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« Reply #300 on: February 22, 2019, 09:27:57 PM »

9/10
I like this design; I just feel like it's a bit too dependent on white and grey. Wink
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« Reply #301 on: February 23, 2019, 12:02:02 AM »

9/10
I like this design; I just feel like it's a bit too dependent on white and grey. Wink


A 7/10 from me. The outfit type is pretty okay, but his general appearance is a bit bland...my advice is maybe change his hairstyle or equip him with a hat and I would like more if the clothes display colors that has higher contrasts.


Now below is character of mine who actually appeared in the forum. Yet I've worked on some styles for her and I want you guys to feel free to comment which one would be the best fit and yeah why not drop a score?



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« Reply #302 on: February 23, 2019, 01:25:46 AM »

I'd say Style A. However, I do need to give some critiques. While I do like some of the colors you've used, I feel like there's too much going on in her design. My suggestion would probably be to change the skirt and shirt to something more simpler. I also think you should lower her mouth down a bit and change the lavender color on her armwarmers. 7/10.

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« Reply #303 on: February 23, 2019, 03:24:29 AM »

Design of the baseball fan is relatively good. However her tank and skirt not something that I prefer, any shirt without collars and pants would be better also the shoes, it doesn't really fit the outfit so well, it's not like shoes that are usually to be wear for sports. In addition I don't think an eye shadow is neccessary. Other than those the color schemes are pretty on point.(6/10)

Anyways thank you so much for your feedback for mine now I see where exactly my mistakes are. One more thing, obviously you don't have to agree with my opinion above cause it's just what I thought.
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« Reply #304 on: February 23, 2019, 09:07:54 AM »

I'd say Style A. However, I do need to give some critiques. While I do like some of the colors you've used, I feel like there's too much going on in her design. My suggestion would probably be to change the skirt and shirt to something more simpler. I also think you should lower her mouth down a bit and change the lavender color on her armwarmers. 7/10.


7/10
I'm not a big fan of her color scheme, but her design works for the most part.
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« Reply #305 on: February 23, 2019, 09:09:01 AM »

7/10
I'm not a big fan of her color scheme, but her design works for the most part.


10/10
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« Reply #306 on: February 23, 2019, 09:12:10 AM »

7/10
I'm not a big fan of her color scheme, but her design works for the most part.


10/10

I like her and her shades of brown work really well with the green!

Next is Moira, my favorite semi-troll semi-serious character of mine.

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« Reply #307 on: February 23, 2019, 09:30:55 AM »

8/10 Wink

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« Reply #308 on: February 23, 2019, 12:42:37 PM »

7.5/10

She's pretty good! However, I think you should use a different shirt and give her some sort of accessory too. (Does she take any inspiration from Cocoa btw?)

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« Reply #309 on: February 23, 2019, 08:31:48 PM »

8/10
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June 13 - Ocean Throwing Blaise
June 27 - Animal, The Muppets
June 28 - Ocean Throwing Blaise... Again
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September 13 - My Art of Ode for KCP2019
September 18 - My Drakson Art
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February 16 2020 - Tanr (derpy Tanner)
Favorite Quotes:
Theo [Aug 28 07:11 PM]:   speedo your love for asian women is undying
The Lord yeeteth and the lord yoinketh away.
Scoobybay wouldn’t be like this if she had just stabbed Loona :pensive:
lol jay ate sugar like lololol JAY ATE bleeping SUGAR HAHAHA J8SUGAR HAHAHAHAHAHA

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Uh, Matt and Tony, I think Doritos copied Kasey O's earrings
First of all who are you
Abu 2 Electric Abugaloo
resto in cheesy pesto
Brother E: I was being SaRcAsTiC. Wink
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« Reply #310 on: February 23, 2019, 09:18:53 PM »

8/10

The hair is definitely better and the outfit is nice, but I kinda still prefer the original.

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« Reply #311 on: February 23, 2019, 09:26:12 PM »

Great FC! 10/10.

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Oh sweet home Alabama what have I done
Brother E: Good gripping gravy, these Facebook comments are so salty and spicy! Dizzy
Thursday will be lit and full of salt.
you will perish.
If you want To Go, just go!
I wouldn't be surprised if they whipped it out in September. Like "Lol release date is DD/MM/YYYY... Oh bloop that's tomorrow lma0"
notice how you're not special
notice this graaaaaaph
Yes I see you being a ho
it looks like all these posts were created by hippies
pipper pig lol
papas stomach doctor mia???
What do you expect from a crab who wipes his butt with money?
A massive delete wave?
Smol Mac
I would only eat sausage on buns.
Brother E: I was being SaRcAsTiC.
Also, I remember that topic now. It was for the TWG.
Xolo, more like Brolo, am I right?
So much nightmare fuel, I love it!
Times flies when you just see characters die one after the other I guess
I'll take a Double Triple Bossy Deluxe on a raft, 4x4 animal style, extra shingles with a shimmy and a squeeze, light axle grease; make it cry, burn it, and let it swim.
A man has fallen into the river in LEGO City!
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« Reply #312 on: February 23, 2019, 09:30:48 PM »

7/10, I think some of the blue is a bit bright.

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« Reply #313 on: February 23, 2019, 09:32:01 PM »

7/10, I think some of the blue is a bit bright.

Piper:


8/10
Lovely colors! I think the pink should be incorporated more into the outfit.
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Jan 1 2019 - Brick, Total Drama
Feb 9 - Blaise x Callisto
Feb 27 - Gundham Tanaka, Danganronpa
Mar 10 - Green Mask
April 9 - Onionfest Sarge Fan
June 1 - Professor Layton
June 13 - Ocean Throwing Blaise
June 27 - Animal, The Muppets
June 28 - Ocean Throwing Blaise... Again
July 12 - Cherry Pepsi
July 17 - Kingsley's Customerpalooza 2019 Entries!
August 8 - Ode Made It To KCP19!
August 28 - Akira, Wii Sports Gang
August 31 - Keaton
September 13 - My Art of Ode for KCP2019
September 18 - My Drakson Art
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October 14 - Glowflake by Pogo
October 21 - Michael Jackson Eating Popcorn
November 1 - My Keaton Art
November 12 - Kaito Momota, Danganronpa (name change to Kaito)
November 22 - Allan
December 26 - Tanner (FC Games 2)
February 16 2020 - Tanr (derpy Tanner)
Favorite Quotes:
Theo [Aug 28 07:11 PM]:   speedo your love for asian women is undying
The Lord yeeteth and the lord yoinketh away.
Scoobybay wouldn’t be like this if she had just stabbed Loona :pensive:
lol jay ate sugar like lololol JAY ATE bleeping SUGAR HAHAHA J8SUGAR HAHAHAHAHAHA

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Uh, Matt and Tony, I think Doritos copied Kasey O's earrings
First of all who are you
Abu 2 Electric Abugaloo
resto in cheesy pesto
Brother E: I was being SaRcAsTiC. Wink
ZZZZZZZEBRUUUUHH!
Oh my its H E L L A F R E S H
I want a lake of holy water and drown in it
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« Reply #314 on: February 23, 2019, 09:34:22 PM »

9/10

He looks really appealing to me for some strange reason.

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