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« Reply #120 on: August 21, 2018, 01:18:19 PM » |
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You should add more of that medium pink into the clothes.
The hair is fine as it is.
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"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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« Reply #121 on: August 21, 2018, 01:24:30 PM » |
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Faith is now updated! - Added freckles
- Added pink in her skirt's stripes and bracelets
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Long Signature: Cris, Amber, Tanner, don't let me down! ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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« Reply #122 on: August 21, 2018, 10:00:19 PM » |
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« Reply #123 on: August 22, 2018, 02:30:37 AM » |
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 I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully  ) !!Constructive criticism is always welcome!! |
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« Reply #124 on: August 22, 2018, 02:47:46 AM » |
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Nice! The only thing I can think of that you should change is Phoebe's necklace. The colour's okay, but the style doesn't really match the rest of her outfit.
Mora, pointing at Moxie: See, AyChao? THAT'S what you should do for my Style B!
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« Reply #125 on: August 22, 2018, 01:16:29 PM » |
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I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully ) !!Constructive criticism is always welcome!! Lucia and Mia are my favorites! And for some weird reason, I tought Olive was the crackchild of Cecilia and Zoe. |
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« Reply #126 on: August 22, 2018, 03:05:48 PM » |
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I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully ) !!Constructive criticism is always welcome!! Objectively speaking, they all need improvement. However, each one of them looks pretty decent. Mia is the best by far if you want to know. |
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Long Signature: Cris, Amber, Tanner, don't let me down! ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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« Reply #127 on: August 22, 2018, 03:07:02 PM » |
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Objectively speaking, they all need improvement. However, each one of them looks pretty decent. Mia is the best by far if you want to know.
Do you even know what "objective" is |
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« Reply #128 on: August 22, 2018, 04:20:38 PM » |
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I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully ) !!Constructive criticism is always welcome!! They look pretty good to me. I couldn't make that, that's for sure |
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« Reply #129 on: August 23, 2018, 12:26:22 AM » |
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Nice! The only thing I can think of that you should change is Phoebe's necklace. The colour's okay, but the style doesn't really match the rest of her outfit.
Mora, pointing at Moxie: See, AyChao? THAT'S what you should do for my Style B!
Oh, I didn’t mention it in the first post but the reason Phoebe has a chain necklace thing is because it was a gift from Moxie (They’re really close friends or lovers ((idk ;7;)) you’ll see later in this post that in their style Bs they switch necklaces and that Phoebe is wearing Moxie’s style A jacket). Lucia and Mia are my favorites! And for some weird reason, I tought Olive was the crackchild of Cecilia and Zoe.
Thank you!! And now that you mention it... yeah she does look like their child Objectively speaking, they all need improvement. However, each one of them looks pretty decent. Mia is the best by far if you want to know.
Could you please elaborate on what needs improvement?? ;7; They look pretty good to me. I couldn't make that, that's for sure
Thank you!! . . . Here are their style Bs!! I made them just for fun 070 !!Constructive criticism always welcome!!  |
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« Reply #130 on: August 23, 2018, 01:13:46 AM » |
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Do you even know what "objective" is
Yes, when someone is unbiased |
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Long Signature: Cris, Amber, Tanner, don't let me down! ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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« Reply #131 on: August 23, 2018, 01:26:14 AM » |
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Here are their style Bs!! I made them just for fun 070 !!Constructive criticism always welcome!! Okay, Moxie's outfit is good. There's nothing you need to change in it. Just the shades. If I were you, I would use aviators. Phoebe's jacket doesn't look to mess well with the dress but the rest outfit is fine. You might have to choose between keeping either the dress or the jacket. Olive is good how she is. You don't have to change anything on her outfit. I think you should not combine all those four colors (khaki, this shade of brown, white, grey) on Aella's outfit. You have to keep either this brown or grey. Now about Lucia, as far as I can understand she is a captain, right? I think the choice of the top and shoes was totally wrong. Also, you may want to show more like a captain by using a more formal type of a jacket and a tie. Actually you can keep this on her neck, it's not bad. Other than that, the dark blue - gold - white combination is perfect. Same as Olive, you can keep Mia how she is right now. |
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Long Signature: Cris, Amber, Tanner, don't let me down! ~ BethanyWanna know what the 3 Ps mean? Pal Professional and Perfectionist most of all Dear forumers, Since everyone knows that losing just because someone is more popular than you is painful, please, try to be as much fair playing people as you can. It's important for someone who really deserves it to win and not for someone who is either over-rated or persona-esque. Thank you! Check out my Q&A topic!!! Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=46111.0Check out my FC topic for updates!!! Link: Check out my Roleplay, the one and only: "The FC Games: Hall Of Fame" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=49494.0For those who want to test their FC making skills and give their outfit a second chance here's "TFCG - Outfit Evolution" Link: http://www.flipline.com/forum/index.php?topic=64339.0 Hilarious Quotes: "Oh, I am not Mr. Bombolony. I am the scariest thing known to man! A failed math test!"
"You can run, but it won't be to the college of your choice, I tell you!"
Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
cancelling my vacation to Calypso Island
Lamo in Spanish means "I lick"
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« Reply #132 on: August 23, 2018, 01:35:29 AM » |
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Oh, I didn’t mention it in the first post but the reason Phoebe has a chain necklace thing is because it was a gift from Moxie (They’re really close friends or lovers ((idk ;7;)) you’ll see later in this post that in their style Bs they switch necklaces and that Phoebe is wearing Moxie’s style A jacket). Here are their style Bs!! I made them just for fun 070 !!Constructive criticism always welcome!! Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes? |
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« Reply #133 on: August 23, 2018, 11:33:48 AM » |
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Okay, Moxie's outfit is good. There's nothing you need to change in it. Just the shades. If I were you, I would use aviators.
Phoebe's jacket doesn't look to mess well with the dress but the rest outfit is fine. You might have to choose between keeping either the dress or the jacket.
Olive is good how she is. You don't have to change anything on her outfit.
I think you should not combine all those four colors (khaki, this shade of brown, white, grey) on Aella's outfit. You have to keep either this brown or grey.
Now about Lucia, as far as I can understand she is a captain, right? I think the choice of the top and shoes was totally wrong. Also, you may want to show more like a captain by using a more formal type of a jacket and a tie. Actually you can keep this on her neck, it's not bad. Other than that, the dark blue - gold - white combination is perfect.
Same as Olive, you can keep Mia how she is right now.
I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes?
Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out. . . . I made some changes to Lucia Aella and Phoebe’s style B!!  |
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« Reply #134 on: August 23, 2018, 11:43:57 AM » |
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I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out. . . . I made some changes to Lucia Aella and Phoebe’s style B!! Ooh! They look very nice. |
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