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« Reply #30 on: October 10, 2018, 05:49:49 PM »

I'm excited, can't wait!
Sorry to be nitpicky, but you forgot to add a couple things to my characters. All three of my characters' eyes need to be spaced out.
The only thing to fix with Dakota is to give her black and red eyeshadow.
Sidney needs to be a bit taller, and his skin color is the second option in PLP. His hair is the fourth option in PLP, and I'm not sure if you selected the right hair color, but it's the option to the left of pink hair. His collar is grey (the grey in the middle on the color chart).
Skye has black eyeshadow, and her skin color is also the second option in PLP. Although it may not look like it, her beanie is white, not light grey.

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« Reply #31 on: October 10, 2018, 05:52:47 PM »

Brother E: Yes, if you can fix it, Joey's eyes need to be spaced out, Heather needs eyeliner, and Luke needs to be shorter. Also, they all have small mouths. Thanks! Smiley (Sorry for being picky!)
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« Reply #32 on: October 10, 2018, 06:03:11 PM »


Ahh, I'm too late for this...
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« Reply #33 on: October 10, 2018, 06:23:55 PM »

I did not use any measurements, and if I couldn't see it, I didn't add it. It shouldn't make much of a difference.
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« Reply #34 on: October 10, 2018, 06:25:28 PM »

Brother E: It's OK. It's not that bad anyway. Wink
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« Reply #35 on: October 10, 2018, 06:37:39 PM »

I'm excited, can't wait!
Sorry to be nitpicky, but you forgot to add a couple things to my characters. All three of my characters' eyes need to be spaced out.
The only thing to fix with Dakota is to give her black and red eyeshadow.
Sidney needs to be a bit taller, and his skin color is the second option in PLP. His hair is the fourth option in PLP, and I'm not sure if you selected the right hair color, but it's the option to the left of pink hair. His collar is grey (the grey in the middle on the color chart).
Skye has black eyeshadow, and her skin color is also the second option in PLP. Although it may not look like it, her beanie is white, not light grey.

Thanks!
Brother E: Yes, if you can fix it, Joey's eyes need to be spaced out, Heather needs eyeliner, and Luke needs to be shorter. Also, they all have small mouths. Thanks! Smiley (Sorry for being picky!)
I fixed it except for the measurements.
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« Reply #36 on: October 10, 2018, 06:40:51 PM »

Brother E: OK, thanks! Smiley
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« Reply #37 on: October 10, 2018, 06:46:31 PM »

I fixed it except for the measurements.
Thank you!
I'm a bit nervous to find out how their mashup will look like but that's a really creative idea, I must say!
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« Reply #38 on: October 10, 2018, 11:25:11 PM »

Professor Sub-Zero's eyes look weird. They should be further apart. Also, Supernova's skin color seems off, somehow. Sorry for being picky.
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« Reply #39 on: October 11, 2018, 03:35:16 PM »

Professor Sub-Zero's eyes look weird. They should be further apart. Also, Supernova's skin color seems off, somehow. Sorry for being picky.
Not doing measurements. Which skin color in PLP?
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« Reply #40 on: October 11, 2018, 10:28:53 PM »

Seventh from the left.
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« Reply #41 on: October 12, 2018, 01:02:41 PM »

Fixed!
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« Reply #42 on: October 12, 2018, 01:15:01 PM »

why are soufflia's eyes so big
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« Reply #43 on: October 12, 2018, 01:18:01 PM »

I aint be doing measurements thank you very much.
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« Reply #44 on: October 12, 2018, 01:20:10 PM »

Brother E: No, she means there is two types of eyes. Big and normal types. Also, sorry for begin so picky, but Heather has normal eyes, but the slanted eyes.
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