AyKooChao
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« Reply #135 on: August 23, 2018, 01:35:29 AM » |
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Oh, I didn’t mention it in the first post but the reason Phoebe has a chain necklace thing is because it was a gift from Moxie (They’re really close friends or lovers ((idk ;7;)) you’ll see later in this post that in their style Bs they switch necklaces and that Phoebe is wearing Moxie’s style A jacket). Here are their style Bs!! I made them just for fun 070 !!Constructive criticism always welcome!!  Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes? |
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Burger Flipper
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« Reply #136 on: August 23, 2018, 11:33:48 AM » |
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Okay, Moxie's outfit is good. There's nothing you need to change in it. Just the shades. If I were you, I would use aviators.
Phoebe's jacket doesn't look to mess well with the dress but the rest outfit is fine. You might have to choose between keeping either the dress or the jacket.
Olive is good how she is. You don't have to change anything on her outfit.
I think you should not combine all those four colors (khaki, this shade of brown, white, grey) on Aella's outfit. You have to keep either this brown or grey.
Now about Lucia, as far as I can understand she is a captain, right? I think the choice of the top and shoes was totally wrong. Also, you may want to show more like a captain by using a more formal type of a jacket and a tie. Actually you can keep this on her neck, it's not bad. Other than that, the dark blue - gold - white combination is perfect.
Same as Olive, you can keep Mia how she is right now.
I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes?
Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out. . . . I made some changes to Lucia Aella and Phoebe’s style B!!  |
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Mystic
~Aquatic Queen~
Food Critic
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« Reply #137 on: August 23, 2018, 11:43:57 AM » |
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I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out. . . . I made some changes to Lucia Aella and Phoebe’s style B!! Ooh! They look very nice. |
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Mercury
PP&P
Restaurant Master
Catwalks? No, thanks, I'm not a cat
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« Reply #138 on: August 23, 2018, 12:01:32 PM » |
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Ooh! They look very nice.
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Long Signature: Elimination awaits. I'm ready to face the truth ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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topeka
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« Reply #139 on: August 23, 2018, 01:41:23 PM » |
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I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out. . . . I made some changes to Lucia Aella and Phoebe’s style B!! No I liked Lucia's old Style B ;-; But Phoebe's new Style B looks amazing by the way! |
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Mercury
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« Reply #140 on: August 24, 2018, 02:46:51 AM » |
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New Pal: Samantha  |
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Long Signature: Elimination awaits. I'm ready to face the truth ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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Plum Pudding
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Burger Flipper
i want james to run
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« Reply #141 on: August 24, 2018, 09:53:52 AM » |
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New Pal: Samantha Oh I really like her!! ;u; shes so pretty |
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Mercury
PP&P
Restaurant Master
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« Reply #142 on: August 24, 2018, 09:55:26 AM » |
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Oh I really like her!! ;u; shes so pretty
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Long Signature: Elimination awaits. I'm ready to face the truth ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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topeka
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« Reply #143 on: August 24, 2018, 01:19:11 PM » |
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New Pal: Samantha Too adorable for my soul!! |
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Stan Loona
The Shoutbox Master
Food Critic
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« Reply #144 on: August 24, 2018, 01:22:57 PM » |
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New Pal: Samantha  |
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Ianiant
FC Maker
Better Than Papa!
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« Reply #145 on: August 24, 2018, 04:15:44 PM » |
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Cade FINALLY in PLP!   |
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Mystic
~Aquatic Queen~
Food Critic
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« Reply #146 on: August 24, 2018, 05:46:37 PM » |
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Cade FINALLY in PLP! Yay!  |
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~Drink Water & Grow Lovely!~ |
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Mercury
PP&P
Restaurant Master
Catwalks? No, thanks, I'm not a cat
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« Reply #147 on: August 25, 2018, 01:30:00 AM » |
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Too adorable for my soul!!
thank you both guys (and girls obviously). |
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Long Signature: Elimination awaits. I'm ready to face the truth ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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Mercury
PP&P
Restaurant Master
Catwalks? No, thanks, I'm not a cat
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« Reply #148 on: August 26, 2018, 07:01:56 AM » |
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New Pal: Polaris  |
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Long Signature: Elimination awaits. I'm ready to face the truth ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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Mercury
PP&P
Restaurant Master
Catwalks? No, thanks, I'm not a cat
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« Reply #149 on: August 26, 2018, 07:13:17 AM » |
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New Pal: Ramsey  |
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Long Signature: Elimination awaits. I'm ready to face the truth ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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