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« Reply #5640 on: October 19, 2020, 12:44:18 AM » |
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Terry 9/10  Idk what to say, but he's so cute
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« Reply #5641 on: October 19, 2020, 11:23:22 AM » |
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7/10 Kaitlynn. 
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« Reply #5642 on: October 19, 2020, 07:28:55 PM » |
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1/10 You have a one-and-a-half color scheme that is in no way creative with eye spacing that's WAY too close together. That, and this looks similar to about 20 other FC's I've seen from you. 
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« Reply #5643 on: October 19, 2020, 07:37:04 PM » |
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4/10 the pants and the shoes and the scarf don't go well together, maybe change the scarf to an ascot? 
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« Reply #5644 on: October 19, 2020, 07:54:25 PM » |
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15/20, I'd remove the varsity jacket. Katherine. 
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« Reply #5645 on: October 19, 2020, 07:59:39 PM » |
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2/10 its black and white 
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Forneus
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« Reply #5646 on: October 19, 2020, 08:04:04 PM » |
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5/10, He's good, but I recommend adding a hat/cap and adding some brown color to his outfit. 
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« Reply #5647 on: October 19, 2020, 08:15:25 PM » |
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6/10. Deuce. 
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« Reply #5648 on: October 19, 2020, 08:19:16 PM » |
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Honestly, you need to learn adding colors and executing successful color schemes, because normally, FCs that only has black and white colors don't work very well. And also, he looks too bland. Sorry, 2/10. Posting once again (hoping anyone would rate this aside from Plankton) 
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« Reply #5649 on: October 19, 2020, 08:33:59 PM » |
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Where do you even get the "successful color schemes" from?
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« Reply #5650 on: October 19, 2020, 08:38:17 PM » |
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Where do you even get the "successful color schemes" from?
Check the other FC archives of other members here (Synth, James, Silver Shades, Breadstick, etc.) and then you can observe how they use various colors and executing it in different outfits in a proper way on their FCs. I'm not trying to be harsh, but if you could check their FC archives, then you will learn how to use different colors aside from neon colors, and black and white colors. I just hope you learned from it 
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« Reply #5651 on: October 20, 2020, 12:27:22 AM » |
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Honestly, you need to learn adding colors and executing successful color schemes, because normally, FCs that only has black and white colors don't work very well. And also, he looks too bland. Sorry, 2/10. Posting once again (hoping anyone would rate this aside from Plankton)  10/10 she looks very nice and well designed here. Although I’m not a fan of the colours of her sunglasses but it doesn’t really matter. Great job! (Possible) redesign of Mari 
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« Reply #5652 on: October 20, 2020, 03:59:13 AM » |
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13/20 Amelia. She shares the same birthday with me. (similarly, hoping anyone would rate this besides C1052!) 
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« Reply #5653 on: October 20, 2020, 06:24:21 AM » |
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That's a good start, but i would reccomend using more than 2 colors. Maybe you can try adding 2 or 3 other colors, like blue and and teal, or plum and Burgundy (just a few examples) 5/10 Rate the girl (Melissa) 
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Hey! I'm James! This is my signature. ~ kcp20 winner ~ scene maker ~ fc maker ~ flipline fan since 2011 ~ Quotes: James [Apr 09 10:34 AM]: I changed something in my nlue-green outfit TTHS [Apr 09 10:34 AM]: Nlue is my favorite color James [Apr 09 10:34 AM]: Blue * James [Apr 09 10:34 AM]: Lol Ianiant [Apr 09 10:35 AM]: I'm wearing nlue right now. xD Tamatim [Apr 09 10:35 AM]: The color of mood is nlue. :pensive : James [Apr 09 10:36 AM]: My username is nlue Colour Scheme Creator That can happen if he lives near the Arctic Circle
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« Reply #5654 on: October 20, 2020, 06:29:47 AM » |
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9/10 absolutely elegant, no more explanations 
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