Danny (DP)'s OCs!

[Papaccino]

For today, Edith's Style A & B and Irene's new Style A & B have been added. Check them out and give me your opinions on them:
Edith:

Style A                                                             Style B
Irene:

Style A                                                             Style B

[superheroart]

For today, Edith's Style A & B and Irene's new Style A & B have been added. Check them out and give me your opinions on them:
Edith:

Style A                                                             Style B
Irene:

Style A                                                             Style B

AH. This is so hard. I love Edith, and she's looking pretty fly in her style b. I'm just wondering should you add some red in? For continuity between her Style A and B? (but ah I love her so much don't mess her up per my advice) Or you could remove the red from Style A Edith (even though it brings out that teensy bit of red in her hat)?

I think Irene's Style B looks pretty on point, but maybe just a tad plain? Maybe some sort of accessory would give her that final touch.

All in all though, you're on the right track.

[Papaccino]

AH. This is so hard. I love Edith, and she's looking pretty fly in her style b. I'm just wondering should you add some red in? For continuity between her Style A and B? (but ah I love her so much don't mess her up per my advice) Or you could remove the red from Style A Edith (even though it brings out that teensy bit of red in her hat)?

I think Irene's Style B looks pretty on point, but maybe just a tad plain? Maybe some sort of accessory would give her that final touch.

All in all though, you're on the right track.

I see what you mean. The red from Edith's Style A had nothing to do with the hat. Basically, in Freezeria HD and Wingeria HD, I saw the "baseball shoes" in the shop and it was like that so... I added it to her for now. Also, should I give Irene a purse instead of the scarf? Should she also have something in her arms?

[superheroart]

I see what you mean. The red from Edith's Style A had nothing to do with the hat. Basically, in Freezeria HD and Wingeria HD, I saw the "baseball shoes" in the shop and it was like that so... I added it to her for now. Also, should I give Irene a purse instead of the scarf? Should she also have something in her arms?

Maybe a headband? I really like the scarf, but I do think she needs another accessory.

[Papaccino]

Maybe a headband? I really like the scarf, but I do think she needs another accessory.

Alright. I'll eventually add something else to her.

[Papaccino]

Update:
Geoff's and Ulyssa's Style A & B have been added. Opinions?
Geoff:

Style A                                                         Style B
Ulyssa:

Style A                                                         Style B

[Papaccino]

New update! (Same thing, sorry)

Bailyn’s backstory!



Bailyn is a basketball player currently playing for the (TBD). However, she is most known for her previous career as a professional model. She has worked in several modeling agencies throughout her 10 years. However, she also loved basketball as a child. Although she liked modeling, she only pursued in it to impress her parents. After 10 years of modeling however, she has finally decided to quit modeling and become a basketball player. Just recently, she was accepted to the big leagues to play for the (TBD).
*The reason why it says TBD (to be determined) is because I haven't decided on what team she should play for. The colors of her basketball outfit does not even fit for any current Flipline teams anyways. (It was mostly based on Lebron’s outfit) Also, I plan to change a bit of her appearance. If you guys feel like suggesting improvements or additions to her appearance and/or backstory, please feel free to do so.

[superheroart]

Just FYI, I'm going to come back and edit this many times, because I can't think of all my suggestions right now lol.
In regards to the team Bailyn plays for, I'm thinking something like the "Oniontown Hoopers," perhaps?

I only say that because the Oniontown Crushers are the baseball team that has purple in their uniform (due to Sarge, I assume), and so Oniontown is, IMO, the most likely city her team should be from.

Not to mention, not every team from one city has to have the exact same colors (e.g LA Clipers = white/blue/red, LA Lakers = purple/gold), also, the OT Crushers play baseball, and she plays basketball, so it gives even more leeway.

Maple Mountain is predominately yellow, so you could also base a team off of that town, as well.

[Ibzy]

I love Melody, she'd definitely be into Groovstock.

[Papaccino]

Just FYI, I'm going to come back and edit this many times, because I can't think of all my suggestions right now lol.
In regards to the team Bailyn plays for, I'm thinking something like the "Oniontown Hoopers," perhaps?

I only say that because the Oniontown Crushers are the baseball team that has purple in their uniform (due to Sarge, I assume), and so Oniontown is, IMO, the most likely city her team should be from.

Not to mention, not every team from one city has to have the exact same colors (e.g LA Clipers = white/blue/red, LA Lakers = purple/gold), also, the OT Crushers play baseball, and she plays basketball, so it gives even more leeway.

Maple Mountain is predominately yellow, so you could also base a team off of that town, as well.

Well, I could change her outfit colors to a better fit of a Flipline basketball team. I like your suggestion of “Oniontown Hoopers”. I think I’m most likely going with that. Thanks for the suggestions!

I love Melody, she'd definitely be into Groovstock.

She will be. I’ve also been planning on all of my FC’s orders. Melody is definitely going with Groovstock when it’s available.

[Ianiant]

Your FC's are very creative. Keep up the good work.

[Papaccino]

Your FC's are very creative. Keep up the good work.

Thanks!

[superheroart]

Well, I could change her outfit colors to a better fit of a Flipline basketball team. I like your suggestion of “Oniontown Hoopers”. I think I’m most likely going with that. Thanks for the suggestions!

Glad to help!    I'm gonna take a look at her style B and see if I can think of any suggestions for ya.

[~Faith~]

I really wish Edith would have been chosen as a contestant because she she is really well made. I'm really upset about that.

[Papaccino]

I really wish Edith would have been chosen as a contestant because she she is really well made. I'm really upset about that.

It’s alright. I can improve her for now. Maybe next year, she’ll get in.