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« Reply #30 on: July 22, 2018, 08:40:00 PM »

Hey everyone! I revised part 5 to make it a better reading and understanding.  Smiley
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« Reply #31 on: July 22, 2018, 11:25:11 PM »

Hey everyone! I revised part 5 to make it a better reading and understanding.  Smiley
Now it's better I think
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Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
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« Reply #32 on: July 23, 2018, 09:35:28 AM »

hmm, interesting, I bet Mr. Binkwell is up to no good.

(btw it's "you're too kind" because you're is you are, and you use "too" for stuff like "too much" and "I'll be there too" and you use to in stuff like "I'm going to sleep" and "I have to talk to you")
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« Reply #33 on: July 23, 2018, 10:33:33 AM »

hmm, interesting, I bet Mr. Binkwell is up to no good.

(btw it's "you're too kind" because you're is you are, and you use "too" for stuff like "too much" and "I'll be there too" and you use to in stuff like "I'm going to sleep" and "I have to talk to you")
Sorry about that. Just a little grammar mess up.  Smiley
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« Reply #34 on: July 31, 2018, 01:03:09 PM »

Here's part 6 made by Brother J.  Smiley








The end of part 6.
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« Reply #35 on: July 31, 2018, 06:03:33 PM »

Here's part 6 made by Brother J.  Smiley








The end of part 6.

This is really good.
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« Reply #36 on: July 31, 2018, 08:15:27 PM »

Thanks!
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« Reply #37 on: August 01, 2018, 10:17:53 PM »

Here's part 6 made by Brother J.  Smiley








The end of part 6.

It's really good, honestly but I think that as time passes by each chapter is less than the previous ones. But if the dialog just ends there then okay, if I were you I may continue this.
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Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0
Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link:
Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0
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Challenge 01: Margaret Thatcher (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 02: Swagger Owen (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 03: Modern Irish Farmer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 04: Winter Magenta Rachel (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 05: Auroral Variation (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 07: Country Singer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 08: Emily Ferguson (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 09: Maple Leafs Player (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 10: 40s Niagara Visitor (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 11: BBQ Biracial Butterfly (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 12: Outback Mustard Chic (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 13: Bollywood Bride (Submitted - Awaiting Results)
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lyric Of The Day:
There was a time, there was a life, I was inside my head
And finally I rested in your bed
The bars, the dives, the worst of vibes
I thought had come to pass
But still I couldn't seem to make it last
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« Reply #38 on: August 04, 2018, 12:22:37 AM »

This has been interesting so far. Good luck with the rest! Smiley
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« Reply #39 on: August 04, 2018, 02:43:53 PM »

What's gonna happen next. I am really anxious about learning.
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To my competitors: You can win all the battles, I just wanna win this war! ~ Bethany
Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0
Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link:
Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0
Bethany's Outfits:
Challenge 01: Margaret Thatcher (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 02: Swagger Owen (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 03: Modern Irish Farmer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 04: Winter Magenta Rachel (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 05: Auroral Variation (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 07: Country Singer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 08: Emily Ferguson (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 09: Maple Leafs Player (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 10: 40s Niagara Visitor (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 11: BBQ Biracial Butterfly (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 12: Outback Mustard Chic (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 13: Bollywood Bride (Submitted - Awaiting Results)
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lyric Of The Day:
There was a time, there was a life, I was inside my head
And finally I rested in your bed
The bars, the dives, the worst of vibes
I thought had come to pass
But still I couldn't seem to make it last
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« Reply #40 on: August 04, 2018, 05:41:07 PM »

Part 7 will be out soon!
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« Reply #41 on: August 05, 2018, 01:52:20 AM »

Part 7 will be out soon!
I hope so
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Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0
Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link:
Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0
Bethany's Outfits:
Challenge 01: Margaret Thatcher (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 02: Swagger Owen (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 03: Modern Irish Farmer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 04: Winter Magenta Rachel (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 05: Auroral Variation (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 07: Country Singer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 08: Emily Ferguson (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 09: Maple Leafs Player (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 10: 40s Niagara Visitor (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 11: BBQ Biracial Butterfly (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 12: Outback Mustard Chic (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 13: Bollywood Bride (Submitted - Awaiting Results)
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lyric Of The Day:
There was a time, there was a life, I was inside my head
And finally I rested in your bed
The bars, the dives, the worst of vibes
I thought had come to pass
But still I couldn't seem to make it last
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« Reply #42 on: August 05, 2018, 06:21:57 PM »

Here's part 7! The longest part by far!  Tongue






















The end of part 7. (Finally!)
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« Reply #43 on: August 05, 2018, 10:35:18 PM »

Here's part 7! The longest part by far!  Tongue






















The end of part 7. (Finally!)
Intriguing.
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« Reply #44 on: August 05, 2018, 10:44:59 PM »

Woah, that's the most thrilling part so far
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To my competitors: You can win all the battles, I just wanna win this war! ~ Bethany
Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0
Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link:
Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0
Bethany's Outfits:
Challenge 01: Margaret Thatcher (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 02: Swagger Owen (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 03: Modern Irish Farmer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 04: Winter Magenta Rachel (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 05: Auroral Variation (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 07: Country Singer (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 08: Emily Ferguson (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 09: Maple Leafs Player (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 10: 40s Niagara Visitor (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 11: BBQ Biracial Butterfly (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 12: Outback Mustard Chic (Submitted - Scored!)
Challenge 13: Bollywood Bride (Submitted - Awaiting Results)
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lyric Of The Day:
There was a time, there was a life, I was inside my head
And finally I rested in your bed
The bars, the dives, the worst of vibes
I thought had come to pass
But still I couldn't seem to make it last
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