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« on: July 09, 2016, 01:27:41 PM »

You as the player
Hank: Partner
Clair: Autopsy
P.F: Scientific
Tohru: Computer specialist
P.L: Chief
Hank: Welcome to your new job!, here is the department of police. You have been hired to help to clean all the crime around.
P.L: Hello! -------- it's great that we have another member willing to help. Listen, something disturbing has happened near to a local restaurant, so why don't you take a look around.

CASE #1: "Death by pepper"

Spoiler:
Kingsley: OMG OMG
Hank: Calm down!
------- better hurry, people is really surprised about this
[/NEW SCENE:u] Outside Pizzeria
Clues: Victim's body, Card, Victim's Card
Hank: Wow his face is kinda...
And look at this card, this says that his name is Big Pauly. I'll send this card to Tohru.
And you found another card, it's really blurry, better prepare the kit!

Fixed Card: Hank: Now I can read, "Wanna smile?" And it's by someone called Kingsley, that guy looks so... You're right!, is the person who was shouting, it's better to ask him about how his card got here!
NEW SUSPECT: Kingsley!
(Kingsley: Aaaaaaaaaaaa
Hank: STOP RIGHT NOW!
Kingsley: Sorry, but it's shocking to see something like that happening on Tastyville
Hank: Can you explain how did your card get in the crime scene near to the victim?
Kingsley: Oh, I'm a customer from this pizzeria and I'm a comedian so I give cards to everyone!
Hank: That explains the message, but why you were so shocked?
Kingsley: Oh here crimes are never welcome and specially when none of them happen on this city.
Hank: Well, ------- will come back in case we need more information.

Card results: Hi --------- I'm Tohru and I'm going to help you in everything related to technology, information, etc. The card you sent me is from the victim's job.
Hank: Is he a criminal so someone could made the job a police couldn't do!?
Tohru: Not exactly... Because he was a seller
Hank: A "black" seller
Tohru: Can you let me finish!? Ok he was a pepper seller. And found the direction for it.
Hank: Oh, why?Huh?
Tohru: Calm down, it's right next the crime scene
Hank: Let's go!
------- New Scene-------------
Pauly's Pepper
Clues: Pizza, Photo, Broken Object
Hank: We came on the right place! Well it's better analyze all you found, and fix those broken pieces, don't spend more time and let's start!
Autopsy : I'm Clair and I'll bring you some information about the murder. I can give you important clues and details that will help you to catch the killer: First the victim was poisoned
Hank: Poisoned!
That explains his face
Clair: He was poisoned when he ate pizza, but the poison was mixed with pepper so he couldn't know about the poison. Also the poison had a low action on the victim, because it was a rare poison that in certain times appears and disappear as well. But what I can make sure is that your killer eats pizza, because the killer gave the pizza to your victim!.
KILLER PROFILE: • The killer eats pizza
Broken object: You found... Glasses, and there's a name on them, Wally.
Wally: Excuse me, I think those are mine
Hank: Excuse me but we need to ask you some questions.
NEW SUSPECT: Wally!
Pizza: Hi! I'm Professor Fitz and I'll be that guy who analyses everything, well not everything but the most part of. That pizza was a double pizza, so there were 2 parts, one side was being eaten by your victim, and the other was completely eaten by another person called Hugo.
Hank: Let's find who is this Hugo.
( Hank: How did your glasses ended here?
Wally: I was on the pizzeria when suddenly people started to panic for something, especially Kingsley, so I had to go, then people started to get out the restaurant while I watched all were running. Suddenly I felt a hand and my glasses were no longer on my face, I tried to find them but I couldn't see anything until I heard you!
Hank: And why did you had to go?
Wally: I'm old and retired, I can't spend time on things so useless like this
Hank: So a poor man is a spend of time
Wally: Not so, it's only that it was really loud inside so I wanted time to relax, and it seems that I have to start over again!)
Hank: Wow, that's something I didn't expect, hole we can finish this before the chief begins to worry.
( Hugo: Hello!!!!!!!!!!!! What do you need?
Hank: Um we are investigating the murder of Big Pauly and we discovered that you ate a pizza with him time before the murder.
Hugo: That's all? And what? I didn't kill a friend of mine! I was one of his best clients and now I'll have to find another person that sells pepper. If you excuse I'll go for another pizza at the pizzeria.)
Hank: Why does nobody care? But you're right, ask me always won't help, we better hurry!.
Later...
P.F: --------- I found something! The pizza you brought me was poisoned and...
Hank: And that's why it's a rare poison that appears and disappears, so what's the news?
P.F: That only the half Big Pauly ate was poisoned!
Hank: What!
P.F: And there's more, Hugo ate the pizza with him but that doesn't mean he made it. So the killer just put the poison on Big Pauly's part and that's why he couldn't finish. Also, both pizzas were so different, I couldn't find any ingredients but I can assure that the killer likes his pizza at 30 minutes cooked.
KILLER PROFILE:• The killer orders 30 minutes cooked pizza.
Photo: Tohru: The photo you found was so blurry!
Hank: I knew you couldn't do it
Hank: Jaja foe your information, on that photo the victim is sharing pizza with the killer, it's really hard to see the person but I could see that the killer wears glasses!
KILLER PROFILE: • The killer wears glasses
Hank: Let's arrest this killer
SUSPECTS:
---- Kingsley
~~~ Wally
=== Hugo
KILLER PROFILE:
• The killer wears glasses
• The killer orders a 30 minutes cooked pizza
• The killer eats pizza
[ Hank: Hugo your under arrest for Big Pauly's murder!
Hugo: Why? You don't have anything!
Hank: We have to much, initially you gave us the key
Hank: I knew I had to trash that pizza, ok I killed him but it was something I had to do!. I loved Big Pauly's pepper, but one day his pepper was so rude, and it irritated my nose, it was so rude that I had to leave the audition where I was, I couldn't stop coughing so the producers chose another person. I was mad, so I called him so we could clarify all but instead I wanted more, so I poisoned a pepper of his own job and put it on the half of the pizza, so ate it and I was just waiting for the efect. It was sublime because he go outside for a breath, and I was just laughing. So I just ran and acted normal and all was so enjoyable.
Hank: Hope the food on prison doesn't make you caugh because you're under arrest!]

Quinn: Hugo, how do you plead?
Hugo: Whatever at least he's not here anymore to hurt
Quinn: Your actions were worst and it's obvious you won't regret, so Hugo this court sentences you 25 years in prison.
Hugo: Yep

Hank: Wow, I think that was one of the worst reasons of murder, but he will pay for it. I wonder if this is the beginning of something worst, but for being your first time you did it great!
P.L: Awesome job! We did the perfect choice! You're officially part of our team, your job here is finished for now!
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P.L: I have to congratulate you again ________ you solved the case with simple proofs, but nothing is easy, like the contests. Those are difficult to watch, that's why you must make sure everything is good on the dog contest!
Hank: Seriously? It's just dogs, I mean how it could be dangerous?
P.L.: Excuse me!?
Hank: I mean, let's go ________
NEW SCENE: Dog contest

Case #2: Loyal until the end Chapter #1
Spoiler:
Hank: Ugh! I don't like to see this, it's boring!
Mindy: What a mess!!!!
Hank: What?Huh?
Mindy: Someone has been killed
Hank: What? Where?Huh?
Mindy: In the stage
Hank: We better hurry
Clues: Victim's body, Pickle, Medal
Hank: How did nobody notice about that?Huh? It seems that her dog was the only one who realized, oh god! MMmmm how did a medal ended here? Its blurry, i guess we have job to do!
Fixed medal:Hank: It is about hockey? How did a hockey Medal got on that stage... It belongs to someone called ALLAN! Well he has some questions to explain...
NEW SUSPECT: Allan
(Hank: Excuse me
Allan: yes sir
Hank: I think you lost this
Allan: Oh my god! I thought it was lost forever, and even it was blurry, hanks a lot
Hank: Yeah, so how did this end in a stage of a dog contest and the worst, with a dead body!
Allan: a dead...
Hank: Hey!, answer!
Allan: [ FALLING]
Hank: Mmmm we better return to see if we can find more than that.)
Autopsy: Clair: ________ the victim was suffocated, with a dog...
Hank: Wow such a bad dead!
Clair: Yes, so the...
Hank: Mmmmm can you hurry?, I feel strange here
Clair: Anyway, I analyzed
Hank: I think I'm going to wait outside
Clair: Well I discovered that your victim worked in a pancakeria, and many persons knew it, so the killer was one of them this can be logic because...
Hank: Sorry if I interrupted something, but I need to...
Clair: Just go with him please!
KILLER PROFILE: The killer visits Papa's Pancakeria
NEW SCENE: Performance stage
Hank: It was a waste of our time, i just wanna see if we...
Mindy: Excuse me, but i just wanted to know if everything is alright, the contest is already a disaster, so
Hank: And you are...
Mindy: Mindy! And was suposed to prepare the stage and dress the dogs, even Prudence's
Hank: Who's Prudence?
Mindy: The girl who died, well if you wanna investigate, better to be quick please! I better return with my mom
Hank: Wait! Oh, we better look before that girl returns
CLUES: Papa's alarm, Card, Broken pieces
Hank: That card is for someone called Sue, That's an alarm? I'll send it to Tohru, and i'll bring you some glue for that, we have no time to waste!
Papa's alarm: Tohru: This alarm belonged to someone called Taylor, it's programmed to 9 am and it was left minutes before the murder
Hank: Ha! Really suspicious don't you think ______?
Let's find him!
Broken Pieces: Hank: It's a hockey ticket, but it has something like blood!!!! Ummm P.Fitz needs to see this, and I need water and soap!
(Taylor: Hi. What would you order Hank, and wow you're new here
Hank: I visit this so often, anyway Taylor you forgot an alarm near a crime scene
Taylor: Oh thanks for finding this, Mr. Louie would kill me if I lose it.
Hank: So?
Taylor: I think it was there cause it felt
Hank: Obviously, but why you were there!
Taylor: Because everybody watcha that type of entertainment and all papa louie's chefs must watch it!
They have all the acces, also the persons who have jobs or with the consentient of the contestant, but that didn't happen this time
Hank: Well we will return in case we need more details, and for now... Just give me...)
KILLER PROFILE:
•The killer visits pancakeria
• The killer has a job
(Sue: Sorry you have to...
Hank: We're the police
Sue: Be quick
Hank: We found a card with your name written on it, and your photo on a crime scene
Sue: Sorry, but I guess it just dropped for that dog
Hank: What dog?
Sue: It was black with white, mixed forms
Hank: Yes we know, and what made you dropped
Sue: Sorry, times over, I have to attend to my job, this could let me see nearer the show)
Hank: Wow 1 day, 4 suspects and so much to do. I wish we could...
P.L: ______ the victim was seen on the cloudberry salon!, go there


Loyal Until the end Chapter #2
Spoiler:
Hank: Well if you say...
-At cloudberry salon...
Hank: We're here
Mindy: Hi ______, Hank
Hank: What are you doing here?Huh?
Mindy:Oh I work here you know, I have this job since... Well I love this job, my mom is who attends it, but she went to oniontown 1 month ago, she'll be back in one week
Hank: We had a report that Prudence was seen here
Mindy: Yes, I'll miss her so much, I always prepared her dog for those contests, but that wasn't a normal dog, I can feel it. Anyway, c'mon you're in home
NEW SCENE: Cloudberry Salon
Clues: Broken Pieces, Security Camera
Hank: This is awesome, with this we can for sure have new clues to our killer.
Broken pieces: A hockey Shirt?, but it has something on it, Professor Fitz will tell us more
P.F: This substance is Water!
Hank: That's impossible
P.F: Yeah, but it was really frozen so It didn't melt so well, but the interesting is that I found your victims hair, but she didn't play hockey before her death
Hank: Hockey?
P.F: Yeah... The ice was for a hockey game
Hank: So our killer plays hockey, incredible!!!
KILLER PROFILE:
• The killer visits pancakeria
• The killer has a job
• The killer plays Hockey
Camera Security:
Tohru: Interesting, I can't believe this but...
Hank: But...
Tohru: The file I found it's Mindy preparing Prudence's dog, and every suspect is there, I guess Mindy already explained but I guess 3 people need something to explain
Hank: That's it, we need answers
(Sue: What do you want now?
Hank: We saw you on the Cloudberry Salon before Prudence's death
Sue: Is it a crime attend to Salons? Because I also play hockey if you wanna judge me for it
Hank: Well
Sue: Sorry, we're so busy today, NEXT!!!!)
( Hank: Allan?
Allan: Mmmm sorry for what happened I was so excited, I really love hockey
Oh I remember....
Hank: So...
Allan: Falls down again
Hank: Wow, that's lame, well we can't wait )
(Taylor: Hi again!!!!
Hank: Hi again, we need to ask you why you were on the Clod Beauty Salon?
Taylor: Well I had to help, so Mindy called me, she wanted me to help her on the salon while her mother was out
Hank: Ok
Taylor: Yeah, it's just that)
Hank: That's so boring,maybe another go to the Salon can help us
NEW SCENE: Mirrors
Clues: Bowtie
Hank: Mmmm a pink bowtie, it was prudence's!!!, or it was her dog's, anyway we need to send this to P.F ASAP
Bowtie: P.F: It really belongs to the victim but I found something else, another hair
Hank: So...
P.F: Well they mixed so I can't find a person, but I found that you're looking for a blond
Hank: That's all_______, we have something to finish.
KILLER PROFILE:
- The killer plays hockey
- The killer has a job
- The killer is blond
- The killer visits pancakeria
DON'T OPEN THIS SPOILER AT LEAST YOU'VE READ ALL 3 CHAPTERS
Spoiler:
Hank: Sue! You're under arrest for the murder of Prudence, you better shut up because
Sue: Is this a joke?
Hank: No! We know you killed Prudence!
Sue: How can you be sure?
Hank: The killer used the Victim's bowtie
Sue: So...
Hank: It was someone blond
Sue: She was also blonde
Hank: Maybe it was easier for you, because those with a job have access to the contents
Sue: Many people work, is that all you got?
Hank: But some have time for play hockey, don't you think?
Sue: Playing hockey is no a crime, it's a life style
Hank: Just like the killer who visits pancakeria where the victim worked!
Sue: I didn't kill anyone but I know who did
Hank: Who?
Sue: The dog...
Hank: That's the worst excuse I've ever heard about
Sue: But it's true!
Hank: Sue you're under arrest and it's over
Sue: No!!!!!!

At the court:
Quinn: You're accused for murdering Prudence
Sue: I didn't kill anybody!!!!
Quinn: The proofs against you are clear
Sue: But I can explain it!
Quinn: No time, Sue for killing Prudence and denying you're actions this court sentences you to 20 years in prison
Sue: No!!!! It was the dog!!!!!! Mindy knows that!!!!! Ask Mindy!!!!!!!!!!
The killer has been sentenced
Hank: Wow, she seemed so trustable
What do you think shall we ask Mindy about this?
Alright we can't lose anything with that
Unknown Enemy Pt1.
Spoiler:
Hank: We have to talk Sue for more information, but also Mindy for avoid all confusion
Well let's begin!

[ Hank: Sue we know you're so scared but we trust you, what do you now
Sue: I didn't do it, it was her dog
Hank: Do you have any proofs?
Sue: The stage! The stage has a lot of cameras, go there you'll find out because if I tell you'll laugh
Hank: Um well be right back!]

Hank: Well, we have to take a look to that stage, but quick cause I'm hungry
New clues: Camera
Hank: Another camera? Oh that's some cameras are for the content, well I think we can find out what's going on
[ Hank: Mindy we need to ask you about the murder
Mindy: Oh yeah... Listen I to go now but you can search anything you want
Hank: Wait don't go!]

Hank: What a waste of time but where here so let's look

New clues: Dog Fur
Hank: I just gonna say we must take a sample of that and send it to P.F
Dog fur: P.F: Awesome!
Hank: Dog fur surprises you?
P.F: This isn't dog fur, it's fake
Hank: Faaaa-ke?
P.F: Yep this was made for a robot
Hank: Is this a joke?
P.F: You'll know when I joke
Hank: So where does this fur could came from... Mindy! Alright, no more Mr Nice it's time to be rude

( Hank: Oh Mindy!
Mindy: (crying)
Hank: Mindy what's going on
Mindy: That wasn't a dog
That thing is not a dog
Hank: So what's that
Mindy: It's a robot
Hank: A robot... Mh
Mindy: It is!
Hank: OK
Mindy: Alright don't trust me but Sue is innocent)
Camera: Tohru: This camera filmed all the murder, it's stupid that you both didn't see it when you were there twice!
Hank: Hey!
Tohru: Effectively, Sue murdered and didn't murder Prudence
Hank: How can that be possible?
Tohru: Watch...
Video:
Prudence: C'mon Lickles you can do it!!!!
Pickles: Rufff!!!!!!
Prudence: Excellent, now I just have to put your bowtie and everything will be fine
Pickles: Grrrrrrrrrr
Prudence: What's going on buddy?
Pickles: GrrrrrrrrRaurau!
Prudence: Ouch you just, you... You aren't pickles
Sue: I got the... WTF is going on
Prudence: Pleeeaaaseee, heeelp meee
Sue: Hey, stupid dog!!!! Leave her alone!
Prudence: It's suffocating me!!!! Quick
Sue: Oh, bad dog, bad dog, leave her
Prudence: I can't breathe, help, help, h-e-l-p
Sue: Prudence?, Prudence!, Now way
End of the video
Hank: Unbelievable
Tohru: So now we just have to catch that dog, me and P.F will fix it!
Clair: Bad news!, it's gone
Hank: What?Huh?Huh???
We need to report this

A few minutes later...
Kingsley: Um __________, do you wanted this?
Hank: Pickles?
Kingsley: I found him on my stage, it's too smart
Hank: Yeah because it's a robot
Kingsley: Laugh Alright, I gotta use this. Anyway, it's good to see both again, take care...
Hank: What's so funny?
Kingsley: Nothing, just be careful, seriously, bye bye, don't forget to smile
Hank: He acted really weird, but hey we have the dog, or robot, or whatever it is. I think we need to do something

At the court:
Quinn: With this all new proofs, Sue is free of any charges and must be liberated from jail
Sue: OH THANKS _________, thank you Mindy!!!!!
Quinn: Now this case is close.

Hank: We did really help her, that's good right?
Sue: Thank you for trusting me, that dog was a really problem
Hank: Nothing to thank Sue, we should
Well I should have believed you, sorry
Sue: Nothing to worry about, see you later
Hank: What an end, who wants a break!!!
P.L: Not so quickly! Kingsley wants to talk with you both
Hank: Can we make that later?
P.L: NOW!
Hank: Ok... We have more job to do ________ I hope you're ready
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« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2016, 02:32:58 AM »

The story is very intersting.
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« Reply #2 on: September 04, 2016, 06:40:24 AM »

Retaking this. Each Thursday we'll have a new case, for now I'll finish the additional investigation
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« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2016, 10:35:25 AM »

Can I have any suggestions for the next case?
If I can, then my suggestion:
Victim: Peggy (Found stabbed by an iron sword)
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« Reply #4 on: September 04, 2016, 10:46:36 AM »

Can I have any suggestions for the next case?
If I can, then my suggestion:
Victim: Peggy (Found stabbed by an iron sword)
Wow, that sounds awesome. Sure I'll use it but in later cases
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« Reply #5 on: September 04, 2016, 10:58:31 AM »

NOOOOOOOOO! Please don't make Peggy a victim! Cry
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« Reply #6 on: September 04, 2016, 10:59:42 AM »

NOOOOOOOOO! Please don't make Peggy a victim! Cry
Um I won't for now
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« Reply #7 on: September 05, 2016, 01:41:20 AM »

Don't make Peggy a victim forever!
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« Reply #8 on: September 05, 2016, 02:09:59 AM »

Don't be sad!
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« Reply #9 on: September 05, 2016, 02:15:21 AM »

Can I have any suggestions for the next case?
If I can, then my suggestion:
Victim: Peggy (Found stabbed by an iron sword)
nice suggestion
I will also suggest a victim:
Roza (Fanon character who got shot in the forehead with a gun)
I will suggest a part of the victim's profile, (you can make the others)
The killer eats marzipan roses.
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« Reply #10 on: September 05, 2016, 03:57:43 AM »

nice suggestion
I will also suggest a victim:
Roza (Fanon character who got shot in the forehead with a gun)
I will suggest a part of the victim's profile, (you can make the others)
The killer eats marzipan roses.
Maybe later, for now just official characters
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« Reply #11 on: September 08, 2016, 01:35:18 PM »

Case #3 Killing and Laughing Chapter 1
Spoiler:
Hank: I can't believe we arrested a wrong person, I bet something was behind Prudence's murder, P.F and Tohru still analyzing the dog
For now we only have to relax and...
P.L: No! Kingsley asked for you, so you'll see him at his comedy show tonight without excuses Hank!
Hank: Why? Maybe he doesn't know anything
P.L: We don't know what we'll be fighting, so any help is welcome, even his
Hank: Alright
------------------ In the night --------------------
Kingsley: Thank you all!!!!!!! Remember to smile
Hank: Finally, let meet him at his K-merino
New scene: Kingsley's K-merino
Clues: Victim's Body, Cards, Broken Pieces
Hank: What?Huh??? He's dead I hope that an electronic monkey wasn't here to do something, you found a pill of cards, maybe it is hiding something, and this broken pieces are so suspicious. No time to lose ___________
Broken Pieces: Um this is bat, It belongs to Pinch Hitwell, wow I never knew he stood on this old town! Let's get him
[ Hank: Pinch!
P.H: Sorry Baseball calls me to a win
Hank: We have your bat
P.H: My bat? You're so disappointed, bye bye
Hank: Wait!]
Pill of cards: You found a ticket? It is from the pizzeria! I guess we'll be returning to that place, this cards look weird but anyways let's go there
New scene: Pizzeria
Roy: You again? No way!
Hank: Do we know you?
Roy: Not exactly, it's just that both came here weeks ago for a poisoned guy, so I wonder what's happening now
Hank: I bet you wanna know, so let's see what you saw, do you know Kingsley?
Roy: Obviously, I know all Tastyville people
Hank: So when was the last time you saw him
Roy: Maybe when he gave this Kingcards, he give them to everybody, so just do it quickly before a real customer comes
Clues: Broken Necklace, Kingsley's Cellphone
Hank: Well those things you found deserve to be analyzed, so don't waste time
Broken Necklace: A seashell necklace? It is for... Chuck!
No time to lose
[ Hank: Hi
Chuck: Hello Bro! What's going on? I just got this Kingcards
Hank: Yeah... We found your necklace on
Chuck: My necklace, I thought I lost it foreva, thanks!!!!
Hank: Yeah we were wondering if you knew Kingsley
Chuck: Um I have to go but I'll explain everything, GL
Hank: Meh I'm done]
Kingsley's Cellphone: Tohru: This is weird
Hank: You found
Tohru: Shut up, I'm just gonna say this phone has. A lot of bad jokes and most of them about Papa's food, anyway i also found a video where he talked to the killer!
Hank: How?
Tohru: It's easy, this video was taken before he was murdered, so the killer just grabbed the phone and left it on the pizzeria and I found that the killer speaks Spanish, but it's very very dissimulated
Hank: Awesome, 1 clue!
Killer profile:
• The killer speaks Spanish
Autopsy: Clair: This is another suffocated victim
But I can't identify what exactly was used
Hank: So you didn't found anything
Clair: I found a "Kingcard" on his mouth, it was introduced after he was murdered so
Hank: The killer has Kingcards! Great
Killer Profile:
- The killer has Kingcards
- The killer speaks Spanish
Hank: Now we only know that we never expected this
P.L: Hank, ______ I had a report that your victim was seen on the abandoned school
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« Reply #12 on: September 09, 2016, 03:30:04 AM »

Who are the suspects?
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« Reply #13 on: September 09, 2016, 03:47:19 AM »

Who are the suspects?
You'll find out
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« Reply #14 on: September 10, 2016, 07:44:31 PM »

Case #3 Killing and Laughing Chapter 2
Spoiler:
Hank: Mmmmm. Such really suspect it's as place where nobody is near...
P.L: We already looked Hank, so get there ASAP!
New Scene: The old school
Clues:  Faded note, Plush, Card
Hank: No time to lose ______
Faded note: Hank: It's better now!, " Please leave me now", it was written for  Pinch Hitwell!!!!
He has something to explain is
( Hank: Pinch you can't go now, explain the note
P.H: Alright that guy wanted some fame so he attended me for help him on that stuff, I made a mistake because I just yelled him and go. Days after he called me, wrote me and gave kingcards, but I wasn't sure. So at some point I felt that was enough and wrote the note
Hank: So who broke it?
P.H: Maybe someone with brain
Hank: Well that brain will be going to prison!)
Plush: P.F: Well I found a substance on the plush, and a note inside.
"Not anymore"
The substance was... Water!!!!
Hank: Wow I'm so excited
P.F: Yep, you can be because the water had contact with anchovies. And this plush was given from Wally
Hank: Here we go again... But the only thing we can do is see him
New suspect: Wally
( Hank: Wally, you should explain this plush
Wally: Oh it was a gift, I loved Kingsley's shows, his humor his jokes, everything! Even those Kingcards were magic for me, he was my idol.
Hank: So... This was for... Thank him?
Wally: Yeah, I'm retired so I have nothing else to do. Well it wasn't the first give I gave him, I sent him so much of them
Hank: Why "not anymore"?
Wally: Because after I discovered a light I also found the dark... He and I had something
Hank: I wouldn't like details
Wally: Not in that way, I mean he and I worked on something he knew so much and now he's gone
Hank: By the way, don't you know so much?, you're older
Mitch: Time to go GW
Hank: Hey!
Wally: See you soon)
Hank: Oh! I know he's hiding something, but another look at the Kmerino will show us more
New Scene: Mirror.
Card: Hank: You put all in order. This is the plumber service of James
Well another person to the list
New suspect: James
(James: Hi sir, what can you offer?
Hank: We found your card
James: Oh finally!!!!! I was always away for all those other cards, especially for the Kincards, gosh I never liked them. But I have 1 box with them just to remember my misery.
Hank: Yeah but it was on an abandoned school
James: I've been working over 7 years, it's not weird that some of my cards landed there.
Hank: Ok James, did you met Kingsley?
James: My memories of him are almost none, but I remember that 1 day i just repaired his stage. It wasn't exactly my job, but the money was worth it.
Hank: Ok we will get back in case we need something else
James: Frustrating but ok, wait why did you come?)
Mirrors
Clues: Cookie Box
Hank: I bet it's some of Wally's gifts, let's dig in
Cookie Box: A microphone? It's a really long cable. Let's send this to P.F.
P.F: I never thought I was going to find this...
Hank: What?
P.F: It's the murder weapon!
Hank: A microphone? Did you found anything helpful?
P.F: Well it was hard, but I could find ADN but it was a minuscule trace, so I can tell you that the killer is caucasic.
Killer Profile:
• The killer has Kingcards
• The killer speaks Spanish
• The killer is caucasic.
Hank: Perfect! Now we're really close to the killer.
P.P: Yeah and I think that's the farther you'll go.
Hank: Why?
P.P: The School will be demolated
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