony have to take of our three daughters and a son. So we have to bring them there.
Cooper: And I think of bringing my brother Greg.
Carlo: What are we waiting for? Let's start packing.
Maggie: Okay everyone...I prepare a list of things to bring. Number one, too-
Mitch: *Snoring*
Maggie: MITCH!!
In the cabin

Papa Louie: We only have 20 rooms so two people should share a room.
Mandi: I hope you girls are okay sharing a room.
Sidney, Jordan, and Bruna Solary: Okay!!
Cosmo: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!
Tony: You need a bottle Cosmo.
Koilee: Good thing i don’t have kids.
Carlo: Koilee? Why did you bought your koi fishes?
Koilee: I can’t let them stay alone at my house, besides...you bought your mandolin.
Carlo: I need some music.
Peggy: Well i hope we do some chores and work hard.
Chuck: It supposed to relaxing, not working.
Peggy: Atleast i didn’t spend time on the internet to see your followers.
Chuck: They love me.
Penny: Hey Taylor, can you get that bag?
Taylor: *Playing video games* Busy.
Alberto: You can paused it for a bit.
Taylor: *Playing video games* No way.
Penny: You know Taylor, playing video games keeps you distracted from what is important.
Taylor: *Playing video games* Like the person who keeps googly eyes on their love interest.
Penny and Alberto: HEY!!
Utah: Hey!! Everyone!! I bought a gallon of pink lemonade!!
Maggie: A gallon of pink lemonade? I told you to bring a gallon of water.
Utah: But pink lemonade is better. *Drinks pink lemonade*
Maggie: You need to stopped over your obsession of pink lemonade!!
Utah: And you need to stopped demanding everyone!!
Maggie: I am not demanding.
Utah: Oh really, you have a list, managing, and many boring stuffs.
Maggie: I am not demanding!! *Sees Mitch sleeping* MITCH!! WAKE UP!!
Mitch: *Snoring*
Marty: *Sees DVDs* Rita? Is this yours?
Rita: Yeah, why?
Marty: You have 15 DVDs, and you’re gonna spend on watching some DVDs. You could just watched it at home.
Rita: And you could just played your instrument at home.
Marty:

*Many chefs started to argue eachother*

Greg: I’m going to my room. *Leave*
Timm: Um Papa Louie.
Papa Louie: Yeah, i know.
Roy: Many people complained about their annoyance.
Timm: Atleast we don’t annoyance.
Joy: Oh really, like you don’t have your out-of-control dancing.
Timm: What? At least i didn’t sneak away from work.
Joy: Sneak aw-? I don’t...can you just shut up!?
Roy: Everyone, this is suppose to be our vacation.
Papa Louie: Chefs? Chefs? CHEFS!!

*The lightning strikes and rainy day came*

Chuck: What the-!? It suppose to be sunny day.
Mitch: I bet Maggie’s voice made the rain came!!
Maggie: I did not!!
Jester X Game: She’s right!! I did!!
Roy: J-Jester X Game?
Papa Louie: Oh no, you wanted a challenge...forget it, it’s our vacation.
Jester X Game: Well you wouldn’t get your vacation due to the weather and you guys have no choice but to spend your vacation here in the cabin.
James: What is this challenge this time?
Jester X Game: Since you guys been arguing about your annoyance. I’ll give you challenge...if all of you even if only one person keep their annoyance till’ midnight. You guys win, and the sunny day will come. But if all of you failed, then you don't have a sunny day. Sounds good?
James: So you're saying that one person who used their annoyance will be disqualified and the others still continue not doing it?
Jester X Game: That's right, don't even think doing it secret. *Puts every chefs except Papa Louie and Roy a bracelet* Cause if you do your annoyance, then the bracelet will be turned from green to red and you're disqualified. Oh yeah…*Shows the countdown* This is countdown...27 chefs and it will decrease whenever someone failed to do their jobs. Any questions?
Papa Louie: I have one, how me and Roy don't have bracelets?
Jester X Game: Because you both don't have a annoyance.
Roy: Hm…
Jester X Game: Let the challenge begin!! And remember, no annoyance till midnight strikes. So here are your annoyance that you shouldn't do today...Joy sneaking out, Marty playing the guitar, Rita watching movies, Mitch sleeping, Maggie being a boss, Alberto and Penny doing romantic stuff, Prudence eating pickles, Cooper being romantic to his crush-
Cooper: I don't have a crush!! Who's said anything about a crush!?
Jester X Game: Mandi being a Mother, Chuck looking at the Internet, Peggy doing some chores, Taylor playing video games, Willow doing spooky stuff, James doing handyman stuff, Doan doing artistic stuff, Utah drinking pink lemonade, Tony being a Father, Scooter playing the skateboard, Rudy playing the bass, Scarlett singing, Timm and Cecilia dancing, Matt drinking Dr. Cherry, and Clover playing the drums. Now go!!
4:45 PM, In Chuck and Taylor’s room (27)

Taylor: *Playing Monopoly with Chuck* *Sigh*
Chuck: Hey, at least it it refresh your brain. Am i right shoe? *Picks up the player shoe* *Intimidating the voice* Yeah Chuck, you’re the best and i want to be your girlfriend. *Normal voice* Thank you Ms.-
Taylor: That’s it!! I don’t care about the day, i want to play videogames.
Chuck: *Holds Taylor* Taylor!! Control yourself!! I need a sunny day so the girls will feel my lovely ab-
Taylor: Did you just got 500 more followers!?
Chuck: Really!? I wanna to see and- who are we kidding!? We only have 7 hours to go.
Taylor: Technically, it’s 7 hours and 25 minutes.
Chuck: It doesn’t matter, you have self-control issue.
Taylor: I have self-control issue!? You have self-control issue since you wanted to know something in the internet.
Chuck: Then let’s have a bet, if either one of us fail to the challenge. Then the loser will give their next salary to the winner. What do you say?
Taylor: Deal!!

5:00 PM, In the Solary Kids’ room (27)

Matt: It’s a good thing Mandi and Tony let us take care of their children.
Doan: That way...Mandi and Tony wouldn’t fail the challenge and we can spend time taking care of this kids.
Sidney: Hello Matt and Tony, where’s mom and dad?
Doan: They will be taking a break for awhile, so you guys should spend time with us.
Jordan: Really!?
Matt: Really, i need a drink that isn’t Dr. Cherry. *Leave*

5:05 PM, In the Hallways (27)

Utah: *Sitting in the floor near the gallon of pink lemonade*
Matt: Hey Utah, can i have some pink lemonade?
Utah: *Pours the pink lemonade and gives it to Matt*
Matt: Thanks. *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Clover: *Holding Scooter’s skateboard* Can i have some lemonade?
Utah: *Pours the pink lemonade and gives it to Matt*
Clover: Thanks. *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Matt: Um Clover, why do you have her skateboard?
Clover: Since we’re in the challenge, we figured i should exchanged my drum to Scooter for the skateboard for a whole day.
Matt: That’s real smart. *Sees a Mitch* Hey Mitch, want some pink lemonade?
Mitch: NO WAY MATT!! I’M GONNA DRINK SOME HOT COFFEE TO MAKE ME AWAKE TILL’ MIDNIGHT!! BYE!! *Leave*
Clover: Screaming…
Timm: Hey guys, can i have some-
Utah: *Stands up* I CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMORE!! *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 26!!
Utah: I don’t care, at least i enjoy some fresh lemonade. *Accidentally drops the pink lemonade on the floor* Oops!!
Scooter: *Enters the room* Hey dudes and dudettes, what’s sha- *Slip through the pink lemonade* KING!! *Fell to Clover and accidentally rode the skateboard with Clover on it and landed on their room*
Jester X Game: 25!!
Clover: Oh, drums!! *Plays the drums*
Jester X Game: 24!!
5:30 PM, In Chuck and Taylor’s room (24)

Chuck: *Laying in his bed*
Taylor: *Throwing ball to the roof numerous times*
Chuck: (I need to win this bet so i could get his salary. Good thing i bought this.) Hey Taylor, remembered that latest video game you wanted to play but was sold out?
Taylor: Yeah, why?
Chuck: Well...here. *Holds the video game*
Taylor: Oh my gosh!! I waited for this for so long!!
Chuck: And you can played it right now!!
Taylor: Sure!! I’ll turned on my PC and- wait a minute!? You're trying to make me play video games.!!
Chuck: No, of course not!!
Taylor: Oh, so you want to play...huh? Then I'll make sure you will. *Leave*

6:00 PM, In the Solary Kids’ room (24)

Solary Girls: *Causing trouble* YEAH!!
Matt: So sleepy.
Doan: Yeah, but we need to take care of this kids.
Sidney: Matt, here's a refreshment!! *Gives drink to Matt*
Matt: Oh thank you. *Drinks it*
Jester X Game: 23!!
Matt: ...is that Dr. Cherry?
Sidney: Yep!!
Matt: *Slaps himself*
Bruna Solary: Doan!! Can you draw me a elephant?
Doan: Sorry, but no. Maybe Matt can and-
Bruna Solary: But I want you!! I WANT YOU!! I WANT YOUUUUUUUUU-
Doan: Alright!! Fine… *Draws a elephant*
Jester X Game: 22!!
Jordan: Let's play captured the bad guy!! The adults are the bad guys!!
Sidney and Bruna Solary: Yeah!!
Matt and Doan: AHHHHHHHH!!

6:15 PM, In the kitchen (22)

Mitch: *Drinks another coffee*
Roy: Are you sure drinking that much coffee will let you stay awake?
Mitch: Of course, so that I wouldn't be asleep. *Accidentally pour the milk to the coffee and drinks it* See… *Falls asleep*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 21!!

6:30 PM, In Maggie and Penny’s room (21)

Maggie: *Tries to sleep*
Penny: What are you doing?
Maggie: Trying to sleep so I wouldn't be demanding.
Penny: Here some milk to make you sleepy…*Gives milk to Maggie*
Maggie: Thanks… *Drinks milk*
Penny: (Now's my chance) *About to escape*
Maggie: Where are you going?
Penny: To...the...kitchen.
Maggie: Is it about Alberto?
Penny: Um…
Maggie: Look!! We're in a challenge and if all of us lose, then we kissed our sunny day goodbye and I demand you not to see Alberto this night...now!! Oh no…
Jester X Game: *Appears* 20!!
Maggie: Dang it...
Taylor: Hey you girls, do you have phones without games in it?
Maggie: Oh sure, why?
Taylor: Can I borrowed it?
Maggie: What? No!! Wh-
Taylor: *Takes Maggie’s phone* Thanks!! *Left*
Maggie: Um...
Note:

It will be a two-parter short, so there are 20 people left. Also, there's a poll about who's win the bet? Either Chuck or Taylor? And no, it will not affect the story and I already chose a winner. I just want you guys to guess.
ROFL at Koilee and her fish, also Mandi and Tony's kids


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Petey K on May 25, 2018, 06:34:13 PM

No Annoyance Challenge Part 1

At Papa’s Pizzeria

Roy: Uncle Louie? Why are we here?
Papa Louie: Well i wanted to give you guys a good news.
Utah: You’re gonna retired early!!
Papa Louie: What? No!! Why would you think that?
Utah: Because you’re getting old.
Doan: Utah!! Respect your elders.
Utah: Sorry.
Matt: So what is it?
Papa Louie: Since you chefs been working so hard, maybe it's time for the restaurants to be closed for now.
Rudy: What? Why?
Papa Louie: Because we're going on 3-day vacation.
Penny: Really?
Alberto: That's great.
Papa Louie: Of course, you all deserved it.
Chuck: So where are we going? Sunny beaches in Calypso Island, the waterpark...
Peggy: Or maybe the desert?
Cecilia: I prefer relaxing vacation.
Papa Louie: Nope, I rented a huge cabin in Maple Mountain. They have a large lake we can swim in, a great view, and many more. Good enough for 50 people.
Maggie: You mean 29 people.
Papa Louie: Well if you guys want to invite some guests.
Mandi: Well me and Tony have to take of our three daughters and a son. So we have to bring them there.
Cooper: And I think of bringing my brother Greg.
Carlo: What are we waiting for? Let's start packing.
Maggie: Okay everyone...I prepare a list of things to bring. Number one, too-
Mitch: *Snoring*
Maggie: MITCH!!
In the cabin

Papa Louie: We only have 20 rooms so two people should share a room.
Mandi: I hope you girls are okay sharing a room.
Sidney, Jordan, and Bruna Solary: Okay!!
Cosmo: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!
Tony: You need a bottle Cosmo.
Koilee: Good thing i don’t have kids.
Carlo: Koilee? Why did you bought your koi fishes?
Koilee: I can’t let them stay alone at my house, besides...you bought your mandolin.
Carlo: I need some music.
Peggy: Well i hope we do some chores and work hard.
Chuck: It supposed to relaxing, not working.
Peggy: Atleast i didn’t spend time on the internet to see your followers.
Chuck: They love me.
Penny: Hey Taylor, can you get that bag?
Taylor: *Playing video games* Busy.
Alberto: You can paused it for a bit.
Taylor: *Playing video games* No way.
Penny: You know Taylor, playing video games keeps you distracted from what is important.
Taylor: *Playing video games* Like the person who keeps googly eyes on their love interest.
Penny and Alberto: HEY!!
Utah: Hey!! Everyone!! I bought a gallon of pink lemonade!!
Maggie: A gallon of pink lemonade? I told you to bring a gallon of water.
Utah: But pink lemonade is better. *Drinks pink lemonade*
Maggie: You need to stopped over your obsession of pink lemonade!!
Utah: And you need to stopped demanding everyone!!
Maggie: I am not demanding.
Utah: Oh really, you have a list, managing, and many boring stuffs.
Maggie: I am not demanding!! *Sees Mitch sleeping* MITCH!! WAKE UP!!
Mitch: *Snoring*
Marty: *Sees DVDs* Rita? Is this yours?
Rita: Yeah, why?
Marty: You have 15 DVDs, and you’re gonna spend on watching some DVDs. You could just watched it at home.
Rita: And you could just played your instrument at home.
Marty:

*Many chefs started to argue eachother*

Greg: I’m going to my room. *Leave*
Timm: Um Papa Louie.
Papa Louie: Yeah, i know.
Roy: Many people complained about their annoyance.
Timm: Atleast we don’t annoyance.
Joy: Oh really, like you don’t have your out-of-control dancing.
Timm: What? At least i didn’t sneak away from work.
Joy: Sneak aw-? I don’t...can you just shut up!?
Roy: Everyone, this is suppose to be our vacation.
Papa Louie: Chefs? Chefs? CHEFS!!

*The lightning strikes and rainy day came*

Chuck: What the-!? It suppose to be sunny day.
Mitch: I bet Maggie’s voice made the rain came!!
Maggie: I did not!!
Jester X Game: She’s right!! I did!!
Roy: J-Jester X Game?
Papa Louie: Oh no, you wanted a challenge...forget it, it’s our vacation.
Jester X Game: Well you wouldn’t get your vacation due to the weather and you guys have no choice but to spend your vacation here in the cabin.
James: What is this challenge this time?
Jester X Game: Since you guys been arguing about your annoyance. I’ll give you challenge...if all of you even if only one person keep their annoyance till’ midnight. You guys win, and the sunny day will come. But if all of you failed, then you don't have a sunny day. Sounds good?
James: So you're saying that one person who used their annoyance will be disqualified and the others still continue not doing it?
Jester X Game: That's right, don't even think doing it secret. *Puts every chefs except Papa Louie and Roy a bracelet* Cause if you do your annoyance, then the bracelet will be turned from green to red and you're disqualified. Oh yeah…*Shows the countdown* This is countdown...27 chefs and it will decrease whenever someone failed to do their jobs. Any questions?
Papa Louie: I have one, how me and Roy don't have bracelets?
Jester X Game: Because you both don't have a annoyance.
Roy: Hm…
Jester X Game: Let the challenge begin!! And remember, no annoyance till midnight strikes. So here are your annoyance that you shouldn't do today...Joy sneaking out, Marty playing the guitar, Rita watching movies, Mitch sleeping, Maggie being a boss, Alberto and Penny doing romantic stuff, Prudence eating pickles, Cooper being romantic to his crush-
Cooper: I don't have a crush!! Who's said anything about a crush!?
Jester X Game: Mandi being a Mother, Chuck looking at the Internet, Peggy doing some chores, Taylor playing video games, Willow doing spooky stuff, James doing handyman stuff, Doan doing artistic stuff, Utah drinking pink lemonade, Tony being a Father, Scooter playing the skateboard, Rudy playing the bass, Scarlett singing, Timm and Cecilia dancing, Matt drinking Dr. Cherry, and Clover playing the drums. Now go!!
4:45 PM, In Chuck and Taylor’s room (27)

Taylor: *Playing Monopoly with Chuck* *Sigh*
Chuck: Hey, at least it it refresh your brain. Am i right shoe? *Picks up the player shoe* *Intimidating the voice* Yeah Chuck, you’re the best and i want to be your girlfriend. *Normal voice* Thank you Ms.-
Taylor: That’s it!! I don’t care about the day, i want to play videogames.
Chuck: *Holds Taylor* Taylor!! Control yourself!! I need a sunny day so the girls will feel my lovely ab-
Taylor: Did you just got 500 more followers!?
Chuck: Really!? I wanna to see and- who are we kidding!? We only have 7 hours to go.
Taylor: Technically, it’s 7 hours and 25 minutes.
Chuck: It doesn’t matter, you have self-control issue.
Taylor: I have self-control issue!? You have self-control issue since you wanted to know something in the internet.
Chuck: Then let’s have a bet, if either one of us fail to the challenge. Then the loser will give their next salary to the winner. What do you say?
Taylor: Deal!!

5:00 PM, In the Solary Kids’ room (27)

Matt: It’s a good thing Mandi and Tony let us take care of their children.
Doan: That way...Mandi and Tony wouldn’t fail the challenge and we can spend time taking care of this kids.
Sidney: Hello Matt and Tony, where’s mom and dad?
Doan: They will be taking a break for awhile, so you guys should spend time with us.
Jordan: Really!?
Matt: Really, i need a drink that isn’t Dr. Cherry. *Leave*

5:05 PM, In the Hallways (27)

Utah: *Sitting in the floor near the gallon of pink lemonade*
Matt: Hey Utah, can i have some pink lemonade?
Utah: *Pours the pink lemonade and gives it to Matt*
Matt: Thanks. *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Clover: *Holding Scooter’s skateboard* Can i have some lemonade?
Utah: *Pours the pink lemonade and gives it to Matt*
Clover: Thanks. *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Matt: Um Clover, why do you have her skateboard?
Clover: Since we’re in the challenge, we figured i should exchanged my drum to Scooter for the skateboard for a whole day.
Matt: That’s real smart. *Sees a Mitch* Hey Mitch, want some pink lemonade?
Mitch: NO WAY MATT!! I’M GONNA DRINK SOME HOT COFFEE TO MAKE ME AWAKE TILL’ MIDNIGHT!! BYE!! *Leave*
Clover: Screaming…
Timm: Hey guys, can i have some-
Utah: *Stands up* I CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMORE!! *Drinks the pink lemonade*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 26!!
Utah: I don’t care, at least i enjoy some fresh lemonade. *Accidentally drops the pink lemonade on the floor* Oops!!
Scooter: *Enters the room* Hey dudes and dudettes, what’s sha- *Slip through the pink lemonade* KING!! *Fell to Clover and accidentally rode the skateboard with Clover on it and landed on their room*
Jester X Game: 25!!
Clover: Oh, drums!! *Plays the drums*
Jester X Game: 24!!
5:30 PM, In Chuck and Taylor’s room (24)

Chuck: *Laying in his bed*
Taylor: *Throwing ball to the roof numerous times*
Chuck: (I need to win this bet so i could get his salary. Good thing i bought this.) Hey Taylor, remembered that latest video game you wanted to play but was sold out?
Taylor: Yeah, why?
Chuck: Well...here. *Holds the video game*
Taylor: Oh my gosh!! I waited for this for so long!!
Chuck: And you can played it right now!!
Taylor: Sure!! I’ll turned on my PC and- wait a minute!? You're trying to make me play video games.!!
Chuck: No, of course not!!
Taylor: Oh, so you want to play...huh? Then I'll make sure you will. *Leave*

6:00 PM, In the Solary Kids’ room (24)

Solary Girls: *Causing trouble* YEAH!!
Matt: So sleepy.
Doan: Yeah, but we need to take care of this kids.
Sidney: Matt, here's a refreshment!! *Gives drink to Matt*
Matt: Oh thank you. *Drinks it*
Jester X Game: 23!!
Matt: ...is that Dr. Cherry?
Sidney: Yep!!
Matt: *Slaps himself*
Bruna Solary: Doan!! Can you draw me a elephant?
Doan: Sorry, but no. Maybe Matt can and-
Bruna Solary: But I want you!! I WANT YOU!! I WANT YOUUUUUUUUU-
Doan: Alright!! Fine… *Draws a elephant*
Jester X Game: 22!!
Jordan: Let's play captured the bad guy!! The adults are the bad guys!!
Sidney and Bruna Solary: Yeah!!
Matt and Doan: AHHHHHHHH!!

6:15 PM, In the kitchen (22)

Mitch: *Drinks another coffee*
Roy: Are you sure drinking that much coffee will let you stay awake?
Mitch: Of course, so that I wouldn't be asleep. *Accidentally pour the milk to the coffee and drinks it* See… *Falls asleep*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 21!!

6:30 PM, In Maggie and Penny’s room (21)

Maggie: *Tries to sleep*
Penny: What are you doing?
Maggie: Trying to sleep so I wouldn't be demanding.
Penny: Here some milk to make you sleepy…*Gives milk to Maggie*
Maggie: Thanks… *Drinks milk*
Penny: (Now's my chance) *About to escape*
Maggie: Where are you going?
Penny: To...the...kitchen.
Maggie: Is it about Alberto?
Penny: Um…
Maggie: Look!! We're in a challenge and if all of us lose, then we kissed our sunny day goodbye and I demand you not to see Alberto this night...now!! Oh no…
Jester X Game: *Appears* 20!!
Maggie: Dang it...
Taylor: Hey you girls, do you have phones without games in it?
Maggie: Oh sure, why?
Taylor: Can I borrowed it?
Maggie: What? No!! Wh-
Taylor: *Takes Maggie’s phone* Thanks!! *Left*
Maggie: Um...
Note:

It will be a two-parter short, so there are 20 people left. Also, there's a poll about who's win the bet? Either Chuck or Taylor? And no, it will not affect the story and I already chose a winner. I just want you guys to guess.
i love it~


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on May 31, 2018, 10:12:02 AM
oh also, I remembered the real word you're looking for- instead of annoyances, you probably are talking about idiosyncrasies. an idiosyncrasy is something that somebody does so much, it becomes associated with them- just like your skit with Mitch falling asleep all the time and Maggie bossing people around, or Utah drinking pink lemonade regularly, and all those other things.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on May 31, 2018, 10:15:43 AM
oh also, I remembered the real word you're looking for- instead of annoyances, you probably are talking about idiosyncrasies. an idiosyncrasy is something that somebody does so much, it becomes associated with them- just like your skit with Mitch falling asleep all the time and Maggie bossing people around, or Utah drinking pink lemonade regularly, and all those other things.
Idiosyncrasy? Interesting title, thanks. I don't really know much about the word so I'll use it.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Fathan on May 31, 2018, 03:07:33 PM
Nice part OcFanatic....
I'll wait for more....


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on June 04, 2018, 09:39:25 AM
Idiosyncrasy? Interesting title, thanks. I don't really know much about the word so I'll use it.
yeah lol, it's a unique word ;p (and not used very often either)


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on June 04, 2018, 09:44:40 AM
yeah lol, it's a unique word ;p (and not used very often either)
Too lazy to think about it so I'll just leave it like that.

Also everyone, sorry for not posting any shorts. I'll do my best to think of the way of the story. And school is near in my country so I might get lesser time in shorts.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on June 06, 2018, 05:22:38 AM

No Idiosyncrasy Challenge Part 2

7:00 PM, In the living room (20)

Papa Louie: Jester...
Jester X Game: Yeeees!!
Papa Louie: There are 20 left, who are the people who failed the challenge?
Jester X Game: Let's see...Utah, Scooter, Clover, Matt, Doan, Mitch, and Maggie. The time is 7:00 PM.
Roy: That leaves 5 hours to go.
Jester X Game: 19!!
Papa Louie: 19? Who's the 19?
Jester X Game: Check outside.
Roy: Huh? *Sees outside the window* Wait a minute? *Went outside*
Papa Louie: Roy!! Wait!! *Went outside*

7:05 PM, Outside (19)

Joy: *Run while carrying a duffel bag* (I need to hurry before-)
Roy: Joy!! Where are you going?
Joy: Roy? Papa Louie? What...are you guys doing here?
Papa Louie: What are you doing outside? Are sneaking away?
Joy: Um…
Roy: Where are you going anyway?
Joy: (Think fast!! My Uncle and my Brother are staring at me!!) I'm...have to go to the hospital because...my dear friend from Sakura Bay just got herself a leg injury and...she needed someone to take care for the whole night.
Papa Louie: Really?
Roy: Poor thing.
Papa Louie: You should go now.
Joy: Thanks. *Left*
Papa Louie: Let's go in. *Went inside with Roy*
Joy: (That was closed, now time to stop a robbery...again.)

7:15 PM, Back inside (19)

Roy: Sometimes I wonder why she always sneak aw-
Jester X Game: 18!! *Points at Rita who's watching a movie*
Rita: Don't judge me.
Timm: Hey!! Is that Dance Fever?
Cecilia: Can we watch?
Rita: Sure.
Timm: *Sits down* Oh boy!!
Cecilia: This is gonna be good.

7:30 PM, In Taylor and Chuck’s room (18)

Taylor: *Came in*
Chuck: *Playing videogames* Hey Taylor!! Look at my high score!! Maybe you should beat my score!! *Eating nachos*
Taylor: *Took a picture of him*
Chuck: What are you doing?
Taylor: Just gonna post the pic in Flipbook to see your fans about you eating nachos in a ugly way.
Chuck: What?! No!! I'm might lose my followers!!
Taylor: Come and take it!!
Chuck: Errrrrr!! Do that and I'll destroy the video game!!
Taylor: You wouldn't dare!!
Chuck: I will.

7:45 PM, In the Solary Kid’s room (18)

Mandi: *Enters with Tony* Um…
Tony: *Sees Doan and Matt sleeping while tying up*
Mandi: It's only 7:45 PM, we can make it without us.
Tony: Good idea. *Starts taking of the kids*
Jester X Game: 17!! 16!!

8:00 PM, In Rudy and Alberto’s room (16)

Rudy: *Taps on the wooden floor*
Alberto: Can you stop that?
Rudy: Sorry, since I can't play the bass...I have to play the drums.
Alberto: You mean the floor?
Rudy: Exactly.
Alberto: Alright?
Rudy:
Alberto:
Rudy:
Alberto: I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE!! *Left*
Rudy: Alberto!! *Sends a text to Maggie* I need to chill out. *Plays the bass*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 15!!
Rudy: Dang it.
8:15 PM, Outside Maggie and Penny’s room (15)

Alberto: *Bangs the door* OPEN THE DOOR!!
Maggie: This is for your own good. Besides, you two need space.
Alberto: I'm guessing you lost since you sounded more-
Maggie: SHUT UP!!
Alberto: Let me in or-
Chuck: Don't even think of doing bad pics about me!!
Taylor: Lose already and you wouldn't lose your followers!!
Chuck: I'll break your videogame if you-

*Both accidentally ran to the door and broke it*

Chuck and Taylor: OWWWWWWWWWW!!
Penny: Alberto!!
Alberto: Penny!! *Hugs her*
Jester X Game: *Appears* 14!! 13!!
Maggie: (I miss being carefree)
Note:

So it might probably end either part 3 or part 4 and too lazy to think anymore words. In the mean time, the next short wouldn't be part three since I have no clue what to write next. After the next two, back to this story.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Fathan on June 06, 2018, 06:48:19 AM
Can't wait for the next...
Keep it up OcFanatic  ;)...


Title: A Prisoner's Visitor
Post by: FlippingOcFanatic on July 08, 2018, 05:58:53 AM
(https://img00.deviantart.net/248d/i/2018/189/0/5/flipline___a_prisoner_s_visitor_by_flippingocfanatic-dcglih4.png)

I been in this prison for a month for the crimes i committed over the years. My name is Moe who was kind man and once a comic book shop owner of Moe's Lair until everyone discovered that i'm the infamous criminal the Dynamoe who steals valuable goods and kidnapped some people for money or other stuff. But i don't really like hurting people and always act like a gentleman.

I was arrested by my crush and arch-nemesis, Ninjoy or should i say...Joy. I can't believe my close friend and Papa Louie's niece was the vigilante Ninjoy, and she was shocked when she discovered my true vigilante after she took my mask and punched me to the eye giving me a black eye. I also did the same to her, except the eye part. We both were shocked the entire time that Shannon captured a pic of us, which lead to everyone knowing our true identities.

After that happened, i ran away from them and hidden myself but i was caught and arrested by her. Normally i escaped so successfully and get away with it but since everyone knows who the Dynamoe is, i decided that i accept on her taking me away to prison. I already knew that someday i'll be imprisoned for my crimes. I remembered that Ninjoy was crying the whole time while walking there, i don't know. I'm guessing she was sad that me and the Dynamoe are the same person and she was taking me away to jail.

A day after that, i was the defendant in the court room and i was found guilty. The judge gave me a 3-year sentence for my crimes over the years and went to a secured prison. I was wearing my prison uniform and was cellmates with Guy Mortadello who i remembered that he is the owner of that disgusting meat pies, rival of Papa Louie, and a thief who stole some instruments. Why steal those? There's nothing relevant about it. I wish i had my glasses in me. The inmates here, they kinda respected me since i been stealing so many valuable goods and got away from Ninjoy.

I thought i might have a rough life in prison, but it turns out great...except our work labors and the food in the cafeteria. I don't know what's in that stuff, i miss the food from Papa's restaurants especially those hot dogs. I also got so many visitors which are the news reporters interviewing me about my crimes and many more. I even flirt some female reporters which they got mad. I also like to mess with Duke Gotcha who got angry so much that he was about to break the glass but ended up getting his hand hurt in pain. I kinda like messing with him. But this time, it's different.

My black eye was now gone and i was laying in my bed, pulling some rose petals from a rose that i stole from that policewoman who just got it from her husband and i keep saying "She loves me...she loves me not...she loves me...she loves me no-" and that's when Guy Mortadello got annoyed "Can you please stop!? It's getting annoying!!" I got up from my bed and said "Sorry Guy, but i was just thinking about her. You know? Joy who's also Ninjoy that-"

"Yes i know!! You just been talking about her for a month!! Why am i cellmates with you!?" said Guy Mortadello. I said to him "I don't know, it was the polices' decision." He ignored me, and went to his bed. I was about continue pulling some petals till Hank came.

"Hey there Hank, what are doing here?" i said. And then he said "I'm the acting warden for the week since the other warden was sick, so i'm in charge here!!" Him? As the acting warden? This police officer has many surprises. "That's great for you, why do you come here?" I said to him. And then he said, "Well you got yourself a another visitor." Another visitor? "Really? It's been a month and i'm still getting interviewed. Am i really that famous?" i said. "I'm sorry to say this, but this time...it wasn't a news reporter." said Hank.

"Not a news reporter? Then...who is it?" i said. "Why not see it for yourself?" said Hank. After that, he open my cell, handcuff me to the back, and went to the visitor's room. When i got there, i was unhandcuffed and was placed No. 4. "Good luck" he said and left. I wonder who's my visitor, i just hope it wasn't my parents or-

"It's good to see you...Moe." That voice? Oh no...i look at my front and saw a girl with brunette two pigtails and purple eyes. I just realized it was Joy, the secret identity of Ninjoy. I can't believe my visitor is her. I haven't seen her since the trial where she testified about me. I stood silence for a couple of minutes and she's been staring at me for a couple of minutes.

"Moe!! Don't pretend you don't know me!? We been dealing each other for a long time!! I just want to talk to you!!" she said. What is she gonna talk? Is she gonna hate me for being the Dynamoe? Or maybe she wants to talk about me having a crush on her? I just want to know what happened to her after the revelation. '

I said to her "Fine, but i want to know what happened after that revelation?" she blinks few times and started answering "Oh, it's going great exactly. My uncle and my brother are proud of me being a vigilante, i trained many young people to learn martial arts, and i got interviewed by the news reporters which i hate to do...mostly to Duke Gotcha." she said. I guess she enjoys getting her secret revealed. "That's amazing, and you're enjoying it?" i said to her, but that's when she getting depressed.

"Yeah, but there some worst parts. Like i was lawsuit for some damages i did from the accidents as Ninjoy and some criminals started kidnapping some people i cared. Luckily i managed to do it, but...it might happened again. I don't want...to...lose...them." She started crying, i guess this is my fault for revealing her secret to Flipverse. "I'm sorry for this, it wouldn't for me...you wouldn't-"

"THAT'S NOT WHAT I CAME HERE FOR!!" she said and glares at me so angry while standing, then she shake her head and sit down. "Sorry, it's hard to have this kind of relationship since that incident." she said. And then i said "I understand, i guess you want to know what happened after that." she started smiling and said "Of course, i want to know what happened during your imprisonment."

"Hm...alright, it wasn't that bad actually. Many of the inmates are nice to me since i am the infamous the Dynamoe and i was cell mates with Guy Mordatello." i said to her and she started to raising her eyebrow. "Guy Mordatello? You mean my uncle's rival?" she said. "Yeah, that Guy Mordatello. So anyways, i also got many visitors that are news reporter." i said to her and that's when she started laughing.

"I know, i seen the news numerous times about you and love the part when you did to Duke Gotcha. Even though i don't like Nowtime News, i wanted to know what happened to you." she said. "But there some bad times, like the hard labor we had and the food...i don't think it's food." i said to her so depressed. "Hey? I have a surprise for you." A surprise for me? She grabbed something from the floor and appears to be a pizza box.

"Pizza? For me?" i said so surprisingly. And then she said, "Of course silly, i figured you will be imprisoned for a long time. I thought, maybe i'll give you some pizza since you wouldn't be ordering one of Papa's restaurants during your imprisonment." I can't believe she's doing this, but... "It's very nice but i can't accept this, i am a criminal and i deserve being here." And then she started staring at me so weird.

"Moe, i know you love me." I can't believe she brought it to the discussion. "Yeah, but i was crushing you as Ninjoy...but not saying that i don't like you as Joy. I just...love you." i said so embarrassing to her. And that's when this she said next, "I understand, to tell you the truth...i have a crush on you." Wait what? She has a crush on me?

"Are you serious?" i said. "Well...of course, but as Moe...not as the Dynamoe. But discovering that you both are the same person, i starting to have feelings more about you. You are really a gentleman to me and so romantic. I can't stopped thinking about you. I would have visited you a long time ago, but i'm afraid you'll blame me for this." she said and started frowning.

I can't let her be happy, so i place my right hand to the glass and said to her "I don't blame you, you're just doing your job as a vigilante. Once i get out of here, maybe...we should go out on a date." i said so politely to her. She started to blush and placed her right hand to the glass and said so excitedly "Yes!!" I was so happy that...we're a thing now.

"But you have to finish your sentence, not by escaping." she said and i laugh "I wouldn't planning on doing that."

Note:

Sorry i didn't post well, school has just arrived and laziness. This will be the first and yet the only kind of short here.


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: AppleCherryPie on July 08, 2018, 06:28:37 AM
Your fiction is so....AWESOME!!I finished reading it and felt amazed.I should make an Dynin animatic in this month because you inspired me again :P


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: JEBZ Komics on July 08, 2018, 10:07:48 PM
Cool!  :)


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: Survivore on July 09, 2018, 12:57:07 PM
I kinda skimmed through it but it looks nice, although three years in prison is kinda long, longer than my fanfic, mine had him in there for six months (since he never physically hurt anyone and only stole and threatened people while robbing, and I don't know anything about real life prison lol)


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: WhiteShirt on July 10, 2018, 02:54:40 AM
AAA BEST CHAPTER 10/10


Title: Re: Papa's Revised Gamerias Shorts
Post by: chino514 on March 14, 2019, 07:00:50 PM
Is the story going to continue?