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« Reply #30 on: November 13, 2018, 05:43:51 PM »

interesting chapter...
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« Reply #31 on: November 13, 2018, 05:46:15 PM »

Brother E: Thanks! Smiley This is just the beginning of the trip! Wink
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« Reply #32 on: November 19, 2018, 12:34:30 PM »

cool lol, I want to see more statues. also, you put more spaces than necessary, you can combine the non-dialogue sentences in the dialogue, for example if someone speaks and also does an action, you combine that person's speech and action together in a paragraph
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« Reply #33 on: December 12, 2018, 09:48:47 PM »

Brother E: OK, no problem, I'll fix it in my next chapters, thanks! Wink
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« Reply #34 on: December 19, 2018, 03:47:29 PM »

Brother E: Bump! Need to get back on this! Wink
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« Reply #35 on: January 09, 2019, 03:00:24 PM »

Chapter 6:        Berlin
The plane landed in the Berlin airport a few hours later. Joey, Radford, Scooter, and the rocks got off the airplane and headed to the terminal.
“Okay,” said Joey, “Here we go.”

Walking over to the passport registration booth, Joey Scooter, and Radford had their passports stamped. They now could go anywhere they wanted to in Berlin.

“Where do we start?” asked Scooter.

“Don’t know,” answered Joey, “We got a long way ahead of us.”

Meanwhile, the group of men had their passports stamped too. They walked over to another group men waiting by the airport’s café. A man in a dark brown fedora spoke to a man with a dark blue suit.

“Those are the men who are on the ruby case,” he told the man, “We need to watch them carefully.”

“Sure,” said the man in the suit, “I’ll contact Albedo Inc. to send guards to keep an eye out on those men and follow their every step.”

“All right,” said the man in the fedora, “Good thinking.”

The man turned to his messenger. “Follow them, and see what you can find out.”

The messenger nodded and walked away.

Joey looked around the city of Berlin. “Well,” said Joey, “I guess we need to get started.”

“Hey, Joey,” asked Ks as they walked down the middle of town in Berlin, “What’s this line on the ground for in stone?”

“That?” replied Joey. “That is the line that separated Communist East Germany from the free West Germany during the Cold War. The wall was torn down in 1991, and act of Communism that separated the two sides was broken.”

“Oh,” said Ks, “Is Communism bad?”

“Communism,” answered Radford, “is when the government controls things, jobs, what you do and shouldn’t, etc. Freedom is very limited in a Communistic government.”

 “OK, got it,” said Ks.

“Where is this ceramic shop that made the statues?” asked Scooter.

“Don’t know,” replied Joey, “It could be torn down by now.”

Joey looked down the street. He looked left, then right. Just then, he spotted a little shop that made ceramic statues, just like the shop the man in the convention described!
“Come on,” exclaimed Joey, “There is a shop up ahead that makes statues!”

“We are right on track!” agreed Scooter as they jogged to the shop.

A few blocks back, the messenger ran back to the group of men.
“Sir,” said the messenger, “They are going to the little ceramic shop down the street!”

“Blast it!” exclaimed the man in the coat,” They’re a step ahead of us.” He clenched his fist. He then turned to the messenger. “Keep up with them and learn what their next steps are. Don’t let them see you though.”

“Yes sir,” said the messenger and turned away.

The man in the coat muttered under his breath, “I’ll get you detective, you and everyone who helps you!”

Joey, Radford, and Scooter stopped in front of the little shop.

“OK,” said Joey, “We need to ask the owner of the shop if this is the shop which originally made the statue cats, or if the shop is torn down by now.” He turned to Scooter and the rocks. “Watch our bags while we go inside and ask.”

“OK,” said the rocks and Scooter.

Joey and Radford went inside the shop.

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« Reply #36 on: February 25, 2019, 09:39:54 AM »

Brother E: Hmm...need to get chapter 7 ready. What do you guys think?
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« Reply #37 on: February 25, 2019, 01:25:48 PM »

You might be confusing communism with general dictatorship. Adolf Hitler was definitely NOT a communist. Communism is an ideal where everyone is treated exactly the same by the government, regardless of race, job, gender or anything else. This includes redistributing all money and property so everyone is equally wealthy. It sounds great in theory, but it never works out that way in practice. The state does confiscate all money and property for redistribution, but then they keep most of it for themselves, so everyone who is not a member of the Communist Party (the only political party that's allowed) barely has enough to eat. The state exerts a lot of control over the people to make sure everyone is treated the same in all respects, but then they also use that control to make sure nobody tries to overthrow them. In short, it's a great idea in theory, but in practice it never goes well.

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« Reply #38 on: February 25, 2019, 05:48:18 PM »

You might be confusing communism with general dictatorship. Adolf Hitler was definitely NOT a communist. Communism is an ideal where everyone is treated exactly the same by the government, regardless of race, job, gender or anything else. This includes redistributing all money and property so everyone is equally wealthy. It sounds great in theory, but it never works out that way in practice. The state does confiscate all money and property for redistribution, but then they keep most of it for themselves, so everyone who is not a member of the Communist Party (the only political party that's allowed) barely has enough to eat. The state exerts a lot of control over the people to make sure everyone is treated the same in all respects, but then they also use that control to make sure nobody tries to overthrow them. In short, it's a great idea in theory, but in practice it never goes well.

Otherwise, great chapter!
Yeah, Hitler wasn't communist, but instead blamed Jews for WWI repercussions, and came to power to destroy the Jewish people.
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« Reply #39 on: February 25, 2019, 08:38:04 PM »

Brother E: Yes, your right. Didn't think about that, but now that you mention it, it makes sense.
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« Reply #40 on: March 13, 2019, 02:16:18 PM »

Ah, seems really intresting.
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« Reply #41 on: March 13, 2019, 02:18:56 PM »

Brother E: Thanks! Also, welcome to the forum! Smiley
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« Reply #42 on: April 15, 2019, 05:51:29 PM »

Brother E: Wow! Haven't done this in a whole month! Shocked Don't worry, will get back to it!  Nervous
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« Reply #43 on: May 21, 2019, 08:17:45 PM »

Brother E: About this...it might get turned into an eBook or a real book at the end of this year. I haven't been really making new chapters for it, but when it does get turned into a full book, it will be revised, might have pictures, and will have more chapters. Don't know if will post more chapters here or not, still unsure about that.

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« Reply #44 on: May 21, 2019, 09:06:26 PM »

Brother E: Poll added. Wink
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