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« on: April 08, 2014, 11:53:15 PM »

Well here is my first fan fic, it's about events in WBA. BUT WITH A TWIST.

REALLY IMPORTANT UPDATE!: magicmusic is co-writing with me on this now!

First Chapter: Marty and Rita, perfect or not?

Marty wakes up, at 7am sharp as usual. With the sun shining on his face, and birds chirping with such delight. He gets ready for yet ANOTHER day, of tiring flippling patties, making burgers and dealing with impatient customers. Not to mention, Big Pauly's constant beking for 5 patties in his burger. And for what? Some lousy tips.

He thinks: "Everyone else with their bad boy paychecks, that just creams my pie". He looks at the calender. OH BOY. FREE BURGER DAY. I.am.screwed.

While in this negative mood, Rita honks obnoxiously in the car at Marty to hurry up. Marty once again goes into his productive thinking modes" Sure, Rita is nice and all. But she is SO lazy. I mean the other day, I was doing 12 orders and Rita was taking a freaking selfie. -.-'".

After this, Rita gives a vicious honk from the car accompanied with a chilling icy glare.

Marty gets ready, grabs the Flipper 500 and goes to the car. But Marty rushes back, cause he was still in his Captain Radley PJ's. After that minor mishap, Rita and Marty go to the burgeria.

On their way, they see a line of 50+ customers outside the Burgeria. All chanting. WE WANT BURGERS! WE WANT BURGERS! WE WANT BURGERS! like zombies. To avoid the freak crowd they park near the BurgerBurgh hair dresser salon, and roll through the bushes. Afterwards, opening the door and opens the Burgeria with a smile.
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« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2014, 11:55:19 PM »

A promising start so far! I'm looking forward to this...
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« Reply #2 on: April 08, 2014, 11:56:27 PM »

Aww Thanks. <3 Got any parts where you liked?
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« Reply #3 on: April 08, 2014, 11:57:10 PM »

I liked the part where Marty said Rita was lazy.
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« Reply #4 on: April 08, 2014, 11:58:01 PM »

Haha. Yep. Inspired by the selfie epidemic. More chapters to come!~
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« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2014, 12:45:32 AM »

Nice~! It is awesome!
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« Reply #6 on: April 09, 2014, 01:14:45 AM »

Thanks there Citrus!~
IMPORTANT CHANGE: I'M GONNA TWIST THIS UP!!!!!!!!

2: The stampede of Customers

After the opening of the Burgeria, Marty and Rita quickly rush to the counter to avoid being trampled by the customers running in. It sounds like lightning in here, with all those footsteps. All the customers have congregated, and even the workers have taken time out of their busy schedules!

But Marty doesn't notice Pauly. Where is he? He never misses Burger day. This isn't right...
But there is a brown hat sticking out of the crowd Rita obnoxiously points out.

The usual day goes on. Self esteem degrading flipping patties, giving orders. And they weren't even getting tips. Hmm

They gave Tohru Sue's order. Oh boy. They are both angry as ever. Angry Tohru has striked!! They started insulting each other, with:

Tohru: Sue, tomatoes? really? Mustard rules!!
Sue: Don't you diss mah babies!!
Tohru: *angry face*
Sue: *angry face*
Marty: Okay girls, break this up!
Tohru: Fine pipsqueak
Sue: HMPH *while fist is in air*

After that incident, Marty takes the mystery person's order.
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« Reply #7 on: April 09, 2014, 01:34:11 AM »

LOL! This is good!
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« Reply #8 on: April 09, 2014, 01:41:37 AM »

Thanks. I'm planning to update 1-2 times per day.
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« Reply #9 on: April 09, 2014, 04:58:18 AM »

ANGRY TOHRU STRIKES BACK.
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« Reply #10 on: April 09, 2014, 04:59:45 AM »

Hmmm, who could be that guy in the hat?
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« Reply #11 on: April 09, 2014, 05:01:52 AM »

We will never know~ *curtain closes just for today*
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« Reply #12 on: April 09, 2014, 11:18:41 AM »

I mean the other day, I was doing 12 orders and Rita was taking a freaking selfie. -.-'".

Laugh that has to be my fave part... LOL

and angry Tohru, haha
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« Reply #13 on: April 09, 2014, 12:41:31 PM »

Nice story so far
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« Reply #14 on: April 09, 2014, 12:56:53 PM »

The mysterious person is a oreo
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