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« Reply #30 on: July 22, 2018, 08:40:00 PM »

Hey everyone! I revised part 5 to make it a better reading and understanding.  Smiley
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« Reply #31 on: July 22, 2018, 11:25:11 PM »

Hey everyone! I revised part 5 to make it a better reading and understanding.  Smiley
Now it's better I think
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« Reply #32 on: July 23, 2018, 09:35:28 AM »

hmm, interesting, I bet Mr. Binkwell is up to no good.

(btw it's "you're too kind" because you're is you are, and you use "too" for stuff like "too much" and "I'll be there too" and you use to in stuff like "I'm going to sleep" and "I have to talk to you")
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« Reply #33 on: July 23, 2018, 10:33:33 AM »

hmm, interesting, I bet Mr. Binkwell is up to no good.

(btw it's "you're too kind" because you're is you are, and you use "too" for stuff like "too much" and "I'll be there too" and you use to in stuff like "I'm going to sleep" and "I have to talk to you")
Sorry about that. Just a little grammar mess up.  Smiley
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« Reply #34 on: July 31, 2018, 01:03:09 PM »

Here's part 6 made by Brother J.  Smiley








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« Reply #35 on: July 31, 2018, 06:03:33 PM »

Here's part 6 made by Brother J.  Smiley








The end of part 6.

This is really good.
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« Reply #36 on: July 31, 2018, 08:15:27 PM »

Thanks!
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« Reply #37 on: August 01, 2018, 10:17:53 PM »

Here's part 6 made by Brother J.  Smiley








The end of part 6.

It's really good, honestly but I think that as time passes by each chapter is less than the previous ones. But if the dialog just ends there then okay, if I were you I may continue this.
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Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
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I'll never remove this from my signature:
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Links:
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C01: Traveler (32/40 - Safe)
C02: Dubstep DJ (35/40 - Immunity)
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C06: Contemporary Harry Bingham (37.5/40 - Safe)
C07: Chugach Visitor (34.5/40 - Lost)
C08: Dog Musher (31.5/40 - Safe)
C09: Lopevi Influencer (36/40 - Immunity)
C11: Radjah Shelduckling (29.5/40 - Immunity)
C13: Thai Fest Tourist - Chinese New Year (32/40 - Immunity)
C15: Qatari Petroleum Businessman (36.5/40 - Safe)
C16: New Osiris (35/40 - Immunity)
C18: NAY
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!""You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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« Reply #38 on: August 04, 2018, 12:22:37 AM »

This has been interesting so far. Good luck with the rest! Smiley
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« Reply #39 on: August 04, 2018, 02:43:53 PM »

What's gonna happen next. I am really anxious about learning.
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Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
Being a perfectionist is getting em all or nothing. If it's nothing close to perfection, it doesn't deserve another thought.
I'll never remove this from my signature:
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Links:
Vote for the pals of mine you want to make it in this year's KCP: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=68951.0
Check out my Q&A topic: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0
Check out my FC topic for updates:
Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame": http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0
For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution": http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0
Chris' Outfits:
C01: Traveler (32/40 - Safe)
C02: Dubstep DJ (35/40 - Immunity)
C04: Moroccan Shopaholic - Lamps (33/40 - Lost)
C05: Environmentalist Bookworm (31/40 - Safe)
C06: Contemporary Harry Bingham (37.5/40 - Safe)
C07: Chugach Visitor (34.5/40 - Lost)
C08: Dog Musher (31.5/40 - Safe)
C09: Lopevi Influencer (36/40 - Immunity)
C11: Radjah Shelduckling (29.5/40 - Immunity)
C13: Thai Fest Tourist - Chinese New Year (32/40 - Immunity)
C15: Qatari Petroleum Businessman (36.5/40 - Safe)
C16: New Osiris (35/40 - Immunity)
C18: NAY
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!""You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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I wanna move to Gay City
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Ok. You do you
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I said, ooh, I'm blinded by the lights
No, I can't sleep until I feel your touch
I said, ooh, I'm drowning in the night
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« Reply #40 on: August 04, 2018, 05:41:07 PM »

Part 7 will be out soon!
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« Reply #41 on: August 05, 2018, 01:52:20 AM »

Part 7 will be out soon!
I hope so
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Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
Being a perfectionist is getting em all or nothing. If it's nothing close to perfection, it doesn't deserve another thought.
I'll never remove this from my signature:
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Links:
Vote for the pals of mine you want to make it in this year's KCP: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=68951.0
Check out my Q&A topic: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0
Check out my FC topic for updates:
Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame": http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0
For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution": http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0
Chris' Outfits:
C01: Traveler (32/40 - Safe)
C02: Dubstep DJ (35/40 - Immunity)
C04: Moroccan Shopaholic - Lamps (33/40 - Lost)
C05: Environmentalist Bookworm (31/40 - Safe)
C06: Contemporary Harry Bingham (37.5/40 - Safe)
C07: Chugach Visitor (34.5/40 - Lost)
C08: Dog Musher (31.5/40 - Safe)
C09: Lopevi Influencer (36/40 - Immunity)
C11: Radjah Shelduckling (29.5/40 - Immunity)
C13: Thai Fest Tourist - Chinese New Year (32/40 - Immunity)
C15: Qatari Petroleum Businessman (36.5/40 - Safe)
C16: New Osiris (35/40 - Immunity)
C18: NAY
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!""You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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I wanna move to Gay City
CeruleaM [May 02 10:43 AM]: i drive a chevrolet movie theater
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TIME TO MAKE A DEVIL FC  Evil Grin
Ok. You do you
Lyric Of The Day:
I said, ooh, I'm blinded by the lights
No, I can't sleep until I feel your touch
I said, ooh, I'm drowning in the night
Oh, when I'm like this, you're the one I trust
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« Reply #42 on: August 05, 2018, 06:21:57 PM »

Here's part 7! The longest part by far!  Tongue






















The end of part 7. (Finally!)
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« Reply #43 on: August 05, 2018, 10:35:18 PM »

Here's part 7! The longest part by far!  Tongue






















The end of part 7. (Finally!)
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« Reply #44 on: August 05, 2018, 10:44:59 PM »

Woah, that's the most thrilling part so far
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Wanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all
Being a perfectionist is getting em all or nothing. If it's nothing close to perfection, it doesn't deserve another thought.
I'll never remove this from my signature:
Dear forumers,
Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque.
Thank you!
Links:
Vote for the pals of mine you want to make it in this year's KCP: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=68951.0
Check out my Q&A topic: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0
Check out my FC topic for updates:
Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame": http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0
For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution": http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0
Chris' Outfits:
C01: Traveler (32/40 - Safe)
C02: Dubstep DJ (35/40 - Immunity)
C04: Moroccan Shopaholic - Lamps (33/40 - Lost)
C05: Environmentalist Bookworm (31/40 - Safe)
C06: Contemporary Harry Bingham (37.5/40 - Safe)
C07: Chugach Visitor (34.5/40 - Lost)
C08: Dog Musher (31.5/40 - Safe)
C09: Lopevi Influencer (36/40 - Immunity)
C11: Radjah Shelduckling (29.5/40 - Immunity)
C13: Thai Fest Tourist - Chinese New Year (32/40 - Immunity)
C15: Qatari Petroleum Businessman (36.5/40 - Safe)
C16: New Osiris (35/40 - Immunity)
C18: NAY
Life Lessons Learned Here:
1. No matter how much you've changed, for some people (haters) you'll always be the same.
Hilarious Quotes:
"Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!""You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
Quote
Ianiant [Apr 19 03:47 AM]:   @Mercury Hod does not exist.
I wanna move to Gay City
CeruleaM [May 02 10:43 AM]: i drive a chevrolet movie theater
Quote
CeruleaM [May 09 07:55 AM]: egg + water + lemon juice + weird dirt stuff = natural and long-lasting hair dye
TIME TO MAKE A DEVIL FC  Evil Grin
Ok. You do you
Lyric Of The Day:
I said, ooh, I'm blinded by the lights
No, I can't sleep until I feel your touch
I said, ooh, I'm drowning in the night
Oh, when I'm like this, you're the one I trust
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