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« Reply #225 on: April 28, 2018, 10:48:58 AM »

Alright, I have added the rest of my FCs, but in spoilers. They don’t have any bio yet, and they’re still either in my planning stage, Style B stage, or bio stage, or something like that. So, I guess you can give out any opinions if you like.

But, I’m changing Christina’s design again because I don’t like it.
I forgot about Diego’s hair color. Laugh
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« Reply #226 on: April 28, 2018, 11:02:22 AM »

pretty cool, quite a few of these are characters I've seen before and like, I'd say Edith is my favorite and Holly is my second favorite, and Jay is the coolest of the guys. There are others I like too but I can't fit it all in one post lol.

For some slight improvements I might sugest, Tom's outfit is a bit eh, I think it's the bright dark blue jeans that don't go with the rest of the outfit but otherwise cool. Melody is nice but her style B looks meh because the vest and the long sleeves look kinda odd together. Kevin's colors look a bit odd together, mostly that minty color and the indigo, maybe if it was a less purplish blue it would look good. Walt has a really awesome outfit but his eyes are a bit close together. Jasmine is nice, but the jeans would look better if they were black or white. Zack's style B is awesome, but the style A is kinda not exciting to me. Ximena is really interesting, but her head is a bit large IMO.
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« Reply #227 on: April 28, 2018, 11:10:01 AM »

pretty cool, quite a few of these are characters I've seen before and like, I'd say Edith is my favorite and Holly is my second favorite, and Jay is the coolest of the guys. There are others I like too but I can't fit it all in one post lol.

For some slight improvements I might sugest, Tom's outfit is a bit eh, I think it's the bright dark blue jeans that don't go with the rest of the outfit but otherwise cool. Melody is nice but her style B looks meh because the vest and the long sleeves look kinda odd together. Kevin's colors look a bit odd together, mostly that minty color and the indigo, maybe if it was a less purplish blue it would look good. Walt has a really awesome outfit but his eyes are a bit close together. Jasmine is nice, but the jeans would look better if they were black or white. Zack's style B is awesome, but the style A is kinda not exciting to me. Ximena is really interesting, but her head is a bit large IMO.
Thanks for your suggestions! I’ll keep these in mind! Cheesy Also, yeah I made Ximena’s head too big. Laugh
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« Reply #228 on: May 06, 2018, 12:40:43 PM »

New FC! Carla!


Also, Kevin got a new look!


Finally, Tom has a different outfit now, Walt’s eyes have been separated a bit more, and Jasmine’s pants are now black (still with the checkered stripe on the side).
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« Reply #229 on: May 09, 2018, 08:42:12 PM »

I’ve just added Nari’s new Style B in her tab:



Most likely, she’s the next FC to get a bio.
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« Reply #230 on: May 15, 2018, 08:02:28 AM »

hmm, I like her style B better than the original.
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You get a jill-a-torch.
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Fav KCP 2018 entries (besides Annika):
Azariah (Mystic), Morrigan (Lilith), Bonnie (JakeZ), Scott (Pine-Apple), Rose (RoseKitty), Kassem (despite the fact that he's half blue-green colorblind), Treble (breadlord), Bellamy (SND), Chelsea (Paramore), Skye (Shawna), Ranulph (CupcakePsyducks), Alice (Algodethacon), Hazel (Zuki-Chan), Zack (DeluxePizza), Soufflia (lajoie), Chelsea (Paramore), Dakota (speedo)
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« Reply #231 on: June 27, 2018, 12:38:18 PM »

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« Reply #232 on: June 27, 2018, 12:52:06 PM »



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« Reply #233 on: June 27, 2018, 02:21:40 PM »

New FC! Carla!


Also, Kevin got a new look!


Finally, Tom has a different outfit now, Walt’s eyes have been separated a bit more, and Jasmine’s pants are now black (still with the checkered stripe on the side).

Carla 4 stars, you should change the hat on her head
Kevin 5 stars
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« Reply #234 on: June 27, 2018, 02:44:41 PM »

Carla 4 stars, you should change the hat on her head
Kevin 5 stars
I honestly already added a tiny detail to Carla’s shirt. I’m not sure if I want to change the hat though. The other bandanna didn’t look too well for her, and I did want her to have one. But, I’ll consider it though. Thanks for the feedback. Smiley
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« Reply #235 on: June 28, 2018, 10:39:54 PM »



Outfits:

Style A                     Style B                     Style C                     Style D                     Style H

Orders:
Papa's Pizzeria
N/A

Papa's Burgeria
N/A

Papa's Taco Mia!
N/A

Papa's Freezeria
N/A

Papa's Pancakeria
N/A

Papa's Burgeria HD
N/A

Papa's Wingeria
N/A

Papa's Hot Doggeria
N/A

Papa's Burgeria To Go!
N/A

Papa's Cupcakeria/HD
Liner C
Red Velvet Cake
Cupcake 1:
Red Frosting
Chocolate Drizzle
Creameo Bits
Marshmallow, Cherry, Marshmallow
Cupcake 2:
Black Frosting
Strawberry Drizzle
Rainbow Sprinkles
Marshmallow, Cherry, Marshmallow

Holiday (Valentine's Day)
Liner C
Red Velvet Cake
Cupcake 1:
Red Frosting
Chocolate Drizzle
Creameo Bits
Frosted Rose, Chocolate Strawberry, Frosted Rose
Cupcake 2:
Black Frosting
Strawberry Drizzle
X and O Sprinkles
Marshmallow, Cherry, Marshmallow

Papa's Freezeria HD
N/A

Papa's Pastaria
Regular Fettuccine
Creamy Alfredo Sauce
5 Fried Calamari
2 Mushrooms
2 Tomatoes
Parmesan Cheese
Cheesy Bread

Holiday (Halloween)
Regular Fettuccine
Purple Pesto
5 Fried Calamari
2 Mushrooms
2 Tomatoes
Parmesan Cheese
Cheesy Bread

Papa's Freezeria To Go!
N/A

Papa's Donuteria
Red Velvet Long John with Chocolate Mousse
Strawberry Icing
Creameo Bits
Chocolate Round Donut with Strawberry Jelly
Red Icing
Chocolate Drizzle
Mini-Mallows
Red Velvet Ring Donut
Chocolate Icing
Strawberry Drizzle
Rainbow Sprinkles

Holiday (Valentine's Day)
Red Velvet Long John with Chocolate Mousse
Strawberry Icing
Creameo Bits
Chocolate Round Donut with Strawberry Jelly
Red Icing
Neapolitan Drizzle
Mini-Mallows
Red Velvet Heart Donut with Bubblegum Cream
Valentine Powder
Strawberry Drizzle
Rainbow Sprinkles

Papa's Wingeria HD
N/A

Papa's Pizzeria To Go!
N/A

Papa's Cheeseria
Three Cheese Bread with Shredded Cheddar
Light Grill
Fried Egg
Sliced Ham
Tomatoes
Mushrooms
Sauerkraut
Fries:
Curly Fries
Cheddar Topping

Holiday (Valentine's Day)
Beetbread with Red Windsor Cheese
Light Grill
Fried Egg
Sliced Ham
Sundried Tomatoes
Mushrooms
Strawberry Vinaigrette
Fries:
Curly Fries
Cheddar Topping

Papa's Cupcakeria To Go!
Liner C
Red Velvet Cake
Cupcake 1:
Red Frosting
Chocolate Drizzle
Creameo Bits
Cherry
Cupcake 2:
Black Frosting
Strawberry Drizzle
Rainbow Sprinkles
Marshmallow

Holiday (Valentine's Day)
Liner C
Red Velvet Cake
Cupcake 1:
Red Frosting
Chocolate Drizzle
Creameo Bits
Frosted Rose, Chocolate Strawberry
Cupcake 2:
Black Frosting
Strawberry Drizzle
X and O Sprinkles
Marshmallow

Papa's Bakeria
N/A
Holiday (Holiday)
N/A

Papa's Taco Mia HD
N/A
Holiday (Holiday)
N/A

Papa's Sushiria
N/A
Bubble Tea:
N/A
Holiday (Holiday)
N/A
Bubble Tea:
N/A

Papa's Taco Mia To Go!
N/A
Holiday (Holiday)
N/A

Papa's Pancakeria HD
N/A
Holiday (TBD)
N/A

Papa's Pizzeria HD
N/A
Holiday (TBD)
N/A

Papa's Hot Doggeria HD
N/A
Holiday (TBD)
N/A

Papa's Hot Doggeria To Go!
N/A
Holiday (TBD)
N/A

Trivia:
  • Originally, Nari was going to be an obnoxious, yet cute Japanese FC that was very clingy, but nice.
  • Originally, she was also going to be full-Japanese, but DeluxePizza decided to make her half-Japanese, half-Korean in her new look, due to her name.
  • Her Style H is based on Phantom R (Raphael), the protagonist in the game: Rhythm Thief & the Emperor's Treasure.
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« Reply #236 on: June 28, 2018, 10:43:55 PM »



Hometown: Sakura Bay
Loves: Pop Music
Hates: Cucumbers
Occupation: Singer

Nari is a determined songwriter in the music industry. She is usually laidback, yet supportive to those close. While she has a solo career, she is currently one of the four singers in the girl band, NATE. Although it is unknown who started the band, it was clear that these girls share a great friendship among each other. On a related note however, she currently has a best friend ever since they were in elementary. Just recently, her former relationship with an ex has gotten attention once again after her recent album, Faithful, was just released.

Outfits:

Style A                                                                 Style B

Orders:
COMING SOON

Trivia:
  • Originally, Nari was going to be an obnoxious, but cute Japanese FC that was very clingy, but nice.
  • Originally, she was also going to be full-Korean, but DeluxePizza decided to make her half-Japanese, half-Korean in her new look.

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« Reply #237 on: June 28, 2018, 10:45:53 PM »

Cool!
Thanks! Smiley
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« Reply #238 on: June 29, 2018, 07:39:50 AM »



Hometown: Sakura Bay
Loves: Pop Music
Hates: Cucumbers
Occupation: Singer

Nari is a determined songwriter in the music industry. She is usually laidback, yet supportive to those close. While she has a solo career, she is currently one of the four singers in the girl band, NATE. Although it is unknown who started the band, it was clear that these girls share a great friendship among each other. On a related note however, she currently has a best friend ever since they were in elementary school. Just recently, her former relationship with an ex has gotten attention once again after her recent album, Faithful, was just released.

Outfits:

Style A                                                                 Style B

Orders:
COMING SOON

Trivia:
  • Originally, Nari was going to be an obnoxious, but cute Japanese FC that was very clingy, but nice.
  • Originally, she was also going to be full-Korean, but DeluxePizza decided to make her half-Japanese, half-Korean in her new look.
I really like her bio!
Oh! And... adding the white to the beanied really brought it out.
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« Reply #239 on: June 29, 2018, 07:42:08 AM »

I really like her bio!
Oh! And... adding the white to the beanied really brought it out.
Thanks! Cheesy
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