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« Reply #120 on: August 23, 2018, 01:13:46 AM »

Do you even know what "objective" is
Yes, when someone is unbiased
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« Reply #121 on: August 23, 2018, 01:26:14 AM »

Here are their style Bs!! I made them just for fun 070
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Okay, Moxie's outfit is good. There's nothing you need to change in it. Just the shades. If I were you, I would use aviators.
Phoebe's jacket doesn't look to mess well with the dress but the rest outfit is fine. You might have to choose between keeping either the dress or the jacket.
Olive is good how she is. You don't have to change anything on her outfit.
I think you should not combine all those four colors (khaki, this shade of brown, white, grey) on Aella's outfit. You have to keep either this brown or grey.
Now about Lucia, as far as I can understand she is a captain, right? I think the choice of the top and shoes was totally wrong. Also, you may want to show more like a captain by using a more formal type of a jacket and a tie. Actually you can keep this on her neck, it's not bad. Other than that, the dark blue - gold - white combination is perfect.
Same as Olive, you can keep Mia how she is right now.
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« Reply #122 on: August 23, 2018, 01:35:29 AM »

Oh, I didn’t mention it in the first post but the reason Phoebe has a chain necklace thing is because it was a gift from Moxie (They’re really close friends or lovers ((idk ;7;)) you’ll see later in this post that in their style Bs they switch necklaces and that Phoebe is wearing Moxie’s style A jacket).
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Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes?
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« Reply #123 on: August 23, 2018, 11:33:48 AM »

Okay, Moxie's outfit is good. There's nothing you need to change in it. Just the shades. If I were you, I would use aviators.
Phoebe's jacket doesn't look to mess well with the dress but the rest outfit is fine. You might have to choose between keeping either the dress or the jacket.
Olive is good how she is. You don't have to change anything on her outfit.
I think you should not combine all those four colors (khaki, this shade of brown, white, grey) on Aella's outfit. You have to keep either this brown or grey.
Now about Lucia, as far as I can understand she is a captain, right? I think the choice of the top and shoes was totally wrong. Also, you may want to show more like a captain by using a more formal type of a jacket and a tie. Actually you can keep this on her neck, it's not bad. Other than that, the dark blue - gold - white combination is perfect.
Same as Olive, you can keep Mia how she is right now.
I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post.
Oh, okay. Have you made any PLP scenes with these cornflakes?
Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out.
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« Reply #124 on: August 23, 2018, 11:43:57 AM »

I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out.
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Ooh! They look very nice.
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« Reply #125 on: August 23, 2018, 12:01:32 PM »

Ooh! They look very nice.
I agree.
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« Reply #126 on: August 23, 2018, 01:41:23 PM »

I made some changes based off of your critique, ^^ you’ll see it later in this post. Ah, not yet... I do hope I’ll have some time to make some after I finish drawing requests and once I get school all figured out.
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No I liked Lucia's old Style B ;-; But Phoebe's new Style B looks amazing by the way!
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« Reply #127 on: August 24, 2018, 02:46:51 AM »

New Pal: Samantha
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« Reply #128 on: August 24, 2018, 09:53:52 AM »

New Pal: Samantha

Oh I really like her!! ;u; shes so pretty
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« Reply #129 on: August 24, 2018, 09:55:26 AM »

Oh I really like her!! ;u; shes so pretty
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« Reply #130 on: August 24, 2018, 01:19:11 PM »

New Pal: Samantha

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« Reply #131 on: August 24, 2018, 01:22:57 PM »

New Pal: Samantha

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« Reply #132 on: August 24, 2018, 04:15:44 PM »

Cade FINALLY in PLP! Smiley

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« Reply #133 on: August 24, 2018, 05:46:37 PM »

Cade FINALLY in PLP! Smiley


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« Reply #134 on: August 25, 2018, 01:30:00 AM »

Too adorable for my soul!!
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