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« on: April 27, 2018, 03:15:34 AM »


WELCOME

Decided to revised my skit request, anyways...request with rules.

  • No Inappropriate request
  • No Non-flipline related request like the games
  • No Flipline Customer Origin request
  • Rules will be added soon
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« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2018, 12:28:01 PM »

Since flash is ending and all, how about the flipverse world ending?
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« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2018, 04:45:44 PM »

Since flash is ending and all, how about the flipverse world ending?
I... don't want to that kind of skit
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« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2018, 12:54:51 AM »

Okay then... how about Mitch eating too many taco while on the job? Laugh
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« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2018, 11:33:59 AM »

I kinda want to request something Ninjoy and Dynamoe related (since that's pretty popular), maybe a confrontation between the two.
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« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2018, 04:46:35 AM »

Okay then... how about Mitch eating too many taco while on the job? Laugh
Coming right up!!

To Eat Or Not To Get

Watch:
In Mitch's Apartment

Mitch: Hey grandpa!! I'm going to work!!
Wally: Wait Mitch!? I have to tell you something!!
Mitch: What is it?
Wally: I'm just giving you this. *Gives a old watch*
Mitch: A watch?
Wally: Not just a watch. Our family heirloom. It's been passed down from generation to generation. Now, the owner of this watch is now you.
Mitch: Wow!! Thanks grandpa!! Now i have to go!! Smiley
Wally: Make sure not to loose it. Smiley
Mitch: I wouldn't...

In Tacosdale

Mitch: *Left the bus and accidentally tripped* Woah!! Woah!! *Fell to the tree* Ow!! Huh!? *Sees the broken watch* No no no no no no no!! The watch!! Grandpa is gonna be mad at me!! And probably the whole family!! What should i do!? D:
Jester X Game: Oh...a broken watch.
Mitch: J-Jester X Game!? What are doing here!? D:
Jester X Game: Oh nothing...just walking around. Geez, your grandfather would be so mad at you!!
Mitch: What should i do!? What should i do!? Huh!? Maybe i'll go to the repair ship!!
In the News:
Duke Gotcha: Brekaing news!! All the repair shop has been burned down!! It's still unknown why it happened!!
Mitch: What!? How is it-!? Jester!!
Jester X Game: How did you know it was me!? :3
Mitch: Shut up!! Now what should i tell this to grandpa?
Jester X Game: I have an idea, maybe i should fixed it.
Mitch: Really!?
Jester X Game: If you accept my challenge.
Mitch: What!? No way!!
Jester X Game: Fine!! I guess we could see what your grandfather think about this.
Mitch: Alright, alright!! What do you want me to do!?
Jester X Game: *Smirk*
Tacos!!:
In Papa's Taco Mia

Mitch: *Opens the door* I'm here!!
Maggie: Mitch!! You're late!! You're in kitchen duty!! Get your slacks off here!! Angry
Mitch: (Since when was she my boss) Coming!!

In the kitchen

Mitch: And 4 tacos here, and other 4 tacos here for me to eat.
Jester X Game: *Appears*  Hey!! Remember, what i said!? Angry
Mitch: Wait? Even the customer's tacos?
Jester X Game: *Nods* Even the customer's tacos? *Disappears*
Mitch: Hm... *Eats the tacos* Now, what should i do with customer's tacos? *Sees paper* Hmmmm...

Few minutes later

Maggie: *Cleans the table*
Penny: Um...Maggie.
Maggie: Yes Penny, what is it?
Penny: Its my...order. Sad
Maggie: Something wrong with your order.
Penny: Well you see-
Boomer: Hey!! My taco taste funny!! Angry
Maggie: What!? What happened!?
Olivia: Maggie!! Maggie!! Maggie!!
Maggie: What Olivia!?
Olivia: My T-A-C-O taste so bad!!
Maggie: Wait what!?
Jojo: You think this is funny.
Maggie: In a cosmic sorta way, yes.
Jojo: Well Ms. funny girl!! Is this how you get your sick kick!?
Maggie: What? It just a ordinary ta- *Sees the taco* Oh my goodness!! D: Mitch!! Angry

In the kitchen

Mitch: *Eats the taco* (Oh no...Maggie) *Eats many tacos and tries to run but feels a stomach ache* I think i ate so much!! Tacos!! *Faints*
Jester X Game: You failed!! Tongue
Maggie: *Opens the door quickly* Mitch!! I'm gonna- Angry Huh? D:
Jester X Game: Hello!!
Maggie: What are you doing here!? Eyebrow
Jester X Game: Well...
The Next Day:
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Mitch: Ugh...where am i?
Wally: You're in the hospital.
Mitch: What just happened?
Maggie: You ate all those tacos and got food poisoning, which caused you to faint.
Mitch: Oh, i'm sorry...i-
Wally: No need to apologize, Jester X Game told us your reason on doing it. And i don't care much about the watch than you.
Mitch: I guess you knew.
Wally: *Hugs Mitch* Don't worry, there will be a way to fixed the watch together. Smiley
Mitch: Thanks grandpa. Smiley
Maggie: You owe them $250.00!! Angry
Mitch: Yeah i deserve it.
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« Reply #6 on: May 15, 2018, 08:08:51 AM »

lol, that jester guy sounds pretty troll Laugh also in real life Mitch would probably be fired after that but this is Papa Louie, so everything is all crazy anyway
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« Reply #7 on: May 15, 2018, 08:11:43 AM »

lol, that jester guy sounds pretty troll Laugh also in real life Mitch would probably be fired after that but this is Papa Louie, so everything is all crazy anyway
Well Jester X Game is a height of a young child, though he is a Father. As for Mitch, they I understand why he did because Jeste X Game challenge him. I hope I make a profile about Jester X Game.
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« Reply #8 on: May 16, 2018, 04:57:12 AM »

I kinda want to request something Ninjoy and Dynamoe related (since that's pretty popular), maybe a confrontation between the two.
Well i hope you like it...cause i love this skit so much!!

Crime Of Love

Night Time:
In Moe’s Apartment

The Dynamoe: *Enters the apartment from the window* *Inhale and exhale* Another night!! Another failed crime!! Thanks to Ninjoy!! I would have the bag of money it wouldn't for that good for nothing ninja who's such a beast, boring...beautiful, and nice. Cheery *Smells his clothes* Geez, I need a bath.

30 minutes later

Moe: *In his robe* Got myself clean, got the clothes, and everything in it is clean. *Sits down* Now order some pizza… *Calls Roy* Hello Roy, I'll have… *Orders something since there's no Pizzeria order from him* Okay, bye!! And now some TV… *Turns on the TV* Oh!! Nowtime News!! I hope there talking about the Dynamoe!!
News I:
Duke Gotcha: We are here live outside the Tastyville Bank, where the infamous Dynamoe hostage innocent people, rob the bank, and start the bomb. But luckily the heroine Ninjoy stop his plan...here's what the fight look like.
In the video:
The Dynamoe: *Hits Ninjoy to forehead using the baseball*
Ninjoy: Owwww!! *Kicks his legs* That's not nice to hit a girl!!
The Dynamoe: *Falls down to the fountain* You're right, I don't like to hit a girl...even you.
Ninjoy: Um...well. Embarrassed Just forget it!! I'll finish you off!! Angry
The Dynamoe: But which one are you gonna stop?! The bomb!? Or me!? You’re greatest enemy!! Pick one!!
Ninjoy: I- ugh…*Left*
The Dynamoe: I thought so…*Use the grappling hook gun and escape*
News II:
Duke Gotcha: Ninjoy, how is it feel like to let the villain escaped?
Ninjoy: … *About to leave*
Duke Gotcha: Wait?! How would your tell it to your fans?! How is like fighting the villain?! Are you and the Dynamoe a couple?!
Ninjoy: Wait?! Why would you think we're a couple!? Angry
Duke Gotcha: I don't know, the Dynamoe always flirted you while you blush.
Ninjoy: There’s no way he’s my boyfriend...he’s a criminal, i’m a vigilante. And don’t even think about it again. *Left* Angry
Duke Gotcha: Okay then...Well, it seems like once again, Duke...GOTCHAAAH!!
Moe: *Turns off the TV* Everytime, how can she love me back!? Hm...uh hah!! Hehehehehe!! Hahahahahahahaha!! Evil

Outside Moe’s Apartment

Joy: *Carries a pizza box* (Geez, my forehead) Huh? Is that Moe...laughing? *Rings the doorbell*
Moe: *Opens the door* Oh hey Joy...here’s the bill. *Gives the money*
Joy: Thanks…*Gives the pizza box* What are you laughing?
Moe: Oh, i’m just laughing on a comedy movie. So funny!! What happened to your forehead?
Joy: Oh...i accidentally went to a pole. Okay, see you soon!! *Left*
Moe: Now...time for the plan. *Eats a slice of pizza*
The Next Night:
In Papa’s Pizzeria

Joy: *Enters Papa’s Pizzeria* Hey Roy, sorry i’m late.
Roy: It’s fine. I’m just watching the news.
Joy: Nowtime News?
Roy: Yeah, i just want to know what happened today. Seeing the important people in the TV and...hmmm. Sad
Joy: *Hugs Roy* You are important. Smiley
Roy: Thanks… Smiley
Joy: Say, where’s Uncle Louie?
Roy: I don’t know, he was suppose to be back from Portallini.
Joy: I'll call him to make su-
News I:
Duke Gotcha: Breaking News!! 9 people had been kidnapped by the Dynamoe here at Portallini. The people who are kidnapped are...Julep, Deano, Utah, Doan, Papa Louie, and the Romano family. The reason we think that the kidnapped is the Dynamoe is because he left a calling card. The last people to be kidnapped was Papa Louie, Utah, and Deano who was in Papa’s Pastaria
Roy: Uncle Louie!? Shocked
Joy: H-he was kidnapped...by the Dynamoe!!
Roy: I wish I could go find Papa Louie, but I'm too afraid to go there. I'll go back to my apartment. *Left*
Joy: I'll closed Papa’s Pizzeria…*Sees the news* The Dynamoe!! What tricks did you have in mind? Grumpy

In Portallini

Ninjoy: Good...the cops are gone, time to investigate. *Went inside* Now, I need clues to find the missing people.
The Dynamoe: (And now’s my chance…) *Use the baseball to hit Ninjoy in the head* Perfect!! Now!!
Acceptance:
Somewhere in Portallini

The Dynamoe: Wake up...wake up. Wake up!!
Ninjoy: Huh?! Where am I?!
The Dynamoe: Oh...you're dead!!
Ninjoy: What!? Shocked
The Dynamoe: Kidding!!
Ninjoy: Where am I?! *Looks around and appears to look like a romantic place* What-!?
Bruna: Ninjoy!?
Carlo: She's here!!
Utah: Saved us!!
Ninjoy: *Sees them in cage* The captive people!! What have you done to them!?
The Dynamoe: Oh nothing...I just needed those people for our date.
Ninjoy: Wait? I'm sorry...date?
The Dynamoe: What do you think the romantic mood here for?
Ninjoy: Hold on a sec!! You kidnapped those innocent people...just so you can have date, with me!?
The Dynamoe: Of course, flowers!! *Gives bouquet to Ninjoy*
Ninjoy: *Throws it to the river* As if I gonna accept!! No way I'm gonna be your date!!
The Dynamoe: Well, what would happened if I pressed button? *Holds a remote*
Ninjoy: Huh!?
The Dynamoe: Each of the kidnapped people had a collar and collar in it has a bomb. And if I pressed the button...boom!! But I wouldn't pressed the button. *Gives another bouquet* If you go out for me.
Ninjoy: Fine...until midnight, that's it!! Angry
The Dynamoe: I'll accept my lady, but you need to changed.
Ninjoy: What?
The Dynamoe: It's a date and you need to dressed up.
Ninjoy: No way!! My identity will be revealed to Flipverse!!
The Dynamoe: *Holds a remote*
Ninjoy: Even if I accept, where would I find a dress?!
The Dynamoe: A gift for you in the closet, don't worry...I wouldn't look.
Ninjoy: Yeah right!! Creep… *Closed the door* (Woah, so this the dress...it match my ninja outfit. Wait?) *Sees the price tag* (He stole it from Fashion Flambé!! A gentleman and a thief!! I wonder what Moe would be like if he is romantic.)
Date Night:
Few minutes later

Ninjoy: *In the dress* The mask stays!!
The Dynamoe: *In his tuxedo* Excellent!!
Ninjoy: You changed too?!
The Dynamoe: Come on my lady, you can’t be the only one changed. But i still keep the mask.
Ninjoy: *Sees the time which is 9:45 PM* Can we just start!?
The Dynamoe: Right away in the gondolier with Deano the gondolier, set with the romano music, cooked by the employees of Papa’s Pastaria, and flowers from Julep.
Ninjoy: So that’s why you kidnapped those people? And why does Julep need to be here?!
The Dynamoe: Well i need a good florist, so that’s why i kidnapped her. Let’s get started...
Deano: Psst...help.
Ninjoy: Don’t worry, i’ll do everything it takes.

Few minutes later

The Dynamoe: So do you like what i did?
Ninjoy: No…
The Dynamoe: What about the food?
Ninjoy: I love it...because it was cooked by the chefs who are kidnapped by you.
The Dynamoe: Come on my lady, we only ate and listen to music. Maybe we should talked about ourselves. Like...who we really are.
Ninjoy: Do you really want our secret identities to be known?!
The Dynamoe: No…*Went close to Ninjoy* But we can keep eachother a secret. *About to kiss*
Ninjoy: That’s it!! *Punch the Dynamoe in the stomach*
The Dynamoe: Owwww!!
Ninjoy: Give me the remote!!
The Dynamoe: Never!! Since you didn’t want to be my date, i’ll-
Ninjoy: *Use the nunchucks to hit the Dynamoe in the face*
The Dynamoe: *Grabs Ninjoy’s arm and throws her to the river*
Ninjoy: Some gentleman!!
The Dynamoe: Now...time to-
Ninjoy: *Use the shuriken to hit the remote but accidental starts it* Oh no!!
Deano: *Holds his neck but realized the collar has confettis* Huh!?
The Dynamoe: Bwahahahahahahaha!! You should have seen your faces!! You really think i’m that type of person!! I’m just messing with the bomb thing!! Hahahahahaha!! Laugh
Ninjoy: I wasted the night just to protect those people from the collar...that doesn’t have bombs!! *Grabs the Dynamoe’s arms and pulls him to the river* Angry
Deano: So...am i gonna stand here or-?
Ninjoy: *Grabs his neck and shakes on it* This is what i feel about you everyday!!
The Dynamoe: *Grabs her head and kiss her in the lips*
Deano: This is uncomfortable…
Shannon: *Walks by and saw those two kissing* Huh? *Pictures those two and films them*
Ninjoy: What!? Why you-!?
The Dynamoe: I got my wish. Bye my lady!! *Use the grappling hook and escape*

Few minutes later

Ninjoy: I’m sorry i let the criminal get away...again!!
Papa Louie: It’s okay...atleast you saved us.
Trishna: *Runs by and saw the dress* Is that a stolen dress!? Angry
Ninjoy: I forgot about the dress!!
Papa Louie: That’s okay, i’ll pay for it.
Ninjoy: Thanks Un- i mean, Papa Louie.
The Next Day:
In Papa’s Pizzeria

Moe: (I can’t stop thinking about last night, so amazing that i did that.)
Joy: Here’s your pizza… *Gives pizzas to Moe*
Moe: Thanks...why are you look sleepy?
Joy: Bad dream, what about you?
Moe: Bad dream too.
Joy: Hey!! We got something incommon!! I mean no we don’t!! I mean-
News:
Duke Gotcha: Last night, the captive people had been found by Ninjoy. But unfortunately, the Dynamoe escaped. We would interview Ninjoy, but you already know why. So here are the people who are captive.
...
Julep: It was scary.
...
Little Eduardo: But atleast we’re saved by her.
...
Gino: I don’t know what do say…

Bruna: That villain forced to do some date thing.

Carlo: The Dynamoe kidnapped us for us to do a song.

Utah: I’m Utah!!

Doan: He forced us to cooked pastas.

Papa Louie: Could those two be a couple?
...
Deano: I saw those two kissed.

Duke Gotcha: And there we had it, it might be possible those two are a couple. Well, it seems like once again, Duke...GOTCHAAAH!!
Joy: I need to go… (I can’t believe that idiot!!) *Left* Angry
Moe: I need to plan more…*Eats a slice of pizza* Cool
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« Reply #9 on: May 16, 2018, 10:32:56 AM »

This was also my favorite from the very first lines Laugh "Another failed crime thanks to Ninjoy"
also, I think you meant 30 minutes later (ago refers to the past)
anyway you gave me an idea with the pizza delivery thing, i think in my story Moe's about to learn that Joy delivers pizza LOL. also maybe the stolen gifts thing, that would work well.

the whole "kidnapped people for our date" thing is super troll and funny and different from my fanfic ;p the only part I don't like is that he uses the threats to get her to agree even though of course he didn't hurt anyone badly, I'm thinking of something a bit more gentlemanly.

anyway it's still the best skit I've seen so far Tongue and the "Utah: I'm Utah!!" is also hilarious.

too many comments lmao
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« Reply #10 on: May 16, 2018, 05:23:39 PM »

This was also my favorite from the very first lines Laugh "Another failed crime thanks to Ninjoy"
also, I think you meant 30 minutes later (ago refers to the past)
anyway you gave me an idea with the pizza delivery thing, i think in my story Moe's about to learn that Joy delivers pizza LOL. also maybe the stolen gifts thing, that would work well.

the whole "kidnapped people for our date" thing is super troll and funny and different from my fanfic ;p the only part I don't like is that he uses the threats to get her to agree even though of course he didn't hurt anyone badly, I'm thinking of something a bit more gentlemanly.

anyway it's still the best skit I've seen so far Tongue and the "Utah: I'm Utah!!" is also hilarious.

too many comments lmao
I edit the ago to later, and thanks for using that idea.

And my headcanon about the Dynamoe that he is also a gentleman but he sometimes a trickster, liar, and mischievous. The date is quite too funny.

The "Utah: I'm Utah!!" I'm using for some naive laughs...I hope you requested more.
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« Reply #11 on: May 18, 2018, 02:59:14 AM »

story how Rudy/Scarlett met? or just how Papa Louie decide to be a chef
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« Reply #12 on: May 18, 2018, 03:00:25 AM »

story how Rudy/Scarlett met? or just how Papa Louie decide to be a chef
Sorry, but I don't have any ideas about the origins. Maybe I should add a rule about origins. Try another one.
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« Reply #13 on: June 05, 2018, 07:44:46 PM »

Half of the Foodie Crew disappears (please don't make all boys or all girls disappear, try to mix it up)
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« Reply #14 on: June 06, 2018, 08:18:13 AM »

and poor Steven, the only male customerpalooza entry, you should do a separate skit about him! in fact that's my next request muwahaha
Well here it is...my apologize if it is not good or not.

Escape of Love

Morning time:
In Steven’s apartment

Steven: *Wakes up* Morning already. *Hears a ringtone* *Grabs the phone* Hello?
Whiff: Hey Steven, it's me Whiff. I have free time and maybe we should hang for awhile. Wanna work out at Fitz Frenzy Gym?
Steven: Sure, good thing it's my day off from work.
Whiff: Alright, let's meet at the entrance 10:00 am. Okay?
Steven: Okay.

At the entrance of Whiskview Mall

Steven: Hey there Whiff. Nice day...am I right?
Whiff: Right.
Steven: Anyways, I bought some water bottles and-
Elle: Steven?!
Steven: Oh no.
Whiff: Here we go again.
Elle: OH MY GOSH!! Hope!! Yuri!! Amy!! Steven is here!!
Amy: Really?!
Yui: Hi Steven!!
Hope: Do you miss us?
Steven: Yes I miss you girls...and- ahhhhhhh!! *Went inside*
Hope, Yui, Elle, and Amy: STEVEN!! *Followed him*
The Chase:
In Whiskview Mall

Steven: *Ran away* (Need to hide) *Went inside Smellbound*
Amy: Hey Cherissa, have you seen Steven?
Cherissa: I'm sorry...no. Do you want a free sample of my perfume?
Amy: Hm...can you spray it for me?
Cherissa: Sure. *Sprays Amy*
Steven: *Smells the spray* Oh no. ACHOO!!
Amy: Wait? Is that-
Steven: *Ran away*
Amy: Steven!! Wait!?

In Fashion Flambé

Steven: Trishna!?
Trishna: Let me guess...your girlfriends?
Steven: Just let me hide!!
Trishna: Look, I can't keep doing this.
Steven: I'll do anything!! Just let me hide!!
Penelope: Hey Trishna. *Whispers to Trishna*
Trishna: Good idea, fine Steven. *Gives the paper* Fashion Flambé needs two men to be model for our summer sale. I got Chuck onboard, so we need you.
Penelope: Accept it and you can hide in the back of the counter*
Steven: Alright. *Takes the paper and hides in the back of the counter*
Elle: Hey Trishna, hey...P-Penelope.
Penelope: *Glares at her*
Elle: Have you see-
Penelope: We haven't seen your stupid boyfriend. And if you're not interested in buying some clothes. Leave!!
Elle: :’( *Ran away*
Steven: That's so mean. Sure she might be crazy inlove to me, but she's just a teenager.
Penelope: I don't care.
Steven: I think I should leave.
Trishna: Don't forget our agreement. It's on Monday by the way.
Steven: Okay.

In Fitz Frenzy Gym

Whiff: Are the girls gone?
Steven: I hope they do, I want a break.
Whiff: Let's start with the-
Yui: Oh hey Steven!!
Steven: Y-Yui!? *Rans away*
Yui: *Tackles him* Oh Steven!! Please don't run away from us!!
Steven: Um...hey look, a Munchmore Attack!!
Yui: R-really?! *Prepares her crossbow* Where are they?
Whiff: Why do you have crossbow in a place like this?!
Steven: *Ran away*

In BloopMobile

Blueberry: I'm guessing it's about the girls.
Steven: Yeah.
Blueberry: Well I want to help, but I don't know what to do.
Steven: Maybe you can-
Hope: Steven? I found you!!
Amy, Elle, and Yui: Steven!!
Steven: Gonna go fast!!
Blueberry: Wait!? You gonna ran to the-
Steven: *Accidentally ran to the door and fainted*
The next day:
In the hospital

Steven: Ugh...my head. What happened?
Whiff: You ran to the door and got unconscious. Luckily the girls take you to the hospital.
Steven: Wait?! Where the girls?!
Whiff: They all left few hours ago and gave you some gifts. They wanted to leave you alone for awhile for you to take a break. I explained about it and they accept it.
Steven: Oh...thanks.
Whiff: No problem. You need to go.
Steven: Alright.
Note:

This topic was requested outside the topic. Penelope and Blueberry are my fan characters.
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