Kismala
The Overthinker
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« Reply #5685 on: October 23, 2020, 06:28:40 AM » |
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She's cute 9/10 
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« Reply #5686 on: October 23, 2020, 02:48:32 PM » |
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Cara. 
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« Reply #5687 on: October 23, 2020, 10:46:44 PM » |
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She looks nice, but the clothing design is a little bit casual and kinda overused by other people 6/10 Blaire 
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Zuko
Uniqua
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« Reply #5688 on: October 26, 2020, 07:44:08 AM » |
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6.5/10. The color scheme is fine, but there's too much black, white, and raspberry on the bottom and not enough lavender. Also, the vertical stripes and the grid pattern don't go together very well. Eunice 
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Hello, I'm Zuko (he/they)! I've been a Flipline fan since around 2011, and some other series that I enjoy are Animal Crossing, ATLA, and Danganronpa! My favorite Gameria is Papa's Bakeria.
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DeluxePizza
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« Reply #5689 on: October 26, 2020, 07:56:27 AM » |
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5/10 She has way too many colors for me tbh. Unless if that's what you're going for, I would cut down some colors that don't match very well with the rest. (Any) 
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« Reply #5690 on: October 26, 2020, 07:59:59 AM » |
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Eunice  8/10 she's so beautiful! But probably reduce some colors and change the jacket, for me I don't see that jacket fit in that kind if costume. I recommend using the two-tone vest (similar to that one) and you could add the orange color used on the pants. (Any)  Destiny, 9.5/10. Even with a simple outfit and color scheme, she totally looks very fine! Lindrick, a painter who hates wearing designed outfits. 
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« Reply #5691 on: October 26, 2020, 08:35:45 AM » |
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9/10, I am notnot feeling the gold soles very much Lindsay 
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Zuko
Uniqua
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Uniqua is too unique for you
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« Reply #5692 on: October 26, 2020, 08:48:21 AM » |
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The colors don't really suit her clothing, if that makes sense? 4.5/10. Eunice's revised design 
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« Reply #5693 on: October 26, 2020, 08:55:44 AM » |
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9/10 Like I said, she's beautiful! But I really recommend using the two-tone vest similar to the one used there, and add more of the orange color used there. Once again, a painter who hates wearing designed outfits. Changed his soles to navy blue 
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Kismala
The Overthinker
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I'm the Purple Guy!
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« Reply #5694 on: October 26, 2020, 10:00:50 AM » |
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8/10 he is quite cool but maybe try to use more green imo and maybe reduce blue a bit. Maurice: 
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« Reply #5695 on: October 26, 2020, 12:10:43 PM » |
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7/20, if I were to make that pal in my style, that scarf would go. Theresa. 
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Zuko
Uniqua
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Uniqua is too unique for you
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« Reply #5696 on: October 26, 2020, 12:13:49 PM » |
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2/10. I know that you love black, white, and neon green together, but PLEASE do something else. I've seen at least 5 other FCs of yours that look very similar to her. Tanya 
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« Reply #5697 on: October 26, 2020, 04:09:46 PM » |
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7.25/10, I liked the color palette and the hair, but what I think should change are the colors of the jacket, change this tiara for the two-color one and add some mark.
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Kismala
The Overthinker
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I'm the Purple Guy!
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« Reply #5698 on: October 26, 2020, 04:14:59 PM » |
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She's perfectly fine but I think you are using this color palette quite often. I wouldn't do that, unless there a reason. I'll give her 8.5/10 Maurice once again: 
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« Reply #5699 on: October 26, 2020, 04:24:06 PM » |
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Wearing a beach shirt and scarf is strange, maybe try to change that and the shoe laces could be white, I'll give him 8.5/10
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