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« on: January 14, 2020, 07:43:15 PM »

Hello! Welcome to the shop! Here I will rate your FC and give feedback and/or suggestions for them. I hope to help y'all!

And please don't be offended by my opinion, I might have very different style than you.

Submit an FC, and give them a rating!

~inspired by Almei's topic~

Azaleah:
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Outfit 1:
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Justice: Nice to meet you, Azaleah. In this outfit, you stated that you used not-so-bright colors for balance, but I am left wondering which ones you mean. The outfit is ridiculously bright and colorful, and it's a bit much to look at. The clothing choices and colors definitely Holi-esque, but I feel like it's a bit generic. A bit more uniqueness, such as a new color or some ambitious clothing items would be lovely here. As it stands, the outfit is good, but it could be so much better. 7/10.

Outfit 2:
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Justice: Once again, this outfit looks nice. But it still feels a bit safe. It is very cherry blossom-esque, but it's pretty simple. I like this one more than the Holi one, however, because the colors are nice and balanced. The clothing choices are nice and mystical, and it all looks pleasant. Nice outfit. 8/10.

Outfit 3:
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Justice: Wow. This is much, much, much better. After looking at this outfit multiple times, I can say truthfully that this outfit is practically flawless. You took Onionfest, but this time expanded it past what I think of for Onionfest. That makes this outfit wonderful. The colors fit Onionfest ridiculously well, and the clothing choices are bizarre, yet work wonders for making this an amazing outfit. My only nitpick is that the purple is a bit top heavy, but other than that, glorious outfit. Amazing job. 9.5/10.

Final Score: 24.5/30.
Justice's Practice Judging

Bethany:
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Outfit 1:
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Justice: Hello, Bethany. Nice to meet you. I like the inspiration behind your French outfit, but it all comes together to look a little bit messy. The old doesn't mix very well with the new here. The jacket/shirt/neck accessory look very awkward when mixed together. The colors you chose also tend to clash at points. Blue and brown do not look good together, and the bright yellow and green look a bit odd. Some clothing choices you made are decent, however, and it definitely looks French. It's decent for what it is. 7/10.

Outfit 2:
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Justice: Now this is more like it. Your mellow pinks and purples do wonders for the look of this outfit, and I do like brown along with them. Your explanation and inspiration are very interesting and I found that this outfit mixes the old and new much better than the French one. My only issue is the under-utilization of the bright pink and especially the gold. They look a bit out of place here. Good effort and outfit. 8.5/10.

Outfit 3:
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Justice: Oh dear. I'm sorry, but I do not like this outfit at all. When I said that the colors clashed with the French outfit, it wasn't a huge issue. Here the colors look, for lack of a better word, bad. The bright orange, forest green, and brown do not mix together, and topping it off with the dark pink just does not look good. Not to mention the outfit itself, which is another example of the old and new looking very awkward together. Everything here just does not mix together, like the shirt/jacket combo, and the belt and sunglasses look very strange here. Decent inspiration, bad execution. 4/10.

Final Score: 19.5/30
Destiny:
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Outfit 1:
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Justice: Hello, Destiny. I suppose I should say "hello fellow fashion queen" because oh my word, what an outfit. These colors are glorious. It baffles me that such different colors work off of each other so well. The bright colors are perfectly balanced with each other and the dark colors. The clothing is perfect. There is absolutely nothing wrong with it. It's very 70s, and it's very disco. Flawless outfit, so you earn a rare 10/10.

Outfit 2:
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Justice: Ok, I see you! This outfit certainly is not a masterpiece, but it does look very pleasing. The bright colors and the black, once again, balance each other out well. The clothing here also is very nice. I like the tie it has to the 80s, and it all comes together well. 8.5/10.
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« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2020, 07:58:50 PM »

Rate Jane! Smiley

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« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2020, 08:15:52 PM »

Rate Jane! Smiley



73/100

Definitely a solid design, but there’s nothing to make her stand out. Maybe add a unique necklace or something. Overalls and a dress with a belt is a bit strange, but honestly it doesn’t look bad. She’s good!
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« Reply #3 on: January 14, 2020, 08:42:28 PM »

Rate my character, Luzza


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« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2020, 08:50:30 PM »

Rate my character, Luzza

62/100

Incredible potential here! The clothing choices look really good together! My issue is the colors. I think she needs 1 or 2 more colors. The lavender and silver aren’t a very interesting color scheme.
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« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2020, 08:53:21 PM »

Rate Susie  Smiley

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« Reply #6 on: January 14, 2020, 08:55:33 PM »

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84/100

Nice concept here, and the colors look great! My only nitpicks are that that hairstyle has never been my favorite and her glasses being brown kind of bother me. Other than that, she’s an amazing FC!
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« Reply #7 on: January 14, 2020, 09:00:07 PM »

Rate Miss Stones, please  Smiley

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« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2020, 09:04:02 PM »

Rate Miss Stones, please  Smiley



91/100

Amazing colors and lovey clothes. Very nice job!
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« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2020, 10:59:12 PM »

Let's begin with my newest FC then:
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« Reply #10 on: January 15, 2020, 11:43:17 AM »

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~ kcp20 winner ~ scene maker ~ fc maker ~ flipline fan since 2011 ~
 
Avatars:
2.1.20 - James with a Warp Key
20.1.20 - James in the Bakeria
3.2.20 - James with a Warp Key during the night
13.2.20 - James holding a rose for Valentine's Day
17.2.20 - James with a pie
1.3.20 - James with a comic book
3.3.20 - James serving a pie to James
17.3.20 - Happy St. Paddy's Day! (James in green backdrop with a warp key)
22.3.20 - James watching TV
5.4.20 - James, Sharel and Kris in a cave looking for diamonds
11.4.20 - Taylor dancing
24.4.20 - James with the delivery phone
22.6.20 - James and Jenny outside of the Sushiria
11.7.20 - James and Lenora in the Pastaria
25.7.20 - James holding bubble tea and a sushi plate
10.8.20 - LePete Portrait
31.8.20 - Laurie throwing a pie to Lilith
1.10.20 - periodt lizzy (edit by EndermanTuxedo and Breadstick)
3.10.20 - Laurie throwing a pie to Lilith (again)
7.10.20 - KCP20 entries
2.11.20 - Kenton made it to KCP20!
6.12.20 - Jasper
8.12.20 - Kenton (again)
18.12.20 - Kenton, the winner of KCP20!!
 
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James [Apr 09 10:34 AM]:   I changed something in my nlue-green outfit
TTHS [Apr 09 10:34 AM]:   Nlue is my favorite color
James [Apr 09 10:34 AM]:   Blue *
James [Apr 09 10:34 AM]:   Lol
Ianiant [Apr 09 10:35 AM]:   I'm wearing nlue right now. xD
Tamatim [Apr 09 10:35 AM]:   The color of mood is nlue.  :pensive :
James [Apr 09 10:36 AM]:   My username is nlue
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That can happen if he lives near the Arctic Circle
[Oct 16 06:35 PM]:   Rocky Road Ice Cream is a standard ice cream in Papa’s Scooperia unlocked at Rank 45 with Rudy.[Oct 16 06:35 PM]:   Ianiant Chip Ice Cream does not exist.[Oct 16 06:37 PM]:   Soup Mia is not a gameria yet.
The only way Destiny can enter SD is Pizzaccino to wake up with an amnesia and memory loss.
James [Apr 11 11:55 AM]:   /ma leaves
James [Apr 11 11:56 AM]:   Lol
Cacti [Apr 11 11:56 AM]:   Nooo
Cacti [Apr 11 11:56 AM]:   Why does Ma have to leave ):
I mean, Evelyn looks to be quite the rich woman of the Flipverse. All that fortune would mean a lot of hand sanitizer for Rollie to buy
Summer4ever is gonna become reality if we don't do anything about climate change
Put him in rice he’ll be okay
More like James!: When Facebookers Attack!
the fc must not wear any type of hair
bald fc's are not allowed
are the first three females triplets
TheSimpsonsFanAt8:00PM [Sep 28 08:28 AM]:   I mean you dont want akari to win so you cant be a clown
Nice.

My character is better
Towers [Nov 19 11:37 AM]:   maybe DELTA was the one who poisoned Cora /s
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« Reply #11 on: January 15, 2020, 03:52:45 PM »

Rate my Not Official FC:
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« Reply #12 on: January 15, 2020, 07:07:50 PM »

Let's begin with my newest FC then:


92/100

You know I like him! I think his occupation is unique, and his design is very neat! Maybe a little too brown for my taste, but he still looks great!



89/100

Wow, what an interesting color scheme! I think it works well, and her shoes are really cool! Overall a very solid design! she needs eyebrows

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60/100

Not a big fan of the colors here. She has a good design, but the colors are just a bit too bright for my taste.
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« Reply #13 on: February 03, 2020, 08:52:03 PM »

Bump!
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« Reply #14 on: February 03, 2020, 08:53:02 PM »

What do you think of Sandra?

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