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« Reply #30 on: April 06, 2020, 08:41:18 PM »

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« Reply #31 on: April 08, 2020, 05:13:20 PM »

Day 3 Part 2: Elimination

This part contains elimination. Contains major spoilers.
Elimination Ceremony:
Everyone is in the living room, waiting to hear the voice come up again.
Steve: I'm nervous.
Barbara: Oh, don't be.
DeMarie: Easy for you to say, you're not the one being eliminated.
Welcome to the first elimination ceremony. Will the ones up for elimination come up to the front?
Nora, Steve, and Aaron stand up and go to the front.
Now before you all vote, I would like to say, that you will not be alone. There have been others that also voted. They will change up the the game as it goes on.
Rose: Oh, I'm scared now. They have so much power.
They have voted, but you will see the results after you vote. Now, first, the ones about to be eliminated, you've got one last chance to save yourself. Make a speech and hope it persuades everyone. Now, time for the speeches. Please start.
(Speeches)
Nora: Well, it's been 3 days, And all of you, I have built a strong bond. Since yesterday, I've made up an alliance already, you may not heard of it too much, but I mean for it. Please rethink your vote. I'm sure I can find a way to get your trust. Now who's next?
Steve: Okay. Look, I don't want my journey to be over already. It's just...I don't want to be forgotten. Have you seen me save Samika? I just want to tell you, Do you have a heart? I don't deserve to be out. Please, I'm risking it all to be here. You wouldn't want to be left with the villains would you? Think about it. That's all. Thank you.
Aaron: Alright. Don't vote for me. Or else there will be consequences. There.
(End of speeches)
Nora: Uhh, I was more sincere, you could do an awfully lot better.
Aaron: Shut it. I proved my point.
Nora: Okay, so, I got an alliance, so if you're in it, please don't vote for me alright?
It is time for voting. Everyone can vote. Even the ones near elimination. Now, can you all one by one head to the confessional room and vote?
Aaron: I'll go ahead. I'll be watching you all.

This is the voting part. Feel free to peek. You can proceed if you want.
Voting:
Audience Votes:
From the poll, 0 voted for Nora, 3 for Aaron, and 6 for Steve.
Aaron:
Aaron votes Nora.
"I don't think you deserve to be here."
Nora:
Nora votes Aaron.
"Your existence was a mistake."
Steve:
Steve votes Aaron.
"This was...kinda easy."
Ricardo:
Ricardo votes Nora.
"I just don't care really."
Samika:
Samika votes Aaron.
"I've known you so little, but I know you're no good."
DeMarie:
DeMarie votes Aaron.
"This is both a gameplay and social wise decision."
Janette:
Janette votes Aaron.
"I'm supposed to be happy for everyone. This one's better left on outer space if we can."
Barbara:
Barbara votes Nora.
"I'm sorry."
Adam:
Adam votes Aaron.
"I enjoy appreciation. I don't enjoy being with this one."
Trenton:
Trenton votes Steve.
"This is going to be hilarious. Heheheh..."
Russell:
Russell votes Aaron.
"I hate you, and that's all I need."
Rose:
Rose votes Aaron.
"I've got a couple reasons why, and I hope you understand."

This contains results, spoilers.
After Vote; Results:
Everyone has voted, and is now waiting for results.
Everyone has voted. I will show you results. Those at risk, stay up front. Everyone, please look at the screen.
On screen, Aaron, Nora, and Steve are shown, each with a number, which is currently zero.
First, I'll reveal the audience vote.
The numbers on screen are randomized, eventually showing the result. Aaron has 3, Nora has 0, Steve has 6.
Nora: Wow. I'm lucky.
Steve: Okay, I think they just hate me.
Ricardo: That's weird, you did a good thing, but they don't see it that way.
DeMarie: I presumed so, they just don't see you that way.
And now I'll add the votes from your fellow others. The one with the most will be eliminated.
Votes randomize again, then soon reveals the final results.
(Results are in the spoiler below.)
Final Results:
Aaron: 11 votes
Nora: 3 votes
Steve: 7 votes
Aaron is eliminated.

After Results:
With a vote of 11-7-3, Aaron is eliminated. Please pack up and go to the front door.
Aaron: WHAT?! I can't believe you all.
Janette: The votes don't lie man, you gotta get out.
Aaron: Agh, I hate you all so much.
Aaron goes to pack his stuff.
Nora: Thank you guys for voting him. He was a pain to be with.
Rose: Same here.
Janette: You don't know how much I want him gone.
Nora: Yes, thank goodness.
Minutes later, Aaron comes back, with things packed up.
Aaron: This is three days that I will never get back.
It is time for you to leave now. Say your goodbyes if you want.
Aaron: That won't be necessary. You all don't deserve this.
Aaron storms off, going out the door and slamming it.
Nora: Well, good riddance am I right?
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« Reply #32 on: April 08, 2020, 07:51:29 PM »

Brother E: Wow! Interesting votes!
Also, great part! All those spoilers must have been hard to make! Cheesy
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« Reply #33 on: April 11, 2020, 10:06:04 AM »

Day 3 Part 3

Spoiler:
It has been six hours since the elimination ceremony. DeMarie and Janette are looking at the front door.
Janette: So this is the door that he left from, and we entered, what power.
DeMarie: It's...just a door. Why did you let me here?
Janette: You know, I said about the power?
DeMarie: This is honestly getting weird. I don't get why a door is special.
Janette: The door is the one powerful thing. Keeping us from the outside.
While DeMarie slowly moves away, Janette is still talking about the door.
Cut to a bedroom with some of the contestants. Adam and DeMarie comes in.
Russell: Hey, Adam is here.
Nora and Rose: Oh, really? Hey!
Adam: Good to see I'm being appreciated.
Adam: Every time I come in, the girls are always happy to see my. I've got a charm and they noticed. Believe me, I love attention.
Trenton: Okay, you can gush about him later, What do we do?
Rose: We need a way to stick together. Something that will take us all the way.
DeMarie: I don't know, I got a feeling this might break. Besides, even if all of us are the last left, who wins?
Russell: I say it's me!
Trenton: No, I will!
Russell and Trenton now start fighting.
Nora: Really? Do we have to deal with this EVERY single time?!
Nora: Well, there's one thing I have to do.
Nora: Trenton, Russell, you're out of the alliance.
Nora: Perfect. That's going to help
Russell: Fine, whatever. I don't want to work with him.
Rose: Good idea. I'm sick of them arguing the whole entire time. I'm sick of it!
Adam: I hope you know who you're voting.
Nora: Yes...yes I will.
Barbara enters the room.
Barbara: Did you say something?
DeMarie: I don't think it's important for you to listen.
Barbara: Um, okay. I'll let you to yourself.
Barbara exits the room and closes the door.

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« Reply #34 on: April 12, 2020, 05:48:31 PM »

Day 4 Part 1
Note: (Items in parentheses describe how they are feeling, generally their mood or how they say things.)

Spoiler:
It is early morning, Nora, Rose, Adam, DeMarie, and Janette are in the living room.
DeMarie: Did you really get rid of Russell and Trenton that fast?
Janette: I think we can get someone back. Should we get back one of them?
Nora: *Stands up* Well, I think we can...
Nora walks off, but soon comes back with Russell.
Russell: So, you're considering to take me back in?
Rose: Are you gonna help us again?
Russell: (Desperately) Yes, yes, anything!
Rose: That's all we need, welcome back.
Russell: YES! That's what I need.
Nora: This alliance is perfect! We will definitely last forever?
Adam: Okay, now, who do we target?
DeMarie: I suggest someone who is good at challenges.
Janette: Well, I say maybe someone who is a social threat. They could manipulate them.
DeMarie: Oh, good call Janette. It's now only 4 days...
Russell: I think I have an idea...
Rose: Oh I'm sure I know.
A few hours pass, Steve, Janette, and Ricardo are in the kitchen.
Steve: Just, why? I can't get over this. Why me? There's nothing wrong with me right?
Ricardo: No, I think they just haven't caught up with you.
Janette: Maybe they just don't find you interesting.
Ricardo: I don't mind what they think of me, but I do agree it's not fair.
Samika walks in.
Samika: I'm getting some cereal, what are you guys talking about?
Steve: I'm talking about yesterday, about how the audience voted me.
Janette: I'm finding a way for him to at least be safe.
Samika: I hope so. He doesn't deserve this.
Attention, contestants, please come to the backyard.
Steve: Well, this is going to make or break me.
Janette: I should check up on my alliance, I wish good luck!
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« Reply #35 on: April 18, 2020, 02:20:47 PM »

Day 4 Part 2, Challenge 3

Challenge Announcement:
The contestants walk to the backyard to see a platform hanging above water.
Time for your next challenge. All of you will be on the platform. The goal is to be the last one standing. By any means, you will have to push them of the platform somehow. Over time, the platform will gradually decrease.
The first one to fall is at risk for elimination, and first to third will have immunity. The last one remaining will also be in power and put two more up for elimination. Now then, it's time to begin.


Challenge:
Everyone is now on the platform, and now everyone is rushing towards the center, except Ricardo.
Samika: Hey. *Walks toward Ricardo* Are you not actually going to compete?
Ricardo: Well, hey, even if I might get booted off, it's not really worth trying.
Ricardo jumps off the platform. Several minutes pass, and a few more fall off. Then a horn sounds.
Russell: What does that mean? What does that sound mean?
The side where Russell was standing on falls off all of a sudden.
Janette: *Walks closer* Wow, what was that about?
Adam: They said the platform would decrease. Now if you'll excuse me...
Adam pushes Janette off the platform.
Nora: Wow, you are very good at this, just like how you-
Nora accidentally walks off the platform. More minutes pass, the platform gets more shorter, soon there's three left. Which are Adam, Steve, and DeMarie are the last ones left.
Congrats, you are immune. But who will be the one with the special power?
Adam: Well, no offense, but I think I-
Adam gets pushed off by DeMarie, rolls off and falls.
DeMarie: I'm surprised, you're still here.
Steve: Well, actually, I just kinda stayed away from everyone. I'm surprised I lasted this long.
DeMarie: You know what this means, don't you?
Steve: No no, I can just jump off myself, I don't want to be in power again. I don't want to be a threat. I really just want to not be a target.
DeMarie: Really? Do you just want to give up on-
Steve: Yes, if it means for me to last long, then yes.
Steve then jumps off, making DeMarie the winner.
Congratulations, you now are in power. Please choose the two to put up for elimination later.
Results:
Results:
Trenton
Samika
Adam: Immune
Nora
Russell
DeMarie: Immune, in power
Steve: Immune
Rose
Ricardo: Risk for elimination
Janette
Barbara
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« Reply #36 on: April 19, 2020, 10:22:41 PM »

Brother E: Wow, great parts! Cheesy
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« Reply #37 on: April 22, 2020, 08:58:19 PM »

Day 4 Part 3

Spoiler:
Before the meeting, DeMarie and Nora are talking in secret.
Nora: Okay, so, who are we getting out?
DeMarie: It's going to have to be someone who's good at gameplay, but it'll be hard with an alliance.
Nora: Who do you have in mind?
DeMarie: Trenton. All I can take is that he is probably a manipulator. Not a mastermind, but definitely the former.
Nora: Yeah, he could turn on us. I mean, our alliance against each other!
DeMarie: I can see that. And there's gotta be another.
Nora: Okay, okay, who do you suggest-
Attention all contestants, please come to the living room for the meeting.
DeMarie: You'll find out soon enough.

Meeting:
Everyone collects at the living room.
Welcome to the meeting. Will the winner of the challenge stand at the center and put up two for elimination?
DeMarie stands up.
DeMarie: Now, as you all know I'm going to have to put two of y'all up. With Ricardo up with whoever I come up, I'm making this decision well worth it. First, I'm putting up Trenton. I just have a feeling you're a manipulator and you're going to do get us against each other. The next...well, I'm going to say...Steve. It just seems like you're doing well in challenges and I feel it would be best if I put you up. This decision is for me, and also for everyone else, I'm sorry, and I hope you guys understand. That's all.
DeMarie: I knew what I was doing for the first, but with my alliance, the next was tough. And I needed to pull it off.
Meeting is now done. Please continue your day.

After Meeting:
Trenton: (Angrily) How dare you! First I get kicked out the alliance and now you put me up?!
DeMarie: Come on come on, it's attitude like that that gets you put up.
Janette: (Ecstatically) Yes! I have been- *Looks at DeMarie and Trenton* Uhh...I should've done that in secret. (Silently) I have been waiting for this to happen.
Trenton stomps off in anger, DeMarie walks over to Steve.
DeMarie: Look, I'm sorry, this had to be a decision for my game.
Steve: Ah, it's okay, I'm getting used to it.
Barbara: *Scoots over* Hey, I heard, I see what you were doing. Is it hard to be up there like that?
DeMarie: No. I've done it dozens of times. Now I feel some kind of twist is coming up.
Rose: *Walks over* You've got a sense for surprises don't you?
DeMarie: Yeah, but I'm serious.
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« Reply #38 on: April 22, 2020, 09:09:06 PM »

Brother E: Ooh, interesting play strategy. Undecided
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« Reply #39 on: April 23, 2020, 08:06:31 AM »

Oof I forgot Steve was immune.
I'll fix it in the next part.
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« Reply #40 on: April 23, 2020, 09:09:15 AM »

Day 4 Part 4

Edit:
I forgot Steve was immune, so before this part, we called another meeting and had her change who to put up. She puts up Samika instead.

Spoiler:
It's night, cut to one of the bedrooms.
Janette: Now, what do you guys suppose we do now?
Russell: I say we vote-
Rose: Yes, we get it.
DeMarie enters.
DeMarie: I hope it cleared up now. I went with Samika.
Nora: For your game right? And hopefully ours too?
Adam: Yes, of course. We have to stick together. We're an alliance.
Nora: Yes...us...uh...what are we talking about?
Janette: We should stick together. Now there's eleven of us, and we have six. Six to five, we have the power.
Russell: Yeah, I guess. Can't argue with that.
Cut to another bedroom, with Ricardo and Trenton.
Trenton: I propose a way to get myself over it.
Ricardo: Like...what? What do you do?
Trenton: I can talk my way through it. I've got a way.
Ricardo: Eh, I hope so.
Ricardo: I don't have much faith in him.
Trenton walks out and goes over to the other bedroom, where Nora and the rest of her alliance is. He opens the door.
Trenton: Hey! Let us-
He gets cut off as Janette slams the door on him.
Janette: We are not resorting to that. No way.
Nora: I've never really seen too much of this side of Janette. Maybe she was a great addition.
Adam: Well, I do think we need someone assertive.
Nora: Well that I agree, of course.
Janette: I had enough of dealing with this.
There's silence for 5 minutes.
Rose: Talk strategy to me. Let's fix something up.

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« Reply #41 on: April 25, 2020, 01:58:31 PM »

New poll up. This time the votes don't count because the elimination is different.
Elimination on Day 6.
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« Reply #42 on: April 26, 2020, 12:33:19 PM »

Day 5 Part 1

Spoiler:
Almost everyone gathers for breakfast. Trenton and Rose are in the kitchen.
Trenton: You know, I wish everyone were just pushovers.
Rose: What makes you say that?
Trenton: Everyone seems hard-pressed on giving me the boot.
Rose: I see, I'm sure they know what you might be capable of.
Trenton: I have a plan, I will just tell others and make them turn against each other. It's perfect!
Rose: Hey, wait-I-uh-um...*Sighs* You're a lost cause.
Cut to the dining room. Barbara is walking towards the room.
Samika: (Nervously) So...you won't vote me, right?
DeMarie: I'm not sure if it is a vote, there's twists in every corner.
Barbara: What did I miss? I woke up already.
Ricardo: Talking elimination. Just who should we get out.
Janette: Funny how you say it when you don't even care about it.
Ricardo: Shut it. I don't care.
Ricardo: Okay...I care a little bit. At least I'm not last.
Barbara: I just wish we didn't need all this drama.
Steve: Where would be the fun in that? Why would it just be normal?
Adam: I agree, why would everyone be normal? I mean, my looks and such. That makes me stand out.
DeMarie: Yes, you've got the looks, now, where did we leave off?
Nora and Rose enter.
Nora: Heyyy, tell us what's going on!
Rose: *Whispers to Nora* You're overselling it. A bit less friendly.
Nora: Okay, (Monotone) what's going on?
Ricardo: Hey, that's my thing.
Rose: We're working on it. No one's threatening anyone right?
Steve: I'm not focusing on that too much.
Samika: I don't want it to be me, it's too soon.
Russell: *Walks in* Did I miss anything?
DeMarie: Yes. A lot.
Russell: I don't think that's true.
Janette: Why can't we get along? I guess it's just how society works.
Nora: Do any of you guys have any plans?
Barbara: Why would you think we have one?
Nora: Strategy reasons. Anyone want to talk?
Samika: Uh, no offense, but aren't strategies kept secret? Just not with everyone around.
DeMarie: Well, I just hope you guys don't target me next, I haven't done anything bad.
Ricardo: Like me. There's no reason for me too.
Rose: You're just saying that because you don't do anything.
Ricardo: Come on, what's wrong with nothing?
Russell: Hey, you should do something that gets everyone's attention.
Ricardo: What makes you think that?
Steve: You don't want to be forgotten that quick, right?
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« Reply #43 on: April 26, 2020, 12:34:16 PM »

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« Reply #44 on: April 30, 2020, 08:54:48 PM »

Day 5 Part 2

Spoiler:
Few hours later, cuts now in living room. Barbara, Steve, and Samika are in.
Steve: So, what are we going to do now at this time?
Samika: I don't know, doesn't someone here have some kind of power that will help us?
Barbara: Oh...I just realized something.
Barbara: I completely forgot about my power. Let's see, I could make someone safe and two for elimination. I don't know if this time is right.
Steve: Hold up. Power? I might have forgotten it from a while ago. Was there even a power?
Barbara: I get it Steve, you're confused. Do you remember anything about it?
Steve: Did someone say something about a power? Was there one in the first place?!
Samika: Hold on, cool it. I'm sure there is one.
Steve: Oh gosh...I'm not getting too old too soon, right?
Cut to one of the bedrooms, with Nora and her alliance.
Russell: So. Anyone got plans?
Janette: Yeah. Get that other guy you're arguing with out.
Nora: Well, I'm okay with drama, just not too much that it gets on my nerves.
Adam: It's not really fights with the guys, but more with the guys against Janette.
Janette: I think I did too much. I should keep my temper low.
Rose: Okay, okay. let's get back on track. We should talk strategy.
Nora: I keep hearing it, What's the need for this?
Rose: It's crucial. So we get far.
Russell: We get it. We don't need to hear it every hour.
Janette: Like how you're arguing every minute?
Russell: Okay, listen here you-
DeMarie: Alright. Just stop.
Nora: Yeah. I don't need to hear this every so often.
DeMarie: I don't know why I agreed to this.
Trenton opens the door and enters.
Trenton: You guys got a plan? I'm going to give you one.
Rose: What are you talking about?
Trenton: You know, I heard something about Ricardo.
Adam: Like what? How have you heard?
Trenton: I heard he is plotting against you guys.
Nora: Oh, really? Like what?
Trenton: Oh, he's going to plant some seeds, turn everyone against themselves, I came here just to warn you. Okay, I'll see you.
Trenton exits, Ricardo then enters.
Ricardo: Hey, I hear him, do you believe him?
Now I don't care too much but only if it's against me, and they're lies, then I start to get the matter.
Janette: Well I don't believe him, he's devious.
DeMarie: Yeah, that's right.
Ricardo: Don't believe him in anything, okay?
Adam: Of course. How could we.
Ricardo: Okay. Just listen right. You've got a day to think over, but your choice doesn't matter to me.
Rose: But it is since you're on the block.
Ricardo: *Pauses* Well that's another story.
Ricardo shuts the door and everyone resumes talking.
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