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« on: April 28, 2018, 04:12:42 AM »


WELCOME!!

Welcome to the revised version of Papa's Gamerias Shorts. Have fun reading.
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« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2018, 04:14:48 AM »


Mystery In Georgito’s Mansion

Georgito’s Birthday:
In Georgito’s Mansion

Duke Gotcha: *Knockes the door*
Butler: *Opens the door* Oh hello Mr. Gotcha and Ms. Shannon. Come right in.
Duke Gotcha: *Went inside* I can't believe we're invited to Georgito’s birthday party.
Shannon: Well we did found out who stole his expensive golden monocle.
Duke Gotcha: Though, I hope he loves the gift we got for him. It's really hard to give a businessman a gift since he got like...everything.
Shannon: Well I hope he love ours.
Duke Gotcha: Ours?
Shannon: I'm the one who picked out the gift, and you're the one who bought it.
Duke Gotcha: Okay then.

In the Dining Room

Duke Gotcha: Huh? Mayor Mallow? Jojo? Papa Louie? It's good to see you here.
Mayor Mallow: Yeah...we're invited to this party. I don't really going to this party but I can denied a invite.
Jojo: But the party will be amazing.
Papa Louie: Stop talking!! I'm thinking right now!!
Duke Gotcha: Um...is it me or are they different?
Shannon: Yeah. Mayor Mallow acting sarcastic, Jojo being so happy, and Papa Louie being grumpy.
Duke Gotcha: Not only that, the guest are only 5 including me and you.
Shannon: You're right. I wonder why.
Georgito: Hello my friends, welcome to my birthday party.
Papa Louie: It’s not really a birthday party, since you freaking have only 5 guest!!
Georgito: Um...you don't have to yell!! And is it me or you look fat?
Papa Louie: Are you judging someone’s looks now?!
Georgiito: Sorry Papa Louie!! Anyways, it was supposed to be more than 15 people but the others denied their invite since their busy.
Jojo: That's okay, you got us to celebrate your party.
Georgito: Um...thanks. Anyways, let's have dinner.

Few minutes later

Duke Gotcha: Those food, so delicious.
Shannon: It’s been so long since I ate rich people’s food.
Jojo: Hey Mayor Mallow, why aren't you eating?
Mayor Mallow: I'm not in a mood for eating.
Papa Louie: Well that’s because you getting fatter.
Mayor Mallow: What did you just said?!
Papa Louie: Be quiet you fool!!
Mayor Mallow: Fool!! You're the fool!!
Papa Louie: You're making noise here!!
Shannon: Is Jojo...staring at me weird?
Duke Gotcha: What?! She's mi- I mean, she's too young for you!!
Jojo: Um…
Georgito: Okay!! You three stop trying to ar-
Jojo, Mayor Mallow, and Papa Louie: Shut up!!
Butler: Gentlemen!! I don't think it's a best time to-
Georgito: Wait a minute!? Those items are priceless!! Stop already!! Don't break the things!! Papa Louie!! Don't try use the vase!!

*LIGHTS OFF*

Shannon: What the-?! *Picture in the dark with the flash*
Duke Gotcha: Why are the lights turn off!?
Huh?: Ahhhhhhh!!
Shannon: Don't scream at me Duke Gotcha!!
Duke Gotcha: That wasn't me!!

*LIGHTS ON*

Duke Gotcha: Are you okay Shannon?
Shannon: I'm fine Duke- Ahhhhhh!!
Duke Gotcha: What is it? Why are you- oh no? Is he...is-?
Someone is-:
Shannon: Georgito dead? I think so.
Mayor Mallow: If you didn't think so, maybe he is alive this all time.
Duke Gotcha: Hey respect the death!!
Jojo: I feel bad for him. Oh well!! There are plenty of people who are alive
Shannon: What is wrong with you?!
Papa Louie: I'm out of here!! *Tries to open the door* Wait? It's lock!! I can't open it!!
Duke Gotcha: What?! Shannon, try open the other door *Tries to open the door*
Shannon: It's locked here too!!
Duke Gotcha: Since those two doors are the only exit. That means...one of us is the murderer. Meaning all of us are suspects.
Papa Louie: Are saying everyone including you guys are suspects?
Duke Gotcha: Yeah, and I mean- including us!!
Shannon: I understand Duke Gotcha. Let's see, blood is around Georgito’s body and appears to not suffered other external injuries but only internal.
Mayor Mallow: So what?
Shannon: Though I maybe not be a coroner...I think the cause of death is blunt force trauma using...the broken vase.
Duke Gotcha: So it might be someone who grabbed the vase. As in...Papa Louie.
Papa Louie: Wait!? I didn't do it!!
Shannon: Are you sure? Because I scanning the fingerprints using the powder I have, and it appears there is no fingerprints.
Papa Louie: But there's no proof it isn't me-
Duke Gotcha: You're wearing gloves? That's funny, isn't it.
Papa Louie: So-so? The reason I wore gloves is because-
Shannon: Say? What's this in the broken vase? A coupon...to Mortadello’s Meat Pies?
Duke Gotcha: Why would a coupon be here anyways? Unless...Shannon, help me unmasked Papa Louie.
Papa Louie: Wait? What are you guys?! Hey let go!, just leave me alo-
Duke Gotcha and Shannon: Huh?! Guy Mortadello!! You're here!!
Guy Mortadello: Yeah yeah!! It's me!! I disguise myself as Papa Louie to be I this party!!
Shannon: What?! Why?!
Guy Mortadello: Georgito rejected on sharing a business with me. When I saw Papa Louie’s invitation, I stole it, disguise myself, and give Georgito a present.
Mayor Mallow and Jojo: Which is?
Guy Mortadello: My famous meat pies!! Since he never try it, maybe he can try my pies and change his mind. And since his death, you guys have to try it.
Duke Gotcha: Ewwww!! No!! Anyways, if he did to it. Then what about the lights, Georgito died during the blackout meaning...someone is near the lights.
Jojo: But the light switch isn't here. And I do remember not seeing the light switch near the doors outside. Plus, it will take few minutes to get to the light switch.
Shannon: Yeah, you're right. The blackout took few seconds to be done.
Duke Gotcha: Say the picture frame fell. What's this? It's a electrical system.
Shannon: Say, I did took a pictures from my camera.
Guy Mortadello: And you just said it now!!
Shannon: Here!!
Duke Gotcha: Hm...huh? That's weird, Jojo took off the picture frame.
Jojo: What me?!
Shannon: Well it can't be the others!! So it has to be you!!
Duke Gotcha: And why did you do it!?
Jojo: Um, well. Um, huh? I-No way i...oh well. I guess I have no choice but to revealed myself.
Duke Gotcha: What?! The Dynamoe!! Here!!
The Dynamoe: Yes I'm here gotcha man!! The Dynamoe, the most famous criminal ever!!
Shannon: Well that explains why he flirted me.
Duke Gotcha: How dare you flirted her?! And why are you here!?
The Dynamoe: Oh, I'm planning on stealing the golden monocle...again.
Guy Mortadello: What's so special about the monocle?
The Dynamoe: I'm also planning on stealing the greatest diamond he had.
Mayor Mallow: How did you got here anyways?
The Dynamoe: Same way as my best friend Guy. Except it's Jojo.
Guy Mortadello: I was never your best friend.
The Dynamoe: Anyways, I mess with the electrical system and created a blackout, it was supposed to be long using the night vision mask-
Shannon: Night vision mask?
The Dynamoe: Wanna know dear?
Duke Gotcha: Hey!! Start talking!!
The Dynamoe: But that's when the door was locked, so I decided to turn on the electrical system to make sure why and you already know what happened next.
Duke Gotcha: I see…explaining the blackout.
Shannon: Say, what's this? A leaf?
Duke Gotcha: But there aren't plants in it.
The Dynamoe: Wooo...what does it mean?
Guy Mortadello: Why is there a stupid leaf in this stupid flo-
Mayor Mallow: I can't take it anymore!! *Takes off his disguise*
Duke Gotcha: What the-!?
Shannon: R-Radley Madish!?
Radley Madish: Yes!! It’s me...Radley Madish!! As you may know, i’m the one who kidnapped the customers and being victor-
All except Radley Madish: We get it!!
Duke Gotcha: Anyways, what are you doing?
Shannon: Yeah, what is your business with Georgito?
Radley Madish: I don’t have business with Georgito, i have business with Papa Louie since i heard he was invited in this party. So like those idiots.
The Dynamoe and Guy Mortadello: Idiots?!
Radley Madish: I stole that Mallow Man’s invitation, dressed up as him, and with the warp coin...i would have kidnapped Papa Louie. But there...Papa Louie isn’t here!!
Guy Mortadello: Whatever.
Duke Gotcha: It might be possible that it’s a accidental death. And those three’s motive aren’t-
Georgito: Ugh...what happened?
Shannon: G-georgito!? You’re alive!?
Georgito: Of course i’m alive, you think i’m death?
Duke Gotcha: Oh yeah, i forgot to checked the pulse.
Guy Mortadello: Wasted of time!!
Georgito: Wait? What are those three doing here?
Guy Mortadello: Um…
Radley Madish: Well…
The Dynamoe: You see...smoke bombs!! *Throws the bomb to the wall and left with Guy Mordatello and Radley Madish*
Duke Gotcha: Will...explain this to you later.
Secret Ending:
Outside the Mansion

Wayne: *Holds the jewel* I, Wayne, stole Georgito’s golden monocle. Like most mansion mystery, the butler did it.
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« Reply #2 on: May 02, 2018, 08:34:55 AM »

Oh so you have a new topic, interesting (I'll read it all when I have more time.)
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« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2018, 04:42:51 AM »


Punch Till' You Ge Whip

Night-time:
In Tastyville

LePete: And that’s how i won the tournament.
Sarge Fan: None of it is true!!
LePete: How do you know!? You’re sleeping during the tournament!! Angry
Sarge Fan: Oh shut- Angry
Radlynn: Boys!! Boys!! No need to fight!! Let’s chill and have some pizzas.
LePete: Well since today is friday, i’ll order the pizza!! Pizzas!! *Went inside Papa’s Pizzeria* Hooray
Sarge Fan: Don’t order too much pineapples!! Angry
Radlynn: Wait, isn’t today tuesday? Hey Le-
Sarge Fan: Shoo!! Shoo!! Let’s just see… Evil

In Papa’s Pizzeria

LePete: Hey there loyd!! Cool
Roy: LePete!! I told you my name is Roy!! Sad
LePete: Whatever!! I’ll have...Traditional Crust, BBQ Sauce with Grated Parmesan Cheese, 4 Sausages (bottom), 6 First Holiday Topping (top), 4 Second Holiday Topping (top), 3 Cajun Shrimps (bottom right), Regular Bake, and 4 Slices. Cool
Roy: LePete, today is tuesday and it’s not even your day.
LePete: So?
Roy: So, you’re a closer and closer always order in one restaurant every week. And since today isn’t your day, than you’re not gonna order.
LePete: Oh really!! Then who’s day is today?!
Whiff: Sorry i’m late Roy, i have to meet with my girlfriend.
Roy: I understand, what do you want?
Whiff: I’ll have…Holiday Crust, Creamy Garlic Sauce with Provolone Cheese, 8 Pepperoni (right), 8 Second Holiday Topping (bottom), 3 Smoked Salmon (top left), Regular Bake, and 8 Slices.
Roy: Coming right up. *Went to the kitchen*
Whiff: *Looks at LePete who’s staring at Whiff* Oh...you look so cute!! *Rubs his helmet* :3
LePete: Nobody calls me cute!! Angry
Whiff: Sorry kiddo, you must be LePete...Luau LePunch fan.
LePete: That’s right!! Luau LePunch is the best boss ever!! He’s strong and he doesn’t need a army!!
Whiff: Good for you kid, say Roy...one more pizza for the kid.
Roy: Fine…
LePete: Hey!! Why are being generous!? Are trying to make me your fan?! Never!! Luau LePunch will always be my hero!! Angry
Whiff: What!? No!! I’m just being generous because you look tough!!
LePete: Oh...well thank you for thinking i’m tough. I’m stronger than you!! Cool
Whiff: Well if you’re stronger than me, then you need muscles like this. *Shows muscles* Cool
LePete: Woah!! I wanted muscles!! Shocked
Whiff: Maybe we should worked out together. Tomorrow morning in Whiskview park, you’re in it.
LePete: Heck yeah!! So i will be stronger than you!! Cool
Whiff: You’re cute!! :3
LePete: Stop calling me that!! Angry
The Next Day:
In Whiskview Park

Whiff: Hey kiddo, good to see you again!!
LePete: Good to see you too Whiff the Whip Cream.
Whiff: I haven’t even told you my name, how did you know?
LePete: Jojo told me...so anyways, what should we do? Punch someone in the face!! Evil
Whiff: No...jogging.
LePete: Jogging!? That’s boring!! Sad
Whiff: Come on...jugging can refresh your mind and maybe some little adventure.
LePete: Whip Cream, Whip Cream, it’s still boring.
Whiff: Don’t call me Whip Cream.
LePete: But your girlfriend called you Whip Cream.
Whiff: Because she’s my girlfriend, and how did you know i have a girlfriend?
LePete: Jojo told me.
Whiff: Look!! Let’s just start jogging!!
LePete: Boring!!

Few minutes later

LePete: Amazing!! Seeing the outdoors is amazing!!
Whiff: I told you!! Want a bottle of water?
LePete: Yep.  *Grabs the bottle of water and drinks it*
Mindy: Hi Whip Cream!!
Whiff: Hi there Mintley Mindy!! Hello Mary!! Hello...you.
Sue: Angry
Mindy: What are you doing?
Whiff: I’m just training the kid to be beefy.
Mary: You mean that Munchmore fan.
Whiff: Exactly.
Mindy: Well… *Kiss Whiff* Goodbye!!
Whiff: Goodbye friends...and Sue.
Sue: Angry *Leaves with Mindy and Sue*
Whiff: Okay LePete!! Let’s go do some push-ups!!
LePete: Okay Whipping!!
Whiff: Huh!?
LePete: You don’t want Whip Cream so Whipping is great.
Whiff:
LePete: Let’s just do some push-ups.

Few minutes later

Whiff: 88...189...190-
LePete: *Falls down*
Whiff: Yikes!! I’ll grab another bottle of water!! *Left*
LePete: *Inhale and exhale*
Radlynn: LePete!!
LePete: R-Radlynn!! Um… *Takes off his shirt* What’s up Rad? I’m just doing some exercise…
Radlynn: Sweet!! I do like a guy who works out.
LePete: Oh...yeah. Cheery
Whiff: Here’s a bottle of water…
LePete: *Grabs a bottle of water* Thanks…
Whiff: Oh hey Radlynn!!
Radlynn: Hey Whiff, are you guys working out together?
Whiff: Of course, i’m just training your boyfriend to get beefy.
Radlynn: Hah hah hah, he’s not my boyfriend. He’s my friend.
LePete: Yeah!! Friend. Cheery
Radlynn: Bye!! *Left*
LePete: Bye!! Cheery
Whiff: Let’s do some exericse!!
LePete: Okay!!
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I headcanon this two being good friend. I hope i do more good shorts.
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« Reply #4 on: May 15, 2018, 08:12:47 AM »

ROFL, the Whiff and LePete. also "Jojo told me", is your version of Jojo really that talkative? ;p also lol because Whiff doesn't like Sue. also LePete is like 10 in my headcanon so kinda too young for a 14-16 year old Radlynn Laugh
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« Reply #5 on: May 15, 2018, 08:20:09 AM »

ROFL, the Whiff and LePete. also "Jojo told me", is your version of Jojo really that talkative? ;p also lol because Whiff doesn't like Sue. also LePete is like 10 in my headcanon so kinda too young for a 14-16 year old Radlynn Laugh
Yeah, I think those two would be nice to be good friends since LePete wants to be strong like Luau LePunch and Whiff is buffy.

The "Jojo told me" well, I think LePete asked Jojo about him...making Jojo being annoyed about his question.

I headcanon that Sue and Whiff don't like eachother, my headcanon of Sue is a lady who's been annoyed by crazy random people even if it is Whiff. And I also headcanon that Mindy are best friends with Sue and Mary, making Sue overprotective from Whiff.

As for the age, well I also think he's a kid but he does have crush on Radlynn. The same goes to Sarge Fan (Except the kid thing) which they fought eachother for Radlynn.
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« Reply #6 on: May 15, 2018, 10:23:20 AM »

The Mansion Mystery thing reminded me of something... I just forgot what....

Also LePete just got friendzoned Laugh
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« Reply #7 on: May 17, 2018, 08:06:08 AM »

Yeah, I think those two would be nice to be good friends since LePete wants to be strong like Luau LePunch and Whiff is buffy.

The "Jojo told me" well, I think LePete asked Jojo about him...making Jojo being annoyed about his question.

I headcanon that Sue and Whiff don't like eachother, my headcanon of Sue is a lady who's been annoyed by crazy random people even if it is Whiff. And I also headcanon that Mindy are best friends with Sue and Mary, making Sue overprotective from Whiff.

As for the age, well I also think he's a kid but he does have crush on Radlynn. The same goes to Sarge Fan (Except the kid thing) which they fought eachother for Radlynn.
lol. but yeah Mindy would be friends with Sue, Mindy's the hairdresser and in her flipdeck she's cutting Sue's hair ;p so I also agree with that. even the silly crush thing makes sense, and it's funny
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« Reply #8 on: May 19, 2018, 01:08:05 AM »

The Mansion Mystery thing reminded me of something... I just forgot what....

Also LePete just got friendzoned Laugh
Well i got the idea from on of the episodes from Ducktales. And yes, it's funny that he got friendzoned.
lol. but yeah Mindy would be friends with Sue, Mindy's the hairdresser and in her flipdeck she's cutting Sue's hair ;p so I also agree with that. even the silly crush thing makes sense, and it's funny
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« Reply #9 on: May 19, 2018, 01:10:22 AM »


Flipline Fairy Tales I: Xolo and Xandra

A Rainy Day:
In Greg’s Apartment

Nick: *Keeps changing the channel*
Greg: Nothing to watch TV.
Yippy: We could go outside but it’s raining.
Nick: *Sees a TV show* Hey!! There’s a TV show called ”The Perv-
Cooper: Don’t watch that show!! *Turns off the TV* Maybe you guys should play some board games.
Nick, Greg, and Yippy: Nah!!
Cooper: Card games?
Nick, Greg, and Yippy: Nah!!
Cooper: Reading fairytale books.
Greg: Cooper, we’re too old for this kind of books.
Cooper: You never too old to read fairytale books. Like my favorite, Rapunzel.
Greg: The reason is because you imagine that Rapunzel is Prudence and the prince is you.
Cooper: Oh shut up!! *Leave*
Yippy: Hey guys!! Maybe we should rewrite the fairytale stories with some of Papa Louie’s customers as fairytale characters. It might be interesting to let go our imagination.
Greg: Hm...great idea. What do you say?
Nick: Well then...let’s start.

1 hour later

Yippy: Are you boys done?
Greg and Nick: Yep!!
Yippy: Who would go first?
Nick: I’ll go first…
Greg: So what fairytale are doing?
Nick: My version of Hansel and Gretel...Xolo and Xandra.
Xolo and Xandra:
Once Upon a time, there were two twins named Xolo and Xandra. They were taken care by their mother, Edna. One day, they were playing in the forest and keep playing and playing till’ they got lost. Nowhere to find home, they just walked around the forest.

Xandra: I blame you for this.
Xolo: What!? Why me!?
Xandra: Because you’re the older twin.
Xolo: You’re the older twin, i’m the younger twin. And it was your idea to play in the forest.

They been arguing for so long that they encountered a house made out of gingerbread. A gingerbread house.

Xandra: Wow!!
Xolo: Am i dreaming or-?
Xandra: Stop talking!! Let’s eat it!!
Xolo: Yeah!!

Xandra tear out a candy cane and lick it, while Xolo taste the whip cream. They never realized that a radish in a sorceress outfit came out from the house.

Radley Madish: Oh my, what happened to you kids?
Xandra: Um...ma’am. We’re young adults.
Radley Madish: I’m so...Ma’am? I am a “sir”.
Xolo: Well you do like a woman due to the dress.
Radley Madish: It’s a cloak, nevermind that. Come in, you must be hungry. Help yourself in my home.

In the Gingerbread house

Xandra: This is your home?
Radley Madish: Yes...Why?
Xandra: Well, it’s strange for a turnip guy to owned a gingerbread house.
Radley Madish: I’m a radish.
Xolo: What’s the difference?
Radley Madish: Nevermind, now you two...what are your names?
Xandra: My name is Xandra and this is my twin brother Xolo.
Xolo: Hey!!
Radley Madish: My name is Radley Madish, and i’ll be your caretaker for a while till’ your family is here. Sounds good?
Xandra and Xolo: Good!!
Radley Madish: Now you kids, have some desserts. *Shows them the table with many pastries, ice cream, and many more*
Xandra and Xolo: Wow!!
Xandra: I call the ice cream!!
Xolo: I call the cookies!!

The twins didn’t know that the wicked witch was using them for his diabolical plan...but what it is?

Radley Madish:  I’m a sorcerer, not a witch you little bi-

Hey!! Keep this PG, this is a children’s fairytale book.

Radley Madish: In the original fairy tales, they aren’t children’s books but instead-

Okay!! That’s enough!! So anyways, the wicked sorceress took the twins to the guest room for them to have a good night sleep.

In the guest room

Radley Madish: Xandy…
Xandra: Xandra…
Radley Madish: Whatever...you’ll be sleeping here.
Xandra: Awesome!!
Xolo: What about me?
Radley Madish: Follow me, i’ll lead to your room.
Xolo: Sure… *Leave with Radley Madish*
Xandra: *Went to her bed* Now, time for some zzzzzs!!

Few hours later

Xandra: *Wakes up* Huh? It’s night time, hm...maybe i should go and see my brother.

Xandra left the guest room and look around the house to find her brother. She keep looking and looking, and nowhere to be found till’ she heard something.

??: Xandra!!
Xandra: Xolo?
Xolo: Help!!

She followed the sound of her brother which it came from the basement. She look and saw her brother in the cage and evil sorceress mixing on a big cauldron. Xandra hide behind the boxes and see what happened.

Xolo: Xandra!!
Radley Madish: Oh be quiet you!! No one will stop about my evil plan!!
Xolo: What are you gonna do with me!? Eat me!!
Radley Madish: Eat you? No way!! I don’t eat humans!! Why did you think i’m gonna eat you!?
Xolo: Maybe because there’s a cauldron...and might get revenge to humans who eat your kind...and because i’m fat?
Radley Madish: Nevermind, the point is...i’m using you for my experiment to turned a human into a munchmore creature.
Xolo: That's stupid.
Radley Madish: Stupid!? Atleast I have the brains, unlike you!!
Xolo: *Sees Xandra*
Xandra: Shhhhhh!!
Xolo: Um...Radley, what's with the oven over there?
Radley Madish: Oh this, I'm using this for some experiment. *Opens the oven*
Xolo: So you don't bake or something.
Radley Madish: I'm a vegetable, I don't cook. *Puts on fire*
Xolo: Then what about those treats you gave us?
Radley Madish: I stole it from that bakery so you kids could have it.
Xolo: For what reason?
Radley Madish: I don't know, maybe-
Xandra: *Push Radley to the oven* Take that!! *Closed the oven*
Radley Madish: Hey!! Get me out of here!!
Xandra: *Grabs the key and unlocks the cage*
Xolo: Thanks!! Let's get out of here!!

The twins left the sorcerer’s house and ran so fast away from that place. They keep running and running till they saw a old woman, they realized it's their mother.

Xandra and Xolo: Mom!!
Edna: Xandra and Xolo!! *Hugs them* Good thing I found you two!!
Xandra: Of course, we wouldn't get lost again.
Xolo: We miss you.
Edna: Now let’s go home.

The twins went home with their mother and everyone live happily ever after. Well except for the sorcerer since he was burned to death.

Radley Madish: *Opens the oven* Burned to death?! I'm alive you idiot!! But since the story is over, I'm done here.
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This is gonna be a three parter story, so expect for two more. Greg’s story is next by the way, so I hope you enjoy and comment about the story.
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« Reply #10 on: May 19, 2018, 06:36:43 AM »

Well i got the idea from on of the episodes from Ducktales.
Knew it! No wonder why it was so familiar..

I like how Radley Madish is talking to the narrator Laugh
And the fact that this was supposed to have swear words lol Laugh

I cant wait for Yippy and Greg's stories
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« Reply #11 on: May 19, 2018, 10:08:52 AM »

LOL "you imagine that Rapunzel is Prudence"
also i love the idea of Xolo and Xandra as Hansel and Gretel Laugh have you read my flipline fairy tales, by the way? (if you did I don't remember when ;p)
also ROFL, the end is hilarious
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« Reply #12 on: May 19, 2018, 10:14:59 AM »

Knew it! No wonder why it was so familiar..

I like how Radley Madish is talking to the narrator Laugh
And the fact that this was supposed to have swear words lol Laugh

I cant wait for Yippy and Greg's stories
Yeah, I wanted some fourth walls. As for the swear words, well...I wanted this fanfic to be PG for all viewers.
LOL "you imagine that Rapunzel is Prudence"
also i love the idea of Xolo and Xandra as Hansel and Gretel Laugh have you read my flipline fairy tales, by the way? (if you did I don't remember when ;p)
also ROFL, the end is hilarious
Well Hansel and Gretel are siblings so i decided to used the twins. And I love the ending, I don't really like how the witch died so I decided for him to be alive...just burned.

Is your fanfic has Gremmie as Rapunzel?
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Flipline Tales II: Julep White and the 14 Chefs

Another Rainy Time:
Back to Greg’s apartment

Greg: Hahahahahahahahaha!!
Yippy: I like the fourth wall Nick and you thinking of food.
Nick: Well I'm always hungry, and the Hansel and Gretel is the best thing I can think of.
Greg: I guess you guys should listen my version.
Yippy: What kind of version?
Greg: Well I was thinking of my brother and his fellow friends from the restaurants. I think of...the version of Snow White and the 7 Dwarfs.
Nick: Oh, what's the name?
Greg: Julep White and the 14 Chefs.
Julep White and the 14 Chefs I:
Once Upon a Time, they lived a beautiful princess named Julep White. She has the fairest forest and she hopes one day she wins at her first Most Fairest Forest competition. But there is a another forest where there is a castle that was lived by the Wicked King named King Cameo. King Camoe was famous for winning the Most Fairest Forest competition for the 5th year on a row. But this year, it’s different.

In the castle

Cameo: Mirror mirror, on the wall. Who has the most fairest forest of them all?
Olivia: Oh oh!! I know!! And my answer is...not you!!
Cameo: Not me!? Why not!?
Olivia: Well...i don’t know.
Cameo: What do you mean you don’t know!? You’re the magic mirror!!
Olivia: Kidding!! Kidding!! Well there is reason why and it’s because of this...
Mirror Vision:
In the competition

Julep: Is this where i can applied for the competition?
Deano: Of course, sign here. *Gives her the paper*
Julep: Thank you. *Signs up*
Deano: I hope you beat the winning champion.
Julep: You mean King Cameo?
Deano: Yep, and you’re one of the fairest princess.
Julep: Oh...thank you.
Cameo: That princess who owns that stupid forest at the side of this fairest forest. Puh-lease, i have the best forest ever. I won 5 times in a row anyways.
Olivia: The reason you won is because you cheated using your dark magic to make the wicked forest into a enchanted forest.
Cameo: No one cares about your opinion.
Olivia: I’m the magic mirror.
Cameo: The only way to get rid of this girl is by destroying her forest using my dark magic.
Olivia: I hope you do some cackling!!
Cameo: I’m a sorcerer, not a witch. If you excuse me, i’m just gonna work on some potions. *Leave*
Olivia: Hey narrator, why did you used Cameo as the evil que-ahahahahahaha!! Sorry, i mean...why did you used Cameo as the evil king? Isn’t the villain of this story a girl?

Well it’s hard to think of a villainess of this story, thinking Cameo as the antagonist is because of his love of caramel apples and you know about the apples in this story.

Olivia: Okay then, just make him so funny.

Sure, after the evil king finished the potion. The evil king went to Julep White’s forest, pour the potion to the tree, and left. After he left, the tree became a death tree and it’s been spreading all across the forest. Julep came and saw the forest being death.

Julep: T-the forest!? What happened!? I-i…

Since she can’t complete her words, she has no choice but to leave and cried all day. The next day, the forest still same as yesterday. She has no hope on winning the contest. She decided to forfeit the competition but before she do, she decided to go to Papa’s Food Palace where it is located in her forest. When she got inside, it appears to be empty. No one besides the 14 chefs are here.

Julep: Excuse me, is the restaurant closed?
Roy: No...it’s just we don't have customers.
Julep: How come?
Tony: You're Julep White, you owned the forest...right?
Julep: Yeah.
Matt: Well, thanks to the death plants over the forest...no one wants to come here near the forest.
Julep: Yeah.
Roy: Anyways, my name is Pizzeria.
Julep: Pizzeria?
Roy: Yeah, and this is Burgeria.
Marty: Sup’
Roy: Taco Mia.
Mitch: *Sleeping in the counter*
Roy: Freezeria.
Alberto: Hello there.
Roy: Pancakeria, Wingeria, Hotdoggeria, Cup- wait? Where's Cupcakeria?
Cooper: He's fixing the toilet.
James: *In the bathroom* Only because Wingeria put his stupid sunglasses at the toilet.
Chuck: It’s not stupid, it’s great!!
Taylor: *Playing videogames*
Roy: Pastaria, Donuteria, Cheeseria, Bakeria.
Timm: Let’s dance!! *Dancing*
Tony: *Calls his wife* Okay!! Goodbye!! *Turns off the phone*
Doan: *Sketching*
Rudy: *Plays the bass*
Roy: Sushiria, and Scooperia.
Matt: Hi there!!
Carlo: Good morning princess.
Julep: Good morning to you chefs, and i’m sorry that there aren’t any customers.
Rudy: That’s okay, atleast we have freetime.
Julep: Say? What happened to the female chefs?
Tony: My wife and those girls are on a vacay this week.
Chuck: After their week, it’s our turn to have our vacay. And those girls are doing the work that week.
Matt: Wingeria, be nice.
Julep: I wished there’s a way to keep the forest...enchanted.
James: We can help, we have nothing to do here anyways.
Rudy: And this could get our customers back.
Cooper: Yeah!!
Julep: Wow!! Thanks, you shouldn't have.
Chuck: Oh really, then goodbye.
Chefs except Chuck and Mitch:Wingeria!!
Chuck: Alright alright!!
Julep: Let's hope to make the forest great!!
Julep White and the 14 Chefs II:
Few hours later in Cameo’s creepy castle.

Olivia: Pfft, creepy.
Cameo: Who are you talking to?
Olivia: The narrator.
Cameo: Um...Mirror mirror, on the wall. Who has the most fairest forest of them all?
Olivia: Oh!! It's you!! Just kidding, it's still Julep’s.
Cameo: What?! I destroyed her forest!!
Olivia: Well yeah, but thanks to her and the male chefs. They restored their forest’s glory. *Shows the vision to Cameo*
Cameo: How is that possible!?
Olivia: Fairytale logic. *Smirks*
Cameo: I guess I have no other choice.
Olivia: Give up and cry like a baby!!
Cameo: What!? No!! I'm just gonna give her a poison caramel apple. *Holds a caramel apple*
Olivia: How is that solve your problem?
Cameo: You'll see…

Back in Julep’s forest where everything is back to normal, Julep White and the chefs are celebrating their accomplished in the forest.

Julep: Thanks for saving the forest.
Carlo: No problem, anything for you.
Marty: Let's go back to work.
Julep: Okay then, goodbye.
Cameo: *Disguise as a vendor* Hello miss, lovely forest you have.
Julep: Thanks.
Cameo: Maybe some treat, on the house. *Gives caramel apple*
Julep: Thanks. *Eats the caramel apple* Huh? I feel dizzy. *Fells down*
Cameo: *Takes off his disguise* Ahahahahahahahahaha!!
Chefs: Huh?!
Roy: What did you do to her?!
Cameo: I poisoned her and fell to a deep sleep, so I can have the fairest forest of all.
Mitch: How is that solve your problem?
Cameo: Geez, if you want her back...I could tell you the way, if you destroy the forest. I guess you have no choice but to destroy the-
Matt: All we need to do is by one true love’s kiss.
Chefs except Matt: Huh?!
Cameo: What the-!? How did you-
Matt: You're not the only one with the magic mirror. *Shows them a magic mirror*
Crystal: The only way to break the eternal slumber is by one true love’s kiss.
Cooper: So who's his one true love? And it clearly isn't me, I'm saving it for Prudence.
Tony: I have a wife.
Rudy and Alberto: Girlfriends!!
Cameo: I guess I have no choice but to destroyed the forest.
Deano: I'm sorry Cameo, but you’re out of the competition!!
Cameo: What the-!? Deano!?
Deano: After buying the magic mirror, the truth came from you. Not only you're out of the competition, but I'm revoking your awards.
Cameo: Fine!! Be that way, I'm starting to hate the competition anyways. *Left*
Deano: Oh my Gosh, my dear princess. Here… *Kiss Julep in the lips*
Julep: Huh? What happened?
Deano: I'll explain everything, right now...you should go to my place and received your award.
Julep: Oh...okay.

After that, Julep White had received her award and the chefs have congratulate her at her success and they lived happily ever after.

Olivia: Happily Ever After!! Happily Ever After!! Happily-
Cameo: *In his pajamas* It's 4:00 AM in the morning, just be quiet!!
Olivia: Okay!!
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Hope you enjoyed this one, it was originally gonna be Wizard of Oz but it might take longer so I did this, and it's hard to think of a evil queen so here's that.
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« Reply #14 on: May 20, 2018, 09:31:23 AM »

Fairytale logic Laugh

damn the 4th wall keeps on breaking in this fanfic
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