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« Reply #150 on: August 21, 2018, 01:24:30 PM »

Faith is now updated!
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« Reply #151 on: August 21, 2018, 10:00:19 PM »

New Pal: Faith

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« Reply #152 on: August 22, 2018, 02:30:37 AM »



I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o

TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive

BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia

They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully Laugh)

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« Reply #153 on: August 22, 2018, 02:47:46 AM »

Nice! The only thing I can think of that you should change is Phoebe's necklace. The colour's okay, but the style doesn't really match the rest of her outfit.

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« Reply #154 on: August 22, 2018, 01:16:29 PM »



I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o

TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive

BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia

They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully Laugh)

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Lucia and Mia are my favorites! And for some weird reason, I tought Olive was the crackchild of Cecilia and Zoe.
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« Reply #155 on: August 22, 2018, 03:05:48 PM »



I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o

TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive

BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia

They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully Laugh)

!!Constructive criticism is always welcome!!
Objectively speaking, they all need improvement. However, each one of them looks pretty decent. Mia is the best by far if you want to know.
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« Reply #156 on: August 22, 2018, 03:07:02 PM »

Objectively speaking, they all need improvement. However, each one of them looks pretty decent. Mia is the best by far if you want to know.
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« Reply #157 on: August 22, 2018, 04:20:38 PM »



I’m pretty new to this, but here are some FCs I’ve made in the past couple of days!! o7o

TOP ROW: Moxie, Phoebe, Olive

BOTTOM ROW: Aella, Lucia, Mia

They don’t have personalities yet, but I think you can tell what they’re like based on their designs,, (hopefully Laugh)

!!Constructive criticism is always welcome!!
They look pretty good to me. I couldn't make that, that's for sure
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« Reply #158 on: August 23, 2018, 12:26:22 AM »

Nice! The only thing I can think of that you should change is Phoebe's necklace. The colour's okay, but the style doesn't really match the rest of her outfit.

Mora, pointing at Moxie: See, AyChao? THAT'S what you should do for my Style B!
Oh, I didn’t mention it in the first post but the reason Phoebe has a chain necklace thing is because it was a gift from Moxie (They’re really close friends or lovers ((idk ;7;)) you’ll see later in this post that in their style Bs they switch necklaces and that Phoebe is wearing Moxie’s style A jacket).
Lucia and Mia are my favorites! And for some weird reason, I tought Olive was the crackchild of Cecilia and Zoe.
Thank you!! And now that you mention it... yeah she does look like their child Laugh
Objectively speaking, they all need improvement. However, each one of them looks pretty decent. Mia is the best by far if you want to know.
Could you please elaborate on what needs improvement?? ;7;
They look pretty good to me. I couldn't make that, that's for sure
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« Reply #159 on: August 23, 2018, 01:13:46 AM »

Do you even know what "objective" is
Yes, when someone is unbiased
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« Reply #160 on: August 23, 2018, 01:26:14 AM »

Here are their style Bs!! I made them just for fun 070
!!Constructive criticism always welcome!!

Okay, Moxie's outfit is good. There's nothing you need to change in it. Just the shades. If I were you, I would use aviators.
Phoebe's jacket doesn't look to mess well with the dress but the rest outfit is fine. You might have to choose between keeping either the dress or the jacket.
Olive is good how she is. You don't have to change anything on her outfit.
I think you should not combine all those four colors (khaki, this shade of brown, white, grey) on Aella's outfit. You have to keep either this brown or grey.
Now about Lucia, as far as I can understand she is a captain, right? I think the choice of the top and shoes was totally wrong. Also, you may want to show more like a captain by using a more formal type of a jacket and a tie. Actually you can keep this on her neck, it's not bad. Other than that, the dark blue - gold - white combination is perfect.
Same as Olive, you can keep Mia how she is right now.
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« Reply #161 on: August 23, 2018, 01:35:29 AM »

Oh, I didn’t mention it in the first post but the reason Phoebe has a chain necklace thing is because it was a gift from Moxie (They’re really close friends or lovers ((idk ;7;)) you’ll see later in this post that in their style Bs they switch necklaces and that Phoebe is wearing Moxie’s style A jacket).
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Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes?
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« Reply #162 on: August 23, 2018, 11:33:48 AM »

Okay, Moxie's outfit is good. There's nothing you need to change in it. Just the shades. If I were you, I would use aviators.
Phoebe's jacket doesn't look to mess well with the dress but the rest outfit is fine. You might have to choose between keeping either the dress or the jacket.
Olive is good how she is. You don't have to change anything on her outfit.
I think you should not combine all those four colors (khaki, this shade of brown, white, grey) on Aella's outfit. You have to keep either this brown or grey.
Now about Lucia, as far as I can understand she is a captain, right? I think the choice of the top and shoes was totally wrong. Also, you may want to show more like a captain by using a more formal type of a jacket and a tie. Actually you can keep this on her neck, it's not bad. Other than that, the dark blue - gold - white combination is perfect.
Same as Olive, you can keep Mia how she is right now.
I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post.
Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes?
Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out.
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« Reply #163 on: August 23, 2018, 11:43:57 AM »

I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out.
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« Reply #164 on: August 23, 2018, 12:01:32 PM »

Ooh! They look very nice.
I agree.
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Okay I guess. I don't really know what you mean by another day because that could be anytime between tomorrow or your death.
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