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« Reply #15 on: September 13, 2012, 07:58:17 AM »

Next time Maggie will eat continuous tacos!
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« Reply #16 on: September 13, 2012, 10:52:24 AM »

Did you guys like my story so far?
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« Reply #17 on: September 15, 2012, 12:35:15 AM »

Yeah!This is pretty good
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« Reply #18 on: September 16, 2012, 11:47:58 AM »

Well, like everyone, my school has started too so i'll be posting on weekends only...
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« Reply #19 on: September 17, 2012, 10:10:00 AM »

Well, like everyone, my school has started too so i'll be posting on weekends only...

So you'll be posting on Thursday and Friday...
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TWG XXXII: Nickito's Masterpiece (Survivor)

Human/Wolf MVP's
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« Reply #20 on: September 17, 2012, 10:12:33 AM »

Derp. Me and a few other members are homeschooled.
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« Reply #21 on: September 17, 2012, 10:17:05 AM »

Derp. Me and a few other members are homeschooled.
Like Adam?
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3. Gale Hawthorne, The Boy Born Rebel
4. Katniss Everdeen, Symbol of a Revolution
5. Finnick Odair, Trouble with the Trident
6. Catching Fire, From a Spark
7. Katniss Everdeen, Leader of a Rebellion
8. Peeta Mellark, The Hjacked Hero
9. Gale Hawthorne, A Rebel by Nature
10. Primrose Everdeen, Sister of the Mockingjay
11. Cressida, A Rebel with a Vision
12. Finnick Odair, The Rebel on the Run
13. Johanna Mason, A Rebel with a Cause
14. Boggs, A Rebel in Command

TWG Related Things:
Hosted
TWG XXII: Tempest
TWG XXXIII: Death at Dusk

MVP's
TWG XIX: Quiet Town (Penguin022)
TWG XXVII: Confused Protectors (Ravenclaw)
TWG XXXI: Colourblind (Professor Hershel Layton)
TWG XXXII: Nickito's Masterpiece (Survivor)

Human/Wolf MVP's
TWG XXIV: Secretive Town (Ravenclaw)- Wolf MVP
TWG XXVI: Classic (Penguin022)- Human MVP
TWG XXVIII: Stay Alive (Lenny)- Human MVP

Honorable Mentions
TWG XIV: Doubles (Penguin022)
TWG XX: Choosing Sides (Lenny)
TWG XXI: The Museum of History (Sushi Mia)
TWG XXV: The Inhospitable Hospital (Professor Hershel Layton)
TWG XXIX: Embodiment of Scarlet Devil (Nightlock)

Bids Made
TWG XXI: Tempest (Lost to Sushi Mia, became TWG XXII)
TWG XXIV: At the Races (Lost to Ravenclaw)
TWG XXVII: Denial (Lost to Ravenclaw)
TWG XXX: Tougher Than Ever (Didn't make it to poll)
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« Reply #22 on: September 17, 2012, 10:18:28 AM »

like some others ... bleh

well i'd be interested to see the next chapter
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« Reply #23 on: September 19, 2012, 08:09:24 AM »

I'm not getting homeschooled... I go to a proper skool. and yes i'll be posting on thursdays or fridays or maybe late because i'm having some internet problems in my area...
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« Reply #24 on: September 19, 2012, 08:09:57 AM »

Oh, why are there problems with it?
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« Reply #25 on: September 19, 2012, 08:22:15 AM »

Chapter 4

   “Hey, Mitch!” Maggie called as she entered the Taco Mia. Mitch’s eyes darted towards her and she tossed the keys which landed on Mitch’s nose.
   “Ooops, sorry.”
He rubbed his nose and touched to check any bleeding but he was good, “Don’t do that again.” Maggie walked up to the counter with Penny following behind.
   “You better not mess this again,” Mitch pointed the mystery sauce towards her. “You’re lucky I didn’t complain to papa Louie about you.”
   “Okay, your car is parked outside…”
Mitch sighed in relief, “Thank goodness, I thought you wouldn’t return it cuz it’s with the mechanics.”
   “Yeah… about that.”
As the glass door opened, the bell hanging above shook and in walked Edna.
   “Ooh! A customer,” Mitch went towards the order station.
Penny whispered to Maggie, “Are you gonna tell him about his car?”
Maggie hesitated, “Nah, he’s gonna find out anyway.”
   
   Customers came in and Maggie and Mitch the day filling orders. Penny and Maggie started gossiping about people’s looks like Allan’s unibrow or Xandra’s funky, torn clothes and Mitch had to pinch Maggie for her to keep her mind on the orders. She even spilled Gremmie’s taco on the floor when she and Penny were talking about his hair so she had to cook the meat and build the taco all over again. At last the day was getting over and the sky was filled with stars. The last customers order was done. Maggie placed the ticket on the tray and turned around to find James.
   At first, Maggie stared then gave him the tray, “No charge.”
James grabbed the taco and left.
   “Whoa,” Penny looked at Maggie. “You gave that guy a free taco. Is he your friend?
   “No,” Maggie said. “He hates us. I’m pretty sure that he’s just jealous that I won the taco eating contest and he didn’t.”
   “How were you able to eat eighteen tacos in a day anyway?”
   “Well… I had to stay hungry for at least one and a half days. That was the only way I was able to eat a lot of tacos.” Maggie explained, “And look, I got this job for winning. Imagine Kingsley or James working instead of me and Mitch.”
   Mitch walked outside to the parking lot.
Maggie spoke, “I love this job.”
   “You love it?” Penny asked. “Your picture in the newspaper wasn’t very good.”
   “Who cares? Those were the old times.”
Suddenly there came a voice shouting from outside, “MMMMaaaagggggggiiiiiiiiiiieeee!!!”
   Maggie got worried, “Mitch found out about his car!” She grabbed Penny’s hand then ran for the back door. “Quick! Let’s go grab a taxi.”
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« Reply #26 on: September 19, 2012, 08:25:42 AM »

haha, I wonder what Gremmie orders..
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« Reply #27 on: September 20, 2012, 01:59:23 AM »

 i know this chapter is a little short but i'll be posting these days, and BTW the fun starts from the next chaper
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« Reply #28 on: September 20, 2012, 02:06:00 AM »

Alright then, it's been good so far!
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« Reply #29 on: September 22, 2012, 07:37:44 AM »

Chapter 5
   Penny couldn’t sleep at night, she felt like she forgot something; something really important. She buried her face in the pillow. Maybe she could talk to Maggie. No, she would be asleep right now. She looked at the clock on hanging on the wall. Only five minutes were left to 1:00 am. Tick tock, tick tock. Was the sound of the clock preventing her to sleep?
   Alberto came in her mind and how he would hold her hand at night in bed. She didn’t have a conversation with Alberto yesterday. She remembered the last conversation she had with him and she hasn’t introduced Maggie to him yet.
   Penny gasped and quickly grabbed her cellphone from the side table. He quickly dialed Alberto’s number. Luckily, he picked it up after a few seconds.
   “Alberto!” Penny said joyfully.
   “Hey,” he sighed.
   “You weren’t asleep, were you?”
   “No, why would I? After you betrayed me,” The volume of his voice got higher.
   “I didn’t betray you! I’m sorry I couldn’t meet you in the park. I just… got busy.”
   “Busy? Busy with what? Your stupid friend?!”
Now that was rude. Penny didn’t like anyone calling her best friend stupid. But Alberto doesn’t know about her.
   “I told you that we were supposed to meet in the Town Park!”
   “I’m sorry…” A tear ran down her cheek and Alberto heard her sniff.
   “Oh, come on,” He yelled. “Penny, when are you gonna stop being so sensitive. Stop crying.”
She quickly wiped her tears, “I’m not crying.”
   “Okay, okay. I’m sorry. Just tell me where you’re gonna go tomorrow and I’ll get there.”
   “We haven’t made plans about tomorrow yet. Town Park is the only option.”
   “Great, see you there, tomorrow afternoon.”
Without saying good bye, he ended the call. Penny placed her phone back to its original place and drifted back to sleep.
   
   In the morning, when Penny had freshened up, Maggie had prepared breakfast.
   “Maggie?” Penny went near her.
   “Hey, Penny,” she poured tea in a pink cup. “What would you like with your toast?”
   “Anything.”
Maggie looked at her, “Okay.”
   “So… umm” Penny spoke as Maggie placed the cup of tea near her. “Can we go to the Town Park today?” She pulled the chair and took a seat.
Maggie did the same, “Town Park? That place is super boring. Why would you wanna go there?”
   “Actually,” Penny grabbed a knife and started spreading butter on her toast. “I need to meet someone there.”
   “Oh, but I have work today. How about we just go to taco mia first so I could tell Mitch that I need a day off, then we’ll go to Town Park.”
   “Sounds good.”
Maggie sipped her tea, “I’ll arrange for the taxi.”

   They reached taco mia and Penny went inside while Maggie paid the driver. Maggie turned and Penny was gone. She grew worried but then Penny came back out from the taco mia. Penny walked towards her, “Maggie, Papa Louie is inside.”
   “Papa Louie? What’s he doing here?”
   “I don’t know but I heard Mitch complaining about you and Papa Louie was saying something about losing job, something like that.”
Maggie’s eyes widened, “What! Lose Job?”  She quickly ran inside with Penny and opened the door. There Papa Louie was standing with Mitch and they both looked in serious mood. Maggie felt ashamed breaking their conversation.

To be continued…
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