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16  Flipline Web Games / Papa's Bakeria / Thunder Pies Bakery (Christmas) [Last call for Christmas pies!] on: December 13, 2016, 11:04:37 PM
Welcome to Thunder Pies, where we specialize in... well, pies! 8)

For the month of December, we are celebrating Christmas! Grin

Order to your heart's content! We will fulfill up to 3 orders a day. (After all, we only have one baker, due to... budget cuts? Wait, we never had a budget)
Write down each of your ingredients from all of the categories: Bottom Crusts, Fillings, Top Crusts, and Toppings. We also have Ready-Made Recipes listed below the ingredients, as well as Thunder Pies Specials listed above the ingredients for those who can't make up their minds! You may name off the special instead of building your own pie. Please be sure to follow ordering instructions for each category. If you get confused by the Build-A-Pie process, use a Thunder Pies Special ingredients list as a formal template.
Also, to be considerate of others, please only order one at a time. Wait to receive your previous order before ordering again!

Okay, I'll let you guys order pies now and stop talking. Nervous

Thunder Pies Specials
Checking out our exclusive specials? Name off which one you would like!
Name: Choco-Nut Fluff

Bottom Crust: Peanut Butter Swirl Crust
Fillings: 1/4 Fudge Filling - 1/4 Peanut Butter Fluff - 2/4 Marshmallow Filling
Top Crust: Chocolate Crumb Topping
Toppings: OR Whipped Cream - MRIR 9 Whipped Cream Dollops, 9 Butterschotch Smooches
Name: Lightning Storm

Bottom Crust: Graham Cracker Crust
Fillings: 1/4 Fudge Filling - 2/4 Banana Filling - 1/4 Marshmallow Filling
Top Crust: Meringue Topping
Toppings: ORMRIR Citrus Zest - OR 8 Whipped Cream Dollops - MR 8 Bananas

Forumer Specials
Name a Forumer special from below!

Name: Winter Wonderland - Created by Fuzzy6346
Christmas Exclusive
*Currently editing picture*
Check out the official debut announcement below!
Thunder Pies has sent out it's eighth order!
To commemorate this event (if this can even be considered one), I will be opening a new feature...

Forumer Specials! Apparently "forumer" isn't a word, but that's okay.

For this new feature, I will be accepting specials submitted by Flipline forumers! Yes, that's correct; specials MADE BY YOU! That means everyone who stops by may get a taste of your (maybe) favorite pie creations! You may decide whether you want your recipe known to the rest of the forumers (which I recommend for greater ordering chance) or not, or you may just private message it to me.
There's a catch, though: Your specials may only be accepted if you have ordered at least one pie at Thunder Pies. It's not a hard criteria to meet, so order away!
Keep in mind that your pie will be stuck here and branded by YOU for all of eternity. D:

Credit to the forumer I for this suggestion!

Bottom Crusts:
Simply name off which bottom crust you want.

Top Row (Left to Right):
Red Velvet Crust
Chocolate Crust
Gingersnap Crust
Graham Cracker Crust
Vanilla Crispies Crust

Bottom Row (Left to Right):
Cremeo Crust
Peanut Butter Swirl Crust
Traditional Crust
Chocolate Chip Crust
Ladyfingers Crust
Using 1/4, 2/4, 3/4, 4/4, fill up your pie by quarter! Name off which and how many quarters of each ingredient you want.

Top Row (Left to Right):
Lemon Filling
Kiwi Filling
Fudge Filling
Cheesecake Filling
Dragonfruit Filling
Pineapple Filling
Strawberry Filling
Banana Filling
Rhubarb Filling
Sugarplum Filling

Bottom Row (Left to Right):
Toffee Filling
Key Lime Filling
Purple Yam Filling
Apple Filling
Peach Filling
Blueberry Filling
Cherry Filling
Peanut Butter Fluff
Marshmallow Filling
Peppermint Swirl Cream (Christmas Exclusive)
Top Crusts:
Simply name off which crust you want on top.

Circular Crusts (Left to Right):
Polka Dot Crust
Lattice Top
Vented Crust
Snowflake Crust (Christmas Exclusive)
Slit Top Crust

Crumb Crusts (Left to Right):
Streusel Topping
Chocolate Crumb Topping

Meringue Crusts (Left to Right):
Meringue Topping
Chocolate Meringue
Use OR (Outer Ring), MR (Middle Ring), IR (Inner Ring), ORMR, ORIR, MRIR, or ORMRIR (All over) to specify which ring to put the ingredients in. Then, name the number of and which ingredients.

Drizzles (Left to Right):
Huckleberry Syrup
Chocolate Syrup
White Chocolate Syrup
Cherry Syrup
Caramel Syrup
Candy Cane Drizzle (Christmas Exclusive)

Whipped Cream (Left to Right):
Whipped Cream
Chocolate Mousse

Toppings (Top to Bottom, Left to Right):
Blackberry Bark
Crushed Peanuts
Toasted Coconut
Citrus Zest
Shaved Chocolate
Crushed Wafers

Toppers (Top to Bottom, Left to Right):
Whipped Cream Dollop
Chocolate Mousse Dollop
Kiwi Slices
Butterscotch Smooches
Grape Jelly Cookies
Banana Slices
Blueberry Pie-Tarts
Frosted Wreathes (Christmas Exclusive)
Frosted Gifts (Christmas Exclusive)

Papa's Bakeria Specials (33/40)
Simply name a special.
Apple Crisp
Banana Cream
Banana Split
Banoffee Pie
Caramel Apple
Cherry Cheesecake
Cherry Cordial
Cloud Nine
Cocoa Key Lime
Cremeo Cheesecake
Derby Pie
French Silk
Graceland King
Lemon Meringue
Luau Punch
Mississippi Mud
Neapolitan Pie
Orchard Tart
Peach Cobbler
Pineapple Upside Down
Pink Lemonade
Piña Coolada
Plantain Crunch
Prune Creek
Rocky Road
Royal Anne
S'mores Pie
Shoofly Pie
Southern Pecan
Strawberry Rhubarb
Sugar Dragon
Wild Berry
Customer Cravings (101/101)
Simply name a character.
Big Pauly
Bruna Romano
Captain Cori
Carlo Romano
Duke Gotcha
Gino Romano
Hacky Zack
Little Edoardo
Mayor Mallow
Papa Louie
Pinch Hitwell
Professor Fitz
Santa (Christmas Exclusive)
Sarge Fan

Thanks for visiting! Hooray
If you have any suggestions on improving anything in this post, private message me!

Ingredients Correspondent to Rank 65 - Day 101 (Christmas)
17  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 3 (Part 3/?) on: June 16, 2016, 05:01:12 PM
Wooow, we actually know the name of the main character, now. Woooooooooooo-

- Captain Cori (Flipline) (Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Old Man (OC) (Protagonist)

Chapter 3 – The Sleeper (Part 3/?)

“Did you just say werewolf?” Holy chum… Is that what I’ve become? That’s not even possible! “I-I apologize. I don’t understand what you mean,” I said quietly, obvious disbelief in my voice.

“Ah, well, I cannot blame you. The same happened with me. Once I started turning into a bear, I forgot everything until I appeared here, safely locked into my little stone bedroom.”

“You’re locked in, too?”

“Of course! Eheheheh! But hey, I’ve got friends to keep me company. Oh, why thank you, Lepus.” The old man chortled. “My little animal friends came to meet me shortly after I discovered what had happened to me. Canis, Lepus, Agnus, say hi to Miss Wolf!”

I looked around at my cell, small, dark, and cold. Who IS this man? He must be crazy. “Look, sir, I’m not a werewolf. I’m a ship captain, and I know for a fact that I’m not supposed to be here,” I said sternly.

“Lupus, darling, I have been here for countless days without seeing the light of the sun for three months. I know that your situation is the same as mine. The stories I’ve heard from the guards points me to that conclusion,” he explained matter-of-factly. I felt my anger start to boil.

“First off, my name is not Lupus. It’s Cori, or Captain Cori. Secondly, I’m not a girl. I’m an adult. A woman. Third, it’s impossible for me to become a werewolf. They don’t even exist!”

“Well, you exist right now, don’t you? And I apologize for assuming you are a girl. It just seems like… Oh, why should I bother? Anyway, you really shouldn’t be surprised that you have become what you are. You brought it upon yourself. Eheheheheh!”

Yes, I still haven't finished the chapter... I really should work on it.
Anyway, Part 4 of Chapter 3 will be out on Thursday, the 23rd! Stay tuned!

Reader Comments Replies:
lol that Papa Louie is a troll

I wonder who's a bear...
Hahaha! Papa Louie has always been a troll.
*Waits for June sixteenth*  Nervous

Nice work!!  Smiley
Sorry for the wait. Thank you for reading! Smiley
18  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 3 (Part 2/?) on: June 09, 2016, 07:43:50 PM
- [Undentified] Ship Captain (Flipline) (Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Prison Guard (OC) (Supporting Antagonist)
- [Unidentified] Old Man (OC) (Protagonist)

Chapter 3 – The Sleeper (Part 2/?)

I needed to figure out how, exactly, I got here, as well as what is wrong with me. Last night came onto me unknowingly, and I definitely wasn’t prepared for it. I shuffled uncomfortably on the stone floor, my chains rattling as I moved my arms.

*Cough cough*

I saw the shadow of the guard shift in reaction to the noise that escaped my throat. I saw the guard’s helmeted little head peek into vision. I looked up at him, expectantly waiting for what he wanted to say.

“Hm,” he grunted. “Took you long enough. Guess I’m good to go for now.” His head left my sight, and his footsteps lumbered along with the disappearing shadow. I waited several seconds, massaging the skin of my wrists underneath the cuffs. I was alone completely, now. At least, I thought I was.

“Ah? He is gone, now? Lucky us! Eheheheh!” A deep and scratchy voice rang out. He sounded like he was about seventy years old, or so, like a grandpa. I couldn’t see him, but he seemed to be on the other side of the wall to the left of me. “You there, I know you’re awake.” I didn’t respond right away, as I thought he was talking to someone else. “I am talking to you, wolf girl.” Not hearing any other voices pitch in and responses, I decided to reply timidly.

“You mean me?”

“Yeh! There’s no other wolf girl around here, unless you call Canis a wolf.”

“Oh, uh…” Wolf girl? I’m not a wolf… “I, uh… I’m not a wolf…”

“Not right now you’re not!” He chuckled. “Just like I’m not a bear right now, you aren’t a werewolf. You can say that we’re practically the same!”

Part 3 will be available on Thursday, June 16! I am quite busy for a while, so I haven't found any time to finish writing. I'm pretty behind. ^_^; Stay tuned!

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19  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 3 (Part 1/?) on: June 05, 2016, 05:08:01 PM
I haven't finished writing Chapter 3 yet, but I know there will be at least 5 Parts. I have Parts 2-4 already written, and I'm working on the 5th! Anyway, enjoy Chapter 3! There is no dialogue for this Part.

- [Undentified] Ship Captain (Flipline) (Protagonist)

Chapter 3 – The Sleeper (Part 1/?)

I woke to cold darkness. I opened my eyes to see the earthen cell that kept me captive for frightening reasons, and the cause of those reasons currently still eludes me. Having an unrelenting urge to stretch, I found that my whole body ached just as much as earlier. I was dried with sweat still, but possibly even more than when I last woke. I smelled like I needed a major bath, too. I never thought I could smell this horrendous.

I was lying on my side in a fetal position, away from the wall I was connected to. The chains kept my hands above my head, and my hair was irritating my face. I desperately needed a hair tie.

I pushed myself up and faced the barred wall. It was absolutely silent, and the flickering movements of the orange glow coming from the hallway added to the eerie feeling of my loneliness. The floor displayed a humanoid shadow within the orange glow, so I knew that a guard was standing right outside my cell.

Pulling all my hair into one hand, I looked at myself, clad in tattered and thin brown clothing and not in my usual uniform. It was so loose and thin that I almost felt as if I wasn’t wearing anything. At least the people who dressed me had the decency to give me underwear. My brown hair was bare of my captain’s hat. The only part of me that proved that I was the same person as I was in the future were the matching anchor tattoos on both of my arms.

Part 2 will be available on Thursday, June 9! Stay tuned! Cheesy

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20  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 2 Part 2/2 on: June 02, 2016, 12:04:41 PM
I had fun writing this chapter. OvO

- Roy (Flipline) (Secondary Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Roy’s uncle (Flipline) (Secondary Protagonist)

Chapter 2 – Six Fifteen (Part 2/2)

“Captain? My, uh, my uncle wants to talk to you about the morning route.”

Well, this was awkward.

She hadn’t replied. No yell to shoo me off, no stomping of feet approaching the door… It was dead silent, as if she wasn’t even in there. I rubbed the back of my head, unsure what to do now. Taking a risk, I turned the door handle to see if it was unlocked.

And it was. But the lights were off. She wasn’t in here. Awkwardly mystified, I closed the door quietly, as if making any noise would wake up a sleeping nest of grizzly bears. I headed upstairs and found my uncle.

“Uncle? The Captain’s not in the navigator’s cabin.”

“What? You mean she’s late? That’s highly unusual. She didn’t call in sick.” He tapped his fingers on his chin, pondering about what to do. “You know where her house is, right? The one with the mailbox saying ‘CONDEMN ALL SEAGULLS’?”

“Uh… yeah.”

“Go she if she’s home. If she’s not there, call her.”

“But, I’ll need your phone if-“

“I stole your phone the other day and put her number on it.” I instinctively grabbed my pocket that held my phone to make sure it was there. He winked at me. I blinked, confused about his mannerisms. “Her name tag is ‘CaptainIsLife’.”

“Oh come on, uncle! You better not have screwed with my other contacts!” He chuckled.

“Only the ones that look like girl names. You know, like ‘PeggsIsAGame’ and ‘WendyFix’ImUpper’”

“Uncle, the only reason I have Peggy in my contacts is because she orders pizza, and we have no ordering phone at the Pizzeria, so I have to use mine! And Wendy is our repair person that you always make me call for delivery car repairs!” I knew full well what he was implying. “WAIT, WHY ‘PEGGS’?!”

“Chop chop, nephew. The cruise starts very soon!” he said to me gleefully before wandering off to the basement. As soon as he left, I whipped out my phone, opened my contacts list, and flipped through the names. I groaned at what I saw.

I exited the ship and headed towards the neighborhood of Calypso Island.

That's the end of Chapter 2! I hope you enjoyed! Chapter 3 begins on June 5! Title: The Sleeper. Stay tuned!

Reader Comments Replies:
hm, I bet he opens the door and Cori isn't there. lol
It was pretty obvious, wasn't it? lel Tongue
Oooo. I wonder what's next.  Cheesy
Things are getting more interesting. :3
21  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 2 Part 1/2 on: May 29, 2016, 07:53:56 AM
After all the seriousness within the first chapter, I am ready to bring you some light-heartedness of Chapter 2: Six Fifteen! Enjoy!

- Roy (Flipline) (Secondary Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Roy’s uncle (Flipline) (Secondary Protagonist)
- Prudence (Flipline) (Supporting Protagonist)

Chapter 2 – Six Fifteen (Part 1/2)

Today the S.S. Louie was setting sail again for the new week, this time running through morning until three in the afternoon, serving specials from my uncle’s Pancakeria. The Pizzeria doesn’t open until nine, so I was asked to help Prudence and Cooper to get everything set up and in order before the first cruise at six thirty. Which, if you ask me, is way too early to eat breakfast on a boat..

So, it is currently six fifteen, and I have been yawning every half a minute. The upside to helping my uncle with Monday cruises is that I get a free meal. The downside, of course, is that waking up this early cut out hours of sleep. After the cruise ends at seven thirty, I have to go straight to the Pizzeria, which is about half an hour from here, to set up for myself. Then I work the entire day. My life is too crazy.

Today, it only got crazier.

“Roy, once you help Prudence with the tables, please get Cori for me. I need to confirm the morning route,” my uncle told me.

“Sure thing.” I carried the last tablecloth to the dining area, where Prudence was just finishing the décor on one of the tables. I spread the tablecloth over the last bare table. “Prudence, I gotta go fetch the Captain for my uncle. The last tablecloth is all set, so the rest is up to you.”

“Oh, okay. If you pass by Cooper, please ask him to help me with the rest of the settings if he’s not too busy.”

“Sure thing. Bye.” I headed to the basement of the ship and to the navigator’s cabin. I stopped in front of the cabin door. I paused for a moment before knocking… Why was I hesitating? Well, if you don’t really know the Captain on a personal level, she can be kinda… cold. I try my best to stay away, but it’s hard to avoid her since I see her every Monday. Interrupting her this early in the morning? I’m in for a ride…

Taking a deep breath, I finally came to my own conclusion that calling her will be just the same as calling her later in the day. Therefore, I knocked.

I hope you enjoyed! Chapter 2 Part 2 will be out on Thursday, June 2. Stay tuned!

Reader Comments Replies:
hm nah this is pretty good, and I don't read most of the fan fiction because it's hard to read lol ;p
Also I think updating twice a week is better especially for impatient readers like me.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I will take your suggestion and upload a new Part every Sunday and Thursday. Smiley Thanks for reading!
22  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 1 (Part 6/6) on: May 24, 2016, 05:01:18 PM
It has come to my attention that I am not yet well known at all within the Flipline community, so I will be slowing down my "1 Part every other day" schedule and extend it to one new Part every week, every Sunday. That means Part 1 of Chapter 2 will come out on the 29th and not the 26th. This gives me more time to type Chapter 3, it gives breathing space between each update, and there is no rush as this story nor myself is not that famous. I apologize in advance to those who ARE interested. If you are opposed to this new update, then feel free to speak up. Smiley

- [Unidentified] Ship Captain (Flipline) (Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Prison Guard (OC) (Antagonist)
- Prison Guard Chuck (OC) (Antagonist)

Chapter 1 – You Really Are Insane! (Part 6/6)

“WHAT’S HRAPPENIN’ AGAIN? GLARRRRRROOOW!” I covered my mouth in shock at my almost inhuman voice. The ache in my head had turned into my whole body burning, and I collapsed to the ground completely, unable to move any of my body, except for the sharp, shifting convulsions happening automatically within my body. “GAAAAAAAAH! HUUUULP M-MEEEE!!!” I gargled.

Above my screams of pain, I did not notice the guards’ absences, that I was alone again. All that filled my head were flashes of light, the sounds of my labored breathing, and the constant rattling of the chains that held me safely to the wall. My body was moving on its own at this point. I lost consciousness.

The two were walking away slowly, one heading back to his end of the hall, and the other heading outside for his shift change. In the background, they could hear distressed growling of a wolf.

“I feel kinda bad.”


“The girl. She may be insane and transforms into that creature, but she’s still a human.”

“Don’t sympathize with someone like that. You’ll be poisoned with the pitying thoughts of a devil’s contract! The bear guy’s the same case.” Chuck said nothing. “Keep that in mind,” he finished, disappearing up the stairs.

The wolf howled for the first time that night.

This concludes Chapter 1 of my first Flipline fanfiction! More is to come! Get ready for Part 1 of Chapter 2 coming out on Sunday the 29th! Chapter 2 title: Six Fifteen
I feel like this story is way too formal for being a Flipline fanfiction, because all the others seem so much more lighthearted and informal. Hmm Wait a minute, I don't think I should say that... I mean no offense! x[

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23  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 1 (Part 5/6) on: May 22, 2016, 05:57:06 AM
I need to write more. I only have about 3 more parts lined up. Also, how to write Angst.

- [Unidentified] Ship Captain (Flipline) (Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Prison Guard (OC) (Antagonist)
- Prison Guard Chuck (OC) (Antagonist)

Chapter 1 – You Really Are Insane! (Part 5/6)

“I’ll lose my job if I do that. You wouldn’t want something like that to happen,” he replied calmly, slightly muffled by his helmet. The peanut of a guard glared at me.

“How do you know him?”

“I see him at the Freezeria sometimes, and even the Luau celebrations!” *Cough cough*

“What the heck is a freezeria?”

“You know, where Alberto and Penny work. We order concretes? Ice cream? How can you not know this?”

He shot back, “I’m just a castle prison guard. I don’t exactly go out much to know all the new terms. I don’t even know you!”

“But…“ I had a creeping feeling that this was not the Chuck I knew. “Chuck, you gotta help me out here! Please! I didn’t do anything!” *Cough Cough Cough* I was getting desperate. My mind started to blur.

“Hey, I have to get back to my post,” Chuck said, turning towards the other guard and completely ignoring me.

“Chuck, help me! CHUCK! DON’T LEAVE! AAAAH! My head hurts!” I yelled, gripping my head. My breathing became heavy and fast, and I was feeling dizzy. Blotches of flashing light began to cloud my vision. “WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME?” *HACK COUGH COUGH* My voice suddenly sounded deeper and a lot more raspy.

“It’s happening again.” The peanut guard sighed.

Oh my... Stay tuned to read the conclusion of Chapter 1! Part 6 will come out on Tuesday the 24th! I hope you enjoyed!

Reader Comments Replies:
Wow. Shocked
OvO It's only the first chapter. There'll be way more.
24  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 1 (Part 4/6) on: May 20, 2016, 05:39:07 AM
- [Unidentified] Ship Captain (Flipline) (Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Prison Guard (OC) (Antagonist)
- Prison Guard Chuck (OC) (Antagonist)

Chapter 1 – You Really Are Insane! (Part 4/6)

“Wait, wait, wait, you don’t even know the YEAR we’re in? WOW!”

“JUST TELL ME! GEEZ!” I yelled.

“It’s 1043! Don’t get your hair all in a knot!”

I was silent for several moments. 1043? I… did I just travel back in time?

“1043… I’m… in the past…” He looked at me strangely. I looked back at him. “I traveled in time….”

“PFFT!!! WHAT?!?! YOU are saying you TIME TRAVELED?! BAHAHAHAAAAA! That sure isn’t surprising! You’re insane, after all! Hahahaha! Hey, Chuck! Get a load of the mean-eyed puppy girl’s story! It says it’s a captain of some cruise boat that gives out food from its li’l PAPA! Oh, and it says it TIME TRAVELED! It actually thinks it’s from the future!”

“Chuck?!” I exclaimed, quite shocked. At that moment, I felt like I saw a tiny beam of light shining upon me. “Chuck, you’re here, too?!” The guard’s face looked confused. He looked to his right.

“Do ya know this pup?” Chuck stepped within view. He was wearing the same outfit as the peanut guard, but his helmet obscured my sight of his face. Chuck shrugged.

“No way. I only know ‘er from the incident.”

“Chuck, it’s me, the Captain! You gotta get me out of here!” I called out.

Part 5 of Chapter 1 will be out on Sunday, the 22nd! Stay tuned!

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25  General / Help and Support / Re: One of my backups is not loading? on: May 19, 2016, 02:43:08 PM
That's okay. I've already surpassed the point I lost the save file, but the Star Customer progress is all that's different. I'm glad it wasn't Day 90, or anything. Smiley
26  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 1 (Part 3/6) on: May 18, 2016, 02:03:13 PM
The Characters section before each part is to inform you of all the characters that will be in that part, and [Unidentified] means the character's name has not been mentioned. The names and descriptions are followed by (Flipline) or (OC), giving credit to where the character is from, and the last tag is the role of each character in the overall story. I'm explaining just in case you don't understand how it's updated. Smiley

- [Unidentified] Ship Captain (Flipline) (Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] Prison Guard (OC) (Antagonist)

Chapter 1 – You Really Are Insane! (Part 3/6)

“I live at Calypso Island. I’m a Captain of a ship,” I replied relatively calmly. Only relatively, because I was boiling with anger.

“Wow! You’re a big shot, then! So, you’re a sealady, huh? That certainly is rare! Tell me what ship you sail!”

“The S.S. Louie, a luxury food cruise-“

“AHAHA, A FOOD CRUISE?!?!” He exclaimed, not believing my statement. “What on earth is a ‘FOOD’ cruise?”

“A very good business at where I’m from, excuse you. You get to eat food from all of Papa Louie’s different restaurants there while on a peaceful cruise. I drive it every day except Tuesdays and summer during the Luau celebrations.”

“Wow, they were right! You really ARE insane! Hate to break it to ya, ‘Cap’n’, but your ‘Calypso Island’ and so called ‘food cruise ship Essess Louie’ don’t exist! AHAHAHA!” At that point, I was ready to tear out one of the large stones of the wall and chuck it at him or punch his brains out, but of course all that happened was a loud metal clanging sound and me failing to pounce at him, causing me to unceremoniously collapse onto my behind.


“Yeah, FOR AN INSANE PERSON! AHAHAHAHA!!!” he shouted, banging at the cell bars. Then it suddenly dawned on me. His continued ignorance? The medieval-styled prison cell?

“… Wait, what year is it?”

This part was shorter than I thought.
Anyway, Part 4 of Chapter 1 will be up on Friday the 20th! Stay tuned!

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This is an amazing story!!
Neat!!  Cheery
Thank you very much, both of you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Smiley Get ready for more!!!
27  Community / Fan Fiction / Wolf of the Waters - Chapter 1 (Part 2/6) on: May 17, 2016, 03:01:51 PM
I'm so sorry! I forgot to post this yesterday! Well, here is Part 2!

- [Unidentified] (Flipline) (Protagonist)
- [Unidentified] (OC) (Antagonist)

Chapter 1 – You Really Are Insane! (Part 2/6)

Concluding that I was going nowhere just sitting here and tugging against the chains, I called out, in case anyone was here.

“Hey!” *Cough cough* My throat was freakishly sore, and my voice sounded awfully hoarse. “Is there anyone out there?” For a minute, I heard nothing. “Hello? I need help…”

“’Ey, so the puppy CAN speak, huh?” Did that peanut just call me a puppy? Who is that? I don’t recognize his voice… He definitely has an accent. Australian, maybe? A figure revealed itself on the other side of the bars. He was dressed in armor, like I’ve seen in history books and fables. “Well, I guess that shouldn’t really be too much of a surprise. Heheh!”

“Hey, why am I in here?” *Cough*

“Wha-? You really don’t know? AHAHAHAHA!” he exclaimed, as if my question was stupid.

“Just tell me! Where am I?” *Cough cough*

“Whaddoyathink? It’s prison. For beasts like you!” he chuckled. “You really stirred up a massacre out there before they brought you in!” What the heck is he talking about? Feeling as if my heart had dropped to my stomach suddenly, I knew something awfully wrong was happening, and I didn’t even know why.

“But… what did I do?”

He said, "I jus’ toljyou! You created a blood fest! That’s what a beast like you would do.”

“I k-killed someone?” I retorted in disbelief. He snorted, clearly unamused.

“Aw, it ain’t THAT light, pups. When I say “blood fest” and “massacre”, I really mean it. You should know! You DID it!” he said accusingly.

“But, I-“

“Aw, why am I tryin’ ta reason with you? You’re insane.”

“I’M NOT INSANE!” That shut him up for a few seconds, before he started to chuckle again.

“Say, you don’t sound like you’re from this country. Where’re you from?” I deeply considered whether I not I should tell this nut-case about myself.

Part 3 will come out tomorrow, the 18th, because this part is a day late. OvO
Whenever I write stories, why do I always put my favorite character in trouble? ._.||


good story so far tho :p
Thank you so much! ^_^
28  General / Help and Support / Re: One of my backups is not loading? on: May 17, 2016, 02:51:44 PM
Nah, I know! It's long past New Year, but he keeps coming back to order specials. Tongue I pretty much gave up already, so I don't really mind it anymore. xD Cori is in 4th place, now.
29  General / Help and Support / Re: One of my backups is not loading? on: May 16, 2016, 04:36:14 PM
I'm okay with the game now. I've almost got caught up. Smiley The only problem is that Captain Cori always ends up in the friend's seat while I'm trying to get her more customer stars, and Big Pauly (Her rival who is also winning) keeps coming, no matter how hard I try to shoo him away with disappointing pies xD

Every time I finished a day, I've just been saving a new backup every time so this accident won't happen again. Smiley
30  General / Other Games / Re: Pokémon on: May 16, 2016, 04:29:35 PM
I got Pignite ._.
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