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« Reply #15 on: January 14, 2020, 08:33:29 PM »

I made my own topic, hope you don’t mind Wink

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« Reply #16 on: January 14, 2020, 08:40:40 PM »

The basic or simple is sometimes better than a character with exaggerated and meaningless references. With a little polish in it I'm sure he will be one of your main Pals. I REALLY LIKE HIM.

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I meant that I didn't mean Ian to look anything military.

And he's already one of my main FC's.
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« Reply #17 on: January 14, 2020, 08:47:19 PM »

*facepalm*

I meant that I didn't mean Ian to look anything military.

And he's already one of my main FC's.

Oh, sorry for thinking it was a secondary character. But yes, he has a military aura that I don't know how to explain. Even if it's not even his own personality, but that's not a bad thing or something that needs to change. It's good  Cheesy
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« Reply #18 on: January 14, 2020, 09:17:02 PM »

The basic or simple is sometimes better than a character with exaggerated and meaningless references. With a little polish in it I'm sure he will be one of your main Pals. I REALLY LIKE HIM.


reated this topic because I would like to put my point of view on character styles to everyone. I know I will probably be criticized as I may be a little harsh with some reviews, but I will try to be a little comprehensive and try not to run over each artist's artistic style


I see personality in your style of clothing, just recommend you also put that same personality in your facial expression 9,6
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« Reply #19 on: January 14, 2020, 09:28:05 PM »

I don't get it
Maybe a other format of eyes or of mouth be cool to her
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« Reply #20 on: January 14, 2020, 10:25:08 PM »

Maybe a other format of eyes or of mouth be cool to her
But she'll look ugly
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« Reply #21 on: January 14, 2020, 11:17:13 PM »

What do you think of Ryder?
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« Reply #22 on: January 15, 2020, 10:45:08 AM »

What do you think of Ryder?

Ryder: He has such an amazing vintage look that I don't even have words to express how beautiful he is or find any defects in him. Style A:9,9; Style B:10


But she'll look ugly
Maybe eyeliner eyes (Prudence/Akari Eyes) or a more serious mouth would match better. But if you feel she is better off without change, that's fine. Wink
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