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« Reply #480 on: July 16, 2017, 09:26:20 PM »

Another great chapter, yet sad. Cry

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« Reply #481 on: July 17, 2017, 11:09:52 AM »

Yeah, but the next few chapters are going to make me- *Gagged by Clare*

Sorry I didn't post a Chapter last night. I got real sick. :p

I'll post today.   Wink

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« Reply #482 on: July 17, 2017, 04:32:11 PM »

Chapter 177. Back home.

Sky sat quietly by the gate thinking of his next plan.

First. Sky saved Galactic.

Next. Sky saved Sun.

Next, Sky has to put Starlight to sleep. So how is Sky going to tell Moon?

After Starlight will be Moon, and Cosmic.

After Sky saves them and gets Loyal to protect them.

Then Sky can die.

Sky:  Bored

*Flap flap*

Sky perked up when he heard the flapping sound.

*Flap flap*

Sky looked into the distance.

Four dots in the sky heading towards him.

*Flap flap*

Sky: Loyal!!

Sky jumped up and begin ring the bell that hung near the gate. Lights went on in the house.

Death was the first one to show up with Fiore.

Loyal flew behind with Happiness who was hanging onto him.

Cosmic ran out of the house with Cherry Blossom. Starlight was running as fast as her legs could carry her.

Sky: Death!
Death: Hello, Sky. Any troubles while we were away?
Sky: A little bit. Hello, Fiore~
Fiore: Hi, Sky! Long time no see!
Sky: How true it is.

Loyal landed on the ground with Happiness gripping his neck.

Happiness: Great! Hello, Sky!!

Happiness released Loyal and ran to where Sky was standing.

Loyal raised an eyebrow at Happiness.

Death: Oh, well.
Loyal: No thanks? Whatever. Hello, Sky.
Sky: Hey, Loyal. Listen, I have to-

Sky didn't get to finish his sentence because of Cosmic and Cherry Blossom who ran up to him yapping questions and saying their hellos.

Death: Hold it!
Cosmic: Death! You won't believe this!! Sky went into the sun!!
Loyal: The sun, Sky?!
Happiness: Where's Sun?
Sky: I'm fine.
Starlight: -High pitch whines-
Cherry Blossom: We thought Sky couldn't do it but he did!
Death: Why did you do this, Sky?
Sky: Uuuhhhhhhhh... Funny question, Death.
Fiore: Is this Starlight?!

Happiness and Fiore picked up Starlight and begin to coo and smother her with hugs and kisses.

Cherry Blossom and Cosmic were still babbling with Death and Loyal who were trying to get a answer from Sky.

Death: Why, Sky?
Cosmic: Sky is crazy. right?
Loyal: Sky?
Sky: I had to get-
Cherry Blossom: Everyone thought they were both going to die!
Loyal: Both?
Sky: Yes. Me and S-
Cosmic: We didn't know what to do if they died in the sun!

Everyone fell silent and stared at Sky who was breathing hard.

Death: *Ahem* Sky? Go on...

Sky pushed a strand of his hair behind his ear and sighed loudly.

Sky: It was dangerous, I know, but I had to get Sun.
Loyal: What's wrong with Sun?
Sky: Loyal...
Loyal: What...?
Sky: Sun left us a few days after you left to those two.

Sky pointed at Fiore and Happiness who were still holding Starlight.

Loyal: Why did Sun leave?
Sky: Sun left to go die alone.
Death: You gotta be kidding me.
Sky: After he left, I left to go find him.
Loyal: Is he... Dead?
Sky: No, Loyal.
Loyal: Can we see him?
Sky: Yes... No... He is not awake actually.
Death: That's fine, we'll wait for Sun to wake up.
Sky: I mean this, Death. Sun is not awake at all. Like Galactic, Sun is resting inside of me.

Loyal and Death looked at each other and then at Sky.

Death: When did this happen?
Sky:  A few weeks ago, Death.

Loyal hung onto Death's arm for support.

Sun was gone?

Loyal wasn't ready.

What about Fire?

Loyal: Sky?
Sky: Yes, Loyal?
Loyal: Can I see him?

Sky rubbed his hands together and stared at Death. Cherry Blossom and Cosmic looked at Loyal but said nothing.

Sky: I don't know, Loyal... Sun's body looks pretty bad. It's best to not look.
Loyal: I'll be fine.

Sky looked at Death who nodded his head solemnly.

Sky: Follow me.

Inside the house.

Loyal opened the door slowly.

Right beside Galactic's bed was Sun.

Cold and a deep gray.

Loyal walked in quietly.

The silence was driving Loyal mad.


Loyal walked up closer to Sun's body. Sun never moved.

Where Death was.

Death stood outside watching the others go in.

He couldn't bring himself to see his older brother.

Death leaned against the gate and closed his eyes.


Without the God of the Sun, how will they go on?


Death's eyes popped open.

Moon was walking away.

Death: Moon!

Death ran away from the gate and after Moon.

Amagna Okubi cursed and pulled his arm back.

So close.

Where Loyal was.

Loyal sat next to Sun staring at him.

Gray skin.

Dark gray hair.

But it was Sun.

Loyal: Oh, Sun...

Loyal hid his face in Sun's icy hand and begin to cry.

Loyal: I'm sorry I wasn't there...

Where Death was.

Death ran after Moon who didn't seem to notice that he was after her.

Death: Moon! Wait up!

Death caught up and grabbed Moon on the arm.

Death: Moon...?

Moon turned around slowly to face Death. Her big blue eyes were filled with tears.

Death held Moon's face in his hands and wiped away her tears.

"I'm here Moon."

Moon hid her face in Death's chest crying loudly. Death hugged Moon shushing her.

"I'm here, Moon. Don't cry."

Death rocked Moon back and forth singing softly while she cried.
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« Reply #483 on: July 18, 2017, 06:53:27 PM »

Chapter 178. Amagna Okubi and Loyal.

A month later.

Death looked up at the gray sky watching the wind blow upward. Sky stood next to him with his eyes closed.

Death: Dull day?
Sky: Very dull day. The wind is blowing upwards to the sky, that is not normal, Death.
Death: No kidding, Sky.
Sky: Where's your brother?

Death pointed at the gate.

Death: He'll be right back, Sky.
Sky: Crazy man.
Death: He wanted to look at the place before it ends.
Sky: Why torture himself?

Death didn't answer Sky's question. True, it was crazy, but Loyal ached to go.

Sky glanced at Death who wiped his mouth with his sleeve.

The black sleeve hid the bloody streak going across.

Where Fire was.

Fire stared at the remaining hourglass that sat alone on his table. Soft black sand and fell slowly to the bottom.

Looking around, Fire smirked at his house.


A house cannot keep you safe from the devil.

Fire left his house never looking back at the hourglass that poured slowly to the bottom.

Where Loyal was.

Sadly, Loyal went around the temple where they all use to meet for reports and to celebrate new deities.

Loyal's hand brushed over his broken chair that has been knocked over.

The chair that his mother use to sit on.

Loyal stopped walking and looked up.

The whole room was gray and cold.

No one was there with him.

His brothers, his friends, the deities he knew were gone or dead.

Loyal could almost hear the consent chatter of them talking to each other, telling jokes, screaming at each other, or whispering to one another.

Gently, Loyal picked up Death's chair and stood it up next to Sun's and Fire's. Loyal's chair laid on the floor unmoved.

"I'm sorry, beautiful brothers."

Loyal walked out of the temple quietly.

Where Fire was.

Fire tugged at his jacket. The wind blew upward for some reason, but Fire was too busy to care.

Fire saw Amagna Okubi floating away.

"Take it."

Fire used the shortcut and walked faster.

Where Loyal was.

Rubbing his hands together, Loyal shivered.

Fire said he wanted to meet Loyal right at the abandoned temple.

Foolish Loyal couldn't wait.

Jumping up and down, Loyal counted all the way up to a hundred, but still no Fire.

"Fire...? Where are you?"


Loyal began to get a little disappointed that Fire wasn't there to meet, Loyal gave him five more minutes.

Six more minutes.

Seven more minutes.

A whole hour.

Loyal sighed tiredly. Fire wasn't coming.

Standing up slowly in case, Loyal turned to walk home.

"Hello, Loyal..."

Excited, Loyal whirled around hoping to see Fire.

Amagna Okubi stood there laughing softly at Loyal.

Loyal backed up against the wall.

"Help... anyone."

Where Fire was.

Fire stopped walking so fast and looked around.

The clouds were breaking up exposing the warm sun that was beginning to set.

Fire shielded his eyes smiling at the sun.

He hoped his brother would understand.

He hoped all of them would.

"Catch me if you can!!"

Fire sprinted down the trail.

Memories filled his mind.

Where Loyal was

Loyal could barely breathe.

Was it a trap?

"Amagna Okubi, why are you here?"

"Oh, just to take back what I wanted for years."

Loyal swallowed a mouthful of spit.

"You were the one who gave me that letter, right?"

"Guilty, but no regrets"

Amagna laughed as he kicked dirt at Loyal.

"You foolishly fell for it. You really thought that Fire cared all of a sudden?"

"I did. I have been waiting for this moment, Amagna."

"Goddamn, Loyal. You're **** stupid."

"Call me what you like, Amagna. A little more won't hurt me."

Swiftly, Loyal ran past the temple, but Amagna stopped him. Loyal ran the other way, but some hideous roaring creature stopped him. Loyal took a few steps back telling the creature to calm down. Amagna laughed as Loyal stood right in the middle looking around. Six large demons growled and snarled at Loyal who was trembling in fear.


"I'm not finished with you, Loyal."

Before Loyal could pull out his sword, Amagna Okubi hit him with the base of a tree. Loyal flew backward slamming into the temple walls.

Loyal couldn't scream for Death.

Who would hear him?

Shaking, Loyal stood up trying to pull out his sword again.

The handle was in Loyal's palm, the sword was broken. Terrified, Loyal looked up when a shadow darkened the room.


"He can't hear you, idiot."

Grabbing Loyal by the hair, Amagna Okubi threw Loyal out of the temples.

"It's over for you."

Death's nose begin to bleed. Sky looked at him.

Scrambling to get up, Loyal fell back down on his face. Amagna stood over Loyal who was curled up in a ball shivering.

Trying to get him, Loyal crawled away trying to fly.

"Stop it, you."

Amagna Okubi grabbed Loyal's wings and placed one foot on his back.

"Let me go!! Death!! Fire!!"

Amagna Okubi yanked at Loyal's wings trying to tear them off.

Quickly, Loyal sank his teeth into Amagna's spare arms. Screeching in agony, Amagna let Loyal go to nurse his bleeding arm.

Quickly, Loyal clapped his hands together.

Golden ray flew all over the place hitting Amagna Okubi. Amagna's demons roared and ran at Loyal.

Loyal jumped up landing on one. The creature snapped and tried to bite Loyal.

Loyal held the creature down screaming at it to obey him. To his surprise, the demon obeyed Loyal and begin to attack the other demons and Amagna Okubi.

Amagna cursed at the demon that was gnawing at his arm. Loyal scurried up Amagna's shoulders and begin to stab him with the sword that Amagna used. Black oily blood spilled out onto Loyal and the ground.

Amagna finally killed his demon and threw Loyal off.

Loyal still had his sword.


Amagna hissed at Loyal who held the sword at Amagna's face.

"I said back!!"

Amagna calmed down and held up his arms. Loyal never put the sword down.

"You got me, Loyal."

"Be quiet!"


"Silence! You are in the hands of The God of Life! Be still."

Glaring, Loyal walked slowly still pointing the sword at Amagna's face. Amagna back up two steps.

"Loyal, you wouldn't-"

"I would, Amagna Okubi."

"That's not like you."

"True, Amagna. I'll think about it later."


"Shut it."

Suddenly, Loyal held the sword to Amagna's neck.

"I'm going to do something I should have done years ago."

"Silly Loyal."

Loyal failed to see a winged demon flying at him until it's sharp talons sank into his shoulders.

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« Reply #484 on: July 18, 2017, 06:54:53 PM »

No, no, no, no...  Shocked+ D:

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« Reply #485 on: July 19, 2017, 08:18:43 PM »

Chapter 179. The Fall of a God.

Now, you think Fire would've have shown up by now to save Loyal, but he didn't. Fire ran the other way.


Thrashing wildly, Loyal hit and clawed at the winged demon that lifted him higher and higher in the air. Amagna Okubi laughed at Loyal when he dropped the sword.


Loyal watched helplessly as the sword fell to the ground. Seeing that Loyal had released the sword, the flying demon let go of Loyal.

Covering his face, Loyal fell through the trees and onto the hard dry earth.

"No... no..."

Loyal shivered when he heard Amagna Okubi coming up.

"No... please no..."

Shaking, Loyal pulled his hands away from his eyes to see Amagna standing in front of him.

Not too close, but close enough.


"You thought you were so tough. Now, who is helpless, Loyal?"


"No one, Loyal. No God or Goddess can hear you."

"It doesn't matter anymore. I'm done."

Death brushed his hand across his mouth feeling the hot blood ooze out.

"Anything to say, Loyal?"

Glaring, Loyal got up on shaking knees and stood there proudly with his fists clench.

"I may die in the hands of a demon, but I didn't give up. Like Seishin the Third Goddess of Life fought for her and her people's freedom."

"Who gives a damn about you grandmother."

"I do."

Amagna glared at Loyal holding the sword to throw it at him.

Loyal closed his eyes and sighed.

Maybe he'll get to see his mother.

"You won't last long, Amagna. The Apocalypse is near. Everything that lives and breathes will be no more."

"What about your friends? Are you going to let them die?"

"That's none of your business, Amagna. Okubi. You'll never be able to get them."

Loyal smirked at Amagna who was furious now. The demons stared at Loyal quizzically.

"Well, Amagna?"


"Scared now? It doesn't matter if you kill me. You..."

Loyal spread out his wings and flapped them slowly.

"Are going to die, Amagna."

Growling, Amagna lifted his sword to throw.


"It's alright now. Fire is forgiving, everyone is forgiven."

Loyal stared at Amagna's hate filled eyes.

"Even you, Amagna Okubi..."

Amagna never lowered his sword.

"I don't need your forgiveness, Loyal."

Loyal shrugged and waited.

"Farewell, Loyal."

Amagna threw the sword. Loyal stared at it as it headed towards him.


Loyal saw a flash of red hair get in his way. Loyal didn't have enough time to push Fire out of the way.

Fire felt the sword plunged deep into his chest releasing his power. Amagna's eyes widened when the flames coming to him.

Loyal covered his face when the flames destroyed everything around him.

Amagna Okubi.

The demons.

The trees.

Everything except for Fire and Loyal.

Death and Sky jumped when they heard the ear-splitting scream and cracking sounds.

Fire smiled feeling Loyal's hand in his.

A few minutes later.

Breathing hard, Loyal took his hands away from his face. The temple and trees were destroyed by the fiery explosion.


Loyal looked around.


Looking down, Loyal saw Fire lying next to his feet.


Loyal knelt down Fire, pulled him onto his lap and said his name again.

"Fire, you came back!"

Fire didn't speak.

He wasn't breathing. Loyal grew cold.

"Fire? No... no, Fire, don't."

Loyal brushed Fire's hair back and gently slapped his face.

Fire never reacted to the slap.

"Fire? No, Fire! Not now!"

Loyal begin to shake Fire violently.

"No, Fire!! Don't leave me!! Don't leave us!!"

No one could see Loyal shaking his dead brother.

"Fire! Remember Sun?! Don't leave him behind, Fire! Not like this, Fire!"

Loyal slapped Fire hard across the face repeatedly screaming his name. Fire never woke up.

"Fire! Don't die! Please, Fire!!"

Crying, Loyal hugged Fire close to his body. Fire was still in his arms.

"Please, Fire... Don't let it end this way... Fire?"

Loyal stared at Fire's ashy face.

Fire's golden eyes were closed. Loyal begin to shake.

"No... no... NO!!"

Loyal threw his head back and begin to scream Fire's name. His pain filled cry echoed around the earth.

Death could hear Loyal's loud wailing.

Death knew that Fire was gone already.

Fire was forgiven.

He knew that Loyal was in trouble.

Fire came back to Loyal to save him.

The Fire God was Dead.
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« Reply #486 on: July 19, 2017, 08:21:52 PM »

I can hardly believe I'm typing this, but...

NOOOOOOOO! FIRE!  Shocked+ Cry

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« Reply #487 on: July 20, 2017, 02:32:36 AM »

I can hardly believe I'm typing this, but...

NOOOOOOOO! FIRE!  Shocked+ Cry
I love surprises.  Sleepy




*Cries hysterically*  Cry Cry

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« Reply #488 on: July 20, 2017, 03:38:09 AM »

Chapter 180. Fire's Last Moments.

Stopping to catch his breath, Fire leaned on the tree searching for his pin. The clouds were breaking up revealing the warm sun.

"Not bad."

Smiling, Fire squinted at the bright rays that shone on him. He wondered if the hourglass was nearly out.


When you finally get what you want by hurting others and throwing everyone you knew and loved away.

It doesn't matter anymore.

Is power really worth losing your loved ones?


It isn't.

But Fire didn't know any better.

Amagna Okubi took advantage of him that day.

Fire found his pin and held it to the light.

The infinity ring glittered blindingly. The small flame seem to catch fire when the sun hit it. Fire smiled at it contently.

He still remembered the day when he was with Loyal after a huge fight between Himitsu and Fire's mother.


Loyal wanted to know why Fire took the hit for him.

Because Fire loved him like his brother.

Years later, Fire took the next hit for Loyal and suffered greatly for it.

Now, it was gone. Fire was free.

Wiping the tears out of his eyes, Fire could hear their childish voices in his mind.

"I wish you didn't get hurt."

"I'll be okay."

Wiping the tears with the palm of his hand, Fire looked up.

The sky was a soft baby blue turning navy as the sun begin to set. The sun kept shining on Fire as if his brother was reaching out to him one last time.

Fire couldn't stop the tears now.

"I'm sorry, everyone. I'm sorry I have hurt you."

Ever so quietly, Fire heard Loyal's last words to him.

"I still care."

Fire stopped crying and took a deep breath. A star twinkled in the sky.

"Thank You, Loyal."

In Fire's mind, he could see when he was with Loyal after being slapped.

"You took the hit for me."

"And always will..."

Standing up taller, Fire waved goodbye at the sun.

It was time.

Loyal needed him in his dark hour.

Fire was going to take the hit for him again.

And always will...

"I'm coming, Loyal!"

Fire jumped off the shortcut and into the forest.

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« Reply #489 on: July 21, 2017, 03:32:40 AM »

Chapter 181. Oh, no.

Whimpering softly, Loyal held Fire on his lap rocking him back and forth.

"Oh, no... oh, no..."

Vultures sat far away from Loyal staring at him rocking a dead body back and forth. Loyal stupidly stared off into the distance.

Storm clouds covered the night sky promising rain; Loyal didn't bother to get up and go home.

Where Death was.

Death stood by the gate with Sky who had his umbrella up.

Sky: I think you should go get him.
Death: No, we should leave him alone with Fire.
Sky: Holding a traitors dead body is sick, Death.
Death: Why?
Sky: You should burn the body or leave it.
Death: Fire is dead already.
Sky: Fire is a traitor, Death. His body should be left out for the birds to peck at.
Death: But Loyal won't allow it. Any moment now, Loyal is going to need our help to bury him.
Sky: Death-
Death: If he wants it, we should respect his wishes.
Sky: Death!
Death: Sky, please.

Death turned his head to look at Sky.

The biting cold rain begin to fall stinging at Death's skin.

Death: Just...
Sky: -sigh-
Death: For Loyal?

Sky nodded slowly to Death.

Where Loyal was.

Loyal managed to carry Fire to the old temple of the deities.

"There you are. Nice and dry."

Fire never responded. Loyal just smoothed Fire's hair down humming off key.

"You know, Fire. The deities told me that you wouldn't be coming back."

Rain statue stared off into the rainy night.

"But you did. You sure showed them, Fire."

The rain drummed on the roof. Earth's statue seem to shake.


Loyal pressed the back of his head on the wall. Death's statue stood proudly next to the missing spot where Loyal's statue once stood.

"Why did you leave us in the first place...?"

Roaches scurried past Loyal's legs and vanished into the cracks of the floor.

"After the sacrifice you made... I know now."

Loyal looked down at Fire's closed eyes.

"It was never jealousy."

Water's statue begin to lose pieces of stone.

But Loyal went on.

"You are not a God filled with envy or hate. I know this, Fire."

The rain begin to fall down harder and thunder crashed making it harder for Loyal to hear himself.

"Something made you like this."


Quickly, Loyal pulled out his pin and held it to Fire's face.

"You see this? You gave this to me years ago!"

Grabbing Fire's pin, Loyal shock it in the air. Lightning flashed followed by an earth shaking rumble.

This was no ordinary storm.

"And this!? You kept my pin! You are not the traitor people said you were!"

Loyal got onto his knees shaking Fire.

Wind's statue fell sideways slamming into Earth's statue knocking it down.

"You were a prisoner!!"

Each statue of the past deities begin to fall down and crumble into dust. Rock's statue fell down near Loyal and Fire.

"Fire! You were held a prisoner by someone and they released you!!"

Thunder crashed and the wind begin to blow wildly. Loyal had to yell above the noise.

"By then it was too late already, Fire!"

Fire didn't wake up to tell Loyal he was correct.

"Who was it!?"

Violently, Loyal shook Fire by the shirt screaming at him for answers.



Regretting his actions now, Loyal straightened Fire's shirt down.

That's when he saw it.

An hour later.

Loyal wiped away his tears and sighed painfully.

Fire laid on his lap still and quiet.

Rock's statue laid next to them.

Loyal looked around the room and back at Fire.

"You... you never told me..."

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« Reply #491 on: July 21, 2017, 10:09:19 PM »

I voted for "YES!!" This story is awesome!

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« Reply #492 on: July 21, 2017, 10:33:04 PM »

Oh, Lucia!! You're here! -Hugs- ❤

Lot's of surprises in the last few chapters, but you hate me? Lol!  Laugh

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« Reply #493 on: July 22, 2017, 02:23:22 AM »

GO FOR IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #494 on: July 22, 2017, 03:58:50 AM »

Chapter 182. Noble?

Death: Look, Sky.

Death pointed at a limping figure walking up to the gate. Sky narrowed his eyes at the figure.

Sky: That better not be-
Death: Amagna Okubi? I hope it isn't, too.
Sky: No, it better not be Loyal bringing Fire.
Death: Fire is dead, Sky.
Sky: Ah, no excuse, Death.

Death swatted at Sky before turning back to see the limping figure. It was Loyal alright.

With Fire's body.

Sky huffed while Death laughed lightly at his brother and Sky.

Loyal finally made it to the gate and stopped. Death and Sky stared at Loyal who had his head down.

Sky never opened the gate.

Death: Well?
Sky: Not until Loyal ditches Fire's body.
Death: SKY!!

Loyal never looked up, he just kept his eyes on Fire's pin. Sky had his arms crossed not paying attention to Death who was scolding him.

Death: Fire saved Loyal from Amagna Okubi!
Sky: Doesn't make him a noble God, Death.
Death: This is cruel, Sky. Keeping out a God who has his brothers body with him.
Sky: What Fire did to him was cruel.
Death: Open the dang gate, Sky.
Sky: I will when Loyal-
Loyal: No.
Sky: There you have it.
Death: I-... I can't believe-... Give me that key!
Sky: No!

Death pounced on Sky knocking him to the wet ground, Loyal sighed dryly as Death and Sky curse and hit each other fighting for the key.

Sky: Let go!
Death: Hand it ov- OUCH!

Loyal rubbed the back of his hand on Fire's cold face.

All the yelling and cursing woke up Cosmic who was sleeping outside.

Cosmic: What's going on?
Sky: Go away, Cosmic. I can handle this- ow!

Cosmic stepped over the fighting Gods, headed towards Loyal and gently rubbed Fire's hair.

Cosmic: Oh, Loyal. I'm sorry for this misfortune.

Loyal nodded his head but never looked up. Death and Sky continued to beat each other in the mud.

Lights went on inside the house, but Sky still fought with Death.

Happiness: Stop it! Sky, leave Death alone!
Sky: Ow!
Moon: Quit it! You two look ridiculous in the mud!

Fiore dragged Sky away by his hair while Cherry Blossom pulled her husband by the ear. Moon held back her laughter listening Sky cry out in pain and Death yelping as Cherry Blossom tugged his ear harder and scolded him.

Starlight hung onto Moon blinking at Death.

Cherry Blossom: What's going on, Death?
Death: Sky won't open the gate for Loyal, Blossom!
Fiore: Why ever not?
Sky: Look at what Loyal has with him.

Happiness held up her lantern to see Loyal.

Fire was in his arms.

Loyal: Fire is not a 'WHAT', Sky. He's a God just like you are.
Sky: Ha!
Hapiness: Shush, Sky. Open the gate.
Sky: No. Until Loyal gets rid of that thing-
Loyal: It's Fire.
Sky: Whatever, Loyal.
Fiore: For goodness sake, Sky. You can't toss out Loyal because of this.
Death: There, you see, Bloss-bloss? Let go of my ear!

Cherry Blossom gripped Death's ear and headed to Loyal. Death whined as she dragged him along.

Cherry Blossom: Loyal...?
Loyal: I won't get discard Fire like he's nothing.
Sky: Then you can't come in.
Loyal: Fine. I was thrown away before.

Loyal turned around sharply and walked off. Turning his head, Loyal shouted at Sky over his shoulder.

Loyal: I wish I was killed by Amagna Okubi!
Sky: What!?
Loyal: I rather die than see you act like this, Sky!

Dizzy with rage, Sky broke free from Fiore but stopped himself from running after Loyal to slap him.

Moon: Nice, Sky.
Sky: What?
Cosmic: Throwing out Loyal just because of Fire.
Sky: Fire shouldn't be here!
Cosmic: Fire is dead. He can't harm us anymore.
Sky: I won't allow it.
Moon: Sky, you threw out the God who is protecting you.
Sky: And?
Moon: Who's acting like Fire now?
Sky: This is insane!
Cosmic: Sky...
Sky: I can't believe this!! I'm the bad guy now?!
Moon: Sky, if you are going to act like this.

Moon climbed over the gate still hanging onto Starlight.

Moon: Goodbye.
Starlight: Bye-bye.
Sky: Moon!!

Cosmic climbed over the gate as well. Sky was furious now.

Sky: Get over here!!
Cosmic: Ciao, Sky.
Sky: Fiore! Do you see this?!
Fiore: I see it. 
Happiness: Oh, Sky. Don't be so heartless.
Sky: I'm not! I'm only locking Loyal out to protect them
Death: Protect what?

Sky snapped his fingers at Death.

Sky: Shut up! I'm not **** blind.
Hapiness: Sky.
Sky: What?
Hapiness: Think, Sky.
Sky: Of what?
Fiore: Think of why Loyal-
Sky: Because he's crazy.
Fiore: No.

Fiore walked over to Sky, placed her hands on his shoulders and sighed.

Fiore: Think of what Fire did before his death.
Sky: The jerk ruined-
Fiore: Ssh. Think of what Fire did.

Fiore walked away from Sky and headed back inside with Cherry Blossom and Death. Happiness stood next to Sky and smiled at him.


Fire did cause destruction and threaten him.


Fire did help Earth take care of Rock in his last days.

Fire also tried to make peace with Cloud who refuse his letters.

When Earth could no longer take care of herself, Fire took her in.

After Earth's death, Fire never harmed Sun or Starlight when they met him.

Plus, Fire saved Cordelia from Amagna Okubi.

A month ago, Starlight had letters from him.


Fire sacrifice himself to save Loyal who was in danger.


Sky screamed in frustration. Happiness laughed cheerfully.

An hour later.

Loyal sat with Starlight in front of a large hole. Moon was with Cosmic who was "Patching up" Fire.

Loyal sighed sadly and wiped away a tear.

Loyal: Oh, Fire...

Starlight snuggled in Loyal's lap and fell asleep. Loyal was so lost in thought that he didn't hear the sound of squelching mud.

Sky: Do I have to help dig the grave, Loyal?

Turning around, Loyal smiled and shook his head no. Sky sighed tiredly.

♡~2017 Best Fan Fiction writer~♥

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