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« on: March 29, 2020, 04:18:07 PM »

So I'm remaking the Stay the Day comic. I've cut the original cast in half, so I don't put much work for me. And it's in fan fiction since I don't want to be too hard on my phone storage. Hopefully I can post here often.

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Cast, Current Status, and Placements, SPOILERS!:
Trenton
Samika
Adam
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DeMarie Immune, Special Power: Make those that voted them challenge each other if voted out
Steve
Rose
Barbara Special Power: Keep one immune, put two for elimination
Janette Eliminated, 10th
Ricardo Eliminated, 11th
Aaron Eliminated, 12th
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« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2020, 04:22:37 PM »

Click Day/Part to go to it
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« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2020, 04:22:59 PM »

In case I need another.
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« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2020, 05:01:35 PM »

Intro:
Welcome to the first season of Stay the Day. In order to win the grand prize, they must be able to win challenges and build bonds with the others. Play how you want, be nice and win the trust of others or get some dirt and turn them against each other. Do whatever it is to get yourself off the block for elimination. Plead, intimidate, form alliances, anything it takes. Getting through drama, fights, everything during the time they stay together. Do what you can. Play how you want. But will you have what it takes...to stay the day?
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« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2020, 08:23:45 PM »

Day 1 Part 1:
Note: Confessionals are in gray, like this.
Underlined things describe the current setting and what is going on
If contestant has a *, it is showing their action
Finished:
It is day one, and the contestants are all getting accustomed in the house, and with each other.
Janette: Oh my goodness, isn't it great to be together here like this?
Adam: Yeah, it is great, but we're going to be here like this for the next few days.
Barbara: Oh gosh...being here, with all these people...it's awkward.
Janette: Oh I can't wait! This will be fun!
Samika: *Looking around the house* Hey, have you seen the rest of the guys?
Adam: *Also looking around* I'm here. But I don't know the rest are.
Rose: *Coming back from the kitchen* Yeah, they're here. They're just arguing who will win.
Rose: It's the first hour and fights are happening now? This is not going to end well...
Cut to kitchen, where most of the guys are arguing.
Aaron: I am going to win! You all are not!
Russell: No! I will! You are too clueless to win.
Trenton: Yeah, of course both of you are, It'll be me who will take it all.
Trenton trips over a chair.
Russell: *Chuckling* How do you expect to win if you can't see your surroundings?
Trenton: Shut up. I'm speaking the truth. I'll be on top.
As Aaron, Russell, and Trenton argue, Steve and DeMarie are watching them from far.
DeMarie: They don't know what's happening. Not to be bragging to whatever, clearly I have the skills to win.
Steve: Yeah, clearly. I'll be lucky to not be out first.
Steve: Hopefully, I'll stay in a bit longer, but the most I worry is those who are too powerful. Especially DeMarie. She has too much talent and skills.
DeMarie: Well, I'll catch up with everyone else. *Stands up* There's not much to go since we're stuck here.
Cut to another part of the house, Samika enters while Nora and Ricardo are in.
Nora: So you're telling me...you don't care about being here?
Ricardo: Yeah. I don't care how I place either.
Samika: Hey, so, he doesn't care about this game at all?
Nora: Yeah, that's what he told me.
Ricardo: *Shrugs* That's what I'm saying.
Samika: This is going to be a wild ride. *awkward silence* ...Is this thing on?
The contestants continue chatting for a bit, then a random voice comes up around the house.
Welcome contestants, please come to the living room.
Samika: Um...Uh...I think we should follow. It's scaring me a bit.
Ricardo: I guess so, if a voice tells you to do something, you might as well.
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« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2020, 08:25:28 PM »

This kinda looks like Total Drama
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« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2020, 01:12:20 AM »

Baby if you got to go away.
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Won't you stay another day?
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« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2020, 01:27:55 PM »

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« Reply #8 on: March 30, 2020, 03:51:02 PM »

Day 1 Part 2, Challenge 1:
Challenge Announcement:
The contestants gather in the living room, as the voice continues to speak.
Welcome, thank you for being here. Now, in order to win, you must be able to get through challenges and socialize with others. But enough talk. It's time for your first challenge.
Your first challenge is set up. There are envelopes hidden around the house. All you have to do is find one, then come back to the living room. Some will give you immunity for elimination. However, four of them make you at risk for elimination. Once everyone is in the living room with an envelope, you may now open them.
Hope you understood the rules, because this challenge starts now.
During Challenge:
A horn goes off, signaling the start of the challenge. Most of the contestants run off to find envelopes.
Russell: How are we supposed to find them if they're hidden?
Steve: That's...the point. Now where should we find them? They have to-
DeMarie walks by, already with an envelope in hand. Steve looks absolutely shocked.
Steve: *In confusion* Wh- What? H-how did...
DeMarie: Oh. You have to look in some unusual places. Good luck you guys.
Russell: Oh, we better get going.
Steve: Definitely.
Few minutes pass by, cut to Janette and Nora in the bathroom, finding envelopes.
Janette: There should be something here...I mean it has too.
Nora: Yeah, it must be placed in weird places. *Checks behind the mirror* Yes! *Takes envelope* I knew it will be here! Now hopefully it's a good one...so I can stay with Adam.
Janette: I get it, you're awestruck by Adam, but hey, I'm proud of you.
30 minutes, cut to one of the bedrooms with Samika, Aaron, and Trenton.
Samika: I've already got one, I'm just trying to help, but you've been looking for ten minutes.
Aaron and Trenton look repeatedly under the bed, desperate to find an envelope.
Aaron: Ugh, where is that envelope? I'm looking here all this time but I don't see anything!
Samika: Hmm...have you checked on the bed?
Trenton: Oh, good idea! *Checks under the covers* Oh, found one!
Aaron: Ugh, really? *Storms outside the room*
Nearly an hour and a half passed, everyone is in the living room.
Steve: All of you guys have envelopes, but I still don't have one. How are you guys so lucky- *Notices an envelope on the table, then grabs it* Hey, how has no one took that yet?
A static sound is heard, then the voice from earlier starts to speak.
Congratulations! You all found the envelopes. Now, it is time for you to open them.
Results:
Everyone opens their envelopes.
If you get a white card in your envelope, you are safe. If it's red, you are nearing elimination.
Some get ecstatic for being safe, while others complain.
Janette: Yay, I get to stay!
Nora: Come on! Why did I get red?
Barbara looks at the card from her envelope, being puzzled.
Barbara: What is this?
One of you has a golden card, not only does it grant you immunity, but it also gives you a special power, which I will tell later.
Barbara: Oh, that explains it.
Ricardo: You got lucky, well at least I'm safe.
I'll let you on your own this time. For those of you not safe, I wish you good luck.
(Below is the result, showing the status of everyone, if they are safe or not.)
Status:
Immune, has special power:
Barbara
Immune:
Ricardo
Adam
Rose
Russell
DeMarie
Trenton
Janette
Risk of elimination:
Aaron
Samika
Nora
Steve
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« Reply #9 on: March 30, 2020, 09:00:15 PM »

Day 1 Part 3:
Special Power Talk:
Barbara entered the confession room, to get more information on her power.
Even though they know you have the special power, only you get to know what power you will have.
Barbara finds a paper and reads it.
Barbara: "Congrats on finding the special power. Please keep this a secret. With this power, you can grant one person immunity and put two people up for elimination. This will expire when there are seven contestants left." Wow, this is some huge power. This makes me scared...I could end up as a threat. Better use it wisely.
Barbara exits the confession room.
Spoiler:
It is late in the night, mostly everyone is asleep. Cut to a bedroom with Nora, Rose, and Adam. Adam is sleeping while the girls are awake.
Rose: He still looks good while sleeping, right?
Nora: Yes, but, what about me?! I'm going to be out soon! Maybe!
Rose: Alright alright, let's talk strategy now. How do you propose to get you to stay?
Nora: My thought is, maybe an alliance?
Rose: Okay, but we should include Adam.
Nora: Definitely Adam. But who else? Maybe those that can win challenges, but we should have a lot on our side. We'll talk later. Oh, and you too will be in the alliance.
Nora: So what I'm thinking is Rose and Adam, maybe DeMarie, most of the guys, Janette, at least most so I can get the majority.
Cut to another bedroom, with Samika and Trenton.
Trenton: Ah, well, it was nice knowing you.
Samika: Hey, isn't it too early to say goodbyes already? There's still time you know.
Trenton: Oh alright, but what will it take?
Samika: Well, I have to get on their side. Win them over, you know?
Trenton: Alright. I guess that will work.
Samika: It's going to take a lot of begging. It's too much work. But hopefully, this will all be worth it.
End of Day 1.
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« Reply #10 on: March 31, 2020, 05:54:21 PM »

Day 2 Part 1:
Spoiler:
It is the next day, in the morning. Steve, Samika, and Barbara are playing poker.
Samika: I just don't get it. Why could it be me?
Steve: Speak for yourself. It took me a while to get one and I still am at risk.
Steve: I can't be out now! We're just getting started. Usually the first person out is forgotten. I don't want to be forgotten...
Barbara: Well, hopefully, you guys will stay. You're the only ones who I can trust.
Samika:Well, thanks, Now how do we just get out of this?
Aaron overhears, walking towards the group.
Aaron: Are you talking about elimination?
Barbara: Yes, uhh...what do you want?
Aaron: I need a way to get out of elimination. I'll do anything!
Ricardo comes over as well.
Ricardo: Anything, really? Do you want to leave it to that?
Aaron: Yes! Anything! I must need myself out of this.
Barbara: This is getting a bit awkward for me.
Aaron: Just hold on. It's about me, okay?
Aaron: Hey, I need to get off of this. I may have to force people. to get me free.
Aaron: Anyway, Let me think of a plan.
Ricardo: Oh, good luck, You'll really need it. *Chuckles*
Aaron grumbles, then both him and Ricardo walk off.
Samika: Okay, is forming an alliance going to help?
Barbara: Yeah, I guess that will work.
Steve: Alright. I really hope this helps us in the long run. Now whose turn was it?
Cut to a bedroom, with DeMarie, Russell, Janette, and Adam.
Adam: You know, I hope to do more here besides looking good.
Janette: I agree you look good, but there's much more to do, I can't wait!
DeMarie: You just get excited about everything right?
Janette: Yeah, you're right.
DeMarie: I don't mean to brag, but I'm so good at these challenges. I can get done in a jiffy.
Russell: Yeah, but it will be me to win.
Everyone else in the room groans.
DeMarie: Yeah, sure, Russell. A very likely story. I'm being sarcastic, you know?
Adam: Can't you just stop thinking you will win for once?
Russell: Am I getting my hopes too high? Not likely.
Janette: So, we got looks, one good at challenges, Russell, and an overexcited one. Interesting.
Nora bursts into the room.
Nora: Hey, do you guys want to be in an alliance?
Russell: Sure. I guess.
Adam: Okay.
DeMarie: Sure. Maybe. Guess we all agree.
Nora: Thanks for helping me.
Nora runs out and slams the door, running down the hall to another bedroom, with Rose and Trenton.
Nora: Good news, everyone else agreed.
Trenton: Well, you roped me in, so, how much does that makes us?
Nora: Well, there was four, including Adam, so, that's seven of us.
Rose: Ooh, now we've got a lot on our side.
Nora: Yes, they are on my side now. Hopefully they'll do things in my favor.
Trenton: Alright, how can we convince them? You've got me in, so, what's the plan?
Nora: We'll force them into submission-no, no, what am I thinking? We'll use that as a last resort. But they'll have to listen.
Rose: Great, now, who should we target? Someone's gotta be headed home.
Nora: Hm, I suggest-
Nora gets interrupted by the announcing voice.
Attention all contestants, please come outside. To the backyard.
Nora: Ugh, we'll talk strategy later. Let's head out.
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« Reply #11 on: April 01, 2020, 10:12:00 AM »

Day 2 Part 2, Challenge 2:
Challenge Announcement:
The contestants walk outdoors to see a giant mini golf course.
Welcome to the next challenge. As you can see, there is a mini golf course built here, but, everyone will play at once. Mayhem will ensue. The first person to sink their golf ball into the hole will be able to save someone from elimination. This must be used to save one person. Not everyone will play, only the ones at risk and four random contestants chosen from a draw will play. The decision has been made already. Here are the four immune picked:
Who's Playing?:
Adam
Rose
Trenton
Barbara
Now, let's start.
Spoiler:
The horn sounds. The ones playing rush towards a golf ball and a putter, and frenzy to make their ball to the hole.
Barbara: Oh gosh, there's a lot going on.
Rose: I barely have any space!
Golf balls are flying everywhere, a lot of running around, and Aaron and Trenton are fighting with each other.
Trenton: You don't deserve to win, Aaron!
Janette: I'm not playing, but this is interesting.
Ten minutes, almost everyone is still behind, but Steve and Aaron are the only ones close to the end.
Aaron: I'm going to win!
Aaron takes a wild swing, but his ball collides with Steve's, and that ends up in the hole.
Steve: So...does that mean I win?
Well. Yours made it in, so that means you win.
Everyone except Aaron applauds Steve, who is shocked and ecstatic.
Aaron: It should've been me. I was the one. Me!
Congrats, you now have the power to save someone from elimination. Use it wisely. It must be used today.
Power Confessional:
Steve enters the confessional room.
Steve: Oh my goodness, I can't believe it. I could use it to save myself...but would that work with the others? They might get me out next. I need to make sure I'm not a threat. Ugh, this is stressing me out...
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« Reply #12 on: April 01, 2020, 10:22:57 AM »

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« Reply #13 on: April 01, 2020, 08:42:53 PM »

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« Reply #14 on: April 01, 2020, 08:59:26 PM »

Day 2 Part 3

Spoiler:
It has been 1 hour after the challenge, Steve, Samika, and Barbara are talking.
Barbara: Congrats, Steve. Looks like you can stay.
Steve: Yeah, but if this continues, I'm headed out the door soon. I don't want to be a threat.
Samika: I really don't want to be out first. I mean, I'm glad for you, but, I'm not sure about me.
Samika: I mean, I'm happy for Steve, but I'm not sure about me. I don't want it to be the end of the line already.
Samika: *Sighs* Congrats, Steve. I hope your legacy continues on.
Steve: Thanks, but I keep noticing how disappointed you are.
Barbara: I want to hear what you think. You're going up to cast your save.
Steve: It's a hard decision...I'm so uneasy...
Cut to the kitchen, Aaron and Nora are angry, while Janette is trying to calm them down. Ricardo is also there, but just watching.
Janette: Ricardo, can't you do something? I can't be the one in control!
Ricardo: No, you got this. I'll let you do your thing.
Aaron: It should've been me! *Kicks table* I was the one who did it!
Nora: Oh come on, you couldn't be more safer.
Aaron: You take that back!
Janette: Please! Stop! I don't want to hear much more of this.
Janette: This is so...stressful. At least, these two. I think two deaf people arguing is much more tolerable than these two.
Nora: Face it, you'll be out first.
Attention, can all contestants please come to the living room?
Aaron: Are you sure about that?
Nora: We'll see.
Meeting:
The contestants gather to the living room and sit.
Nora: He's going to use it on himself.
DeMarie: Ooh, I don't know, he's looking really uneasy.
This is a meeting for who to save in elimination. Will the winner of the challenge please come to center.
Steve takes a shaky breath, then stands up and walks to the center.
Now, you must make a decision, who will you save?
Steve: Well, I choose to save...
Steve looks at everyone, seeing some faces of anticipation and disappointment. He feels very nervous.
Steve: I choose...uh...I choose...to save...Samika from elimination.
Some of them gasp. Many are very shocked.
Steve: It was...a really hard decision. I don't want you to see me all too powerful and also to be all about myself. I care about everyone here, and I need to leave a good impression. That's all I need.
Rose: Well, I can see that.
Thank you all for coming to the meeting. It is now finished. Elimination will start after lunch tomorrow.
After Meeting:
Everyone gets up. Samika goes up and hugs Steve.
Samika: You had the chance to save yourself. Why did-
Steve: Did you hear what I said though? I need to be sure they won't get after me the next time.
Barbara: Why didn't you save yourself?
Steve: I said, I don't want to be a threat.
DeMarie: It's great, but, how about you? You'll still be up for elimination.
Steve: Yeah, I hope that was convincing enough.
DeMarie: Hope it is, but it was pretty unexpected. Be ready for tomorrow.
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