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« Reply #45 on: October 20, 2017, 10:59:02 PM »

Oooh! She looks really lovely. The colors you used really complement her skin and hair.~
Thank you! I think she might be the best one I've made so far. Hooray
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« Reply #46 on: October 20, 2017, 11:45:21 PM »

Christina! (Not Aguilera)



She’s a Chemistry teacher.

I replaced Catherine with her because I never liked Catherine’s design. She might come back though… Wink

I’ve been already thinking of her backstory. I might have it ready today or tomorrow.
Looks cool. Like her palette~
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« Reply #47 on: October 20, 2017, 11:48:30 PM »

Looks cool. Like her palette~
Thank you! Cheesy

I guess everyone likes Christina a lot. Hooray
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« Reply #48 on: October 26, 2017, 08:13:51 AM »

I’ve decided to remake one of my FCs: Irene!

Style A                               Style B

Her Style A is her tennis outfit, while her Style B is… one of her regular outfits. I’d like some feedback, any kind, either positive or negative. I’m trying to improve my FCs.
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« Reply #49 on: October 26, 2017, 10:21:46 AM »

Ooooooh, You did a good job remaking Irene.

My only problems with her Style B is the red headband and the shoes; the red just seems a bit random to me, and something about the white in her shoes is kind off-putting.

But other than that, very nice.  8)
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« Reply #50 on: October 26, 2017, 01:06:48 PM »

Ooooooh, You did a good job remaking Irene.

My only problems with her Style B is the red headband and the shoes; the red just seems a bit random to me, and something about the white in her shoes is kind off-putting.

But other than that, very nice.  8)
I know the headband looks random by that color. I might make it blue as well. Also, do you think completely blue shoes would work instead?
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« Reply #51 on: October 26, 2017, 04:05:20 PM »

I know the headband looks random by that color. I might make it blue as well. Also, do you think completely blue shoes would work instead?

Maybe. That, or you could make the headband white, so that it correlates to the white in her shoes. Right now, the white might look awkward because there's no white anywhere else. I'm gonna go look at the shoe options rn and see anything else that might work.

Update: I think these shoes look nice; I tried a bunch of color combos (that's like a silvery, off-white in the main part of the shoe), and this is just a reference/suggestion. I'm sure you'll be able to figure it out.  Cheesy


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« Reply #52 on: October 26, 2017, 04:19:15 PM »

Maybe. That, or you could make the headband white, so that it correlates to the white in her shoes. Right now, the white might look awkward because there's no white anywhere else. I'm gonna go look at the shoe options rn and see anything else that might work.
Ah okay then. Thanks! Cheesy
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« Reply #53 on: October 26, 2017, 04:22:21 PM »

I updated my last post like, two seconds after you posted your reply... Laugh
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« Reply #54 on: October 26, 2017, 04:30:57 PM »

Update: I think these shoes look nice; I tried a bunch of color combos (that like a silvery, off-white in main part of the shoe), and this is just a reference/suggestion. I'm sure you'll be able to figure it out.  Cheesy

Wow. That color looks great on her. I’ll see what I can do. Cheesy
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« Reply #55 on: October 28, 2017, 07:22:03 AM »

Irene looks fabulous!
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« Reply #56 on: October 28, 2017, 07:57:18 AM »

Irene looks fabulous!
Thanks! Cheesy
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« Reply #57 on: October 28, 2017, 08:48:14 AM »

Well, after checking customers with some shoes, and looking at superheroart’s suggestion, I think this is better for now:

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« Reply #58 on: October 28, 2017, 09:00:16 AM »

You ve got some nice FCs Smiley
My favorite is Irene
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« Reply #59 on: October 28, 2017, 09:34:17 AM »

You ve got some nice FCs Smiley
My favorite is Irene
Thanks! Cheesy
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