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« Reply #15 on: December 15, 2017, 08:22:01 AM »

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« Reply #16 on: March 02, 2018, 11:08:21 AM »

Hello guys!
I decided to warn you.
I've a great idea for fanfiction. It will a big story (I hope). First chapter I'll write soon.
Hint: Main character is Scooperia's chef.
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« Reply #17 on: March 04, 2018, 12:47:11 PM »

                                           Universes

    Chapter 1: How it started...

        
          Papa's Scooperia opened. More than 100 customers go to opening. Everyone waited it. Here serves milkshakes, cookies, ice creams and cookie sundaes

  Timm: Hey Cecilia! How about a dance?
  Cecilia: Eww!!! Maybe we're...
          Timm catched Cecilia's arm and they're goes to dance
  Timm: It will fun! Why you don't like it?

          Meanwhile in stations

  Koilee: Arrgh! I'm want to have fun too! Why we're must cook at this day?
  Carlo: It's our work now. We're need make all there happy.
  Koilee: But I want to be happy too!
  Carlo: Soon we'll can have some fun too Koilee. Just wait some time.
  Koilee: Ohh... You're right. Thanks!

          All of the customers had fun untill late night... All of them fall asleep here, in restaurant. When all sleeps just Johnny can't fall asleep. But later he sleeps too.
          Morning. Carlo's gets up. He don't remember half of yesterday party


  Carlo: Ohhh... How long I slept? Where are all customers? Now just 9 a.m. They're can't go home... Or can? I can't understand... too much ice cream was ate...
          Just now Carlo saw... Around was a big chaos!
  Carlo: I hope it happened because we're arranged opening-party...
          But... When he saw stains of ice cream and milk towards the exit...

          Carlo goes to street. There was silent and slippy. Every house had a stain of ice cream. Carlo trying to go after that stains. It towards to city's centre. Many stains were in Oniontown's Metro. Carlo entering. Apparently trains are not to go today. Carlo going to tonnel. He's go and go and go.
  
  Carlo: Even here I see stains... Interesting whats happened yesterday. Where are all? I'll find them! I need to do it!

          Carlo continues to go into the tonnel. He saw something... bright???

  Carlo: It's train? But chauffeur is gone! Everybody is gone! Wait! This train is not moving... Just headlights are included. Maybe I...

          Carlo goes into the train. He tryed to find somebody. Unfortunately he's can't do it. He tryed to find something else.

  Carlo: Urghh... What is it? Stale food? Uhh... Stick! It's a lever? Yes! But it will not working more. Gotcha! Small lantern! It that I need...

          Carlo go out from train. He continues his moving into the tonnel. He still seeing stains. Nothing new. Although now lighter! Passes 20 minutes. Carlo tired. He want to take a break but he can't. Passes more 40 minutes. Carlo still go to the end of tunnel. And... Jackpot?! He's go to end of this tunnel. Big wall. Carlo takes stick that he finded in train and connect it with rock with help rope. He made a small hammer! He trying to brake the wall. He doesn't know why he want it. Crack! Second! Third! First stone is broken! Carlo saw a bright light. Passes 25 minutes and he's broke this wall. Now Carlo in strange room

  Carlo: Where I am? These walls... Here many cracks... Torches... It's ancient place? And why I'm here?

          Carlo's confused. He don't know what to do. And at this moment he saw in some meters from he strange and very bright things... Near of them on walls were scrawled the numbers... Carlo decided to enter in thing that have number 1...

  Carlo: Wait!!! Noo... Nooooo....


                                                                               End of 1st chapter

  Sooo... Write your opinions guys! I made poll if somebody interested...

          


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« Reply #18 on: March 06, 2018, 11:18:36 PM »

This is really good.
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« Reply #19 on: March 08, 2018, 05:51:18 AM »

This is really good.
Oh, thanks! I really waiting any opinions about my fictions. Without it I can't write it
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« Reply #20 on: March 11, 2018, 11:48:59 AM »

 I need to finish my first story... Let do that!

                   Chapter ten: Time to fight with evil!

 FCs and customers in this chapter:
 Mrs Flipverse, Pepperguy, Professor Fitz, Lewis, Lady Negative, Professor Freeze, Martin, Desmond, Myles


      1 day later

   Our heroes are ready for complete this battle and thinking how to attack their enemies. They are discussing it

  Mrs Flipverse: We're need to attack them from air. They will not waiting that and it will "surprise"
  Pepperguy: Okay, even if we're take that plan, answer to my one question... How we're attack them from air?
  Mrs Flipverse: ...
  Professor Fitz: Okay, maybe that's not bad plan but Pepperguy is right... One of us... I think it will Pepperguy distract them and after this Mrs Flipverse will destroy their freeze-machine. I will look after "Mega-Dryer. Lewis will help you. I think it's great plan!
  Lewis: And don't forget about time. We're need to do this fast or...
  Mrs Flipverse: Yes, we know that.
  Professor Fitz: So, I'll include my "Mega-Dryer" somewhere high...
  All together: Lets do this!

   Professor Fitz goes to roof of his laboratory. Others are goes to their enemies. They're ready to stop this madness. Pepperguy moves away from the others. He's going to distract enemies. Meanwhile Mrs Flipverse and Lewis take a position and waiting. Pepperguy started.

  Pepperguy: Hey guys! Hello! We're see each other again. How do you do?
  Villains: Awww... What?
  Pepperguy: How I can see your plan almost completed? I guess you're happy
  Lady Negative: What are you doing here? You will not destroy our plan... You too young for this.
  Pepperguy: Really? Oh, I soo want to do something but...
  
   Pepperguy takes something. He don'r know what is it. Villains are running after him. Apparently thing that took Pepperguy was very important for evil plan. Meanwhile Professor Fitz included "Mega-Dryer". Game started! Lewis and Mrs Flipverse are running to villain's freeze-machine. All here are running. They're so close and...

  Desmond: (Comes out from behind of freeze-machine) No-no-no! You don't do that! That world will cold!
  Mrs Flipverse: But why? I though you and your brother are the kind guys. Why you don't give destroy it?
  Desmond: All changed. It happened because your brother ignorant!
  Mrs Flipverse: What? Cam... Pepperguy? But he's... He did that because he didn't know what to do! And I too didn't know that...
  Lewis: 14 minutes remain
  Myles: Uhh... Why this place becomes hotter?
  Mrs Flipverse: Okay guys, If you will give me to destroy this thing this place will colder...
  Lewis: (To Mrs Flipverse) Why we can't just knuck down them? I think they are not so strong...
  Mrs Flipverse: No, Lewis. We're need destroy that but these guys are not bad. I just need talk with them.
  Lewis: Uhh... Understand... But 12 minutes remain... Try to do that... faster...
  Mrs Flipverse: Desmond... Pepperguy did it because he hadn't another way... You don't have to forgive him. Just understand... If we're will not destroy freeze-machine you will not see your family, your friends and...
  Lewis: 10 minutes!
  Mrs Flipverse: ...and your dog or cat... Uhh... Understand? If we will not destroy it, after 10 minutes... We will gonna fry here!
  Desmond: (Can't say nothing and staying at one place)
  Mrs Flipverse: I hope we're understood each other... (Goes to freeze-machine)
  
   Lady Negative attacked Mrs Flipverse. Martin attacked Lewis. They're trying to fight each other but can't because of the heat. Meanwhile Pepperguy trying to run to freeze-machine but... Professor Freeze is here!
 He catched Pepperguy. Our heroes can't do nothing.


  Lewis: Urghhh... 3 minutes... I guess... Now approximattely 240 degrees... It's end...
  Pepperguy: But... Ice is smelting...
  Mrs Flipverse: It was really good plan... but we can't complete... our mission...
  Villains: Turn off your machine!
  Desmond: (Thinking) This will not end until they're not destroy freeze-machine...
  Lewis: (Trying to shouting) Mr. Fitz... Turn it off... Please!

   Professor Fitz trying to turn off his machine but lever is stuck!
   At this moment there was an explosion. But it was not Fitz's "Mega-Dryer". It was Freeze's freeze-machine. Everyone is looking in this direction.

  Desmond: (Staying near with place where was an explosion) Don't thank me.
  Mrs Flipverse: Desmond...

   Many attempts later Professor Fitz pulled the lever and turned off his machine. Degrees becames smaller. 10 minutes later. All can stand on legs...

  Mrs Flipverse: I think that someone wants come to the prison?
  Desmond: I think same.
  Mrs Flipverse: So if somebody wants to feel it again, he can go out. If somebody don't want - stay here. (Calling to police)
  Pepperguy: Desmond! You're really cool! Here was 270 degrees and you can stand on your legs and destroy freeze-machine! And... I'm sorry about the last time... I was really rude
  Desmond: Don't worry! Your sister is the best superhero ever... You're lucky person.
  Pepperguy: Oh thanks! I know she's the best!
  Mrs Flipverse: (Goes to others) So police will take them now. We're can don't worry about them.
  Professor Fitz: You're the best guys! You're did it! We're won!
  Lewis: Why you not turned off your machine when see how we're dying?
  Professor Fitz: You want to know? I guessed that Desmond or Myles will do that. I immediately saw in them the hidden potential... So I did't turned it off.
  Mrs Flipverse: And now we're can go home?
  Professor Fitz: I think... Yes!

   So ends this story. But maybe it's not the end... Only you to decide. If you want more, then write about it.
  
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« Reply #21 on: March 29, 2018, 10:09:05 AM »

If you'll write something I'll write new chapter!
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